中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
Unit 1 What’s the matter
单元写作专题
一、话题分析
本单元以谈论 “健康与急救(Health and first aid)”为话题,针对健康与安全等问题,利用本单元学习的情态动词should等提出简单的建议。
二、写作方法
“总-分-总”法对健康与急救提建议
总:总说健康的重要性。
分:针对如何拥有健康,分层次、具体地提出建议和方法;
总:总结概括以上提出的建议和方法,提出愿望。
素材积累
对健康及急救提建议常用的词汇:
healthy , important , necessary , doctor , keep , fruit , strong , exercise , sleep , stay up , feel sick , lie down , have a(good) rest , go to hospital , take breaks , give up , be in control of
对健康及急救提建议常用的句型:
Health is very important to ..
it is necessary to ...
We should /shouldn’t ...
We need to ...
You’d better (not ) ...
Eating fruit and vegetables is good for ..
We neither .. nor ...
We must try our best to ...
If we can follow the advice ...
I hope you are ...
写作模板
请结合你了解的健康知识,写一篇题目为 “The Ways to Keep Healthy”的短文。
注意: (1)语言表达要准确,内容要客观;
(2)80词左右;
参考词汇: balanced died 均衡的饮食 stay up 熬夜
The Ways to Keep Healthy
Health is very important to us. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
五、写作任务
Susan最近身体不太舒服,经常头疼发热,四肢无力,她的妈妈带她去看了医生 ,医生检查后诊断出她得了重感冒,然后给她开了一些药并提出了一些建议。请你根据下面的提示官吏一篇80词左可的短文。
建议:
一天吃三次感冒药。
多喝水, 多吃水果和蔬菜。
保证充足的睡眠,多运动。
[写作指导]
体裁:记叙文
人称:用第三人称。
时态:主要用一般现在时和一般过去时。
写作提纲:
开篇点题 :Susan isn’t feeling well ... She often has a ..
看医生:Yesterday her mother took her to ...
提建议:She could... She’d better ...
[写作练兵]
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考答案
写作模板
The Ways to Keep Healthy
Health is very important to us . So it is necessary to know the ways to keep healthy .
We should have a balanced diet . We should eat lots of fruit and vegetables. They are good for health . Don’t eat too much meat .
And we should exercise a lot every day to keep strong . Also , we should sleep for about 8 hours at night , and never work too hard . Remember , it’s not good to stay up too late .
Do as these . I am sure we can keep healthy .
写作练兵
Susan isn’t feeling well these days . She often has a headache or has a fever . And she feels weak .
Yesterday her mother took her to told her she had a bad cold .
He gave her some medicine and advised her to take the medicine three times a day . What’s more , she should drink a lot of water and eat more fruit and vegetables . Besides , she should have enough sleep and do more exercise .
21世纪教育网 www.21cnjy.com 精品试卷·第 2 页 (共 2 页)
HYPERLINK "http://21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com)
" 21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com)