中考 一轮复习 中考作文点拨
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课件26张PPT。一，图表作文的写作
一、图表作文就是将表格、数字或图像等所包含的信息，转换成连贯的文字。写这类作文要注意：
1.要认真解读图表，切勿疏漏重要信息，虽不必面面俱到，但重要数据必须提到。
2.结论性的表达要从图表信息分析或数据归纳而来，切忌主观判断，更不能主观臆造。
二、范文欣赏。（2013，连云港）
每个人都拥有梦想，而实现梦想需要行动。请你根据所给图片写一篇题为“Take Action to Realize Our Dreams”的英语短文。
你的短文应包含以下内容：
（1）描述图片内容，如情景、人物（Frank）、动作等；并简要表达你的观点；
（2）谈谈你的梦想及如何实现。
注意：
（1）词数90左右，短文首段已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）文中不得提及考生所在学校及自己的姓名。
Take Action to Realize Our Dreams
All of us have dreams, but how can we realize our dreams?
From the pictures, we know that Frank dreamed of becoming a doctor when he was 15 years old.However,45 years later he still dreams of being a doctor lying in the bed. It is clear that he lives in the dream without any action. This is the reason why he has failed to realize his dream.
I also have a dream. I want to work as an engineer when I grow up. I will study hard every day and improve my abilities to get ready for my future job, so that I can make my dream come true.二，说明文的写作说明文的写作
一、说明文是用说明的表达方式来解说事物，阐明事理。说明文的种类很多，主要有事物说明文和事理说明文。要写好说明文，应该注意以下几点：
1.抓住事物特点即本质特征，从而使读者获得全面、深刻的认识。
2.安排说明顺序。说明文常用的结构安排有下列三种：时间顺序；空间顺序；逻辑顺序。有时说明复杂的事物，常常将几种说明顺序综合运用。 3.讲究说明方法。写好事物说明文，不仅要抓住特征，注意条理，而且要巧妙运用说明方法，像下定义、举例子、作比较、分类别、列数字、画图表、打比方等，这样类别清楚，层次分明，增强说明的生动性、形象性，使被说明事物的特征变得鲜明突出，可以把复杂的事物说得清楚、直观。
4.说明语言要准确、简明、通俗、生动。因为说明文的写作目的，是对事物作有条理的、客观的、科学的介绍和解释。二、范文欣赏。（2013，广州）
新学期开始，你就读的国际学校的学生社团又开始招募了。假设你是社团负责人，请根据以下内容和提示要求写一篇英语短文，为新同学介绍下列社团的情况（包括名称、活动内容及其目的）。
注意：（1）词数80左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；（2）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
【思路点拨】
本篇书面表达要求考生写一篇英语短文，介绍社团的情况，包括名称、活动内容及其目的。根据图示可以列出以下要点：Cool Players: exercise/do sports for an hour every day; watch sports matches; strengthen your body ；Smart Readers: read good books; write reading notes; improve your writing and widen your horizons； Excellent Cooks: design healthy menu; cook dishes; lead/have a healthy life
注意：第四幅图中写有“请你补充”。在介绍完所给的前三个社团后，考生可以结合生活实际，自己假想“建立”一个社团，同时介绍它的名称、活动内容及其目的。Clubs Are Calling
The new term is coming. For all our new students, I would like to introduce some of our clubs. If you want to keep fit, you can join the “Cool Players”. You need to do sports for an hour every day and watch some matches. In “Smart Readers”, you can read many good books, then write a report. It can help you get more useful knowledge. In “Excellent Cooks”, you are asked to make up some healthy menus and learn how to cook so that you can live a healthy life. Besides all these clubs, I recommend another exciting club, the “Camera Club”. In this club, you can travel around and take beautiful photos, and make new friends.三，烦恼与微笑
（一）（2013，荆门）
假如你是刘强，你在学校学生会里看到一项关于学生遇到的种种“烦恼”的调查。请你阅读以下20位学生填写的调查表，然后从中选择你认为最大的烦恼，并根据自己的实际经验或体会给出建议。
要求：1．根据提示内容，选出一种烦恼，并给出建议。
2．逻辑清楚，语句通顺，行文流畅，自由发挥，观点不限,无需标题。
3．文中不能以任何形式出现真实人名、校名和县（市）区名及其他相关信息。
4.词数：100左右。 I am Liu Qiang. I think it’s not strange to have worries. Some students say they have become fat and that it really makes them feel bad about themselves．I think this is one of the biggest worries for us．But I think we can do something about it．
First, you could eat less. The body needs food for energy, but you‘ll become fat if you eat more than your body needs. If you eat less, the body can burn more calories than you eat. Second, do more exercise. Doing exercise can also help the body burn the calories and make you thinner. There are many ways to do exercise. For example, you could go to school on foot or by bike. Don’t worry too much．
I think you will become fit soon.（二）（2010，台州）
许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力，为了更好地发现及解决同学们中存在的心理压力问题，你们班级特意开展了一次以“Less Pressure, Better Life”为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你准备发言稿，谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法，与同学们分享。内容包括：
·同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么；
·我的压力是什么；
·我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。
注意：文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
词数:80—100,短文的开头已给出（不计入总词数）。Less Pressure, Better Life
Hello, boys and girls, Pressure is a serious problem in today‘s world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can’t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams.
