2023届中考英语书面表达专题训练：意见和建议（含解析）

2023届中考英语书面表达专题训练：意见和建议（含范文）
1．眼睛是心灵的窗户，保护视力对青少年来说尤为重要。请以“How to Protect Our Eyes”为题写一篇英语短文，号召大家爱眼、护眼。
写作要点：
1.保护视力的重要性。如：好的视力可以使生活更加便利……
2.保护视力的方法。如：早睡早起，睡眠充足，多吃水果蔬菜……
3.保护视力的建议。如：少用手机，坚持每天做眼保健操……
写作要求：
1.词数不少于 70 词，短文的标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
3.写作要点齐全，可适当发挥；
4.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名或地名。
How to Protect Our Eyes
As we all know, the eye is the window to the soul.
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【答案】
How to Protect Our Eyes
As we all know, the eye is the window to the soul. They are very important to us. Good eyesight can make life easier. But do you know how to protect your eyes First, you should go to bed early and get up early to keep enough sleep. In addition, you should eat more fruits and vegetables. Second, you should use cell phone less and do eye exercises every day. Third, you should take part in some after-school activities to exercise.
Let’s protect our eyes by following the ways above.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给信息提示，写一篇作文号召大家爱眼、护眼。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍保护视力的重要性；
第二步，具体阐述保护视力的方法和建议。
[亮点词汇]
①be important to对……重要
②in addition此外
③take part参加
[高分句型]
First, you should go to bed early and get up early to keep enough sleep.（and连接两个并列结构）
2．“民以食为天”，饮食的安全和健康受到越来越多的关注和重视。请你以“Say NO to Junk Food”为题，根据以下要点写一篇英语短文。
写作要点：
1、垃圾食品尽管美味，但对健康无益，而且其过多的包装会产生更多的垃圾；
2、远离垃圾食品，还应该选择正确的生活方式，如：①三餐要有规律，少吃零食、快餐；②多吃蔬菜、水果等健康食物，以提供身体必需营养；③多参加户外活动……
写作要求：
1、词数：80左右，开头与结尾已写出，不计入总词数；
2、内容必须包括上述所有要点，可适当发挥；
3、参考词汇：过多包装 over packaging； 有规律的 regularly； 营养 nutrition
Say NO to Junk Food
Nowadays, more and more attention has been paid to food safety and health. As far as I am concerned, we should say no to junk food.
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In a word, a healthy diet with less junk food can make us stronger and stronger.
【答案】例文
Say NO to Junk Food
Nowadays, more and more attention has been paid to food safety and health. As far as I am concerned, we should say no to junk food.
There is no doubt that junk food is delicious and attractive, but it surely does harm to our body. Meanwhile, the over packaging necessarily leads to much more rubbish.
To get away from the junk food, we should focus on how to keep a healthy lifestyle. There are many tips to follow. First, eat regularly, three meals a day on time. Try as few snacks or fast food as possible. Second, take more fruits and vegetables which can provide the nutrition we need .What’s more, do more outdoor activities, as long as you are busy with something interesting, you will more probably get away from junk food.
In a word, a healthy diet with less junk food can make us stronger and stronger.
【详解】题干解读：题目要求以“Say NO to Junk Food”为题写一篇英语短文；要求包含所有的写作要点，可适当发挥。
写作指导：此作文以一般现在时态为主，采用第一人称口吻。此作文可采用四段落格式，第一段：开门见山，点明自己的观点；第二段：说明垃圾食品的特点；第三段：介绍远离垃圾食品的方法；第四段：总结全文，呼吁大家健康饮食。
3．近几年来，校园欺凌(school bullies)事件时有发生，学会自我保护是我们中学生需要具备的一种意识和能力，我们应该珍惜生命，注意自己的人身安全，做好自我保护。请以How Can We Protect Ourselves为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈在生活中我们应该怎样自我保护(self﹣protection)。
提示：
1. 不单独游泳；
2. 谨慎交友；
3. 遇到危险报警或向老师求助；
4. 饮食及交通安全等…
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【答案】例文：
How Can We Protect Ourselves
Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers. But how can we protect ourselves. Here are some suggestions.
