(共32张PPT)
Unit 4 Why don't you talk to your parents
人教新目标版 八年级下
Section B3a-Selfcheck
写作优质公开课课件
Learning objectives
1. 熟练掌握并运用单词及短语: perhaps, in one’s opinion
2. 学会书写“谈论问题, 提出建议”类作文，积累写作技巧，培养写作能力。
3. 能就一个固定的话题，通过正方反方辩论的形式，运用所学知识对该话题进行阐述。
4. 通过有关话题进行写作，训练巩固知识，锻炼发散思维， 提高输出能力。
Warming-up
Problem: Many children have a busy life and great pressure.
Opinions：Cathy Taylor, Linda Miller and Dr. Alice Green give their opinions about the problems.
Para.2-4
Para.1
Revision
Cathy Taylor
Linda Miller
Dr.Alice Green
Cathy thinks the activities are important for children's future.
Alice thinks too much pressure is not good for a child's development.
Linda thinks people shouldn't push kids so hard.
Who do you agree with
Should we take after-school activities
Free talk
Prons
Let's debate
PK
I agree with..
It is important...
I believe it is better...
I think...
good for the children's future / get better grades / learn important skills
I don't agree with...
I don't think so.
That's not true.
take away the children's free time / cause the children to be stressed / take away the children's childhood
Cons
Topic: After-school classes can help kids get into a good university
1. “After-school classes can help kids get into a good university.”
A magazine interviewed some parents about after-school classes for children. Read the opinions below and make notes on your own opinions.
Why should children take after-school classes
2. “I want my child to be a successful person.”
3. “It’s good for children to start learning from a young age.”
After-school classes are good for the children’s future. They can help children get into good schools and universities.
Some of these classes help children get better grades at school. Better grades help children to feel good about themselves.
Some classes help children to learn important skills not taught at school. These skills may actually help children relax, e.g. playing a sport or playing a musical instrument.
People learn better at a younger age.
Children have more time than adults, so they should learn as much as they can before they get too busy to learn new things.
Agree
After-school classes take away the children’s free time. Children have no time to relax and just do nothing.
Children may be so busy they have no time to absorb (理解, 掌握) and apply what they have been taught.
Some children are made to learn skills they are not interested in.
These classes cause the children to be stressed.
These classes take away the children’s childhood.
Disagree
Try to write two paragraphs.
Para. 1
1. Write a statement of the problem about after school-classes.
2. Write if you agree or disagree.
Dear …,
I don’t really agree with…because …
Although some parents are right about …，I think children should……
Write a letter to the magazine to express your opinions on after-school classes for children. Use the following expressions to help you.
Para. 2
Explain why you agree or disagree. Give at least two reasons.
In my opinion, it is important for children / parents to …
I believe it is better if children / parents … so that…
Perhaps children / parents should / could …
If children…， they will…
perhaps adv. 大概；也许
perhaps在句中位于实义动词前，助动词 、系动词 、情态动词后。
perhaps /p (r)'h ps/ adv. 可能；大概；也许
e.g. He will perhaps come to my party tomorrow evening.
明天晚上他可能会来参加我的聚会。
probably 表示的可能性最大，通常表示有根据的推测 可位于句首、句中或句尾
perhaps 相当于maybe，表示的可能性介于probably和possibly之间，较口语化 常位于句首
possibly 表示的可能性最小，常与can, may等情态动词连用 常位于句中
辨析probably, perhaps 与possibly
e.g. It will probably rain. 很可能要下雨。
She can possibly be at home. 她或许在家里。
【审清题目】
内容：针对“孩子是否该上课外班”这个问题，发表自己的观点并给出论据支撑观点。
文体：应用文(书信)；信的主体部分为议论文
时态：一般现在时和一般将来时
人称：第一人称和第三人称
The structure of the text
Reasons
Opinion
Conclusion
Should kids take after-school classes
Agree
Disagree
I agree that / I think... are right.
I disagree that /Although....
First, I think children should...
Second, it’s more important to...
Last but not least,…
In a word/All in all/As a result...
【谋篇布局】
【提供素材】
Opinions Pros (赞成) Cons (反对)
Reasons ·improve grades; ·get into a good university; ·develop friendships and share learning experience; ·learn some skills or develop some interests; ·learn better at a young age; ·make good use of weekends ·have too much pressure;
·have no time to relax and play;
·too tired to study well;
·do what they don't like;
·take away children's childhood
(童年);
·cause health problems;
·have no time to apply (运用) what they learned in class;
·All work and no play makes Jack a dull (迟钝的) boy.
语 块
I don't think ... because ...
In my opinion, children need to ...
I believe that ...
I agree / disagree that ...
Children should ... so that ...
I think children should ...
If children ..., they will ...
It will be better if children ...
After-school classes are good for ...
It's more important to ...
句型
Beginning
Body
Ending
Outline
表明观点
说明原因
得出结论
I agree that / I think... are right.
