材料作文
1.请你结合自己的学习与生活经历,写一篇英语短文,谈一谈你的理想,逐梦路上的艰苦经历及你对追梦的看法。
以下信息供参考:
What’s your dream
Share one hard experience on the way to your dream.
How do you feel about achieving dreams
good grades, runner, singer...
fail, practice, keep, give up...
difficult, no one, easily...
要求:
(1)词数:80~100个。
(2)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
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2.假如你是李华,这个周日,你的爸爸妈妈要去照顾生病的爷爷,你将独自在家生活一天。妈妈担心你不能照顾好自己,于是你制定了一个生活计划。根据以下要点,用英语写一篇短文,告诉妈妈你要如何度过这个周日。
早上 七点半起床。早饭后收拾自己的房间。
上午 写作业。
中午 做简单的午饭。午饭后休息半小时。
下午 和同学打篮球。三点去上钢琴课。 回家的路上买汉堡作为晚饭。
晚上 自拟两项要做的事情: 1.…… 2.……
你认为……
Dear Mum, please don’t worry about me. I’ve got a plan for this Sunday.
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3.近来,我校正进行创建文明校园工作,作为一名中学生,请根据下面提示信息写一封倡议书,呼吁大家提升文明素养,做文明礼仪的倡导者。
(1)有礼貌,见到老师要向老师问好;
(2)在图书馆要保持安静,不大声喧哗;
(3)不乱扔垃圾,保持教室及社区环境卫生;
(4)在路上,要遵守交通规则;
(5)你认为……
要求:
1.要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
2.词数:80~100个,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Recently, we are trying to make our school become the civilized school. As a student, it’s our duty to _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4.你校组织的英语夏令营向学生提供了两种住宿方式。有的学生喜欢单住,有的喜欢合住。请根据提示,用英语写一篇短文,向夏令营简报English Camp投稿,选择你喜欢的一种住宿方式,并阐述理由。
Living alone Living with roommates
安静 自由 舒适 便宜 开心 互相帮助
要求:
1. 依据你选择的住宿方式,将标题补充完整。
2. 理由必须包括表中所选择的住宿方式的相应内容,可适当发挥。
3. 词数:80~100个;开头已给出,不计入总词数。Living
During the summer camp, some students like to live alone, while others may want to share rooms with their roommates. As for me, I prefer to
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5.假设你是红光中学的李明,你听说你的好朋友Tony最近感到疲倦,对此你非常难过。请根据以下提示给Tony提一些建议。
1. 首先早晨吃早餐对你来说非常重要;
2. 每天花费半小时锻炼身体,如跑步,做操……
3. 早睡早起保证充足的睡眠;
4. 放松心情多听音乐等;
5. ……
注意:
①词数:80~100词,短文的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
②短文需包括以上所有要点,内容可适当发挥,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tony,
I’m sorry to hear you always feel tired recently. Let me give you some advice.
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Yours,
Li Ming
6.假设你是李华,在英语课上根据以下提示和同学们分享你独自在家的一段经历。
(1)上周一你爸爸妈妈去度假了,没有带你。因为你需要上学。
(2)每天早晨闹钟响起后,你按时起床。做早饭、吃完后骑车上学。
(3)晚饭后先做作业然后再看半小时电视。十点前上床睡觉。
(4)父母回来后……
要求:
(1)词数: 80-100字 (2)不必逐字翻译,可适当补充。
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7.假如你是学校校报英语专栏小记者,请根据以下要点写一篇短文,描述你校学生李华的寒假生活,并表达你的想法。
(1) 寒假里按照计划写作业,复习功课;
(2) 起床后和爸爸一起跑步,吃妈妈做的早餐;
(3) 饭前帮忙摆放餐桌,饭后洗碗;
(4) 和爸爸妈妈在电视里观看了2022北京冬奥会的开幕式和比赛;
(5) 你认为……
要求:
(1) 词数:80~100个。
(2) 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
(3) 要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
参考词汇:2022北京冬奥会开幕式the Opening Ceremony of the Olympic Winter Games Beijing 2022
Li Hua, a student of our school, spent a meaningful winter holiday this year. He _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8.为丰富初三学生课余生活,上周末你校组织了一次社会实践活动,年级所有师生都参加了此次活动。请根据以下内容提示,用英语写一篇短文,介绍此次活动,并谈谈自己的感想。
活动内容:
(1)上午游览人民公园:欣赏美景、载歌载舞、拍照留念;吃午餐并做好周围卫生。
(2)下午参观文化广场:观看图片展,了解祖国和家乡70多年巨变。
你的感想:
(1)在活动中,老师和同学们互相帮助,你被深深打动;
(2)活动开阔了眼界、增长了知识;
(3)……(至少一点)
要求:
(1)词数100左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
(2)所写内容必须包括内容提示中所提供的信息,并可作适当的发挥。
(3)不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
参考词汇:人民公园the People’s Park,文化广场Cultural Square
