Unit 1 Can you play the guitar Name
Writing
Step1. Writing Topic
The School Charity Club want some students to help the orphans（孤儿) in the orphanage (孤儿院) this weekend. Please help the club make an ad to call on（号召) students to take part in this activity.
要求：1. 内容紧凑、连贯，可适当发挥；2. 词数：60个单词左右。
1. Finish the first draft
2. Finish the second draft
Step 2. Writing Topic
假如你是李华，在学校公告栏里看到上面这份招聘广告，你想加入这个活动。请根据招聘广告内容写一封英语应聘自荐信。
要求：1. 词数：60个单词左右；2. 首句已给出，仅供参考，不计入总词数。
1. Finish the first draft
Dear sir/Madam, I really want to join ...
2. Finish the second draft
Dear sir/Madam, I really want to join ...Marking ladders
Unit1 Can you play the guitar
For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure, content, grammar & language Self-check Peer check Teacher’s assessment
Structure and content I write the will of joining the activities. ( 1 point )
I answer all the questions. (4 points)
I write why I want to join the activity. (1 point)
I write the expectations(期望)of joining the activity (1 point)
My writing is tidy and clear. (1 point)
Grammar and language My expressions are correct (3 points)
My punctuation is correct. (1 point)
There are spelling mistakes (2 points)
I have checked my word count is around . ( 1 point )
Total Score
What can I do to improve my writing next time Marking ladders
Unit1 Can you play the guitar
For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure, content, grammar & language Self-check Peer check Teacher’s assessment
Structure and content I write the title ( 1 point )
I write when and where. (1 points)
I write the abilities that the club needs (4 point)
I write the contact and I describle the activity (1 point)
My writing is tidy and clear. (1 point)
Grammar and language My expressions are correct (3 points)
My punctuation is correct. (1 point)
There are spelling mistakes (2 points)
I have checked my word count is around . ( 1 point )
Total Score
What can I do to improve my writing next time (共18张PPT)
Unit 1 Can you play the guitar
Writing
Review
① Help for Old People
② Help with Sports in English
③ Music Teacher Wanted
① in July
② after school
③ on the weekend
① be good with old people; talk to them; play games with them
② speak English; help with sports
③ play the piano or the violin
when
abilities
descriptions(描述）
contact
① tell you stories; you can make friends; interesting and fun
② relaxing and easy
③ not difficult
① call us at 689-7729
② call Mr. Brown at 293-7742
③ call Mrs. Miller at 555- 3721
title
where
①old people’s home
② The school
③ the Students’ Sports Center
How to write an ad
title
when
where
abilities
descriptions(描述
contact
sb. wanted for...
We need help at.../Please come to...
Are you busy/free ... /Do you have time ...
Can you... /We need you to.../Are you good at...
It’s interesting/relaxing/easy/not difficult...
Please call at...
Pre-writing
Another school activity is also looking for help.
School
Music
Festival
Pre-writing
plete the ad with the words in the box.
Do you like
Can you sing and
Can you the piano or the violin
Can you play the or the drums
Then you be in our school music festival.
Please Mr. Zhang at 622-6033.
guitar
can
call
dance
music
play
Musicians Wanted for School Music Festival
guitar
call
can
play
music
dance
Pre-writing
Charity
Club
慈善社
The School Charity Club want some students to help the orphans（孤儿) in the orphanage (孤儿院) this weekend. Please help the club make an ad to call on（号召) students to take part in this activity.
Writing Topic
要求：
1.内容紧凑、连贯，可适当发挥；
2.词数：60个单词左右。
Pre-writing
What should we think about before writing
Person (人称)
Tense(时态)
Details(细节)
Structure(结构)
The first /second person.
The simple present tense.
1.Wrire all the points.
2.70 words.
Title:
Body:
Text (体裁)
an ad
when/where/abilities/feelings/contact
Lead in to the topic.
Pre-writing
Write a passage in 15 minutes
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已开始计时
时间到
While-writing
Sharing Time
Work in groups, correct the mistakes and appreciate(欣赏) your group members’ compositions. Then show it to the class.
Focus on: 1. structure(结构)
2. handwriting(书写)
3. points(要点)
4. grammar(语法)
5. punctuation（标点）
6.languge(语言)
sample
Students Wanted for the Charity Club
We need help at the orphanage. Are you free this weekend Are you good with little children Can you teach them English They can play with you, and you can make new friends. It is enjoyable and meaningful! Please add our WeChat XXX or call us at 0816-5615264.
Writing Topic
假如你是李华，在学校公告栏里看到上面这份招聘广告，你想加入这个活动。请根据招聘广告内容写一封英语应聘自荐信。
Students Wanted
We need help at the orphanage. Are you free this weekend Are you good with little children Can you teach them English They can play with you, and you can make new friends. It is enjoyable and meaningful! Please add our WeChat XXX or call us at 0816-5615264.
Dear sir/Madam,
I really want to join_________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________
要求：
1.回答上述问题并说明你为什么要参加这个活动。
2.词数：60个单词左右。
3.首句已给出，仅供参考，不计入总词数。
What should we think about before writing
Person (人称)
Tense(时态)
Details(细节)
Structure(结构)
The first /second person.
The simple present tense.
1.answer the questions.
2.60 words.
Beginning:
Body:
Text (体裁)
a letter
1.introduce (介绍自己）
2.Answer all the questions(回答问题)
3.Why you want to join（为什么想加入)
Express the will(意愿 of joining the activity.
Pre-writing
Body:
Express the expectations(期望).
Write a passage in 15 minutes
15:00
14:00
13:00
12:00
11:00
10:00
09:00
08:00
07:00
06:00
05:00
04:00
03:00
02:00
01:00
00:00
已开始计时
时间到
While-writing
Sharing Time
Work in groups, correct the mistakes and appreciate(欣赏) your group members’ compositions. Then show it to the class.
Focus on: 1. structure(结构)
2. handwriting(书写)
3. points(要点)
4. grammar(语法)
5. punctuation（标点）
6.languge(语言)
Teachers Wanted
Are you free this summer holiday Are you good with kids We need help at Sunshine Middle School. Can you help kids with sports and music Can you play basketball, volleyball or ping-pong Can you sing, dance or draw Can you use the computer If you are interesed in it,please all Ms. Yang at l23-e and join us!
Dear sir,
I really want to join the English club.
My name is Li Hua. I am a 12-year-old boy.. I am in the No.1 Middle School. My favorite subjects are English and science. They're interesting. In my free time, I like playing volleyball and computer games. I can draw and play the piano. I can also sing English songs.
I hope to get your letter soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
Self Check
Add more words and phrases in each box.
Abilities
Music and arts
play the violin
Languages
speak English
Sports
swim
Other abilities
tell stories
play the guitar/piano
sing and dance, draw pictures…
speak Chinese
speak Japanese …
play basketball
play ping-pong play volleyball play tennis
…
tell jokes, do Chinese kung fu play games
…
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Add as many words as you can to make phrases.
play ___________________________________
2. speak ___________________________________
3. help with ______________________________
4. be good at _______________________________
5. be good with ____________________________
the guitar, football/basketball, computer games
English, Chinese, Russian(俄语), German(德语)
housework, math, English, music
babies, old people, naughty boys, animals
Chinese, sports, playing games
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