First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially online. Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe.
Also, we should eat healthily and safely. Besides, we shouldn’t crowd each other when we go upstairs or downstairs at school. Last, summer is coming, we must remember it’s dangerous to swim alone.
In short, everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求以“How Can We Protect Ourselves”为题写一篇短文，介绍自我保护的方法。根据要点提示，文章可从饮食、交通、出行、紧急避险等方面展开。
2.写作指导：文章以第一人称、一般现在时为主，注意主谓一致问题；写作时按照要点分段叙述，可使用First、Second等增强文章的条理性。
4．我校对部分教科书进行了循环使用。上周三下午，我们班同学就“教科书是否可以循环使用”展开了激烈的辩论。请你根据表格提示，以“Should we recycle textbooks ”为题，简述这次辩论的情况并阐述自己的观点。（提示词：资源 resource；责任 responsibility）
要求：（1）不能出现真实的校名、人名等相关信息。
（2）根据中文和英文提示，可以适当发挥。
（3）内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑、书写整齐。
（4）词数：80～100词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
赞同： 节约纸张；保护环境；增强责任感……
反对 不能在书上做标记；不能做笔记……
自己的观点 ……
Should we recycle textbooks Last Wednesday afternoon, our class discussed if we should recycle textbooks. Now, let me tell you something about it._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
Should we recycle textbooks
Last Wednesday afternoon, our class discussed if we should recycle textbooks. Now, let me tell you something about it.
On the one hand, some students in our class agree to recycle textbooks. The reasons are as follows. First of all, recycling textbooks can save paper. Secondly, it can protect the environment. Finally, it can also enhance students’ sense of responsibility. On the other hand, other students are against recycling textbooks. Because it prevents students from marking up books. Another reason is that students can’t make notes on books.
In my opinion, textbooks can be recycled. As long as we have a good system to implement this thing.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。根据表格提示，写一篇作文简述你们班“教科书是否可以循环使用”辩论的情况并阐述自己的观点。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；人称采用第三人称为主。文章可分为三段，第一段文章已给出；第二段介绍赞同和反对的理由；第三段介绍自己的观点。行文做到语句通顺，无单词语法错误。
5．
在学校，一些同学不注意保护学校环境，使学校环境受到了损害。请你根据所给内容要点，以“Keep Our School Clean”为题用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。
内容要点：
1.学校环境越来越差。
2.随地吐痰和乱扔垃圾。
3.毁坏花草树木。
4.多植树，循环使用教材。
5.保护学校环境。
参考词汇；（参考词汇仅供参考）
要求：
1.包括所有内容要点，不要逐句翻译，可以适当发挥。
2.语句通顺、语法正确。
3.文中不得出现考生真实的姓名、地点和所在的学校名称。
Keep Our School Clean
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【答案】例文：
Keep Our School Clean
Environment in our school has become worse and worse. Some schoolmates spit here and there and throw litter everywhere. Some even destroy the flowers, grass and trees. So we should plant more trees to make our school more beautiful. We should also reuse our text books.
As students, we are responsible for the environment of our school. We should do something to protect our environment. Everyone in our school should play a part in cleaning it up! We hope that our school will become cleaner and tidier.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求以“Keep Our School Clean”为题，按照所给内容要点写一篇文章介绍学校环境的现状及保护措施。
2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时，第一人称为主，注意主谓一致问题；写作时按要点分段叙述，第一段介绍学校环境的状况及保护环境的措施；第二段阐述个人感悟；写作时保证文章要点齐全，语句通顺有条理。
6．2022年4月21日，国家发布《义务教育课程方案（2022年版）》，将劳动课程列入国家课程，让学生要学会家务劳动，参与社会实践劳动，志愿服务劳动等。作为一名中学生，请你结合实际，以“How Can We Develop Working Spirit ”为题，写一篇短文，谈谈你的看法。
参考词汇：working class living skill social activity
要求：1. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名、学校等个人信息。
2. 词数：100词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
How Can We Develop Working Spirit
It’s pretty important for teenagers to develop working spirit. As a middle school student,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
How Can We Develop Working Spirit
It’s pretty important for teenagers to develop working spirit. As a middle school student, I welcome it warmly.
