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热点24 移动支付改变消费方式 让生活更方便
备考2023年中考英语写作压轴预测猜题
【压轴预测】
移动支付是指使用普通或智能手机完成支付或者确认支付，而不是用现金、银行卡或者支票支付。买家可以使用移动手机购买一系列的服务、数字产品或者商品等。
移动支付是互联网时代一种新型的支付方式，其以移动终端为中心，通过移动终端对所购买的产品进行结算支付，移动支付的主要表现形式为手机支付。
对于消费者来说，我们可以在实体店直接扫描二维码，轻松付款。而无需携带现金，无需找零，无需刷卡签字，很大程度上节约我们的时间，并且可以避免假币问题带来的麻烦。加之这些第三方支付平台经常会在网上做一些满减、抢红包的活动，不仅给予我们优惠，更是给我们带来了很多乐趣；另外，通过移动支付的快捷转账，我们可以轻松地实现生活缴费、车票购买、手机充值等，真正做到足不出户也能办理各种业务；除此之外，第三方支付机构还具有财富管理、教育公益、购物娱乐，提供第三方服务等功能，来满足我们不同层次的需求，极大地丰富了我们的生活。
【典型例题】
某英文报正在举行以“如何看待手机支付”为题的征文活动。请写一篇短文进行投稿，要点如下：
1.简单快捷；
2.网购和商店购物都能使用；
3.个人信息不太安全；
……
注意：
①请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥；
②文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名；
③词数80~100，短文的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
It has been more and more popular to pay with mobile phones. Different people have different opinions about it. I’d like to share my ideas here.________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
All in all, I hope mobile phone payment can be used more properly.
【答案】
It has been more and more popular to pay with mobile phones. Different people have different opinions about it. I’d like to share my ideas here.
Paying with mobile phones becomes popular because it is simple and convenient. We don’t need carry cash, worry about losing money or receiving fake money. We can use phones to pay not only in online shopping, but also in store shopping. However, there are also disadvantages, such as the disclosure of personal information, the steal of bank card information.
In general, I think its advantages outweigh its disadvantages. More and more countries around the world have launched mobile payment. It proves the convenience of it.
All in all, I hope mobile phone payment can be used more properly.
【详解】
题干解读：这是一篇话题作文。要求根据题目“如何看待手机支付”和提示的内容完成作文。写作时要注意语句通顺，语意连贯，紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡，要注意涵盖所给提示。
例文点评：例文采用四段式；时态选用一般现在时；将题目要求的要点都很好地融入到文章当中，适当发挥部分也很好地展示了对文章主题的理解，表达出自己的观点态度。
高分亮点：
短语：not only…but also…；such as；In general；around the world等。
句型：Paying with mobile phones becomes popular because it is simple and convenient. 使用了because引导的原因状语从句。
In general, I think its advantages outweigh its disadvantages. 使用了省略引导词的宾语从句。
【点睛】
首先认真审题，看清文章的要求和要点；其次，理顺自己的行文思路；再次紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡；最后要仔细检查是否有单词拼写错误和标点的误用等，还要注意是否出现语法错误，有无重复遗漏，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
【压轴猜题】
A
近年来，越来越多的人在超市、影院、餐馆等地方消费时，经常使用手机扫码支付。移动支付（mobile payment）深受人们喜爱。假如你是李华，学校即将开展以“Mobile Payment Changes Our Life”为题的征文活动，请根据下列表格中的提示，介绍一下移动支付并呼吁人们理性消费。
移动支付 日益流行；改变生活
扫码支付；方便快捷（举至少1个生活实例）
消费观念 理智消费；购前三思学会节约；按需购买
要求：
1.语言表达准确，短文连贯、通顺；
2.短文应包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥，不要逐句翻译；
3.词数80左右。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：扫码scan QR codes支付 pay三思 think twice理智 wisely▲
More recently, mobile payment is liked by many people.___________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Mobile Payment Changes Our Life
More recently, mobile payment is liked by many people. It is becoming more and more popular in China. It has made people’s daily life very convenient. Most of us are used to paying by scanning QR codes. By mobile payment, we can pay easily and quickly wherever we go. We can have dinner in a restaurant and pay by scanning QR codes with our smart phones. In a cinema, we can buy our tickets in the same way. Mobile payment is changing our life.
However, we should spend money wisely. First of all, think twice about what we want to buy. Next, learn to save, buy what we can afford. Last but not the least, spend on what we really need, don’t buy everything we want.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“移动支付改变我们的生活”为题写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文主要用一般现在时。分为两段式：第一段介绍有关移动支付的情况，并举例说明这种支付方式的方便快捷；第二段呼吁人们要理性消费。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。
B
假如你是李华，你的美国笔友 Jenny 正在做一份关于中国移动支付（mobile payment ）的问卷调查 （survey） ，你是她的重点采访对象． 内容包括：
1. 你或你身边的人在日常生活中使用移动支付的情况；
2. 移动支付带来的好处；
3. 你的看法。
参考词汇：微信：Wechat 支付宝：Alipay 二维码：QR code
注意：1. 词数 100 左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jenny，
How is your survey on mobile payment going？_________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
Yours faithfully，
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jenny,
How is your survey on mobile payment going I’m glad I can help with it.
