人教版（2019）必修第三册 学案Unit2 Morals and Virtues 作文深度解码学案（有答案）
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Unit2 作文深度解码
故事评论类写作
文本解读
评论性文章的时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第一和第三人称为主。
故事评论类文章要包括故事梗概，即故事的时间、地点、人物、事件和最有印象的部分，以及对故事的分析和评论。
写故事评论类文章时要注意紧扣“故事”与“评论”两点，评论可以从多方面进行，但一篇评论的中心观点只能有一个。在写作手法上要注意两点：一是点面结合；二是观点与材料的统一。
高中阶段的评论类写作大多是指导性写作（guided writing），即根据所给材料进行写作。
写作要点
一、写作要素
首先要准确审题，理清行文脉络，拟出写作要点。其次为了使内容更充实，要添加细节，在写作时根据句子间的逻辑关系，对各个要点进行适当扩充与整合，可以用generally，so，in addition等进行衔接，使文章衔接紧密，过渡自然。最后连句成文。
二、基本结构
本类写作可采用“三段式”行文，第一段推荐一部小说并简述内容或者讲述一个故事；第二段给出故事内容或自己对故事的分析；第三段结尾，表达自己的观点及原因。
常用句式：
1.It is set in（the 1930s，the sixteenth century，during the French Revolution...）
2.It is based on（a story，a play，a book by…with the same name）
3.The plot of the story is（interesting，impressive...
4.There are some sad moments，especially when…
5.What moved us to tears is…
6.The character is so warm-hearted that she…
7. In the end, the story finishes with...
8. Generally speaking/On the whole/All things considered, it is a masterpiece…
9. The story tells us if only we can…
10. I wish you could…
范文展示
假定你是李华，你班正在进行讲故事比赛，请根据以下提示写一篇英语小故事，并发表自己的看法次雷锋外出值勤，在沈阳站换车的时候，看见一群人围着一个背着小孩的中年妇女，原来这位妇女去吉林看望丈夫，车票和钱都丢了。雷锋用自己的津贴费买了一张去吉林的火车票塞到大嫂手里，大嫂含着眼泪问：“同志，你叫什么名字，是哪个单位的？”雷锋说：“我叫解放军，就住在中国。”
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
审题构思——分析透彻是前提
审题谋篇
1.体裁： ；
2.时态： 为主；
3.人称： 为主；
4.脉络： 第一段：开头语；
第二段：介绍故事内容；
第三段：表达自己的观点。
分步写作
1.用词造句
①无私地
②作为……而有名
③一个中年妇女
④毫不犹豫
⑤一次雷锋外出值勤，在沈阳站换车的时候，看见一群人围着一个背着小孩的中年妇女。
Once Lei Feng went out on duty and was changing trains in Shenyang railway station
with a child on her back surrounded by many people.
⑥我们需要向雷锋同志学习的是我们要时刻准备着帮助有困难的人们。
is that we should always be ready to lend a hand to people who are in trouble.
2.连句成篇
答案与解析
审题谋篇
1.故事评论类
2.一般现在时
3.第三人称
分步写作
1.① selflessly
② be known as
③ a middle-aged woman
④ without hesitation
⑤ when he saw a middle-aged woman
⑥ What we need to learn from Lei Feng
2. One possible version ：
Lei Feng was known as an example of helping others selflessly. Here is a story of him.
Once Lei Feng went out on duty and was changing trains in Sheng high railway station when he saw a middle-aged woman with a child on her back surrounded by many people. The woman was going to see her husband in Jilin but unfortunately she lost the ticket and all her money. Without hesitation, Lei feng bought a ticket to Jilin using his pocket money and gave it to the woman. The woman was deeply moved. With tears in her eyes, she asked Lei Feng what his name was and where he worked. Lei Feng answered “I am a soldier and live in china.”
To help others is not a difficult thing. What we need to learn from Lei Feng is that we should always be ready to lend a hand to people who are in trouble.
2 / 2
故事评论类写作
文本解读
评论性文章的时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第一和第三人称为主。
故事评论类文章要包括故事梗概，即故事的时间、地点、人物、事件和最有印象的部分，以及对故事的分析和评论。
写故事评论类文章时要注意紧扣“故事”与“评论”两点，评论可以从多方面进行，但一篇评论的中心观点只能有一个。在写作手法上要注意两点：一是点面结合；二是观点与材料的统一。
高中阶段的评论类写作大多是指导性写作（guided writing），即根据所给材料进行写作。
写作要点
一、写作要素
首先要准确审题，理清行文脉络，拟出写作要点。其次为了使内容更充实，要添加细节，在写作时根据句子间的逻辑关系，对各个要点进行适当扩充与整合，可以用generally，so，in addition等进行衔接，使文章衔接紧密，过渡自然。最后连句成文。
二、基本结构
本类写作可采用“三段式”行文，第一段推荐一部小说并简述内容或者讲述一个故事；第二段给出故事内容或自己对故事的分析；第三段结尾，表达自己的观点及原因。
常用句式：
1.It is set in（the 1930s，the sixteenth century，during the French Revolution...）
2.It is based on（a story，a play，a book by…with the same name）
3.The plot of the story is（interesting，impressive...
4.There are some sad moments，especially when…
5.What moved us to tears is…
6.The character is so warm-hearted that she…
7. In the end, the story finishes with...
8. Generally speaking/On the whole/All things considered, it is a masterpiece…
9. The story tells us if only we can…
10. I wish you could…
范文展示
假定你是李华，你班正在进行讲故事比赛，请根据以下提示写一篇英语小故事，并发表自己的看法次雷锋外出值勤，在沈阳站换车的时候，看见一群人围着一个背着小孩的中年妇女，原来这位妇女去吉林看望丈夫，车票和钱都丢了。雷锋用自己的津贴费买了一张去吉林的火车票塞到大嫂手里，大嫂含着眼泪问：“同志，你叫什么名字，是哪个单位的？”雷锋说：“我叫解放军，就住在中国。”
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
审题构思——分析透彻是前提
审题谋篇
1.体裁： ；
2.时态： 为主；
3.人称： 为主；
4.脉络： 第一段：开头语；
第二段：介绍故事内容；
第三段：表达自己的观点。
分步写作
1.用词造句
①无私地
②作为……而有名
③一个中年妇女
④毫不犹豫
⑤一次雷锋外出值勤，在沈阳站换车的时候，看见一群人围着一个背着小孩的中年妇女。
Once Lei Feng went out on duty and was changing trains in Shenyang railway station
with a child on her back surrounded by many people.
⑥我们需要向雷锋同志学习的是我们要时刻准备着帮助有困难的人们。
is that we should always be ready to lend a hand to people who are in trouble.
2.连句成篇
答案与解析
审题谋篇
1.故事评论类
2.一般现在时
3.第三人称
分步写作
1.① selflessly
② be known as
③ a middle-aged woman
④ without hesitation
⑤ when he saw a middle-aged woman
⑥ What we need to learn from Lei Feng
2. One possible version ：
Lei Feng was known as an example of helping others selflessly. Here is a story of him.
Once Lei Feng went out on duty and was changing trains in Sheng high railway station when he saw a middle-aged woman with a child on her back surrounded by many people. The woman was going to see her husband in Jilin but unfortunately she lost the ticket and all her money. Without hesitation, Lei feng bought a ticket to Jilin using his pocket money and gave it to the woman. The woman was deeply moved. With tears in her eyes, she asked Lei Feng what his name was and where he worked. Lei Feng answered “I am a soldier and live in china.”
To help others is not a difficult thing. What we need to learn from Lei Feng is that we should always be ready to lend a hand to people who are in trouble.
2 / 2