【好题精选】书面表达 2023年九年级下学期英语专题周周练（第一期）（江苏徐州市）含解析

【好题精选】书面表达-2023年九年级下学期英语专题周周练（第一期）（江苏徐州市）
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、电子邮件
1．假如你是李华，在国外某购物平台购买了几件服饰，收到实物以后你发现了几个问题。请你根据以下提示，给该购物平台写一封邮件，说明这一情况。
1. T恤衫颜色跟平台图片里展示的完全不一样；
2. 牛仔裤的尺码标的是中号，但明显偏小；
3. 运动鞋的问题：……
4. 你的诉求：……
注意:
1. 邮件需包含以上所有要点。
2. 词数：90左右。邮件的开头和结尾已给出（见答题卡），不计入总词数。
3. 邮件中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I ordered some clothes from you last month, but there are some problems and I’m really disappointed.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I think you should be more serious about your business.
Truly,
Li Hua
2．假定你是李华，你在徐州的美籍朋友Ben来信跟你抱怨中文难学，他觉得学了很长时间，但进步缓慢，所以很沮丧。请你用英语给他回复一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示理解并给予安慰；
2. 提出你的建议（至少三点）。
要求：
1. 邮件需包含所给要点，可适当发挥；
2. 邮件中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名；
3. 词数：90左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Ben,
Thank you very much for telling me about your problem_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
二、材料作文
3．“双减”工作之一是减轻学生过重的作业负担，控制中小学生的书面作业总量，合理布置不同类型的作业。为此，某英文杂志社正在开展以“My Creative English Homework”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇征文，讲述自身经历，提出合理建议。
内容包括：
1.做过的最有创意的英语作业(内容、收获……);
2. 1-2条有创意的英语作业建议(形式、理由……);
要求：
1. 90词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等。
My Creative English Homework
Doing English homework helps us to practice and use what we’ve learned in class.
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4．你校在课后服务活动中，根据学生的需求开设了丰富多彩的课程（见下表）。你选修了其中的一门，收获颇丰。你校英文报正在组织题为“Me and my after-class course”的征文活动，请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 你选修的课程；
2. 你学习该课程的经历；
3. 你的收获及感受。
①运动（Sports） ②阅读（Reading） ③手工（DIY） ④绘画（Painting） ⑤声乐（Singing） ⑥……（自拟）
注意：
1. 词数90左右；
2. 短文中不得泄露个人信息；
3. 请按照如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Me and my after-class courseIn my school, there are many kinds of after-class courses. I choose ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5．教育部发布“力争到2022年全面实现美育中考”的新闻后，引起很多老师、学生以及家长的关注。上周你班同学就“音乐、美术是否应该纳入初中毕业生学业考试”展开了相关讨论，同学们各抒己见。请你根据下面表格内容，用英语写一篇短文，汇报讨论结果，并谈谈自己的想法。
Agree 得到更多学习音乐和艺术的机会 提高自己的音乐和艺术技能
Disagree 要学习和准备更多的科目 感到很大的压力
Your opinion 至少两点
注意:
1. 短文内容必须包含表格所提供的要点，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名及地名；
3. 词数：80左右（短文开头已给出，仅供选择使用，不计入总词数）。Last week, we discussed whether the high school entrance examination should include music and art.
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6．“双减”政策【即：减轻义务教育阶段学生作业负担和校外培训负担】的实施在社会引起广泛关注。作为亲身经历的学生，必须应对新的挑战，规划好自己的时间和学业，适应这一重大变化。校英文报正在举行征文比赛，请根据以下提示，给校英文报写一篇短文。
Your changes 1. homework; 2. after-school classes; 3…
Your opinion …
Your plans 1. make use of time at school; 2… 3 …
要求:
(1)表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
(2)必须包括表格中所有要点内容，并适当发挥；
(3)词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
(4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
相关词汇：双减 Double Reduction 政策 policy As the Double Reduction policy has been carried out, we have changed a lot this term.