I disagree that /Although....
be good for/get good grades...
In a word, I believe it’s better...
cause stress and pressure/
have no time....
I agree that it is necessary to attend after-school classes.
Because it helps to improve children's learning foundation, thus helping children get a good grade. Secondly,attending after-school schools can reduce children's time on electronic devices and put more energy into meaningful study.What's more, with the improvement of the peoples
living standards,more and more parents are willing to spend money to broaden their children’s horizon。
In a word, I believe that it’s better to attend after-school classes.
引出话题
说明原因
结束语
A possible version
Dear Sir or Madam,
Yours sincerely/truly,
XXX
I don't agree that children should take after-school classes. Because
I think it has a bad effect on children's learning ability. Once children encounter problems they can't do, they won't solve them by themselves, but tend to rely on the teacher, which will reduce their ability to think independently. Besides,attending after-school cram schools will increase the child's schoolwork burden. with the higher grade, the learning
burden will be more and more heavy.
All in all,I don’t think that children should take extra lessons.
Another possible version
引出话题
说明原因
结束语
Reason 1
Reason 2
Dear Sir or Madam,
Yours sincerely/truly,
XXX
1. Correct Expression 表达准确
2. Right Mind Logic 逻辑合理
3. Fluent language 语言流畅
4. Diverse Sentence Patterns 句式多样
5. Complete Structure 结构完整
6.Neat Handwriting笔迹整洁
写作标准
Fill in the blanks using until, so that or although.
You should eat more now __________you
won’t be hungry later.
2. _________ you may not like to do chores, you
should help your parents around the house.
3. You could save more money _________ you
can buy a gift for your friend’s birthday.
so that
Although
so that
4. Kids shouldn’t play computer games_____
late at night. They should rest early.
5. ________many people like to eat junk food, they should really eat more fruit and vegetables _________they can be healthy.
until
Although
so that
2. For each problem, choose the advice you
agree with more. Then write your own advice.
1. My best friend and I had a fight, and now she won’t speak to me.
You should keep trying to talk to her until
she talks to you.
B. Why don’t you wait a few more days before talking to her
My advice：___________________________
___________________________________
I agree with B, in my view, I’d like
to talk with her when both of us are calm.
2. My friend wants me to go to a party on the weekend, but I want to study for my exams next week.
A: Why don’t you just go to the party It’ll
help you to relax.
B: You should study for the exams because
they’re more important than a party.
My advice:_____________________________
______________________________________
I agree with A, because after relaxing
You’ll be much easier to obtain the knowledge.
3. My brother watches television while I'm trying to study.
A: Why don’t you tell him to do something
quiet when you’re studying
B: You could tell him to turn down the TV.
My advice:______________________________
_______________________________________
I agree with A, because I think it’s
easy for him to accept this advice.
You could tell him to turn down the TV. (教材P32 2)
turn down 关小，调低
Point
Language points
I will go to bed. Would you turn down the TV
—Will Bob help me look after my pet dog when I'm away
—Of course. He won't turn down your request. He loves
animals a lot.
【拓展延伸】turn down还可意为“拒绝”。
【易混辨析】turn down, turn up, turn off与turn on
turn down 意为“关小，调低”，常指调低音量等。 She asked her neighbor to turn down the radio.
turn up 意为“开大，调高”，常指调高音量等。 He turned up the volume of the music.
turn off 意为“关掉（水、电、煤气等）”。 Please turn off the tap when you brush your teeth.
turn on 意为“打开（水、电、煤气等）”。 I don't know how to turn on the computer.
【2020·武威市】父母是我们最亲的人，但我们有时会在与父母沟通时遇到困难。请根据所给思维导图的提示，以"How to Communicate with Our Parents"为题用英语写一篇短文，谈谈与父母沟通的技巧和做法。
要求：
1.文中需包含思维导图中的主要内容；
2.句子及篇章结构准确、连贯、书写规范；
中考链接
3.需做适量拓展；
4.词数：80词左右。(标题和第一段已给出，不计入总词数；无需抄写在答题卡对应作答区域)
How to Communicate with Our Parents
Communication with parents is one of the first things we have done since we were born. As we grow older, we‘ll find it’s not easy to communicate with our parents openly and effectively. So what should we do when communicating with them Here are some of my ideas.
One possible version:
How to Communicate with Our Parents
Communication with parents is one of the first things we have done since we were borm. As we grow older, we'll find it's not easy to communicate with our parents openly and effectively. So what should we do when communicating with them Here are some of my ideas.
Firstly, we can make a list of things our parents and we disagree about most. Try to find out the reason why we disagree with each other. Accept each other's ideas little by little. If we still have disagreements, we'd better not get too angry. Secondly, we should talk with them more! Sharing ideas can make us closer. Besides, we should also learn how to really listen. Listening is a skill that must be learned and practiced. Finally, be sure to be polite. We are a family in which everyone is loved and cared for.
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