外研版（2019） 选择性必修第四册 Unit6 Space and beyond 解透单元写作（含答案）

Unit6 解透单元写作
主题写作——太空探索
1. 写作任务
某英文杂志正在举办以“Fancy yourself as an interviewer” 为主题的征文活动，假定你是李华，请你以“A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview” 为话题，给该杂志写一封邮件。内容包括：
（1）想要采访的对象；
（2）采访他/她的原因；
（3）想提问的问题。
注意：（1）词数80左右（开头和结尾已写好，但不计人总词数）；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Editor,
The person I would like to interview is
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
2. 写作构思
（1）一审：确定写作体裁和主题
①体裁：应用文；
②主题：写邮件阐述自己想要采访的中国名人和原因。
（2）二定：确定时态和人称
①时态：一般现在时态为主；
②人称：第一人称和第二人称。
（3）三明确：明确写作要点
①内容要求：
a. 简要指出“我”要采访的中国名人是谁，交代其主要贡献或事迹，即采访的原因；
b. 自己想提出的问题；
c. 结束语。
②词数要求：80左右。
（4）四分段
结合要点分为三个段落。
3. 素材整理
（1）关键词语
① 想要做某事would like to do sth.
② 不仅……而且 not only...but also
③ 进入太空go to space
④ 对……感兴趣be interested in
⑤ 太空探索 space exploration
⑥ 从某人身上学到很多东西learn a great deal from sb.
⑦ 太空旅行space travel
（2）重要句型
①我真的很想采访他，因为他不仅是第一个去太空的中国人，也是世界上最伟大的宇航员之一。
I would really like to interview him because he is ________ ________the first Chinese to go to space but also one of the greatest astronauts in the world.
②我一直对太空探索感兴趣，我相信我能从他那里学到很多相关的东西。
I have long been ________ ________ space exploration and I believe I could leam a great deal from him about it.
③如果我能采访他，我会问他是什么使他成为宇航员，以及他是如何被训练的。
If I could interview him，I would ask him ________ made him an astronaut and ________ he was trained.
④我还想知道他在太空中的感受，以及太空旅行是否像我读过的那样有趣。
I would also like to know ________ he felt in space and ________ space travel is such great fun as I have read.
⑤最后，我想问几个关于他个人生活的问题，这一定很有趣。
Finally, I would like to ask a few questions about his personal life, ________ must be very interesting.
答案：① not only ② interested in ③ what, how ④ how, whether ⑤ which
4. 满分作文
Dear Editor,
The person I would like to interview is Yang Liwei. I would really like to interview him because he is not only the first Chinese to go to go to space but also one of the greatest astronauts in the world. I have long been interested in space exploration and I believe I could learn a great deal from him about it.
If I could interview him, I would ask him what made him an astronaut and how he was trained. I would also like to know how he felt in space and whether space travel is such great fun as I have read. Finally, I would like to ask a few questions about his personal life,
I’m looking forward to that opportunity.
Yours，
Li Hua
【综合点评】
（1）内容要点简洁全面，叙述语句通顺，内容饱满，表达准确。
（2）人称、时态运用恰当；结构清晰，分段合理。
（3）使用了虚拟条件句、宾语从句和定语从句，以及其他各种语法结构，为文章提升了档次。
5. 佳作背诵
假定你是李华，某英文报社正在举行题为“科技改变我们未来的生活”的征文活动，要求同学们想象科技将如何改变我们的生活环境、工作和休闲方式。请根据你的畅想用英语写一封邮件给报社。
注意：（1）词数80左右（开头和结尾已写好，但不计人总词数）；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Editor,
With the development of science and technology, _________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
All in all, our life will become more comfortable and convenient.
Yours,
Li Hua
One possible version：
Dear Editor,
With the development of science and technology, our life in the future will be quite different from what it is now.
At that time we’ll live in a greener and more beautiful world with trees, birds, blue skies and sunshine. And we’ll be able to arrange things like meals, bathing and sleep with our smartphones. Robots will be able to do most of the housework for us. As for work, we’ll mostly work at home, communicating ideas for work online. If necessary, we’ll have video meetings with our partners around the world. During our free time, we’ll be able to travel to places of interest in new vehicles like flying cars. We’ll even enjoy space trips to the moon and other planets.
All in all, our life will become more comfortable and convenient.
Yours,
Li Hua
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