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7．三年的初中生活马上就要结束了，崭新的高中生活即将到来，回顾过去，你一定有许多令你开心、难忘或者难过的事情，请你以Something Made Me ________ 为题，写一篇80字左右的英语短文。要点要包含叙述这件事情及介绍自己的感受和学到了什么，未来将要怎么做。
要求：
1.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
2.内容连贯，条理清晰；
3.标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Something Made Me ________
Hello, everyone! How time flies! I want to share something in my life.
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8．4月23日是第26个世界读书日。读书使我快乐，读书使我明智，读书使我……请根据以下提示信息，以“Reading Makes Me ________”为题，写一篇英文小短文谈谈你的做法和感受。
What do you usually read
What good reading habits do you have
How do you feel about reading
How have you changed after reading
1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺、意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息；(姓名、校名和地名等)
4.词数不少于70。(开头已给出，但不计入总词数)
Reading Makes Me ________
Reading is a lifelong journey and plays an important role in our life. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9．体育运动是中学生的共同爱好。请你根据下列提示写一篇题为“What We Get from Sports”的短文，词数80词左右。短文应包含以下要点：
1. 多数学生学习疲倦时，通过运动来放松自己；
2. 男孩们参加各项体育活动，希望运动能使自己更强壮；女孩们喜欢运动，保持苗条；
3. 你对运动的观点。
参考短语：lose weight, keep slim保持苗条。
What We Get from Sports
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10．现在大多数中学生都有或多或少的压力，他们的压力有的来自学习和考试，有的来自父母过高的期望……有些人因为压力而成长，但有些人因为承受不了压力而终日抱怨。本周的英语角活动将围绕“压力”这一话题让同学们发言。请你结合自身情况，并根据下面的写作要点，用英语写一篇短文，为本次发言做准备。
写作要点：1. When do you feel stressed
2. What do you think of stress
3. How do you deal with stress
要求：1. 紧扣话题，语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯；2. 词数不少于100，短文的开头已给出，但不计入总词数。
It’s common to have stress in life. Different people feel stressed in different ways._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
三、讲稿
11．人无精神不立，国无精神不强。今年3月5日是我国第59个“学雷锋纪念日”，为传承和弘扬雷锋精神，我市开展了形式多样的志愿者服务活动，作为新时代的青少年，你也参加了多项志愿者服务活动，请根据下表内容提示写一篇发言稿，在班会上分享你的经历和感受。
local community help sort waste I think/feel…
a nursing home talk with… …
city square charity sale, sell old books to raise… …
… … …
要求：1.内容完整，省略号部分应适当发挥，语言准确，语句通顺，语意连贯。2.90词左右。开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等。
Dear classmates,
Good morning, everyone. I am happy to share my experience of working as a volunteer with you.
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That’s all. Thank you for listening.
四、书信作文
12．假如你是张明，初中生活即将结束，你思绪万千。请你根据下面的提示，写一封信表达你对父母的感激之情及今后要如何回报父母。
父母为我：生活的照顾；精神的支持：交友、学习压力……
我为父母：感恩、理解父母……
注意：(1)内容必须包含以上表格中所提供的所有信息，可适当发挥；
(2)词数：80—100词(开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
(3)文中不能出现学生真实姓名和所在学校的名称。
Dear Mom and Dad,
My junior high school life is coming to an end. Now, I’d like to show my thanks to you for your devotion to me these years. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Zhang Ming
13．假如你是中国学生李梅。你的美国笔友Tom对中国文化产生了浓厚的兴趣，希望你能给他介绍一些经典故事。而你对于经典故事《司马光砸缸》(Sima Guang hit the tank)非常熟悉， 请你给Tom写一封英文电子邮件，向他讲述这一经典故事，并告知其寓意。
要求：
1. 内容须包括故事梗概，可以适当发挥， 使全文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现可能透漏考生真实身份的任何信息；
3. 90词左右， 邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
I’m very happy that you are interested in Chinese traditional stories. Well, let me tell you a famous one with the name “Sima Guang hit the tank”. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours
Li Mei
五、话题作文
14．2021年10月19日，《中华人民共和国体育法（修订草案）》提请审议，拟定每年8月8日为国家体育节。针对青少年体质下降问题，草案规定要确保学生有充足的体育锻炼时间，树立健康第一教育理念。请根据提示，谈谈你的想法。
★What’s your favourite sport ★How often do you do exercise ★Why do we need to do exercise ...
