Unit1 写作素养练
I.作文句式运用(根据汉语提示及所给词汇,仿写本单元重点句式)
1.所有同学都参加了这个比赛。(take part in)
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2.我们不可对这些不合理的要求让步。(give way to)
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3.生活就像一辆单车。要想保持平衡就必须前进。(keep balance)
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4.他很有可能出国。(be likely to do)
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5.保护文化遗产是值得的。(It is worthwhile to do…)
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6.他就是我正在等待的那个人。(whom/that在从句中作宾语)
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7.我不信任他的原因是他常常撒谎。(why引导的定语从句)
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8.现代人更加关心他们居住的环境。(where引导的定语从句)
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9.我认识那个女孩,她的父亲是我们的校长。(whose引导的定语从句)
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10.我永远也忘不了入党的那一天。(when引导的定语从句)
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Ⅱ.应用文写作
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假设你是李华,你的英国朋友 Chris在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化非常感兴趣,想请你介绍一项你最引以为傲的中国文化遗产。请你给他写一封邮件。
内容包括:
1.文化遗产的名称;
2.简要介绍;
3.你感到自豪的理由
注意:
1.词数不少于100;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Hua
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随着经济的发展,越来越多的文化遗产(cultural relics)遭到破坏。假设你是红星中学高中生李华,请给当地报社写一封信,就以下两个方面谈谈你的看法,以纪念6月10日的“世界文化遗产日(the World Cultural Heritage Day)”。
要点:
1.文化遗迹的重要性(见证历史和文化,帮助人们了解过去;稀少,有价值);
2.呼吁人们保护文化遗产。
注意:
1.要涵盖所给要点,词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计人总词数
Dear editor,
I am Li Hua,a senior student from Hong Xing high School. ________________
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Sincerely,
Li Hua
Ⅲ.读后续写
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
When a tornado touched down in a small town nearby,many families were left completely ruined. One Sunday,a particular picture especially touched me. A young woman stood in front of an entirely ruined home. A young boy, seven or eight years old,stood at her side,eyes downcast Clutching(紧握)at her skirt was a tiny girl who stared into the camera,eyes wide with confusion and fear. The article that went with the picture gave the clothing sizes of each family member. With growing interest,I noticed sizes closely matched ours. This would be a good opportunity to teach my children to help those less fortunate than themselves. I taped the picture of the young family to our refrigerator,explaining their difficulty to my seven-year-old twins,Brad and Brett,and to three-year-old Meghan.
“These poor people now have nothing,"I said.“We’ll share what we have with them.”
I brought three large boxes and placed them on the living room floor,encouraging the boys to go through their toys and donate some of their less favourite things,Meghan watched seriously,as the boys and I filled one of the boxes with canned goods and foods that they no longer needed.
Meghan walked up with Lucy,her much-loved doll,hugged tightly to her chest. She stopped in front of the box gave her doll a final kiss,then laid her gently on top of the other toys.
"Oh,Honey,"I said. "You don’t have to give Lucy. You love her so much.”
Meghan nodded seriously,"Lucy makes Mummy. Maybe she'll make that other little girl happy, too.”
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为了两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:
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Ⅳ.概要写作
阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Have you heard an old saying "The grass looks greener on the other side of the fence"?It means other places often look better,more interesting than the place where you live." Let’s go to KFC for dinner and then watch some Japanese cartoons!We all know it:more and more Chinese kids love American and Japanese food and movies. Some people worry that young Chinese are beginning to feel that way. They see young Chinese ignoring Chinese culture and,instead,buying Japanese cartoon books watching Korean soap operas and even celebrating western holidays.
Foreign books and soap operas are good,but Chinese writers and actors are just as good. As for holidays, Christmas is nice,but it can never have the meaning for Chinese that Spring Festival has,and the West has nothing to compare with the Mid-Autumn Festival. China has lots of cool things in its culture:calligraphy,Beijing Opera,quick meals on the streets,and even Jay Chou!And let’s not forget the part of Chinese culture I like best:its friendliness. Not all countries are as warm as China.
It's good to enjoy other cultures and learn from them, but they can never replace your own culture. It's good to look on the other side of the fence, but make sure you take a good long look. You will find that the grass isn't always greener.
Although some people become worried about that. I don t think they should. Will we get more powerful without learning from other countries Will Chinese people live more happily without American fast food Besides, it's fun to learn about different cultures. Chinese kids can learn about other cultures and have fun, but they also need to learn more about their own culture. Be proud of Chinese culture and of being Chinese!
