Unit3 解透单元写作
主题写作——时代与科技
1. 写作任务
请根据以下要点以“Shopping online safely”为题写篇关于如何安全地进行网上购物的帖子并发表在你的博客上。词数80左右。
(1)挑选你熟悉的购物网站;
(2)使用较为复杂的密码;
(3)勿使用公共电脑购物。
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Yours,
Li Hua
2. 写作构思
(1)一审:确定写作体裁和主题
①体裁:应用文
②主题:如何安全地进行网上购物
(2)二定:确定时态和人称
①时态:以一般现在时为主
②人称:第一、二、三人称都可能用到
(3)三明确:明确写作要点
①内容要求:a.简单介绍你对于安全地进行网上购物的认识;
b.提出关于如何安全地进行网上购物的建议
c.欢迎大家提出更好的建议。
②词数要求:80左右。
(4)四分段
结合要点分为三个段落。
3. 素材整理
(1)关键词语
① register注册
② give away泄露
③ install安装
④ enter our daily life进入我们的日常生活
⑤ throughout the world全世界
⑥ be concerned about对……关心
⑦ be familiar with对……熟悉
⑧8 shopping account购物账号
(2)重要句型
①说到安全地进行网上购物,我确信我知道一两件事。
____________online safely,I’m sure that I know one thing or two.
答案:When it comes to shopping
②使用你熟悉的购物网站。
Use the shopping website you____________.(祈使句)
答案:are familiar with
③注册购物网站时,使用一个强密码并妥善保管。
____________a shopping website,use a strong password and keep it well.
答案:When registering
④切勿使用公用电脑进行网上购物。
Never use public computers____________.(祈使句否定形式)
答案:to shop online
⑤你的隐私会被记录在电脑里。
will be recorded in the computer____________.(被动语态)
答案:Your privacy
⑥安装防火墙来监管你的信息。
Install a firewall to ____________ your information.(不定式作目的状语)
答案:watch over
⑦防火墙是一种能够保护互联网的软件
A firewall is a kind of software which can_____________.
答案:protect the Internet
4. 满分作文(注:黑体部分为本单元的重点词汇)
Shopping online safely
When it comes to shopping online safely, I’m sure that I know one thing or two.
Here are some tips.
First, use the shopping websites you are familiar with. Download familiar apps or software. Second, when registering a shopping website, use a strong password and keep it well. Third, never use public computers to shop online, or your privacy will be recorded in the computer. Last, install a firewall to watch over your information. A firewall is a kind of software which can protect the Internet.
Do you have any other good tips Your ideas are welcomed!
shopping online网上购物
I’m sure that…我确信……
定语从句,修饰 websites
be familiar with对熟悉
“when+现在分词”结构
watch over监视
When it comes to…说到……
First,…Second,…Third,… Last,…首先……其次……再次……最后……
5. 佳作背诵
(2021·金星原创)近十年来,随着改革开放的深入发展,中国迈入高铁时代,请根据以下要点谈谈你对此的认识。
1.从一无所有,到构建起完备、成熟的技术体系,中国的高速铁路传奇般的发展,走出了一条独具特色的创新之路,推动中国在这一领域占据世界领先地位。
2.中国改革开放为高铁时代的发展铺平道路。
3.高速铁路不仅为人们构筑起生活新时空,也为社会提供了优质的公共产品,并成为经济社会发展的强大推动力
注意:(1)词数80左右
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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One possible version: (注:斜体词汇为本单元词汇)
From nothing to a string of establishment and mature technology system, from bridge, to the development of high-speed trains, China’s high-Speed railway has legendary development and has found a unique path of innovation in recent decades, pushing China to the world’s leadership in this field.
China’s reform and opening-up has paved the way for the development of the high-speed rail era.
When China enters the era of high-speed railway, high-speed railway not only builds a new life space for people but also provides high-quality public goods for the society and becomes a powerful driving force for economic and social development.
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