注意事项：
(1)词数：100词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
(2)文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
(3)文章必须包含所有要点，并作适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。The Importance of Physical Exercise
Everyone hopes to live happily in the world. Physical exercise is indispensable (不可或缺的) to a happy life.
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15．学校英语俱乐部准备就“A Gift from the Heart”为题举办征文比赛，要求参赛者分享在一些特别的日子（生日、节日……）用心准备的礼物。
写作要求：
1.词数：90词左右；
2.不得出现自己的姓名和学校名称。
参考要点：
1.介绍特别的日子；
2.分享赠送的礼物；
3.表述礼物的意义。
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参考答案：
1．例文
Dear Sir/Madam,
I ordered some clothes from you last month, but there are some problems and I’m really disappointed. First, the color is not as green as it is shown on your website. I understand that the picture does not always show the real color, but it should not be that different. Second, I asked for Size M of the jeans because it is the size I usually wear. But your Size M is so small that I can’t wear it at all and I have to give it to my younger sister. Then, the trainers are not so comfortable as you’ve promised and they are not worth the money I’ve paid.
I think you should be more serious about your business.
Truly,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，写一封邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，主要讲述了在国外某购物平台购买了几件服饰，收到实物以后你发现了提示中的几个问题，要点要齐全，条理要清晰，语句要顺畅；
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，引出话题，收到的商品有问题；
第二步，第一个问题是T恤衫颜色跟平台图片里展示的完全不一样；
第三步，第二个问题是牛仔裤的尺码标的是中号, 但明显偏小；
第四步，第三个问题是运动鞋的问题；
第五步，说出你的诉求；
[亮点词汇]
①as green as和……一样绿
②ask for要求
③give sth. to sb.把某物给某人
④be more serious about sth.更加认真对待
[高分句型]
①But your Size M is so small that I can’t wear it at all and I have to give it to my younger sister.（so…that “如此……以致于”引导结果状语从句）
②Then, the trainers are not so comfortable as you’ve promised and they are not worth the money I’ve paid.（not so…as同级比较的否定句式）
2．例文
Dear Ben,
Thank you very much for telling me about your problem. I’m sorry that you’re having trouble learning Chinese.
It is no easy job and I have heard a lot about the difficulties in Chinese learning, so you are not alone. Here are some tips you may find helpful. It would be a good idea if you could find as many chances as possible to talk with local people. It is a great way to push you to speak Chinese as well as practice your listening skills. Equally important is reading more. Go to the bookstore and find some Chinese story-books suitable for you and set a time to read every day.
It takes time to learn a language. Be patient and you’ll make progress.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1. 题干解读：这篇作文要求考生根据提示的内容要点，写一封电子邮件回复Ben提出的问题，属于电子邮件写作，需注意正确的格式。
2. 写作指导：审题可知，这篇邮件回复关于汉语学习的建议，应以第一、三人称和一般现在时为主，以第二人称为辅展开叙述。写作中要紧承开头，按照提示的要点，首先对对方的问题表示理解和安慰，然后针对汉语学习问题给出自己的建议，最后表达祝愿。行文时注意主谓一致和上下文的过渡，符合逻辑关系，保证无语法和单词拼写错误。
3．范文：
My Creative English Homework
Doing English homework helps us to practice and use what we’ve learned in class. Doing creative homework can make us more interested in English. Last winter vacation, our teacher asked us to design a poster about the Spring Festival. That was my favourite homework. It took me about three hours to finish it. It not only helped me go over the knowledge we’ve learned, but also provided a good chance to spread Chinese traditional culture.