I‘m always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of after-school classes at weekends.
Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last.
So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem. That’s all. Thank you!四，命题作文的写作命题作文的写作
一、命题作文是依据所给题目,确定中心,选择材料,写出符合题意、内容，表达具体、充分的文章。写命题作文通常要注意以下几点：
1.审准题目。文章的中心要对题目进行分析来确定,一定要弄清主题的内涵,确立与文章联系的主题思想,表达不能游离于主题,否则即使内容再精彩,也是“跑题”作文,得分将会大打折扣,因此,写命题作文最重要的是先审清题目,确立要表达的中心。
2.构思结构。就是开放思路,启动联想,构想表达形式,勾勒出文章的结构层次,依次写出引言段、主题句、发展段和结尾句,努力使之新颖、别致。 3.选择材料。这一点很重要,一定要围绕想表达的中心去选择组织材料,所选的材料必须典型精要。
4.表达。就是用最确切明了的语言贯穿材料,表达自己的思想,力争用符合英语语法规则、英语表达习惯，最顺畅自然的词、句、段去表达中心思想,与表达中心无关的话即使再生动形象也不要去写。就写作的表现形式来看,命题作文分为三种形式:1、记叙文类;2、说明文类; 3、议论文类。二、范文欣赏。（2013，黄冈）
俗话说：“予人玫瑰，手留余香”。在我们的日常生活中，我们会遇到各种困难，因此，我们会需要他人的帮助；但同时，我们也要学会帮助他人。其实，帮助他人就是在帮助自己。请你结合身边的事例，以“帮助”为话题，用英语写一篇短文。
注意： ①无需写标题，开头已经给出，但不计入总词数；
②文中要结合你帮助别人或别人帮助你的一件事例；
③文中不得透露任何个人和学校的真实信息；
④词数为80 左右。 As the saying goes, roses given, fragrance in hand. In our daily life, we will meet with a lot of trouble. So it is necessary for us to help those who are in trouble. I still remember I helped one of my classmates with his English when we were in the first term of Junior Eight. Li Hua, one of my classmates, was not good at English while I did well. One day, he asked me to help him. So from then on, whenever he had problems, he would ask me, and I was patient to explain them to him. Slowly, his English improved with my help. At the same time, I found my English improved too.
Actually, helping others is helping ourselves.五，环境保护
（一）（2013，随州）
随着全球环境的恶化，越来越多的人选择过低碳生活。请写一篇英语短文，倡议你的同学们加入低碳一族。要点如下：
1.节约用水、用电、用纸；
2.去超市自备购物袋；
3.不要购买不必要的衣服；
4.不要购买一次性的杯子和碗筷；
5.步行或骑自行车上学。
注意：1.词数80词左右。（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。）2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。【范文欣赏】
With the global warming getting worse, more people choose to live a low-carbon life for the purpose of reducing greenhouse gases. We‘d better save much water and paper and electricity. We should use less carbon and oil. It’s important to turn off the lights and computers when we leave room. We should take our own bags in shopping instead of using plastic bags from supermarket. We can buy fewer clothes which are not so necessary. We shouldn‘t buy or use one-off cups or chopsticks or bowls. It’s good for us to walk or take bikes to school instead of taking cars. We can also plant more trees to keep the air around us clean.