First, we should have working classes to learn some basic life skills at school every week. Secondly, we can take part in out-of-class activities such as planting tress or growing vegetables to enrich our real-world work experience. Also, we need try to do some chores at home, like tidying rooms, washing clothes or doing some dishes. Above all, we could form good working habits and value the importance of working hard through our experience.
In a word, the hardworking spirit educations is necessary and it helps to build us up.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文。
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：以“How Can We Develop Working Spirit”为题介绍如何培养劳动精神的方法。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，并表达自己的看法。
第二步，介绍培养劳动精神的方法。
第三步，总结概括。
[亮点词汇]
① take part in 参加
② such as 例如
③ in a word 总之
[高分句型]
① It’s pretty important for teenagers to develop working spirit（“it’s+形容词+for sb+to do sth”的句型）
② Also, we need try to do some chores at home, like tidying rooms, washing clothes or doing some dishes.（动词不定式作宾语）
7．假定你是李华，最近你的笔友刘明发来邮件，向你诉说他的困扰；他的父母不让他用手机APP给英文电影配音，认为会影响学习和休息。请你根据邮件内容用英语给他回封邮件，内容包括：
1.表示理解，并予以安慰；
2.提出合理的建议；
3.希望情况有所好转。
参考词汇：dub（v. 配音）
Dear Li Hua,I’m in trouble now. Yesterday I argued with my parents because they didn’t allow me to dub foreign films by using mobile apps. They thought that it would have a bad influence on my study and sleep. I broke their hearts and made them angry. I’m sorry for that but I really think it helpful to learn English by dubbing the foreign films. Now I don’t know what to do. Could you help me Yours. Liu Ming
要求：1.要点齐全，并适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名与校名：
3.卷面整洁，书写美观，可适当加2-3分；
4. 80词左右。开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Liu Ming. I’m sorry to hear that you had an argument with your parents when dubbing foreign films by using mobile apps.
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Yours.
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Liu Ming,
I’m sorry to hear that you had an argument with your parents when dubbing foreign films by using mobile apps.
I completely agree that it is a good way to learn English with interest. However, you shouldn’t make your parents angry, because they are the ones who love you all the time. Don’t be so upset. Go straight to your parents and tell them you are sorry for that. Then, listen to your parents patiently, and you will understand what your parents are worried about. At last, you can talk to your parents about the advantages of dubbing foreign films by using mobile apps.
I hope things will be better for you soon.
Yours.
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一封电子邮件。针对刘明的困扰提出合理性建议。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第二人称和第三人称为主。分为三段式：第一段开头已给出；第二段针对刘明的困扰提出合理建议；最后一段表达自己的希望。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
8．假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Tracy的学校即将开设特色选修课程，她正在考虑是否选修汉语，来信询问你的建议。请你根据所给提示给她写封回信。
要点：
（1）给出你的建议；
（2）谈谈学习汉语的重要性；
（3）结合自身经历，介绍至少2种学习汉语的方法。
要求：
1.必须包含所给要点，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
3.文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；
4.词数100左右(开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Tracy,
I’m so glad to hear from you. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Tracy,
I’m so glad to hear from you. Knowing you have an interest in Chinese, I suggest you choose the Chinese course. With the development of China, Chinese is becoming more and more popular. Learning Chinese is not only a way to communicate, but also a chance to admire Chinese culture.