In my opinion, it’s also a good choice to write book reviews. It can help us to have a better understanding of the book. Besides, we can do some surveys on our hobbies and write reports. In this way, our English will develop quickly.
I hope we’ll have more creative English homework in the future.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，在写作时应承接短文开头，根据汉语提示的内容，讲述自己做过的最有创意的一次英语作业，包括作业内容和自己的收获；接下来对有创意的英语作业提出自己的几点建议。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称为主来叙述内容，时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时为主。在叙述内容时，力求语句通顺，语法正确，保证提示内容完整，条理清晰，行文连贯。
4．例文
Me and my after-class course
In my school, there are many kinds of after-class courses. I choose the course of DIY. DIY literally means making things by hand.
My first assignment was to use the colored bubble mud commonly used by primary school students now, paste a colored blessing on the small board, and then make a frame with colored wool. Because I think everyone has a different understanding of happiness. I made a word Fu into color. It’s quite a test of a person’s patience to do some simple handicrafts, such as cross stitch, folding thousand paper crane...
Through this study, I learned that we can make handmade in many ways. Waste beverage bottles, wool, ice cream sticks and so on can become raw materials for handmade. We can create our own satisfactory works through our own imagination.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“Me and my after-class course”为主题，结合所给要点提示写一篇作文。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时行文；人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。写作时先从表格里选择一个课外课程，之后再根据三个要点展开叙述。文章要确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。
5．例文
Last week, we discussed whether the high school entrance examination should include music and art.
Students have different opinions. Some students think that it offers us more chance to study music and art. Therefore, we will pay more attention to them. Meanwhile it can improve our art skills. However, a few students disagree with it. If music and art are in the examination, there will be more subjects to prepare for and it needs more time and energy. So students will feel more pressure.
In my opinion, music and art should be in the entrance examination for high school. As we all know, art and music play an important role in our life which can help us develop our interests and make our life more colorful. The most important thing is that we can relax ourselves by art and music in Grade 9.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“音乐、美术是否应该纳入初中毕业生学业考试”展开讨论。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般过去时和一般现在时，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。分为三段式：第一段开头已给出；第二段根据提示材料介绍同学们的观点；第三段介绍个人的看法。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
6．Version:
As the Double Reduction policy has been carried out, we have changed a lot this term.
We used to have lots of homework, but now it’s becoming much less so that we have enough time to sleep. Moreover, I don’t go to after-school classes any more.
I think the policy is good for us students. We can have more time to improve ourselves. But how can we get used to the new change(s) quickly Here’s my plan.
First of all, I should make full use of the time at school and solve all the problems in time. Next, I’ll take up some meaningful hobbies to make my life more interesting. Finally, I’ll spend more time with my parents. I hope I can grow up healthily and happily.
【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求写一篇短文谈谈“双减”政策；要求包含所有内容提示。
2. 写作指导：此作文时态以一般现在时为主；采用第一人称口吻；可采用4段落格式，第一段：文章已给出；第二段：阐述双减后的变化；第三段：阐述自己的观点；第四段：阐述自己的计划。注意无语法和拼写错误。
7．例文
Something Made Me Happy
Hello, everyone! How time flies! I want to share something in my life.
Something that made me happy was winning the piano competition. It was held on September 20th in City Music Hall. On that day I saw many people there. I was so nervous. I was worried if I would make mistakes during my performance. Then I remembered what my father told me —-always believe in yourself; you are the best. His words made me feel much better. When it was my turn to play, I walked up to the piano with confidence and performed well. You wouldn’t believe how much I wanted to know the result. When I learned I won the first prize, I hugged my parents in excitement.