Let‘s take actions and be a low-carbon people!（二）（2011，常州）
假如上周一你班举行了“爱护水、节约水”的主题活动，请你根据以下要点为你校校报写一篇活动报道。
注意：1．词数不少于90。文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。2．要点完整、层次清晰、语法正确、上下文连贯。3．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。【范文欣赏】
Last Monday we held an activity about saving and protecting water.
Mr. Wang was invited to give us a talk. After his speech, we had a discussion about how to save and protect water.
Now we know that some of the rivers are polluted in our country and that we are short of water although there are some rivers and lakes in our city. As a result, we need to protect and save water. For example, we shouldn’t leave water running after using it. Besides, we mustn’t throw rubbish into the rivers.
After taking part in the activity, we had a better understanding of the importance of protecting the environment and saving water.六，开放式作文
一、开放式作文一般在写作提示语中只给出一段素材（文字、图画、表格提示等形式）或主题，让考生在此基础上充分发挥想象力，自由创作。这种写作给考生提供了较大的个性展示空间，因此答案不唯一。写开放性作文的步骤一般是：
1.认真审题，把握所有信息。经过审题，考生需要明白在写作时应写的几个要点。
2.确定主题，罗列提纲。列提纲的时候，要认真回顾题目要求，把握住全部要点，理清脉络。 3.组织语言，展开写作。写作时要考虑用哪些词语、句型，用哪些时态、语态，使用哪些过渡词和过渡句等。
4.认真检查，查漏补缺。要检查语法结构是否正确，标点拼写是否有误，词数是否符合要求等。
二、范文欣赏。（2010，金华）
暑假是每个中学生期盼的一段时光，请你围绕如何过一个轻松、愉快、有意义的暑假，写一篇80词左右的英语短文。注意：
1.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名；
2.下列词汇可供参考：summer holiday, travel, do sports, do some reading, help...with housework, take part in...
3.题目自拟。My Dream Summer Holiday
The summer holiday is coming. After so much work at school, how I want to relax myself!
My first choice is to watch TV and do more sports. Then I will help my parents with some housework. After all, they have done so much for me. Besides, visiting the World Expo is my biggest wish. At the same time, I will continue to study, especially to improve my English. I also want to take part in some interesting activities, which can enrich my experience.
That is my dream summer holiday. I‘m sure my holiday will be relaxing, happy and meaningful!
一、图表作文就是将表格、数字或图像等所包含的信息，转换成连贯的文字。写这类作文要注意：
1.要认真解读图表，切勿疏漏重要信息，虽不必面面俱到，但重要数据必须提到。
2.结论性的表达要从图表信息分析或数据归纳而来，切忌主观判断，更不能主观臆造。
二、范文欣赏。（2013，连云港）
每个人都拥有梦想，而实现梦想需要行动。请你根据所给图片写一篇题为“Take Action to Realize Our Dreams”的英语短文。
你的短文应包含以下内容：
（1）描述图片内容，如情景、人物（Frank）、动作等；并简要表达你的观点；
（2）谈谈你的梦想及如何实现。
注意：
（1）词数90左右，短文首段已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）文中不得提及考生所在学校及自己的姓名。
Take Action to Realize Our Dreams
All of us have dreams, but how can we realize our dreams?
From the pictures, we know that Frank dreamed of becoming a doctor when he was 15 years old.However,45 years later he still dreams of being a doctor lying in the bed. It is clear that he lives in the dream without any action. This is the reason why he has failed to realize his dream.
