2023届高考英语二轮复习短文改错课件（30张）

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2023届高三英语二轮专题复习之----短文改错
Proof Reading
Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. Learning from mistakes makes us better.
于都县第二中学 肖东初
Let’s start our journey of improvement!
（一）高考短文改错的考查方式
Unnecessary
word
Missing word
Wrong word
1. I can go to home now.
2. I like playing piano.
3. I am fond at English.
∧
the
of
2. 每句中最多两处错。
3. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
4. 多词、缺词、错词比例通常为：
1 ： 1 ： 8
Attention: 1.改错格式绝对不能错，规范答题，否则不得分。
go
go
1.通读全文,把握总体时态和大意。
2.细读理解,逐句分析。
3.复读全文,验证答案。
1. 单词拼写不改
2. 大小写不改
3. 词序不改
4. 标点符号不改
5.原文意思不可改
（二）解题三步骤
（三）五不改原则
（1）
短文改错题型选材解读
短文改错的文体多为第一/三人称记叙文、应用文。一般约100词，所选取的语言材料贴近实际生活，多为考生所熟知，且话题贴近学生，有的带点幽默，有的包含教育意义。文字浅显易懂，材料中没有生僻、超纲的词汇；句子结构简单，基本上是简单句和并不复杂的复合句，语言地道，符合英语语言习惯。
（2）命题规律与趋势
一.设题的三个层面：词法、句法、篇法(行文逻辑)，从这三个角度考查学生在语篇中综合运用英语知识的能力和准确性.
1.词法层面：动名形副代冠介。
2.句法层面：连词和特殊句式。
3.篇法层面：时态一致，代词指代一致，逻辑关系一致。
二.学生在平时写作中常出现的错误是短文改错考查的重点
所以改错能力的提高可以促进我们写作能力的提高，即以改错促写作。
(四).考情分析，明方向
（3）全国乙/Ⅰ卷近五年短文改错题型命题一览表
试卷名称 主题 考点
主题语境 主题语境内容 1. 动词 2.名词 3.形容词 4.副词 5.冠词 6.介词 7.并列连词 8.代词 9.定语从句 10.状语从句
2022 全国乙 人与自我 骑自行车的好处 4 1 1 1 1 1 1
2021 人与自我 做家务的好处 4 1 2 1 1 1
2020 课标全国Ⅰ 人与自我 尝试西红柿炒鸡蛋 3 1 1 1 1 1 1 1
2019 人与社会 一次意外爱上足球 2 2 1 1 1 1 1 1
2018 人与社会 家乡的变化 2 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1
方向：掌握考点- 。
动名形副冠介连代从句
（五）
改错口诀
请先念一遍
“咒语”吧！
句
动词形，名词数；
还要注意形和副；
代词指代细领悟；
介词数词须关注；
冠词连词常光顾。
固定搭配要记住；
从句导词看正误。
特殊句式得巩固。
词法类
句法类
篇法类（行文逻辑）
Let’s continue our discovery trip!
合作探究
让我们从单句改错开始吧
一、动词形
1. 的 和 错误
1)During my last winter holiday, ...I find a big change there. (2018年课标全国Ⅰ卷)
2).Great changes have been taken place in our village in recent years.
2. 主谓 的错误
3).My dad don’t like the soup and I don’t enjoy apples. (2020课标全国Ⅲ卷)
4). A doctor tells me people who lives the longest are dancers and cyclists. (2022年全国乙卷)
时态
语态
（时,语）
不一致
（人称和数要一致--数）
谓语动词
summary：
谓语动词 ， 和 的错误.
时
语
数
found
改有所依，圈出语境中的关键词。
live
doesn’t
定语从句的谓语动词必须和 保持一致。
先行词
1).Last summer they earned quite a lot by sell the fish. (2018课标全国I卷)
2).I was unwilling talk with him and often disobeyed his rule. (2020课标全国I卷)
3).Seeing from the top, the city looks as if it were a basin.
4). The boy lay on the grass, stared at the sky. (2022全国甲卷)
Seen
∧
to
selling
3. 的错误
非谓语动词
staring
非谓语动词
不定式to do
V-ing形式doing
过去分词done
表目的或将来
现在分词:表主动或进行
动名词做主宾表:常表性质/用途
表被动或完成
逗号前后无 ，常用 ；
现在分词表 ，过去分词表 ；关键要找 。
非谓语
主动
被动
逻辑主
连词
1. Since I was a child, I’ve considered different job I would like to do.
2.Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with chopstick. (2020年课标全国Ⅰ卷)
3.Besides, they often get some useful informations from the Internet.
chopsticks
information
jobs
二、名词数
高考常考的纯不可数名词：information; knowledge; furniture;
advice; trouble; luggage; fun; wealth; progress; equipment等
1.可数和不可数名词的混用.
