Unit3 Writing主题写作练
写作题目
假设你是李明,学校校长和老师因为担心同学们浏览不健康的网站,关闭了教室内电脑的上网功能,你们感到很难过。请你写一篇博客谈谈你对此的看法。
注意:
1.博客要包括下表中的所有内容;
2.词数110左右;
3.博客的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
4.参考词汇:judgment判断力;principal校长
事由 教室内的电脑不能上网,建议学校开通网络
原因 1.有利于查找资料; 2.浏览新闻,了解信息; 3.作为高中生,我们正在形成自己的判断力。
Today I want to blog about a question that has been discussed many times-whether students can surf the Internet in the classroom.___________________________________
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思路点拨
主题 开通教室内的网络 体裁 应用文
人称 以第一人称为主 时态 以一般现在时为主
布局 第一部分:写博客的原因——要求开通教室内的布局网络; 第二部分:开通教室内网络的好处; 第三部分:表明希望建议被采纳
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空
1.______n博客υ.写博客
2.______n.好处υ.使受益
3.______adj.方便的
4.______v.浏览;冲浪
5.______掌握......的最新消息
6.______牢记
7.______v.使用;进入n机会;通道
答案1. blog 2. benefit 3. convenient 4. surf 5. keep track of 6. keep...in mind 7. access
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
(1)我们的校长和老师担心我们可能会访问不健康的网站。
Our principal and teachers are ____ _____ ____ ______ _____ ____ _____.
我们仍然认为上网可以给我们带来更多的好处,并且使我们的学习更方便。
We still think that surfing the Internet can____ _____ ____ ______ _____and ____ _____ ____ ______ _____ ____ _____.
(3)我们正在形成自己的判断力,我们会记住校长和老师说的话。
We are____ _____ ____and we will ____what our principal and teachers say____ ____.
答案 (1)afraid that we may visit unhealthy websites
(2) bring us much more benefits; it is more convenient for our study
(3) forming our judgment; keep; in mind
(4) have a chance to surf the Internet
2.句式升级
(5)用 access 的形容词改写句(1)
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(6)用make的复合结构改写句(2)
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用“do+动词原形”强调结构和 access短语改写句(4)
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答案 (5) Our principal and teachers are afraid that we may be accessible to unhealthy websites.
(6) We still think that surfing the Internet can bring us much more benefits and make our study more convenient.
(7)I do hope we can have access to surfing the Internet.
连句成篇
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参考范文
基础篇
Today I want to blog about a question that has been discussed many times-whether students can surf the Internet in the classroom. We know our principal and teachers are afraid that we may visit unhealthy websites.
Actually, every coin has two sides. We still think that surfing the Internet can bring us much more benefits and it is more convenient for our study. Firstly, I think it would be better if we can surf the internet, because there are a wide range of learning resources on the Internet. Secondly, we can keep track of various news online. Finally, as high school students, we are forming our judgment and we will keep what our principal and teachers say in mind. Given chances, we are sure that we will learn how to stay away from unhealthy websites.
I really hope we can have a chance to surf the Internet and our principal and teachers can take my suggestion into consideration and make a final decision.
提升篇
Today I want to blog about a question that has been discussed many times-whether students can surf the Internet in the classroom. We know our principal and teachers are afraid that we may be accessible to unhealthy websites.
Actually, every coin has two sides, We still think that surfing the Internet can bring us much more benefits and make our study more convenient. First of all,I think it would be better if we can surf the Internet, because there are a wide range of learning resources on the Internet. Furthermore, we can keep track of various news online. Last but not least, as high school students, we are forming our judgment and we will keep what our principal and teachers say in mind. Given chances, we ensure that we will learn how to stay away from unhealthy websites.
I do hope we can have access to surfing the Internet and our principal and teachers can take my suggestion into consideration and make a final decision.
写作积累
方法指导
博客一般分为三部分:
首段:提出话题。
主体:围绕话题,结构清晰、委婉地提出建议。
(3)尾段:可发表自己的看法、表明希望等。
写博客要注意以下几点:
(1)写博客一般使用第一和第二人称、一般现在时和一般将来时。
(2)写博客时用词要得体,所陈述的建议要具有说服力。
(3)要充分利用高级句型和衔接词使文章结构紧凑,层次分明。
常见句式
开头:
blog about a question …
blog about the topic…
正文:
In the first place/ Firstly /First…;Secondly/Second…;Last but not least…
on the one hand…on the other hand…
结尾:
Have you had...?
Do you have…?
Post your comments below…
实战演练
(★★☆)
如今很多高中生纷纷开起了自己的博客,请对这一现象进行简要介绍,并发表自己的看法。
注意:
1.词数120左右;
2开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:开博客 open one's blog
Nowadays,it,'s not an uncommon phenomenon that more and more high school students open their own blogs on the Internet.
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参考答案及解析
One possible version:
Nowadays, it's not an uncommon phenomenon that more and more high school students open their own blogs on the Internet. On the one hand, the blog can provide a platform to show their talents and release their pressure, thus making it more and more popular with high school students. On the other hand, many parents and teachers think that blogging takes a lot of time and energy.
Personally speaking, I approve of the former opinion. Opening and organizing an eye-catching blog needs various abilities such as writing, designing, being skillful at computer and so on. Only if we master these abilities can we make a successful blog. As a consequence, we improve ourselves during the course of organizing our blog.
Anyway, the blog itself is unharmful. It is people's attitude towards it that matters. We should take advantage of it and avoid some bad effects.
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