I also have a dream. I want to work as an engineer when I grow up. I will study hard every day and improve my abilities to get ready for my future job, so that I can make my dream come true.二，说明文的写作说明文的写作
一、说明文是用说明的表达方式来解说事物，阐明事理。说明文的种类很多，主要有事物说明文和事理说明文。要写好说明文，应该注意以下几点：
1.抓住事物特点即本质特征，从而使读者获得全面、深刻的认识。
2.安排说明顺序。说明文常用的结构安排有下列三种：时间顺序；空间顺序；逻辑顺序。有时说明复杂的事物，常常将几种说明顺序综合运用。 3.讲究说明方法。写好事物说明文，不仅要抓住特征，注意条理，而且要巧妙运用说明方法，像下定义、举例子、作比较、分类别、列数字、画图表、打比方等，这样类别清楚，层次分明，增强说明的生动性、形象性，使被说明事物的特征变得鲜明突出，可以把复杂的事物说得清楚、直观。
4.说明语言要准确、简明、通俗、生动。因为说明文的写作目的，是对事物作有条理的、客观的、科学的介绍和解释。二、范文欣赏。（2013，广州）
新学期开始，你就读的国际学校的学生社团又开始招募了。假设你是社团负责人，请根据以下内容和提示要求写一篇英语短文，为新同学介绍下列社团的情况（包括名称、活动内容及其目的）。
注意：（1）词数80左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；（2）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
【思路点拨】
本篇书面表达要求考生写一篇英语短文，介绍社团的情况，包括名称、活动内容及其目的。根据图示可以列出以下要点：Cool Players: exercise/do sports for an hour every day; watch sports matches; strengthen your body ；Smart Readers: read good books; write reading notes; improve your writing and widen your horizons； Excellent Cooks: design healthy menu; cook dishes; lead/have a healthy life
注意：第四幅图中写有“请你补充”。在介绍完所给的前三个社团后，考生可以结合生活实际，自己假想“建立”一个社团，同时介绍它的名称、活动内容及其目的。Clubs Are Calling
The new term is coming. For all our new students, I would like to introduce some of our clubs. If you want to keep fit, you can join the “Cool Players”. You need to do sports for an hour every day and watch some matches. In “Smart Readers”, you can read many good books, then write a report. It can help you get more useful knowledge. In “Excellent Cooks”, you are asked to make up some healthy menus and learn how to cook so that you can live a healthy life. Besides all these clubs, I recommend another exciting club, the “Camera Club”. In this club, you can travel around and take beautiful photos, and make new friends.三，烦恼与微笑
（一）（2013，荆门）
假如你是刘强，你在学校学生会里看到一项关于学生遇到的种种“烦恼”的调查。请你阅读以下20位学生填写的调查表，然后从中选择你认为最大的烦恼，并根据自己的实际经验或体会给出建议。
要求：1．根据提示内容，选出一种烦恼，并给出建议。
2．逻辑清楚，语句通顺，行文流畅，自由发挥，观点不限,无需标题。
3．文中不能以任何形式出现真实人名、校名和县（市）区名及其他相关信息。
4.词数：100左右。 I am Liu Qiang. I think it’s not strange to have worries. Some students say they have become fat and that it really makes them feel bad about themselves．I think this is one of the biggest worries for us．But I think we can do something about it．
First, you could eat less. The body needs food for energy, but you‘ll become fat if you eat more than your body needs. If you eat less, the body can burn more calories than you eat. Second, do more exercise. Doing exercise can also help the body burn the calories and make you thinner. There are many ways to do exercise. For example, you could go to school on foot or by bike. Don’t worry too much．
I think you will become fit soon.（二）（2010，台州）
许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力，为了更好地发现及解决同学们中存在的心理压力问题，你们班级特意开展了一次以“Less Pressure, Better Life”为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你准备发言稿，谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法，与同学们分享。内容包括：
·同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么；
·我的压力是什么；
·我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。
注意：文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
词数:80—100,短文的开头已给出（不计入总词数）。Less Pressure, Better Life
Hello, boys and girls, Pressure is a serious problem in today‘s world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can’t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams.
I‘m always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of after-school classes at weekends.
Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last.
So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem. That’s all. Thank you!四，命题作文的写作命题作文的写作
一、命题作文是依据所给题目,确定中心,选择材料,写出符合题意、内容，表达具体、充分的文章。写命题作文通常要注意以下几点：
1.审准题目。文章的中心要对题目进行分析来确定,一定要弄清主题的内涵,确立与文章联系的主题思想,表达不能游离于主题,否则即使内容再精彩,也是“跑题”作文,得分将会大打折扣,因此,写命题作文最重要的是先审清题目,确立要表达的中心。
2.构思结构。就是开放思路,启动联想,构想表达形式,勾勒出文章的结构层次,依次写出引言段、主题句、发展段和结尾句,努力使之新颖、别致。 3.选择材料。这一点很重要,一定要围绕想表达的中心去选择组织材料,所选的材料必须典型精要。
4.表达。就是用最确切明了的语言贯穿材料,表达自己的思想,力争用符合英语语法规则、英语表达习惯，最顺畅自然的词、句、段去表达中心思想,与表达中心无关的话即使再生动形象也不要去写。就写作的表现形式来看,命题作文分为三种形式:1、记叙文类;2、说明文类; 3、议论文类。二、范文欣赏。（2013，黄冈）
俗话说：“予人玫瑰，手留余香”。在我们的日常生活中，我们会遇到各种困难，因此，我们会需要他人的帮助；但同时，我们也要学会帮助他人。其实，帮助他人就是在帮助自己。请你结合身边的事例，以“帮助”为话题，用英语写一篇短文。
注意： ①无需写标题，开头已经给出，但不计入总词数；
②文中要结合你帮助别人或别人帮助你的一件事例；
③文中不得透露任何个人和学校的真实信息；
④词数为80 左右。 As the saying goes, roses given, fragrance in hand. In our daily life, we will meet with a lot of trouble. So it is necessary for us to help those who are in trouble. I still remember I helped one of my classmates with his English when we were in the first term of Junior Eight. Li Hua, one of my classmates, was not good at English while I did well. One day, he asked me to help him. So from then on, whenever he had problems, he would ask me, and I was patient to explain them to him. Slowly, his English improved with my help. At the same time, I found my English improved too.
