中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
Unit8 Is there a post office near here Name
Writing made by Nancy
Ⅰ. Teaching procedures
Step1 Pre-writing
1.Students read the passages of 2b.
Students finish 3a.
Step2 While-writing
Students write the composition about their neighborhood for eight minutes.
Step3 Post-writing
1.Students check their own compositions. Then check with their partner.
2.Students work in groups to correct the mistakes and appreciate their group members’ compositions.
3.Students show their classmates’ compositions and evaluate them.
4.The teacher shows the sample composition and guide the students to analyse it.
5.Students finish their second draft according to the suggestions.
Ⅱ.Analyse the topic
Draw a map of your neighborhood and write about it. These questions may help you.请画一张你的社区地图，
介绍你所居住的社区。
参考问题：
1.Where do you live 2.What is your favorite place in your neighborhood Why
3.How do you get there from your home 写作要求：70字左右，可适当发挥。
Person(人称)： Tense（时态）：
Style（形式）： Details（细节）：
Structure（结构）：
Ⅲ. Finish the first draft
Ⅳ. Finish the second draft(共18张PPT)
Writing
Section B (3a—3c)
Unit 8 Is there a post office near here
Introduce the neighborhood
Pre-writing
I live in a ... neighborhood. There is a...in my neighborhood.
My favorite place is... because...
To get there,...
My house is across from a ______
on Long Street.I usually go
shopping at a ______ near my
house. It is between a ______
and the ________. On weekends, I like to play in
the ______. To get there, I go along Long Street
and turn left on North Street. It is on the right,
next to a ________.
Look at the map of Cindy’s
neighborhood and fill in the blanks.
3a
My house is across from a _________ on Long Street. I usually go shopping at a ______________ near my house. It is between a _________ and the ___________. On weekends, I like to play in the _______. To get there, I go along Long Street and turn left on Long Street. It
is on the right, next to a
________.
library
supermarket
library
hotel
park
post office
what
where
how
why
Why do you
like that place
How do you
get there
How to introduce the neighborhood
Where do
you live
What is your
favorite place
参考问题：
1.Where do you live
2.What is your favorite place in your neighborhood Why
3.How do you get there from your home
写作要求：70字左右，可适当发挥。
Draw a map of your neighborhood and write about it.
These questions may help you.请画一张你的社区地图，
介绍你所居住的社区。
Person (人称)
Tense(时态)
The simple present tense
Details(细节)
Answer all the questions
70 words
The first person;
Style(形式)
A passage
Analyse the topic
Structure(结构)
Beginning: Lead to the topic: Give a brief introuduction about your neighborhood.
Body:
Ending: Describe how to get to your favorite place.
Describe your favorite place and tell the reasons.
Analyse the topic
While-writing
Pay attention to handwriting.
Use some conjunction words such as and, but,etc. to make your composition more fluent.
3. Answer all questions.
4. Use the simple present tense correctly.
Write a passage in 8 minutes
While-writing
Correction codes:
※ Spelling mistakes
※ Wrong expressions
○
？
※ punctuation mistakes
Post-writing
Correct Composition Marking ladders
3
1
2
3
1
1
2
3
1
Self-check
For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure, content, grammar & language Peer check Teacher’s assessment
Structure
and
content I write the whole passage into paragraphs. (1 point)
Para : I show greetings. (1 point)
Para : I introduce myself or my friend.
(6 points)
Para : I show thanks in the end. (1 point)
My writing is tidy and clear. (2 points)
Grammar and language My expressions are correct (5 points)
There are spelling mistakes (3 points)
I have checked my word count is around .1 point)
Total Score
What can I do to improve my writing next time
2
1
1
15
1
2
60
Sharing Time
Work in groups, correct the mistakes and appreciate(欣赏) your group members’ compositions. Then show it to the class.
Focus on: 1. structure(结构)
2. handwriting(书写)
3. points(要点)
4. grammar(语法)
5. punctuation（标点）
6.language(语言)
Post-writing
I live in a quiet neighborhood. There is a bank,a bookstore and a store near my home.
My favorite place in my neighborhood is the bookstore .There are many interesting books in the bookstore, and I really enjoy reading there.
To get there, I have to go along the Center Street, then turn left at the first crossing. Then walk along New Road and turn right at the turning. And then you can see the bookstore on the left.
Sample
Post-writing
Think about how to improve your writing in the second draft.
Finish the second draft.中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
Marking ladders
For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure, content, grammar & language Self-check Peer check Teacher’s assessment
Structure and content I have organized my writing into paragraphs. (1 point)
Para :My opening paragraph have introduced where I live and given a brief description about my neighborhood (1 point)
Para : I have introduced my favorite place in my neighborhood and tell the reasons. (2 points)
Para :I have written how to get to my favorite place in my neighborhood(3 points)
My layout is tidy and clear. (1 point)
Grammar and language I have used “There be” correctly.For example, there is a bookstore and many supermarkets in my neighborhood. There are many supermarkets and a bookstore in my neighborhood. (2 points)
I have used the structures of showing sb the way correctly. For example, go along/walk along the street. Turn left/right at the ... crossing.It's next to/....You can find it on your left/right. (2points)
I have checked the spelling of the uncertain words by using a dictionary or asking my teacher. (1 point.)
I have checked my punctuation . For example. I used full stops at the end of each complete sentence. (1 point)
I have checked my word count is around . (1 point)
Total Score
