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Developing ideas — writing
Unit 3 The world meets China
目录
contents
Pre-writing
Language points
While-writing
Homework
Post-writing
I
II
III
Ⅳ
Ⅴ
Pre-writing
I
Read the email and answer the questions.
Pre-writing
From: Selena
To: Jiang
Subject: Visit to the US
Dear Jiang,
Great to hear you’re coming to the US! I hope I can convince you to stop by and visit us in New York. There’re so many things to see and do here in the Big Apple. It would take a lifetime to list them all!
使确信;使信服;说服
Pre-writing
But knowing you as I do, I’d suggest walking through Midtown Manhattan. It’s one of the most popular tourist attractions in the US and just can’t be missed! Broadway district with its cafés, street performers and enormous and colorful signs really captures New York’s loud spirit! As Broadway is the heart of the American theater industry, it’s at night when it truly comes alive.
曼哈顿中城区
百老汇区
极大的;巨大的;
捕捉到纽约的灵魂
活跃起来
Read the email and answer the questions.
Broadway is famous for its big theaters, showing Shakespeare, modern drama, dance shows or musicals – take your pick! With your love of singing and interest in amateur dramatics, I’d recommend a musical. It’s a moving and intense experience that I’m sure you would love – a bit like Peking Opera! Quite a few musicals are based on classic stories like Les Misérables or Peter Pan, and they might even inspire you to read the books, too!
任你挑选
业余的
强烈的
《悲惨世界》
《彼得·潘》
Read the email and answer the questions.
Pre-writing
Pre-writing
My big news is that we’re all thinking about doing a big trip in China in the winter vacation. We’re looking for a combination of fun and traditional culture. Can you recommend a place of cultural highlights
See you soon!
Selena
结合;联合;合并
文化亮点
Read the email and answer the questions.
1. Which place in New York did Selena recommend that Jiang should visit
She recommended that Jiang should walk through Midtown Manhattan, where Broadway district is situated.
Read the email and answer the questions.
Pre-writing
2. What is special about it
Broadway district with its cafés, street performers and enormous and colorful signs, is especially famous for its theaters which show shakespeare, modern drama, dance shows or musicals.
Read the email and answer the questions.
Pre-writing
What does an email usually include
an email
Sender & Recipient
Subject
Greeting
Body
Closing
Pre-writing
Think about what will be organized in an email. Pay attention to the structure of an email.
Sender
From: Selena
To: Jiang
Recipient
Pre-writing
Subject
Visit to the US
Greeting
Dear Jiang,
Think about what will be organized in an email. Pay attention to the structure of an email.
Pre-writing
Body
Recommended Place:
Reasons for recommendation:
What it is like:
Think about what will be organized in an email. Pay attention to the structure of an email.
Pre-writing
... visit us in New York ...
I’d suggest walking through Midtown Manhattan ...
Broadway district ...
I’d recommend a musical ...
Body: Recommended Place
Pre-writing
Pre-writing
Broadway district with its cafés, street performers and enormous and colorful signs really captures New York’s loud spirit!
Broadway is famous for its big theaters, showing Shakespeare, modern drama, dance shows or musicals – take your pick!
It’s a moving and intense experience that I’m sure you would love – a bit like Peking Opera!
Body: What it is like
Pre-writing
... As Broadway is the heart of the American theater industry, it’s at night when it truly comes alive.
Body: Reasons for recommendation
... Quite a few musicals are based on classic stories like Les Misérables or Peter Pan, and they might even inspire you to read the books, too!
Think about what will be organized in an email. Pay attention to the structure of an email.
Closing
My big news is that we’re all thinking about doing a big trip in China in the winter vacation ...
Can you recommend a place of cultural highlights
See you soon!
Selena
Pre-writing
While-writing
II
Recommended Place:
Reasons for recommendation:
While-writing
What it is like:
Plan your reply to Selena, suggesting a place she can visit in China and make notes.
Body: Recommended Place
While-writing
Chongqing is located in the south-west of China.
While-writing
Chongqing is a hilly city with a unique landscape.
The best way to travel around in
Chongqing is by light rail.
Chongqing is also the perfect spot to see the amazingly clear line where the emerald waters of the Jialing River and those of the sandy Yangtze River meet.
Body: What it is like
While-writing
The city is beautiful at night with its shining lights reflected on the rivers.
The most spectacular nighttime views are from one of the surrounding mountain tops.