As a Chinese, I have been learning Chinese for many years. I have much experience to share with you. In my opinion, there are many ways to learn Chinese. It’s useful to read Chinese books and listen to Chinese songs. What’s more, you are supposed to join a Chinese club to practice your spoken Chinese. Learning is a lifelong journey. Keep practicing every day, then it will bring something new.
I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。针对Tracy是否选修汉语给出建议，谈谈学习汉语的重要性并给出学习汉语的方法。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第二人称来行文，时态以一般现在时为主。作文可分为三段，第一段给出建议，是否应该选修汉语以及学习汉语的重要性；第二段结合自身经历，介绍学习汉语的方法；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
9．你们班将举办“好习惯益终身”的主题班会，请你写一篇发言稿，谈谈中学生要培养哪些良好的生活和学习习惯。
内容包括：
早睡早起，锻炼身体；认真听讲，按时完成作业；每晚阅读……
要求：
1.内容可适当发挥，使行文连贯；
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名、学校名称等信息；
3.词数60﹣80。开头结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。
参考词汇: habit take exercise finish
Good morning, everyone!
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That’s all. Thank you!
【答案】例文
Good morning, everyone!
As students, we can also choose good living habits. In daily life, we should insist on exercise, don’t stay up late and get enough sleep. We should insist on eating breakfast, more fruit and vegetables, and less junk food. At home, we should be considerate of our parents and do more housework. As students, we should also choose good study habits. We must listen carefully and take notes frequently in class. We must finish our homework on time and read widely. We should also insist on reading every night. Finally, we should develop good healthy habits and keep the classroom and bedroom clean. We should wash our hands before eating and pay attention to the prevention and control of infectious diseases.
That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇发言稿，要求介绍中学生要培养哪些学习和生活习惯。写作要点题目已经给出，要求从生活方面，如日常作息、饮食习惯等，以及学习方面，如及时完成作业、坚持阅读等介绍好的习惯。
2.写作指导：文章以第一人称、一般现在时为主，注意主谓一致问题；写作时按要点分层次叙述，首先介绍生活习惯，其次学习习惯，最后再适当补充一些其他习惯。写作时注意连接词的运用，如First、Finally等，用以增强文章的条理性。
10．近段时间，某中学不少学生因感冒不能正常上课，影响了学习。为此，学生会主席李华准备利用English Broadcast时间建议学生养成良好的生活习惯和加强体育锻炼，以提高身体素质。请你根据下表提示，为他准备一份英语，发言稿。
现象 因感冒不能上课，影响了学习
建议 生活习惯 健康饮食……
保证睡眠……
加强锻炼 参加体育活动……
其他 ……
期望 ……
参考词汇： affect vt. 影响
要求：
（1）短文须包含要点提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥；
（2）词数：80左右（短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
（3）文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
Boys and girls,Welcome to our English Broadcast! I’m Li Hua, the chairman of Students’ Union. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all! Thanks for your listening!
【答案】例文
Boys and girls,
Welcome to our English Broadcast! I’m Li Hua, the chairman of Students’ Union. Recently quite a few students in our school couldn’t have lessons as usual because they had a cold. This affected their studies. In order to make you stronger, I’ll give you some useful advice.
Firstly, it’s important to have a healthy eating habit. You should eat more vegetables and fruit but less junk food. Secondly, you’d better sleep well. Don’t stay up late. Besides, do exercise every day. You can take a walk or run. Lastly, a good attitude towards life is also good for your health.
I’m looking forward to seeing you happier and healthier! That’s all! Thanks for your listening!
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿。根据表格提示要点，写一篇关于学生养成良好的生活习惯和加强体育锻炼的建议，以提高身体素质的作文。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；人称以第二人称为主。写作时可分为三段，第一段承接开头，点明主题；第二段介绍具体的建议；第三段表示感谢。写作时可适当使用过渡词使文章通顺，另外确保作文逻辑清晰，无单词拼写和语法错误。
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