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参考答案
I. 1. All the students take part in this game.
2. We mustn’t give way to these unreasonable demands.
3. Life is like a bicycle. To keep balance you must keep moving.
4. He's likely to go abroad.
5. It is worthwhile to protect cultural relics.
6. He is the man whom/that I am waiting for.
7. The reason why I don’t trust him is that he often tells lies.
8. Nowadays people are more concerned about the environment where they live.
9. I know the girl whose father is our headmaster.
10. I will never forget the day when I joined the Party.
Ⅱ. A One possible version 1:
Dear Chris,
How are you doing I feel more than delighted to introduce a Chinese cultural heritage that I value most. It is called Tangshi in Chinese-a form of traditional Chinese poems.
I am proud of this form of art because that the poets vividly described the beauty of nature and the poems themselves reflected the social life of the prime time in Chinese history-Tang Dynasty. I am sure you will be amazed at the imagination and the creation of the poets. Even today, Chinese people still hold Poem-reading Contests annually to sing high praise for the value of the poems.
Every time I recite them I feel every cell in my body wakes up. They are the pride of our culture.
So, Chris, do you feel like learning to read some Tangshi Feel free to let me know if you need to know more about them.
I am looking forward to hearing from you!
Yours.
Li Hua
One possible version 2:
Dear Chris,
Glad to receive your email. Knowing you are interested in Chinese relics, I feel it an honour to introduce the great Wall to you.
The Great Wall stands out from the other relics for its historical value and beauty. Built and rebuilt in different dynasties, it served as a great defense work, which could protect people from being attacked by other nationalities living in the northern part of China. Nowadays its grandness still attracts eyes of the world, as it climbs over mountains from the east to the west, extending itself for more than 21, 000 kilometres.
Chinese poets like to compare the great Wall to the backbone of Chinese which shows its place in Chinese hearts. There is also a famous saying, "He who does not reach the Great Wall is not a true man. "The Great Wall is not a building, but a cultural symbol.
For further information of Chinese cultural relics, don’t hesitate to ask me.
Yours.
Li Hua
B One possible version:
Dear Editor,
I am Li Hua, a senior student from Hong Xing High School. Nowadays, with the development of our society, more and more cultural relics are facing the danger of disappearing. So we must attach importance to the problem and try our best to protect them.
First, cultural relics represent our historic cultures, which offer us a great opportunity to learn about what happened in the past. Also, they are the roots of a city or a place. They can help us make our traditional cultures handed down from generation to generation. More importantly, most of them have survived for a long time and they are usually very rare and valuable.
For above reasons, we shouldn't hesitate to call on people to take action to save our treasures. I hope more and more people will become concerned about protecting our cultural relics.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
Ⅲ. One possible version:
Paragraph 1:
The boys had watched, open-mouthed, when their sister placed her favourite doll in the box. Without a word, the boys rose and went to their rooms and came back carrying their favourite toys to the living room. Astonished, I realised that the boys had also recognized what little Meghan's action meant. I think all of them want to make these poor people who have nothing happy like them. Swallowing back tears, I pulled all three of them into my arms.
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I looked my children for a long moment. I removed my old jacket from the box of clothes, too. I replaced it with the new hunter green jacket that I had found on sale last week. I hoped the young woman in the picture would love it as much as I did. What Meghan did taught me a lesson that the true spirit of donating is to give with your heart.
【分析】
本文是一篇记叙文,讲述了作者在看到一张受灾家庭的照片后回家号召孩子们捐出自己用不到的东西来帮助那一家人。但是自己小女儿的行为却深深感动了作者,让作者意识到真正的慷慨不是捐出自己用不到的物品,而是自己喜爱的物品。
【详解】
根据第一段所给首句 The boys had watched,open-mouthed,when their sister可知,接下来应该是描述作者的女儿把自己最喜欢的玩具捐赠出去,然后是小男孩们也受到启发,把自己最喜爱的玩具拿出来捐赠。
根据第二段所给首句 I looked my children for a long moment.可知,接下来应该是说作者在看到孩子们令人感动的行为之后的想法及做法。
IV. One possible version:
Many young Chinese prefer foreign items, considering them to be better.(要点1)Nevertheless, Chinese culture is equally good,colourful and even more meaningful,such as its festivals,calligraphy and friendliness.(要点2)Foreign cultures,which are not always good,can never replace your own culture.(要点3)In a word,Chinese kids just need to learn more and take pride in Chinese culture while enjoying other cultures.(要点4)
【范文亮点】
文中使用了短语 such as,In a word,take pride in和特殊句型为文章增色。句型有现在分词作状语,如:Many young Chinese prefer foreign items,considering them to be better.和 In a word,Chinese kids just need to learn more and take pride in Chinese culture while enjoying other cultures.以及非限定性定语从句,如:Foreign cultures,which are not always good,can never replace your own culture.文中还大量运用了连词,如 nevertheless,in a word,and,while等,注意到了句子的衔接。
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