In order to enrich Junior 3 students’ after-school life, our school organized a social practice activity last weekend. All the teachers and students of our grade _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9.请你根据以下内容提示,以“My Teachers Are Volunteers”为题,为学校广播站英语专栏写一篇短文,介绍你的老师们做交通志愿者的事情。
(1)每天放学后,老师们都会在学校旁边的路口做交通志愿者。
(2)老师们穿着红色的马甲,拿着旗子,保证学生安全。
(3)尽管夏天很热,冬天很冷,但老师们始终坚持值班。
(4)多年来,学生从未发生过交通事故。
(5)你觉得……
参考词汇:马甲 vest
要求:
(1)词数:80~100个。
(2)短文的题目和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
My Teachers Are Volunteers
When school is over every day,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
10.假如你是李华,上个月你在“中国航天日”参加了科技馆举行的航天俱乐部活动,请根据以下要点写一篇短文,描述这次活动,并表达你的想法。
(1)我听了宇航员的故事,学习到了科学精神。
(2)我做了物理实验,增长了科学知识。
(3)我参观了展览,使我对太空旅行更感兴趣了。
(4)我认为……
参考词汇:
科学精神 scientific spirit
太空旅行 space travel
要求:
(1)词数:80~100个。
(2)题目和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
The activities on Space Day of China
Last month, I ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考答案:
1.例文
Everyone has his own dream. My dream is to have good grades.
No pains no gains. No one achieves their dream easily. I have done a lot to improve my grades. I got up early every day and reviewed what I learnt the day before. I did lots of practice and listened to the teacher carefully. Though it would be tired sometimes, I never gave up. Finally, my grades improved a lot.
I am so proud to achieve my dream.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示问题及表格中给出的关键信息,结合自身经历写短文谈谈你的理想、逐梦经历及对追梦的看法。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己的梦想是什么;
第二步,介绍自己的逐梦经历;
第三步,小结,谈谈自己对追梦的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①achieve one’s dream实现某人的梦想
②lots of许多
③give up放弃
④be proud to do sth.为做某事而骄傲
[高分句型]
①No pains no gains.(谚语,意为“不劳无获”)
②I got up early every day and reviewed what I learnt the day before.(what引导宾语从句;and连接并列谓语)
③Though it would be tired sometimes, I never gave up.(Though引导让步状语从句)
2.例文:
Dear Mum, please don’t worry about me. I’ve got a plan for this Sunday.
I will get up at half past seven and then I will tidy up my room after breakfast. In the morning, I will do my homework. I plan to make a simple lunch and have a rest for half an hour. I will play basketball with my classmates and go to the piano lesson at 3 o’clock. I will buy a hamburger for my dinner on my way home. In the evening, I will watch the news for 30 minutes and go to bed at 10 o’clock.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据表格提示内容,介绍自己的周日计划,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“如何度过这个周日”来引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。以时间顺序来介绍各时间段要做什么。
[亮点词汇]
①get up起床
②tidy up收拾,整理
③have a rest休息
④on my way home在回家的路上
[高分句型]
I will get up at half past seven and then I will tidy up my room after breakfast.(and连接并列句)
3.例文
Recently, we are trying to make our school become the civilized school. As a student, it’s our duty to call on everyone to improve their civilization and become advocates of civilized manners.
We should be polite and say hello to the teacher when we see him. When we are in the library, we should keep quiet and not make any noise. Do not litter and keep the classroom and community clean. On the way, we should obey the traffic rules.
