外研版（2019）选择性必修第四册 Unit5 Into the unknown解透单元写作学案（有答案）
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Unit5 解透单元写作
主题写作——探索未知世界
1. 写作任务
假定你是李华, 西安市某高中高二学生。你的英国朋友Mark暑期准备到你所在的城市旅游, 请你给他写信, 告知西安的相关情况。
内容：（1）著名的历史古都, 古代丝绸之路的起点；
（2）大雁塔, 西安城墙, 并且秦始皇陵兵马俑还是世界八大奇迹之一；
（3）现代化大都市；
（4）地方小吃品种繁多；
（5）第14届全运会举办城市。
注意：（1）词数80左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯；
（3）文章的开头和结尾已经给出, 不计入总词数。
参考词汇：大雁塔Giant Wild Goose Pagoda; 西安城墙fortifications of Xi’an; 秦始皇陵兵马俑 Terracotta Army
Dear Mark,
I am delighted to receive your letter, ___________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Welcome to Xi, an for a visit. I am looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
2. 写作构思
（1）一审：确定与作体裁和主题
①体裁：应用文；
②主题：向英国朋友介绍西安。
（2）二定：确定时态和人称
①时态：一般现在时态为主, 也会用到一般将来时；
②人称：第一、二人称为主。
（3）三明确：明确写作要点
①内容要求：
a. 简要说明写信意图；
b. 结合写作要点介绍西安的相关情况；
c. 欢迎来西安旅游+结束语。
②词数要求：80左右。
（4）四分段
结合要点分为三个段落。
3. 素材整理
（1）关键词语
①很高兴做某事be delighted to do sth.
②对某事表现出极大的兴趣show great interest in sth.
③向某人做简要介绍make a brief introduction to sb.
④作为……而出名be known as
⑤位于/坐落在某处be located in sp.
⑥自豪地说proudly speaking
⑦举行take place
重要句型
①我知道你对我的家乡西安很感兴趣, 我会向你做一个简短的介绍。
Knowing you are showing great ________ ________ my home town, Xi’an, I will ________ a brief introduction to you.
②西安, 曾经被誉为最著名的古都之一, 位于中国陕西省。
Xi’an, once ________ ________ one of the most famous ancient capitals, ________ ________ in Shaanxi Province of China.
③自豪地说, 它不仅有悠久的历史, 而且现在也是一座现代化城市。
________ ________, not only ________ it have a long history, but also it is now a modern city.
④这里有著名的景点, 如大雁塔、西安城墙和兵马诵, 每年都吸引许多外国游客。
Here are famous attractions, ________ ________ the Giant Wild Goose Pagoda, the fortifications of Xi’an and the Terracotta Army, lots of foreign tourists every year.
答案：①interest in, make ②known as, is located
③Proudly speaking, does ④such as, attracting
4. 满分作文
Dear Mark,
I am delighted to receive your letter. Knowing you are showing great interest in my home town, Xi’an, I will make a brief introduction to you.
Xi’an, once known as one of the most famous ancient capitals, is located in Shaanxi Province of China. It is the starting point of the ancient Silk Road. Proudly speaking, not only does it have a long history, but also it is now a modem city. The 14th National Games will take place in this fascinating city. Here are famous attractions, such as the Giant Wild Goose Pagoda, the fortifications of Xi’an and the Terracotta Army, attracting lots of foreign tourists every year. Besides, there are various snacks for tourists to enjoy.
Welcome to Xi’an for a visit. I am looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【综合点评】
（1）内容要点简洁全面, 结构清晰, 分段合理。
（2）人称、时态运用恰当。
（3）高级句式和复杂句表达精准, 如现在分词短语作状 语和倒装句的运用, 为文章提升了档次。
5. 佳作背诵
（1）佳作一
假定你是李华, 正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知她下次上课的计划。
内容包括：①时间和地点；
②内容：学习唐诗；
③课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。
注意：①词数80左右；
②可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Dear Leslie,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
One possible version：
Dear Leslie,
I’m delighted to know you’re interested in Tang poems. Now I’m writing to tell you the plan for the next class.