This experience taught me that it’s very important to have confidence in yourself.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文主要是描述初中生活中发生的一件让你开心或难过的事情，可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：本文以一般过去时为主，以第一人称为主。首先把题目补充完整；第一段已给出；第二段主要描述让自己开心的事情；最后一段描述自己从中学到了什么。介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
8．例文：
Reading Makes Me Live a Meaningful Life
Reading is a lifelong journey and plays an important role in our life. It can not only open our minds, but also make us get more useful knowledge that we can’t learn from school books. I often read books about history and some interesting novels in my free time. The more I read, the more thoughtful I will be. I didn’t use to read before. I spent much time in listening to music, watching TV or playing games. Finally I realized it was bad for me, so I took up reading. Reading has made my life colorful and meaningful. I read books at least three times a week now.
Let’s start reading now. And let it become a part of our life!
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目是写一篇记叙文，讲述自己在阅读中的做法和感受，要求要参考提示内容，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：本文要采用第一人称来叙述；时态上用一般现在时。写作时要适当使用一些副词和连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，结构清晰，表达具有条理性。
9．例文：
What We Get from Sports
Students in our school have one thing in common—an interest in sports. But different students have different reasons for taking part in sports.
Many students have sports when they feel tired after study. They just want to relax themselves and have fun. Most boys love sports. They take part in all kinds of sports in order to become stronger. They join in the sports that interest them most, such as soccer, to be slim and pretty by doing sports.
In my opinion, no matter what reasons we have, we all can get a lot from sports.
【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目属于提纲类作文写作，写作时需要包含题目要求所有要点，第一段总述不同的人有不同的观点，第二段详细描述要点，第三段表达自己观点。
2. 写作指导：本文应采用一般现在时，主要使用第三人称和第一人称，可适当补充要点，要求叙述完整，保证条理清晰。
10．[例文]
It’s common to have stress in life. Different people feel stressed in different ways.
As for me, the stress comes from study. When I do badly in an exam, I feel stressed. When I have trouble with my homework, I feel stressed. Some students think stress is a bad thing. Every coin has two sides. While stress can make us worried, it can also make us a stronger person. When we are stressed, we may push ourselves harder and go out of our way to solve problems.
I have my own ways to deal with stress. Usually I ask my friends and parents for help. I always get great ideas from them. I also sing along with the music. And I sometimes go to the playground to give a loud shout, especially when I’m under great pressure.
In short, when we have stress, we shouldn’t be afraid. We should use it as a tool and deal with it in our own way. If so, we’ll lead a happy life.
【详解】1.题干解读：本题为材料作文，要求根据题目所给要点提示，结合自己的实际经历写一篇关于“压力”的文章。
2.写作指导：写作时人称应用第一人称，时态可根据事情发生的时间段使用过去时或现在时。文章思路围绕题目所给三个要点提示展开即可，即“何时会感到有压力——对于压力的看法——如何处理自己面临的压力”，文章应做到思路清晰，层次分明，不要出现单词拼写和语法时态使用错误。
11．One possible version:
Dear classmates,
Good morning, everyone. I am happy to share my experience of working as a volunteer with you. I have taken part in many voluntary activities these days and I have learned a lot.
First of all, I helped sort out waste in our community in the winter holiday. I think it is meaningful because it can make our environment cleaner and better. Besides, I went to a nursing home with my friends every Sunday afternoon. Talking with the old can make them happy. It’s our duty to care more about the elderly. What’s more, I volunteered to organize a charity sale in the city square last month. We sold some old books to raise money for the people in poor areas. Last week, I volunteered to work in the school dining hall. This experience made me feel the workers’ hard work and our better life.
That’s all. Thank you for listening.
【详解】题干解读：本文是一篇应用文写作，要求按照表格，介绍自己的多项志愿活动，需要适当发挥。介绍多个时间时，注意时态和上下文的连贯尤其重要。
写作指导：本文以第一人称书写，时态是一般过去时和一般现在时。全文可分成三段，第一段引出主题，第二段介绍具体时间，第三段结束语。分条介绍是Fist of all、Besides、What’s more等短语开头，使条理清晰。适当应用固定句型、状语从句，为文章增彩。
12．One possible version:
Dear Mom and Dad,
My junior high school life is coming to an end. Now, I’d like to show my thanks to you for your devotion to me these years.
