外研版(2019)选择性必修 第四册Unit 1 Looking forwards解透单元写作练习(含答案)

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名称 外研版(2019)选择性必修 第四册Unit 1 Looking forwards解透单元写作练习(含答案)
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Unit1 解透单元写作
主题写作——未来规划
1. 写作任务
假定你是星光中学的高中毕业生李华,母校将为高一新生举办主题为 “What to learn in senior high school ” 的英语沙龙活动,特邀请你结合自身经历并根据以下要点,给高一的学弟学妹们写一封建议信。
(1)学会学习:方法、习惯等;
(2)学会做人:真诚、友善等;
(3)其他方面:考生自拟。
注意:(1)词数80左右;
(2)建议信开头和结尾已给出,不计人总词数。
Dear schoolmates,
As a graduate from Xingguang Middle School
Yours, Li Hua
2. 写作构思
(1)一审:确定写作体裁和主题
①体裁:应用文;
②主题:给高一新生提出关于局中学习和生活的建议。
(2)二定:确定时态和人称
①时态:一般现在时态和一般过去时态为主;
②人称:主要用第一人称。
(3)三明确:明确写作要点
①内容要求:
a. 进人高中之后要学会学习:掌握好的学习方法,养成好习惯,并简要讲述自己的好习惯;
b. 学会与他人相处:高中三年的生活教我用真诚和友善与人交往;
c. 其他方面。比如谈学习与娱乐的平衡,参加体育活动及课外活动,助人为乐,丰富自己的校园生活等。
②词数要求:80左右。
(4)四分段
结合要点分为三个段落。
3. 素材整理
(1)关键词语
① share...with... 与……分享……
② used to do sth. 过去常常做某事
③ achieve one’s goals实现某人的目标
④ develop a good habit养成好习惯
⑤ be of importance 重要
⑥ get involved in 参与
⑦ get along with sb. 与某人相处
⑧ create a harmonious atmosphere 营造和谐的气氛
⑨ take part in 参加
⑩ build up增强
(2)重要句型
①我很荣幸写信和你们分享我对高中学习的看法。
________ is my honor to write ________ ________ with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.
②我曾经尝试过有效的方法来实现我的学术目标。
I ________ ________ try effective methods to ________ my academic goals.
③养成一个好习惯也很重要。
Developing a good habit is also ________ ________.
④预习功课,积极参与课堂,复习课后所教内容,真的让我受益匪浅。
It really ________ me a lot to preview lessons, get actively ________ ________ class, and review what had been taught after class.
⑤此外,我们应该学会如何与他人相处。
In addition,we should learn how to ________ ________ ________ ________ others.
⑥我们正是用真诚和忠诚创造了和谐的氛围。
It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a ________ ________.
⑦我相信,在你的努力下,你将享受丰富多彩的活。
I am sure that with your great ________, you will enjoy a colorful school life.
答案:
①It; to share ②used to; achieve ③of importance
④benefited; involved in ⑤get along well with
⑥harmonious atmosphere ⑦efforts
4. 满分作文
Dear schoolmates,
As a graduate from Xingguang Middle School, it is my honor to write to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school. In the coming three years, our school life will be challenging. Firstly, we should learn to learn efficiently. Personally, I used to try effective methods to achieve my academic goals. Developing a good habit is also of importance. It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons, get actively involved in class, and review what had been taught after class.
In addition, we should learn how to get along well with others. I respected teachers and was friendly to classmates. It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere.
Finally, we should take part in sports and outdoor activities frequently. They were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life. I am sure that with your great efforts, you will enjoy a colorful school life.
Yours, Li Hua
【综合点评】
(1)内容要点简洁全面,结构清晰,分段合理。
(2)人称、时态运用恰当,注重叙述的条理性。
(3)各种句式结构的交替使用,如强调句型、主从复合句等,增加了表达的灵活性和语言的生动性,使文章提升了档次。
5. 佳作背诵
(1)佳作一
临近毕业,部分高三学生对未来将要从事的工作感到迷茫,你校校报将以“我的理想职业”为主题征集同学们的想法和建议。请根据以下内容给校报写一封邮件。
①未来的职业,如:医生、教师、演员等;
②选择的理由;
③实现理想的途径。
注意:①可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
②词数80左右;
③开头和结尾已为你写好,但不计人总词数。
Dear editor,
It’s a great pleasure for me to share my ideal career with you. I hope to be
Yours, Li Hua
One possible version:
Dear editor,
It’s a great pleasure for me to share my ideal career with you. I hope to be a teacher. As a teacher, I will stay with young students, who are always energetic and have new ideas, so I will keep updating what I have learned. Besides, teaching is a job that teachers teach knowledge and educate students, which is increasingly important. That is why I love to be a teacher.
To be a qualified teacher, I will study hard to equip myself with relevant knowledge and do more teaching practice. My fellow classmates, please remember whatever kind of job we choose, we should devote to it.
Let’s make great efforts to do it well to realize our dreams.
Yours, Li Hua
(2)佳作二
假设你是第三中学的高三学生李华。你的英国笔友 Jim在给你的邮件中提到他很想了解你的职业规划,请你给 Jim回信,内容包括:
①你希望从事的职业;
②你选择该职业的原因;
③你打算为之做何准备。
注意:①词数80左右;
②开头和结尾已给出,不计人总词数。
Dear Jim,
I am writing to share my career plan with you in details.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours, Li Hua
One possible version:
Dear Jim,
I am writing to share my career plan with you in details.
I made up my mind to be a journalist when I visited the Xinhua News Agency last year. I chose it as my career based on the following two reasons. First, it is a job that can get me exposed to new things every day and thus keep me energetic since I really hate to follow the same routine every day. Second, working as a journalist can help me realize my childhood dream of being a hero by fighting against the evil and spreading justice.
To achieve this goal, I plan to apply for the Communication University of China, whose major, Journalism, has been ranked the first for many years in a row of the whole country.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours, Li Hua
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