2.可数名词的单复数的错用.
①We all know that cycling is a greatly exercise. (2022年全国乙卷)
②I felt happily that their life had improved. (2018课标全国I卷)
③One was that I was amazed at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor. (2019课标全国卷)
④Unfortunate, all the people on the car died.
三、还要注意形和副
1.形容词、副词、名词等词性的误用
2.原级、比较级和最高级的误用
great
happy
Unfortunately
副词的用法：修饰 、 、 或 。
动词
形容词
副词
句子
形容词的用法：
形容词：修饰 做定语，在 后作表语。
一是 ：be（am,is,are,was,were,been）
二似乎: appear;seem
三依旧:keep; remain; stay;
四变化: become; go;get; turn
五感官:feel; look; smell;sound; taste
系动词：“一是，二似，三依旧 ,四变化, 五感官”
名词
系动词
+adj.
1.If we plant more trees ,there will be less haze(雾霾) in their city.
2.From then on, I started to play my football with classmates after school.(2019课标全国I卷)
3.He found difficult to learn math well.
4.The first time I went there again, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and another animals. (2018课标全国II)
our
四、 代词指代细领悟
other
∧
it
归纳总结：注意掌握常见的不定代词区别，如：all, both；either, neither；other, another；little, few等
1.前后人称代词或反身代词不一致；
2.固定搭配中多余的代词；
3.不定代词，物主代词，反身代词的误用及混用。
4.代词的格的错用。
5.it作形式主语、形式宾语或指代时有缺漏。
① Maybe it is because the combination of fresh air and exercise. (2022全国乙卷)
②On the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted.
③In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons.
④Then I can spare some time to learn it again, so that we can practice together
on every day. (2020课标全国Ⅱ卷)
五、介词数词须关注
1.介词主要考查介词的漏用,误用或多用；
2.数词主要考查基数词和序数词的误用以及年龄，分数的表达法等；
∧
of
With
eighteenth
注意：由this,that,these,those,last,next,every,each+week/day...等构成
的时间状语前不用介词。
①Each of my cafes will have a different theme and an unique style.
(2019课标全国Ⅲ)
②During my last winter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. (2018课标全国Ⅰ卷)
③I like the coat so I can’t afford it.
④Though she gave me no sign, but I was sure she had seen me.(牛津高阶）
六、冠词连词常光顾，固定搭配要记住。
(一)冠词分为不定冠词a和an、定冠词the，
1.冠词的泛指、特指的误用;
2.不定冠词a、an的误用；
3.冠词的习惯用法。
a
∧
the
[ju ni k]
but
(二）连词
1）but，yet--- , , ; therefore---
等的错用,关键看逻辑关系。
2）because,so； 不可成对同时出现，只能用其中一个。
and, or, so
however
though,but
注意
读音以元音音素开头的单词前考察不定冠词时填_____
___American ___ugly dog ___umbrella
形不似神是:
___hour ___honest boy ___8-year-old boy ___X-ray
形似神不是 ：
___university ___ European country
___useful/unique book
an
an
an
an
an
an
an
an
a
a
a
[e t]
[eks]
[ju]
① Thank you for your letter, what really made me happy.[2020·全国卷Ⅱ]
②Yesterday we discussed that we can do to keep fit.
③Whether you ride a bicycle, you don’t use petrol. (2022全国乙卷)
七、从句导词看正误
1.状语从句、定语从句和名词性从句引导词的误用
what
which
定语从句
名词性从句--宾语从句
状语从句
If\When
归纳总结：对于状语从句的考查集中于引导时间状语、条件状语、结果状语等从句的连词。定语从句that，which，where等的混用。名词性从句what，that等的混用。
5.
①I reconsidered my goal and decided to be a doctor. They were two reasons for the decision.(2019课标全国I卷)
②The instructor kept repeating the words, “Speed up!” “Slow down!” “Turning left!” (2017课标全国I卷)
③On the top of the hill stand a temple.
There
Turn
归纳总结：短文改错对于特殊句式的考查主要集中在 、 、 等特殊句式。
八、特殊句式得巩固
祈使句
there be/exist句型
倒装句
stands
Last week, students in our school took part in series of activities that was aimed at improving the students'quality.Get involved in the activities, the students cooperated close with each other. In order to finish which seemed impossible,they encouraged each other.Faced with so many challenges, the students didn't lose hearts. Instead,they combined our efforts and gifts, working as a strong team.They managed to complete many amused games. The students enjoy themselves very much during the meaningful activities. They have no only been gained a deep friendship with each other, but also pure happiness.
let’s have a look at the proof reading you did yesterday.
