外研版（2019）高中英语必修第三册 学案Unit5 What an adventure! 解透单元写作学案（有答案）

Unit5 解透单元写作
主题与作——探险旅行
1.写作任务
假定你是李华，你校外教约翰准备周末去附近的云雾山探险旅行，发来电子邮件向你询问注意事项。请你根据下列提示，给他回一封电子邮件。
（1）准备一张云雾山的当地地图
（2）查询当地实时天气，带上必要的衣服、食品、药品及手电筒（ashlight）；
（3）必要的话，找一位向导。
注意：（1）词数80左右
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
Dear John,
I’m glad to know that you will travel to and explore Yunwu Mountain. And it’s a great pleasure for me to offer you some advice. ______________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
2.写作思路
（1）读题，确定写作体裁和主题
通过读题我们知道，这是一篇应用文，要求写一封电子邮件，向外教提出建议。
（2）明确写作要求
①内容要求
准备当地地图（prepare a local map）
查询天气（the weather），带上物品（clothes，food，medicines，a flashlight必要的话，找一位向导（a guide）
②词数80左右。
3.素材整理
（1）关键词语
adventure，travel，journey，trip，tour，guide，explore，tent，camp，hotel，tourist attraction（旅游景点），places of interest，scenic spots（景点），interesting，exciting，attractive fantastic，boring/dull，tiring，comfortable，funny，well-organised
（2）翻译句子
①首先，你要准备一张云雾山的当地地图。（first of all）
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②出发前，你应该上网查询那里周末的天气信息，以便带足够的衣服和食品。（look for some information）
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③同时，带一个手电筒和一些药很有必要。（it’s necessary to）
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④如果有当地向导为你服务，那就更好了。（even better）
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⑤祝你玩得开心！（wish）
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答案：
①First of all, you should prepare a local map of Yunwu Mountain.
②Before starting, you should surf the Internet to look for some information about the weather on the weekend there so as to take enough clothes and food.
③Meanwhile, it’s necessary to take a flashlight and some medicines.
④If a local guide serves you, it will be even better.
⑤I wish you a good time!
4.满分作文（连句成篇）
请将以上句子连成一篇语言流畅、用词准确、逻辑严密的文章。
Dear John,
I’m glad to know that you will travel to and explore Yunwu Mountain. And
It’s a great pleasure for me to offer you some advice.
First of all, you should prepare a local map of Yunwu Mountain. Before starting, you should surf the Internet to look for some information about the weather on the weekend there so as to take enough clothes and food. Meanwhile it’s necessary to take a flashlight and some medicines. Because there are few people living in the mountain, it’s good for you to find several friends to make this exciting journey with you together. If a local guide serves you, it will b even better.
Special care should be taken while you travel in the mountain. I wish you a good time!
Yours,
Li Hua
5.佳作背诵
（1）佳作一
假定你是李华，你打算和几位朋友在暑假进行一次探险旅行。请根据所给信息，给住在澳大利亚的朋友戴维发一封电子邮件介绍这次旅行计划，并邀请他一起旅行。
地点：海南岛
时间：8月15日-8月21日
主要活动：远足、爬山、游泳、篝火晚会、潜水等
注意事项：请带好游泳衣和护照
注意：①词数80左右（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）；
②可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：篝火晚会 campfire party；游泳衣 bathing suit
Dear David,
How is everything going ____________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
One possible version:
Dear David,
How is everything going My friends and I have decided to go on an adventure trip to Hainan island during the summer holiday. I am writing to tell you about our travel plan.
We will be traveling around Hainan island from August 15 to 21. We will go hiking, climb the mountains, swim and have a campfire party there. We also plan to go diving if weather permits. I'd like you to join us if possible. I am sure we will have a lot of fun being together. Please remember to pack your bathing suit and take your passport.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
（2）佳作二
假定你是李华，你的美国朋友露西在当地一所孔子学院（Confucius Institute）学习，你刚获悉她在学校举办的中文书法比赛中获得了一等奖。请你用英语给她写一封电子邮件表示祝贺，并邀请她暑假来参加“游北京，登长城”活动。
注意：①词数80左右（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）；
②可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Lucy,
I’m pleased to learn that you’ve just won first prize in the Chinese handwriting competition held in your local Confucius Institute.____________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
One possible version:
Dear Lucy,
I’m pleased to learn that you’ve just won first prize in the Chinese handwriting competition held in your local Confucius Institute. I’m writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you.
The prize came as no surprise to me because I know you love Chinese culture, especially the Chinese language. I’m so proud to see all your efforts have paid off.
This summer vacation our school will hold an interesting activity called “Touring Beijing, Climbing the great Wall” Would you like to come to China and join us
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua