人教版（2019） 必修第一册 Unit2 Travelling around解透单元写作（含答案）

Unit2 解透单元写作
主题写作——旅行
1. 写作任务
假定你是李华，笔友Tom要来上饶旅游，发邮件过来想了解上饶的情况，请你回复他的邮件。要点如下
①旅行规划；
②航班信息，住宿安排；
③表达祝愿。
注意：①词数100左右；
②可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：灵山风景区 Lingshan Scenic Area 篁岭古村 Huangling Ancient Village
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2. 写作思路
（1）一审：体裁、主题和结构
体裁：应用文——信息介绍类
主题：旅游信息介绍
第一段：交际用语—导入—写信目的
第二段：概括句（旅行安排）+2个支持
结构：四段 要点（关联词连接）
第三段：信息询问（航班与住宿）
第四段：表达祝愿
（2）二定：人称与时态
人称：第二人称为主，第一人称为辅
时态：一般现在时
（3）三明确
明确写作要点：
①旅行计划安排（灵山风景区，篁岭古村）
②询问航班信息与住宿建议
③祝愿
3. 素材整理
（1）关键词语
inform somebody of something 通知某人某事
go for a hike 徒步旅行
natural scenery and sights 自然风光
historical sites 历史遗迹
places of interest 名胜
date back to 追溯到
check in 登记入住
（2）完成句子
①很高兴知道你要来参观上饶，我期待着你的到来。（形容词作状语结构）
_______ _______ to know you are going to visit Shangrao，I _______ _______ your coming.
②至于旅行计划，以下是详细信息。（as for表示导入或转换话题）
_______ _______ the travel plan，here are the _______.
③我强烈建议你参观灵山风景区，一个令人惊叹的追溯到许多年前的名胜区。（现在分词短语作定语）
I _______ _______ you to go to Lingshan Scenic Area，an amazing place of interest ________ ________ _______ many years ago.
④另外一个目的地是篁岭古村，在那里你可以欣赏独特的古建筑。（“介词+关系代词”引导的定语从句）
Another _______ can be Huangling Ancient Village, _______ _______ you can admire the unique ancient buildings.
⑤告诉我你的到达时间和航班号，这样我可以去机场接你。（目的状语从句）
Tell me your arriving time and the _______ _______ _______ ______ I can go and meet you at the airport.
答案: ① Extremely happy; am expecting ② As for; details strongly advise; dating back to ④destination; at which ⑤ flight number so that
4. 满分作文（注：黑体部分为本单元的重点词汇）
Dear Tom,
How is everything going Extremely happy to know you are going to visit Shangrao, I am expecting your coming and I'd like to inform you of my arrangement for your stay here.
As for the travel plan, here are the details There are many historical sites in Shangrao. I strongly advise you to go to Lingshan Scenic Area, an amazing place of interest dating back to many years ago, from where you can enjoy beautiful and pleasant natural scenery and sights. Besides, another destination can be Huangling Ancient Village, at which you can admire the unique ancient buildings and go for a hike along the mountain path.
Additionally, please tell me your arriving time and the flight number so that I can go and meet you at the airport in time. When it comes to accommodation, I can book a hotel room and you can check in immediately you arrive, or you can stay at my home I do hope you will have a nice trip. If you have any problems, just contact me.
Yours,
Li Hua
第一段：交际用语+导入话题+写作目的
第一句为交际用语，第二句导入话题并表明写作目的
as for导入话题，第二句为概括句，然后分两点介绍，中间使用关联词besides。
additionally连接上文，转换话题到询问航班信息，when it comes to引入另一个话题。
5. 佳作背诵
（1）佳作一
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条路线可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回封100词左右的信，内容包括：
①你建议的路线；
②你的理由；
③你的祝愿。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua One possible version:
Dear Jim,
How is everything going Glad to receive your letter and know you' re coming to China, I'd like to give you my views about it.
Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both highly recommended. Personally, I prefer Mount Tai as your destination, which is recognised as head of the Five Great Mountains. Moreover, the sights are also extremely amazing with many unique ancient temples and other buildings. That’s why I think the trip to Mount Tai will be a better choice.
Hope you'll have a good time in China. If you need any further information, just contact me.
Yours,
Li Hua
（2）佳作二
（2019·山东潍坊高一期末）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友John寒假期间打算来中国海南旅游，发邮件向你征询建议，请你回复邮件，内容包括：
①预订宾馆；
②租用车辆；
③导游陪同。
注意：①词数100左右；
②可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
③开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear John,
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Yours,
Li Hua
One possible version:
Dear John,
Welcome you to Hainan in the coming winter vacation. My advice is as follows:
Firstly, you had better book your hotel one month before your arrival, since too many visitors will be there in the busy tour season. Secondly, you may rent a local car in order to save time and visit more places of interest. Last but not least, it's wise of you to have a guide who knows both standard Chinese and English well. He or she will show you around Hainan and introduce more details to you which will make your trip more interesting and benefit you a lot.
If you have any more questions, please call me. Looking forward to seeing you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
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