It is generally believed that China is the largest mobile payment market. Nowhere else is the cashless trend more obvious than in China. Most of us are used to paying by scanning QR codes whatever we buy — books, clothes, and electronic devices, to name a few, which is a glimpse into the life of most Chinese like me and my family.
With the widespread use of mobile payment, Wechat or Alipay is the most convenient and safest way to pay. We rarely need to carry a wallet or cash at all. Besides, never will we worry about getting fake notes or having to count change. In short, mobile payment has greatly changed people’s life in China.
Personally, I think mobile payment should be encouraged. First, it has won over consumers with its convenience. Another advantage is that there are often discounts if you make mobile payment, as major online payment platforms are competing to have more consumers use their service.
I hope my explanation can be of some help to you. Wish you good luck.
C
假定你是李津，你在某英文网上论坛看到大家在讨论人们使用非现金支付越来越普遍的现象，你打算在论坛里跟帖讨论，内容包括：
（1）非现金支付的好处；
（2）非现金支付的弊端；
（3）你的观点。
注意：
（1）字数100左右；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）开头与结尾已给出，不计入字数。
With fewer and fewer people using cash, Non-cash payments are becoming increasingly popular, especially in China. ___________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Posted by Li Jin
【答案】
With fewer and fewer people using cash, Non-cash payments are becoming increasingly popular, especially in China.
Non-cash payment has many advantages. First of all, we can pay for whatever we buy with only a smart phone. Second, it reduces the risk of losing money, and it can prevent receiving counterfeit money. And the best part is that we don’t need to worry about not having change anymore when taking a bus.
However, non-cash payment also has many disadvantages. The money can’t arrive in time. It is not convenient for some elderly people who do not use mobile phones to use it. In addition, it cannot protect people’s privacy.
As for me, I prefer non-cash payment. I think it is an indispensable part of modern life.
Posted by Li Jin
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生在网上论坛里跟帖讨论非现金支付好处和弊端并表达自己的看法。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
现金：cash→ready money
减少、降低：reduce→lower
不可或缺的：indispensable→essential
保护：defend→protect
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The money can’t arrive in time.
拓展句：The money can’t arrive in time, which makes some people uneasy.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】First of all, we can pay for whatever we buy with only a smart phone. (运用了whatever引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】It is not convenient for some elderly people who do not use mobile phones to use it.(运用了who引导限制性定语从句)
D
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.目前中国的移动支付(mobile payment)非常盛行，越来越多的年轻人选择使用移动支付，有的人认为移动支付给人们带来了便利，而有些人认为这种方式存在安全隐患。请你谈谈对这一现象的看法。内容包括:
1. 简要描述你或你身边的人在日常生活中使用移动支付的现象。
2. 通过与传统方式的比较，谈谈移动支付给人们带来的利与弊。
(参考词汇:微信Wechat;支付宝: Alipay; 二维码QR code)
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
With the development of China’s economy, Wechat and Aipay are very popular with everyone in the street. More and more people are choosing to pay the bill by using mobile payment, which is taking the place of paper currency. Some thinks that it actually makes life convenient, others believe that it's a security risk.
Compared with traditional payment, mobile payment has its advantages and disadvantages, I think the advantages are as follows. Firstly, it is convenient for everyone to buy what you want. Secondly, using mobile payment can avoid receiving fake money and being received fake money. Thirdly, If using the mobile payment, everyone can go shopping without any paper currency to prevent the money being stolen.
There is no denying that mobile payment has its disadvantages. It will take more risks protecting your private possessions. For example, you might be monitored while paying for what you have bought so that your account could be stolen.
The mobile payment is under construction now, people should treat it in an objective attitude.
【分析】
这是一篇议论类的作文写作。
【详解】
第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一,1，简要描述你或你身边的人在日常生活中使用移动支付的现象有的人认为移动支付给人们带来了便利，而有些人认为这种方式存在安全隐患。2，通过与传统方式的比较，谈谈移动支付给人们带来的利与弊。3，总结自己的观点。第二，人称以第三人称为主，兼用为第一人称和第二人称。第三，时态为一般现在时。
第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，简要描述身边的人在日常生活中使用移动支付的现象有的人认为移动支付给人们带来了便利，而有些人认为这种方式存在安全隐患。第二段，移动支付给人们带来的利。第三段，移动支付给人们带来的弊。第四段，总结自己的观点。
第三步：确定关键词汇和短语: be popular with ,choose to do sth, by doing sth, taking the place of, paper currency, convenient, security risk, avoid doing sth, prevent sth from being done ,risk doing sth , private possessions, monitor, account, under construction. Compared with traditional payment, mobile payment has its advantages and disadvantages. it is convenient for everyone to buy what you want.
