Unit10 I'd like some noodles.
Name
Writing made by Nancy
Ⅰ. Teaching procedures
Step1 Pre-writing
1.Free Talk
Students finish 3a.
Step2 While-writing
Students write the composition about their restaurants for eight minutes.
Step3 Post-writing
1.Students check their own compositions. Then check with their partner.
2.Students work in groups to correct the mistakes and appreciate their group members’ compositions.
3.Students show their classmates’ compositions and evaluate them.
4.The teacher shows the sample composition and guide the students to analyse it.
5.Students finish their second draft according to the suggestions.
Ⅱ.Analyse the topic
假如你想开一家店，比如：面馆、饺子馆、甜品店、饮料店或薄饼店等，请为你的店写一篇广告，先完成以下表格。词数不少于70。
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Specials :
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Kinds
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Price:
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Phone number:
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Address:
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)Name: .
Age: .
Nationality（国籍）： .
Appearance(外貌）： .
Personality: .
Likes: .
Favorite star: .
Person(人称)： Tense（时态）：
Style（形式）： Details（细节）：
Structure（结构）：
Ⅲ. Finish the first draft
Ⅳ. Finish the second draftMarking ladders
For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure, content, grammar & language Self-check Peer check Teacher’s assessment
Structure and content I have organized my writing into paragraphs. (1 point)
Para : I have introduced the name of the restaurant (1 point)
Para : : I have introduced the information about the restaurant such as kinds, sizes , price, phone number and address. (4 points)
Para :I have showed the welcome(1 point)
My layout is tidy and clear. (1 point)
Grammar and language I have used the simple present tense correctly.For example, welcome to… would you like… We have…for… Our phone number is… Our address is… (2 points)
I have used some conjunction words to make my composition more fluently such as and, because etc.(2points)
I have checked the spelling of the uncertain words by using a dictionary or asking my teacher. (1 point.)
I have checked my punctuation . For example. I used full stops at the end of each complete sentence. (1 point)
I have checked my word count is around . (1 point)
Total Score(共27张PPT)
Unit 10
Section B
Writing
Where would you like to eat
Hot pot house
Noodle house
Steak house
Pizza Hut
Dumpling house
Fill in the blanks in the ad with the words in the box.
3a
order bowl kinds strawberry specials
The Ice-cream and Pancake House
Would you like to eat ice-cream or pancakes
At our restaurant, we have some great _______.We have different _____ of fruit ice-cream, like ___________, banana or orange. Would you like a big _____ for four yuan or a small one for just two yuan You can also ______ our delicious pancakes. They’re only five yuan.
kinds
strawberry
bowl
specials
order
An ad
The Ice-cream and Pancake House
Would you like to eat ice-cream or pancakes
At our restaurant, we have some great _______.We have different _____ of fruit
ice-cream, like ___________, banana or orange. Would you like a big _____ for four yuan or a small one for just two yuan
You can also ______ our delicious pancakes. They’re only five yuan.
kinds
strawberry
bowl
specials
order
Title
foods
kinds
kinds
kinds
price
price
size
size
How can we write an ad
Title
Beginning
Body
Ending
Would you like some… We have some specials at our restaurant.
Please come to…
kinds
sizes
price
There are…/We have...
small/medium/large
We have…for…
low, at a good price
Phone number
Our phone number is…/You can call us at…
address
Our address is… You can…
Welcome to…
假如你想开一家店，比如：面馆、饺子馆、甜品店、饮料店或薄饼店等，请为你的店写一篇广告，先完成以下表格。词数不少于70。
Name: .
Specials : .
Kinds： .
Sizes： .
Price: .
Phone number: .
Address: .
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请根据下面的汉语提示，为店主写一篇小广告，词数不少于70。
在中心街开了一家叫Happy Dessert的甜点屋，现新上三种很好的特色甜点：①苹果香蕉冰淇淋②桔子脆梨冰淇淋③西瓜草莓冰淇淋。有大杯、中杯、小杯三种。店内还有果汁、可乐和绿茶。
Person (人称)
Tense(时态)
The simple present tense
Details(细节)
Write down all information
70 words
The first person;
Style(形式)
An ad
Analyse the topic
Structure
(结构)
Beginning: Lead to the topic:
Name the restaurant
and attract customers.
Body:
Ending: Show welcome
Introduce the information about the restaurant such as kinds, sizes , price, phone number and
address
Analyse the topic
While-writing
Pay attention to handwriting.
Use some conjunction words such as and, because etc. to make your composition more fluent.
3. Write down all information.
4. Use the simple present tense correctly.
Write an ad in 8 minutes
While-writing
Correction codes:
※ Spelling mistakes
※ Wrong expressions
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※ punctuation mistakes
Post-writing
Correct Composition Marking ladders
3
1
2
3
1
1
4
1
1
Self-check
For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure, content, grammar & language Peer check Teacher’s assessment
Structure
and
content I write the whole passage into paragraphs. (1 point)
Para : I show greetings. (1 point)
Para : I introduce myself or my friend.
(6 points)
Para : I show thanks in the end. (1 point)
My writing is tidy and clear. (2 points)
Grammar and language My expressions are correct (5 points)
There are spelling mistakes (3 points)
I have checked my word count is around .1 point)
Total Score
What can I do to improve my writing next time
2
1
1
15
1
2
60
70
Sharing Time
Work in groups, correct the mistakes
Think about how to improve your writing in the second draft.
Finish the second draft.
House of Delicious Dumplings
Would you like some dumplings Please come to House of Delicious Dumplings.
There are three new specials in our restaurant. We have beef dumplings with carrots, mutton dumplings with tomatoes and chicken and cabbage dumplings. Would you like a small bowl of dumplings They are only 8 yuan.We have a medium bowl for ten yuan and a large bowl for 12 yuan. Our phone number is 028-3971586. Our address is on Center Street, next to the library. You can find it easily.
Welcome to House of Delicious Dumplings
Sample
Happy Dessert
Welcome to Happy Dessert! There are three new specials in our restaurant.
We have three great new specials ,apple and banana ice- cream, orange and pear ice-cream and watermelon and strawberry ice-cream. Would you like a small cup of ice-cream for only ten yuan We have a large cup of ice-cream for only 15 yuan. We also have juice, coke and green tea. Our phone number is 028-3971586. Our address is on Center Street, next to the library. You can find it easily.
Welcome to Happy Dessert!
Sample
Sharing Time
Work in groups, appreciate(欣赏) your group members’ compositions. Then show it to the class.
Focus on: 1. structure(结构)
2. handwriting(书写)
3. points(要点)
4. grammar(语法)
5. punctuation（标点）
6.language(语言)
Post-writing