Actually I’m fond of Tang poems, and think it great fun to learn the poems written in the Tang Dynasty with you. We are to meet in the People’s Park on Sunday morning, where the air is fresh and the scenery is beautiful. We’ll learn from 8 a.m. to 10 a.m. Besides, I advise you to go to the bookstore to borrow a history book and learn the history of the Tang Dynasty in advance, which can help you better understand the poems to be learned.
If you have any questions, please let me know. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
（2）佳作二
随着经济的发展, 一些地区越来越多的文化遗产（cultural relics）遭到破坏。假设你是红星高中的学生李华, 请你给当地报社写一封信, 就以下两个方面谈谈你的看 法, 来纪念“文化和自然遗产日”。
要点：①文化遗产的重要性（见证历史和文化, 帮助人们了解过去;稀少, 有价值）；
②呼吁人们保护文化遗产。
注意：①要涵盖所给要点, 词数80左右；
②可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯；
③开头和结尾已为你写好, 不计人总词数。
Dear Editor,
I am Li Hua, a senior student from Hong Xing High School.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope more and more people will become concerned about protecting our cultural relics.
Yours,
Li Hua
One possible version：
Dear Editor,
I am Li Hua, a senior student from Hong Xing High School. Nowadays, with the development of our economy, more and more cultural relics are facing the danger of disappearance in some regions. So we must attach importance to this problem and try our best to protect them.
First, cultural relics represent our historic culture, which offer us great opportunities to learn about what happened in the past. Also, they are the roots of cities or places. They can help us make our traditional culture handed down from generation to generation. More importantly, most of them have survived for a long time and they are usually very rare and valuable.
For above reasons, we shouldn’t hesitate to call on people to take action to save our treasures.
I hope more and more people will become concerned about protecting our cultural relics.
Yours,
Li Hua
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主题写作——探索未知世界
1. 写作任务
假定你是李华, 西安市某高中高二学生。你的英国朋友Mark暑期准备到你所在的城市旅游, 请你给他写信, 告知西安的相关情况。
内容：（1）著名的历史古都, 古代丝绸之路的起点；
（2）大雁塔, 西安城墙, 并且秦始皇陵兵马俑还是世界八大奇迹之一；
（3）现代化大都市；
（4）地方小吃品种繁多；
（5）第14届全运会举办城市。
注意：（1）词数80左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯；
（3）文章的开头和结尾已经给出, 不计入总词数。
参考词汇：大雁塔Giant Wild Goose Pagoda; 西安城墙fortifications of Xi’an; 秦始皇陵兵马俑 Terracotta Army
Dear Mark,
I am delighted to receive your letter, ___________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Welcome to Xi, an for a visit. I am looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
2. 写作构思
（1）一审：确定与作体裁和主题
①体裁：应用文；
②主题：向英国朋友介绍西安。
（2）二定：确定时态和人称
①时态：一般现在时态为主, 也会用到一般将来时；
②人称：第一、二人称为主。
（3）三明确：明确写作要点
①内容要求：
a. 简要说明写信意图；
b. 结合写作要点介绍西安的相关情况；
c. 欢迎来西安旅游+结束语。
②词数要求：80左右。
（4）四分段
结合要点分为三个段落。
3. 素材整理
（1）关键词语
①很高兴做某事be delighted to do sth.
②对某事表现出极大的兴趣show great interest in sth.
③向某人做简要介绍make a brief introduction to sb.
④作为……而出名be known as
⑤位于/坐落在某处be located in sp.
⑥自豪地说proudly speaking
⑦举行take place
重要句型
①我知道你对我的家乡西安很感兴趣, 我会向你做一个简短的介绍。
Knowing you are showing great ________ ________ my home town, Xi’an, I will ________ a brief introduction to you.