第四步：确定较为高级的句子：which引导的非限制性定语从句 More and more people are choosing to pay the bill by using mobile payment, which is taking the place of paper currency. If引导的条件状语从句If using the mobile payment, everyone can go shopping without any paper currency to prevent the money being stolen. that为连接词的同位语从句There is no denying that mobile payment has its disadvantages. while引导的时间状语从句，what引导的宾语从句和so that引导的结果状语从句you might be monitored while paying for what you have bought so that your account could be stolen.
第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接：Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly, for example.
第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。
【点睛】
文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式：如which引导的非限制性定语从句 More and more people are choosing to pay the bill by using mobile payment, which is taking the place of paper currency. If引导的条件状语从句If using the mobile payment, everyone can go shopping without any paper currency to prevent the money being stolen. that为连接词的同位语从句There is no denying that mobile payment has its disadvantages. while引导的时间状语从句，what引导的宾语从句和so that引导的结果状语从句you might be monitored while paying for what you have bought so that your account could be stolen.
高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。
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热点24 移动支付改变消费方式 让生活更方便
备考2023年中考英语写作压轴预测猜题
【压轴预测】
移动支付是指使用普通或智能手机完成支付或者确认支付，而不是用现金、银行卡或者支票支付。买家可以使用移动手机购买一系列的服务、数字产品或者商品等。
移动支付是互联网时代一种新型的支付方式，其以移动终端为中心，通过移动终端对所购买的产品进行结算支付，移动支付的主要表现形式为手机支付。
对于消费者来说，我们可以在实体店直接扫描二维码，轻松付款。而无需携带现金，无需找零，无需刷卡签字，很大程度上节约我们的时间，并且可以避免假币问题带来的麻烦。加之这些第三方支付平台经常会在网上做一些满减、抢红包的活动，不仅给予我们优惠，更是给我们带来了很多乐趣；另外，通过移动支付的快捷转账，我们可以轻松地实现生活缴费、车票购买、手机充值等，真正做到足不出户也能办理各种业务；除此之外，第三方支付机构还具有财富管理、教育公益、购物娱乐，提供第三方服务等功能，来满足我们不同层次的需求，极大地丰富了我们的生活。
【典型例题】
某英文报正在举行以“如何看待手机支付”为题的征文活动。请写一篇短文进行投稿，要点如下：
1.简单快捷；
2.网购和商店购物都能使用；
3.个人信息不太安全；
……
注意：
①请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥；
②文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名；
③词数80~100，短文的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
It has been more and more popular to pay with mobile phones. Different people have different opinions about it. I’d like to share my ideas here.________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
All in all, I hope mobile phone payment can be used more properly.
【压轴猜题】
A
近年来，越来越多的人在超市、影院、餐馆等地方消费时，经常使用手机扫码支付。移动支付（mobile payment）深受人们喜爱。假如你是李华，学校即将开展以“Mobile Payment Changes Our Life”为题的征文活动，请根据下列表格中的提示，介绍一下移动支付并呼吁人们理性消费。
移动支付 日益流行；改变生活
扫码支付；方便快捷（举至少1个生活实例）
消费观念 理智消费；购前三思学会节约；按需购买
要求：
1.语言表达准确，短文连贯、通顺；
2.短文应包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥，不要逐句翻译；
3.词数80左右。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：扫码scan QR codes支付 pay三思 think twice理智 wisely▲
More recently, mobile payment is liked by many people.___________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
B
假如你是李华，你的美国笔友 Jenny 正在做一份关于中国移动支付（mobile payment ）的问卷调查 （survey） ，你是她的重点采访对象． 内容包括：
1. 你或你身边的人在日常生活中使用移动支付的情况；
2. 移动支付带来的好处；
3. 你的看法。
参考词汇：微信：Wechat 支付宝：Alipay 二维码：QR code
注意：1. 词数 100 左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jenny，
How is your survey on mobile payment going？_________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
Yours faithfully，
Li Hua
C
假定你是李津，你在某英文网上论坛看到大家在讨论人们使用非现金支付越来越普遍的现象，你打算在论坛里跟帖讨论，内容包括：
（1）非现金支付的好处；
（2）非现金支付的弊端；
（3）你的观点。
注意：
（1）字数100左右；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）开头与结尾已给出，不计入字数。
With fewer and fewer people using cash, Non-cash payments are becoming increasingly popular, especially in China. ___________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Posted by Li Jin
D
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.目前中国的移动支付(mobile payment)非常盛行，越来越多的年轻人选择使用移动支付，有的人认为移动支付给人们带来了便利，而有些人认为这种方式存在安全隐患。请你谈谈对这一现象的看法。内容包括:
1. 简要描述你或你身边的人在日常生活中使用移动支付的现象。
2. 通过与传统方式的比较，谈谈移动支付给人们带来的利与弊。
(参考词汇:微信Wechat;支付宝: Alipay; 二维码QR code)
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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