Unit5 写作素养练
作文句式运用(根据汉语提示,仿写本单元重点句式)
1.对于今天比赛失败,你有什么看法?
about losing the game today?
2.我们最该感恩的是我们的父母和老师。
we should be most grateful to.
3.互联网的发明注定要改变我们相互交流的方式。
The invention of the Internet the way we communicate with each other.
4.昨天他在进行微波实验时,注意到某件非常不寻常的事。
Yesterday he was doing experiments with microwaves he noticed something very unusual.
5.我原以为会很难与经理相处,事实却并非如此。
I thought the manager would be difficult to deal with. it isn’t.
6.带把伞吧,以防下雨。
Take an umbrella, it rains.
7.在某种程度上,语言反映了社会。
Language is a reflection of a society .
8.为了过低碳生活,一些人宁愿坐公共汽车也不愿开车去上班。
To live a low-carbon life,some people drive a car to work.
Ⅱ.应用文写作
假如你是李华,想邀请外教John一起观看5月14日在北京剧院(Beijing Theatre)上演的中国民族歌剧经典选段(Chinese Opera Excerpts)音乐会。请给他写封邮件。
内容包括:
1.音乐会时间、地点;
2.音乐会内容。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Ⅲ.读后续写
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
An 80-year-old man was sitting on the sofa in his house along with his 45-year-old highly educated son. Suddenly a crow(乌鸦)perched栖息)on their window.
The father asked his son, “What is this?"The son replied,“It is a crow.”
After a few minutes,the father asked his son for the second time,“What is this?”The son said,“Father,I have just now told you,it’s a crow!”
After a little while,the old father again asked his son for the third time,“What is this?”
At this time some expression of irritation(恼怒)was felt in the son’s tone when he said to his father with a rebuff(生硬回绝).“It’s a crow,a crow.” A little while later,the father again asked his son the fourth time What is this?”
This time,the son shouted at his father, “Why do you keep asking me the same question again and again,although I have told you so many times ‘IT IS A CROW’. Are you not able to understand this ”
A little while later the father went to his room and came back with an old tattered(发皱的)diary,which he had maintained since his son was born. On opening a page,he asked his son to read that page. When the son read it the following words were written in the diary:
“Today my little son aged three was sitting with me on the sofa,when a crow was sitting on the window. My son asked me 23 times what it was,and I replied to him all
23 times that it was a crow. I hugged him lovingly each time he asked me the same question. I did not at all feel irritated but I rather felt affection for my innocent son.”
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:
After reading the diary
Paragraph 2:
Feeling ashamed, the son got down on his knees before his father.
Ⅳ.概要写作
阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Scientists in London say they have found the best diet for both humans and the planet. If the world followed the so-called“planetary health” diet,the scientists told Reuters that each year more than 11 million early deaths could be prevented. Scientists say that the way we produce and eat food is very bad for the planet. For the health of the planet, they claim the same diet would reduce greenhouse gases and save more land, water and animals.
Tim Lang, a professor at Britain’s University of London, co-led the research. He told Reuters, “The food we eat and how we produce it determines the health of people and the planet, and we are currently getting this seriously wrong.” Lang added that the world’s population is expected to grow to 10 billion people by 2050. If we want to feed everyone, he explained, we all need to change what we eat and the way we eat by “improving food production and reducing food waste.”
Well, what do you eat on the planetary health diet The scientists who created this diet say it is largely plant-based but still has small amounts of dairy, fish and meat. The diet calls for cutting red meat and sugar by 50 percent and doubling the amount of nuts, fruits, vegetables and legumes.
Food situations around the world are not equal. In certain areas, this would mean great changes. People in North America, for example, eat 6.5 times the recommended amount of red meat. On the other hand, people in South Asia-eat only half the amount suggested by the new planetary health diet. Meeting the targets for vegetables would need big changes in other areas. In sub-Saharan Africa, people on average eat 7.5 times the suggested amount of vegetables like potatoes and cassava.
The scientists admit their goal will be difficult to achieve. But for them doing nothing is also not an option Willet said, “If we can’t quite make it, it’s better to try and get as close as we can.”
答案与解析
Ⅰ.
1.How do you feel
2. It is our parents and teachers that/who
3 is to change
4. when
5.As a matter of fact
6. in case
7.to some extent
8. would rather take a bus than
Ⅱ. One possible version:
Dear John,
As a student who admires you, I am writing this letter to invite you to go to a concert on Chinese Opera Excerpts.
This concert will be held in Beijing Theatre on14th May. The Opera Excerpts at this concert are all not only well-known in China but also meaningful and full of philosophy. Opera is a comprehensive acting act. It blends the acting methods of singing, reading, fighting and dancing to tell stories and describe characters. This activity is of great importance, through which you can know more about Chinese culture and make lots of Chinese friends.
It’s very kind of you to read my letter. I will be grateful if you take my invitation seriously. I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Ⅲ. One possible version:
Paragraph 1:
After reading the diary, the son was filled with tears and began to reflect on the days when he used to sit together with his father. His father would patiently answer the same question all 23 times without feeling irritation while his father asked him the same question just four times! The son thought to himself: If I attain old age, how will my son look at me Will he think of me as a burden Will he shout at me because of my poor sight, poor hearing or poor understanding!
Paragraph 2:
Feeling ashamed, the son got down on his knees before his father. He made an apology to his father begging his father to forgive him for his bad behavior. He said this aloud “I promise to see you happy forever, Dad. It is you who have cared for me since I was a little child, showering your selfless affection on me. You worked hard to make money so that I could afford to go to university. I will serve you in the day.”
Ⅳ.One possible version:
Scientists claim they have obtained the best diet benefiting both humans and the planet. Tim Lang, the leader of the research, emphasized the significance of changing the food and the way we eat. In other words, it is more scientific for diet to be more based on plants than animals. However, the food condition is not globally balanced. Tough the target is difficult to realize, it is worth trying.
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