Body: What it is like
Chongqing will give you an
experience of urban China
different to that of any other
Chinese city.
Most of the light rail is above ground, so it’s a great way to get a feel for the place.
Body: Reasons for recommendation
While-writing
While-writing
You absolutely mustn’t miss out on Chongqing food – it’s spicy, yes, but I promise that after trying our local hot pot, you’ll be hooked. There are loads of other things to see and I’d be very happy to show you
around!
Body: Reasons for recommendation
Post-writing
III
Work in pairs. Make improvements to your partner’s writing and see whether the language style is consistent.
Post-writing
Questions Your evaluation Evaluator
Does the email include the key points 4 2 0
Is the email organized properly and smoothly 3 2 1 How is the language 12 8 4 2 How is the handwriting 3 1 -1 Paper design 3 1 -1 TOTAL MARK
Post-writing: Evaluation
Dear Selena,
Thank you for all your recommendations, which have definitely inspired me to include New York in my trip.
I can’t wait to see you there!
I’m so excited to hear that you’re coming to China! I can easily suggest places for you to visit because there are so many interesting ones. First of all, I must recommend my own city, Chongqing. Located in the south-west, it would give you an experience of urban China different to that of any other Chinese city.
明确地;确切地;一定地;肯定地
坐落于
Post-writing
Chongqing is a hilly city with a unique landscape, so the best way to travel around is by light rail. Most of the light rail is above ground, so it’s a great way to get a feel for the place. Chongqing is also the perfect spot to see the amazingly clear line where the emerald waters of the Jialing River and those of the sandy Yangtze River meet. The city is beautiful at night, with its shining lights reflected on the rivers. The most spectacular nighttime views are from one of the surrounding mountain tops.
山城
风景;风光;景色;
轻轨
祖母绿;绿宝石;
壮观的;惊人的;
Post-writing
Last but not least, you absolutely mustn’t miss out on Chongqing food – it’s spicy, yes, but I promise that after trying our local hot pot, you’ll be hooked. There are loads of other things to see and I’d be very happy to show you around!
See you soon in New York!
Yours,
Jiang
香料味浓的
火锅
迷住
Post-writing
Language points
Ⅳ
Language points
1. convince vt 说服;使承认;使明白;使确信;
1) convince sb of sth. 说服某人做某事
虽然我很快便让他相信我是清白的,但是我想他仍然心存疑虑。
Although I soon convinced him of my innocence, I think he still has serious doubts.
Language points
2) convince sb. to do sth. 说服某人做某事
是什么使得你愿意投他们的票?
What convinced you to vote for them
很难使你相信我们买不起一辆新汽车。
It was hard to convince you (that) we couldn’t afford a new car.
3) convince that ...
Language points
2. inspire 激励;激发;鼓舞;
inspire sb to do sth 鼓励某人做某事
他那高尚的榜样激发我们大家更加努力。
His noble example inspired the rest of us to make greater efforts.
I’ll recommend him for the job.
3. recommend 推荐,介绍;劝告,建议
1) recommend sb sth/sb 向某人推荐某物/某人
你能给我推荐一个好的牙医吗
我要推荐他做这项工作。
Can you recommend me a good dentist
2) recommend sb. for ... 推荐某人做(某职位)
Language points
Language points
3) recommend sb as ... 推荐某人为 ……
我要推荐他当她的秘书。
I’ll recommend him as her secretary.
4) recommend sb to do sth 推荐某人做某事
他建议我们读一读那部小说。
He recommended us to read the novel.
Language points
5)recommend + that-clause
他建议我们读一读那部小说。
He recommended that we (should) read the novel.
我建议你买这本词典。
I recommend that you (should) buy this dictionary.
(= I recommend you to buy this dictionary.)
Language points
1. stop by _________________
2. suggest doing sth _________________
3. tourist attractions _________________
4. captures sb’s spirit _________________
5. come alive _________________
顺便访问
建议做某事
旅游景点
捕捉某人的灵魂
活跃起来
Language points
6. take sb’s pick _________________
7. be based on _________________
8. inspire sb to do sth _________________
9. cultural highlights _________________
10. be located in _________________
任某人挑选
以……为依据
鼓励某人做某事
文化亮点
坐落在
Language points
11. give sb an experience of _________________
12. get a feel for _________________
13. light rail _________________
14. miss out _________________
15. be hooked _________________
给某人……的经历
得到……的感觉
轻轨
错过
被迷住
Homework
V
Homework
Polish your email and hand it in.