②西安, 曾经被誉为最著名的古都之一, 位于中国陕西省。
Xi’an, once ________ ________ one of the most famous ancient capitals, ________ ________ in Shaanxi Province of China.
③自豪地说, 它不仅有悠久的历史, 而且现在也是一座现代化城市。
________ ________, not only ________ it have a long history, but also it is now a modern city.
④这里有著名的景点, 如大雁塔、西安城墙和兵马诵, 每年都吸引许多外国游客。
Here are famous attractions, ________ ________ the Giant Wild Goose Pagoda, the fortifications of Xi’an and the Terracotta Army, lots of foreign tourists every year.
答案：①interest in, make ②known as, is located
③Proudly speaking, does ④such as, attracting
4. 满分作文
Dear Mark,
I am delighted to receive your letter. Knowing you are showing great interest in my home town, Xi’an, I will make a brief introduction to you.
Xi’an, once known as one of the most famous ancient capitals, is located in Shaanxi Province of China. It is the starting point of the ancient Silk Road. Proudly speaking, not only does it have a long history, but also it is now a modem city. The 14th National Games will take place in this fascinating city. Here are famous attractions, such as the Giant Wild Goose Pagoda, the fortifications of Xi’an and the Terracotta Army, attracting lots of foreign tourists every year. Besides, there are various snacks for tourists to enjoy.
Welcome to Xi’an for a visit. I am looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【综合点评】
（1）内容要点简洁全面, 结构清晰, 分段合理。
（2）人称、时态运用恰当。
（3）高级句式和复杂句表达精准, 如现在分词短语作状 语和倒装句的运用, 为文章提升了档次。
5. 佳作背诵
（1）佳作一
假定你是李华, 正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知她下次上课的计划。
内容包括：①时间和地点；
②内容：学习唐诗；
③课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。
注意：①词数80左右；
②可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Dear Leslie,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
One possible version：
Dear Leslie,
I’m delighted to know you’re interested in Tang poems. Now I’m writing to tell you the plan for the next class.
Actually I’m fond of Tang poems, and think it great fun to learn the poems written in the Tang Dynasty with you. We are to meet in the People’s Park on Sunday morning, where the air is fresh and the scenery is beautiful. We’ll learn from 8 a.m. to 10 a.m. Besides, I advise you to go to the bookstore to borrow a history book and learn the history of the Tang Dynasty in advance, which can help you better understand the poems to be learned.
If you have any questions, please let me know. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
（2）佳作二
随着经济的发展, 一些地区越来越多的文化遗产（cultural relics）遭到破坏。假设你是红星高中的学生李华, 请你给当地报社写一封信, 就以下两个方面谈谈你的看 法, 来纪念“文化和自然遗产日”。
要点：①文化遗产的重要性（见证历史和文化, 帮助人们了解过去;稀少, 有价值）；
②呼吁人们保护文化遗产。
注意：①要涵盖所给要点, 词数80左右；
②可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯；
③开头和结尾已为你写好, 不计人总词数。
Dear Editor,
I am Li Hua, a senior student from Hong Xing High School.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope more and more people will become concerned about protecting our cultural relics.
Yours,
Li Hua
One possible version：
Dear Editor,
I am Li Hua, a senior student from Hong Xing High School. Nowadays, with the development of our economy, more and more cultural relics are facing the danger of disappearance in some regions. So we must attach importance to this problem and try our best to protect them.
First, cultural relics represent our historic culture, which offer us great opportunities to learn about what happened in the past. Also, they are the roots of cities or places. They can help us make our traditional culture handed down from generation to generation. More importantly, most of them have survived for a long time and they are usually very rare and valuable.
For above reasons, we shouldn’t hesitate to call on people to take action to save our treasures.
I hope more and more people will become concerned about protecting our cultural relics.
Yours,
Li Hua
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