Getting
closely
heart
a
amusing
enjoyed
what
their
were
Our goal is to get full marks.Fighting!
含冠词的固定搭配
动词形-主谓一致
动词形-非谓语动词
形容词副词
从句导词
含名词的固定搭配
代词指代
动词形-非谓语动词
动词形-谓语动词的时态
动词形-谓语动词的语态
改有所依，析考点。
To help the farmers in an nearby farm to pick apples, my classmates and I took part in a campaign-apple picking on last weekend.
On arrive at the farmland, we were given a warm welcome by the farmers. Seen the apples on the rows of trees, we were very excited. Soon the leader told us something about the farm, where is about 50 mu and there are 350 apple trees. Then he assigned us different task.After the introduction, they began to pick apples. Some climbed the trees, but others carried the apples to the boxes. We also did some other things which made us excited and happier than before, such as singing and dancing.
Through the experience, I was sharply aware of the hardships of the peasants and I was very proud of the efforts we make.
改编2020年全国Ⅱ卷作文--介绍上周末的采摘活动
a
arriving
Seeing
which
tasks
we
and
冠词
∧
more
made
介词，时间状语last weekend前不用加介词
动词形-非谓语动词
动词形-非谓语动词
从句导词，非限制性定语从句
名词数
代词
连词
形容词比较级
动词形-谓语动词
Attention：
1、重读全篇，仔细核查，词法、句法是否正确，语意是否贯通。
2、拼写正确、书写规范、大小写准确（注意三写）。
3、改完若还不到十个错误可以看每句是否均已改到错误，或者看考点动名形副冠介连代从哪一个未改，反其道而行。
Show Time
改有所依，析考点。
改错口诀
请再念一遍
“咒语”吧！
句
动词形，名词数；
还要注意形和副；
代词指代细领悟；
介词数词须关注；
冠词连词常光顾。
固定搭配要记住；
从句导词看正误。
特殊句式得巩固。
summary
答题步骤
1.通读全文,把握总体时态和大意。
2.细读理解,逐句分析。
3.复读全文,验证答案。
Practice makes perfect!
句
THANK YOU
2023.3.09
1. 改错应不局限于以上老师归纳的各种错误类型，平时还需要自行探究发现并总结其他错误类型。
2. 平时重视积累语境中词汇的用法(观察总结、查字典、请教同学或老师)。
3. 对短文改错中常考、常错题型引起足够重视，弄懂后逐一作好笔记或纠错以备查。
4.写作时注意动名形副冠介连代从的正确使用，可有助于减少错误,从而有效地促进我们的写作。
给同学们的建议
Homework
1.Review the content we have learned today.
2.Finish the rest exercise on your paper.
Thanks your cooperation and listening .
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As for the winners, I’ll send some bookmarks to you. May all of you will realize your dream this year. So give yourselves some applause.
Since I was a child, I’ve considered different job I would like to do. First, I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so coolly. Then, when I was in the five grade, I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher too much. When I studied chemistry high school, I reconsidered my goal or decided to be a doctor. They were two reasons for the decision. One was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor. And the other is that I wanted to help people in need.
jobs
名词数
cool
形容词系表结构
fifth
so/very
at/in
and
amazed
was
2019·全国卷Ⅱ
序数词
介词漏用
谓语动词时态
连词
特殊句式
形容词比较级
固定搭配
∧
There
非谓语动词
实战高考
Thank you for your letter, what really made me happy. I'm glad to know that you've come China to learn kung fu in a school in my hometown. I'm surely you'll have a good time. Actually, I start to learn kung fu when I was seven years old, for I have long been out of practice. Luckily, I will go home in two weeks for summer vacations. Then I can spare some time to learn it again, such that we can practice together on every day. Best of luck with yours learning kung fu in China. See you sooner.
[2020·全国卷Ⅱ]Practice(group 5mins)
which
从句导词，非限制性定语从句
∧
to
介词，come是不及物动词
sure
形容词，系动词后用形容词修饰
started
动词形，时语数
vacation
名词数
so
固定搭配
介词，every day作时间状语，不用加介词
but/yet
your/you
代词
soon
副词，固定搭配。
连词常光顾
My mom is really concerning with the health of everyone in our families. In order to make surely all of us are in good health, and she makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have the bowl of egg soup while I had to eat an apple. My dad don’t like the soup and I don’t enjoy apples. I tell my mom that if we’re forced eat things, we may become ill. But he insists on us eating healthy food. Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food what is provided by Mom with appreciation.
that
concerned
family
she
a
^
to
doesn't
have
sure
高考短文改错真题实战演练
2020全国Ⅲ卷