Since I was born, you have been taking good care of me every day. You were the first to get up and prepare breakfast for me. On my way to and from school, you were always with me. When I failed an exam and felt stressed, you were the one to encourage me. When I didn’t get along well with my friends, you told me to learn to be caring. Thank you for supporting me. Now, I have grown up. I’ll try my best to understand you and do whatever I can do for you.
Yours,
Zhang Ming
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，但写作时要按邮件格式写。在写作时应承接短文开头；第二段主要叙述父母为你所做的事以及自己的保证。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一、第二人称来叙述文章内容；时态采用一般过去时为主，用一般现在时提出自己的目的和保证；描述父母为你所做的事时，应描写细致，条理清晰；并且对自己的保证要有可操作性。
13．Dear Tom,
I’m very happy that you are interested in Chinese traditional stories. Well, let me tell you a famous one with the name “Sima Guang hit the tank”.
Once Sima Guang was playing hide-and-seek with several children in the backyard. There was a large water tank in the yard. It was full of water. When the kids were playing, one child accidentally fell into the tank. Other children were so frightened that they started to run, crying for help. However, Sima Guang was different. He thought it over and then had an idea. He picked up a big stone and threw it at the tank. “Bang! ” The tank broke and the water ran out. The kid was saved. From the story, we know Sima Guang was brave and clever. When meeting danger, we should calm down and try to find ways.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours，
Li Mei
【详解】题目解读：本文是一篇书信作文写作，要求给美国笔友Tom写一封电子邮件，介绍中国的经典故事《司马光砸缸》，内容上须要包含故事梗概。
写作指导：本文人称上采用第三人称，时态上使用一般过去时。内容上应涵盖“司马光砸缸”故事梗概以及从中所获得的感悟。结构上可以采用三段式结构，注意段与段之间的衔接，保证文章的逻辑性。
14．例文
The Importance of Physical Exercise
Everyone hopes to live happily in the world. Physical exercise is indispensable to a happy life. My favourite sport is basketball, as it is very exciting. I play basketball three times a week.
There is a famous saying, “Life lies in physical exercise.” There is no doubt that exercise is good for our health. On the one hand, doing exercise helps us keep a healthy lifestyle. A person who takes exercise regularly will keep fit. What’s more, exercise can make us well-behaved and confident. If we usually take exercise with our friends, we will be close to them.
On the other hand, it’s very important for us to learn how to cooperate with each other. Doing exercise can help us develop our sense of teamwork, which is important for our career.
In my opinion, exercise can make our life more colorful. Nothing is more important than it. It’ll certainly help us live longer and more healthily.
【详解】1.这是一篇议论文写作。根据所给问题提示锻炼身体的重要性，包含自己喜欢的运动、锻炼的频率以及为什么做锻炼。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作时要紧扣主题，本文应该用第三人称和一般现在时来行文；短文开头已给出，注意承接上文；可分为四段：第一段点明自己喜欢的运动；第二、三段写运动的好处以重要性；最后一段发表自己的观点。在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
15．例文
A Gift from the Heart
It was the last day of the term, my classmates were very excited at the coming holiday. But my friend, David, looked unhappy because he failed the English test.
While thinking about how to cheer him up, I saw my English notebook. I had recorded all the important notes over the last term. Although it was very important for me, I decided to give it to him as a gift. David looked at me in surprise. He knew how I valued the notes. I told him that I could also help him with his English.
From that day on, David made progress with the help of me and my gift—the notebook. It’s not expensive, but it’s from my heart.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文，以“A Gift from the Heart”为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍下在一些特别的日子用心准备的礼物。
2.写作指导：本文应该以第一人称和第三人称为主来叙述内容；时态以一般过去时为主。写作时，应详细具体，语句通顺，逻辑清晰。