Actually, helping others is helping ourselves.五，环境保护
（一）（2013，随州）
随着全球环境的恶化，越来越多的人选择过低碳生活。请写一篇英语短文，倡议你的同学们加入低碳一族。要点如下：
1.节约用水、用电、用纸；
2.去超市自备购物袋；
3.不要购买不必要的衣服；
4.不要购买一次性的杯子和碗筷；
5.步行或骑自行车上学。
注意：1.词数80词左右。（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。）2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。【范文欣赏】
With the global warming getting worse, more people choose to live a low-carbon life for the purpose of reducing greenhouse gases. We‘d better save much water and paper and electricity. We should use less carbon and oil. It’s important to turn off the lights and computers when we leave room. We should take our own bags in shopping instead of using plastic bags from supermarket. We can buy fewer clothes which are not so necessary. We shouldn‘t buy or use one-off cups or chopsticks or bowls. It’s good for us to walk or take bikes to school instead of taking cars. We can also plant more trees to keep the air around us clean.
Let‘s take actions and be a low-carbon people!（二）（2011，常州）
假如上周一你班举行了“爱护水、节约水”的主题活动，请你根据以下要点为你校校报写一篇活动报道。
注意：1．词数不少于90。文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。2．要点完整、层次清晰、语法正确、上下文连贯。3．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。【范文欣赏】
Last Monday we held an activity about saving and protecting water.
Mr. Wang was invited to give us a talk. After his speech, we had a discussion about how to save and protect water.
Now we know that some of the rivers are polluted in our country and that we are short of water although there are some rivers and lakes in our city. As a result, we need to protect and save water. For example, we shouldn’t leave water running after using it. Besides, we mustn’t throw rubbish into the rivers.
After taking part in the activity, we had a better understanding of the importance of protecting the environment and saving water.六，开放式作文
一、开放式作文一般在写作提示语中只给出一段素材（文字、图画、表格提示等形式）或主题，让考生在此基础上充分发挥想象力，自由创作。这种写作给考生提供了较大的个性展示空间，因此答案不唯一。写开放性作文的步骤一般是：
1.认真审题，把握所有信息。经过审题，考生需要明白在写作时应写的几个要点。
2.确定主题，罗列提纲。列提纲的时候，要认真回顾题目要求，把握住全部要点，理清脉络。 3.组织语言，展开写作。写作时要考虑用哪些词语、句型，用哪些时态、语态，使用哪些过渡词和过渡句等。
4.认真检查，查漏补缺。要检查语法结构是否正确，标点拼写是否有误，词数是否符合要求等。
二、范文欣赏。（2010，金华）
暑假是每个中学生期盼的一段时光，请你围绕如何过一个轻松、愉快、有意义的暑假，写一篇80词左右的英语短文。注意：
1.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名；
2.下列词汇可供参考：summer holiday, travel, do sports, do some reading, help...with housework, take part in...
3.题目自拟。My Dream Summer Holiday
The summer holiday is coming. After so much work at school, how I want to relax myself!
My first choice is to watch TV and do more sports. Then I will help my parents with some housework. After all, they have done so much for me. Besides, visiting the World Expo is my biggest wish. At the same time, I will continue to study, especially to improve my English. I also want to take part in some interesting activities, which can enrich my experience.
That is my dream summer holiday. I‘m sure my holiday will be relaxing, happy and meaningful!