I think if we do this, our campus will be better and better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示信息,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。用呼吁我们成为文明行为的倡导者引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“礼貌、环境、遵守交通规则等”几个方面重点介绍;
第三步,书写结语。表达“希望我们的校园将会越来越好”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①try to do努力做某事
②call on呼吁
③keep quiet保持安静
④better and better越来越好
[高分句型]
①As a student, it’s our duty to call on everyone to improve their civilization and become advocates of civilized manners.(It固定句型)
②I think if we do this, our campus will be better and better.(省略that的宾语从句和if引导的条件状语从句)
4.例文
Living
During the summer camp, some students like to live alone, while others may want to share rooms with their roommates. As for me, I prefer to live alone. First, living alone is quiet. I can study and read books in a quiet environment. It can make me sleep well at night. Second, I feel free when I am alone. I need not worry to trouble my roommates even when I want to study late into the night. Also, I can enjoy a comfortable life and there is no need to share the bathroom with other students. Beside, it is easier to keep the room tidy if I live alone because less rubbish is left.
Given the reasons above, I choose to live alone.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍学生们对于住宿的看法不一样;
第二步,介绍自己喜欢的住宿方式以及理由。
[亮点词汇]
①share sth with sb 与某人分享某物
②prefer to do sth 更喜欢做某事
③there is no need to do sth 没必要做某事
[高分句型]
①Second, I feel free when I am alone(when引导时间状语从句)
② Beside, it is easier to keep the room tidy if I live alone because less rubbish is left(if引导条件状语从句)
5.例文
Dear Tony,
I’m sorry to hear you always feel tired recently. Let me give you some advice.
First of all, it’s very important for you to have breakfast in the morning. Secondly, try spending half an hour exercising, such as running, doing exercise and so on, which are good for your health. At the same time, as the proverb says, “Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.’’ so you’d better go to sleep before ten at night to make sure you can have enough energy. Finally, you should listen to the music to relax yourself.
I hope the above suggestions can do good to you. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已部分给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“内容提示”中的信息,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,对Tony的近况表示难过并表明自己要给出建议;
第二步,逐条给出内容提示中的建议;
第三步,期望自己的建议能够帮助到Tony并期待回信。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②be good for对……有好处
[高分句型]
①First of all, it’s very important for you to have breakfast in the morning.(it的固定句型,It is+adj+for sb+to do sth“对于某人来说做某事是怎么样的”)
②Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.(早睡早起身体好)
③I hope the above suggestions can do good to you.(省略that的宾语从句)
6.例文
Last Monday my parents were away on vacation but I couldn’t join them, because I had to attend school. They worried that I couldn’t look after myself. But I did it.
Every day I got up on time after the alarm clock rang. I cooked breakfast and had it, and then I went to school by bike. After school I tried to cook dinner first, and then I did my homework. Although I burnt my food, I still liked it. When the homework was finished, I would spend half an hour watching TV. Finally, I went to bed before ten o’clock.
When my parents came back, they were so surprised and happy! I felt so proud of myself.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求描述李华独自在家的一段经历,注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步:描述为什么李华独自在家;
第二步:描述李华独自在家一天的日程安排;
第三步:描述李华父母回来后的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①attend school上学
②on vacation度假
[高分句型]
①Although I burnt my food, I still liked it.(让步状语从句)
②When the homework was finished, I would spend half an hour watching TV.(一般过去时被动语态;动名词作宾语)
7.例文:
Li Hua, a student of our school, spent a meaningful winter holiday this year. He did his homework and went over lessons according to his plan. After he got up, he went running with his father in the neighbourhood so that he could be energetic the whole day. After running, he had breakfast, which his mother made for him. Before meals, he helped his parents lay the table. When meals were over, he washed all the dishes on his own. Li Hua, with his parents, watched the matches and the Opening Ceremony of the Olympic Winter Games Beijing 2022 on TV. He was proud of being a Chinese.
As far as I’m concerned, Li Hua did everything according to his plan. We should make a plan before doing things. We are supposed to help our parents do some housework. The Olympic Winter Games will be held in the capital of our country. I take pride in it.
【详解】1. 题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。针对李华的寒假生活进行写作。具体的内容要包含所给的提示,可适当发挥。
2. 写作指导:本文以一般过去时为主,人称以第三人称为主。第一段开头已给出,可以接着介绍李华寒假的生活情况;最后一段表达自己的想法。写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。
8.例文
In order to enrich Junior 3 students’ after-school life, our school organized a social practice activity last weekend. All the teachers and students of our grade took part in it. We visited the People’s Park in the morning. We enjoyed the beautiful scenery, sang and danced together there. We took some photos there. We visited the Civic Square in the afternoon. We watched the photo exhibition to understand the great changes in our motherland and hometown in the past 70 years. We deepened the feelings between our classmates and teachers through this activity. This activity broadened our horizons and increased our knowledge. I was so inspired that I was determined to study hard and serve the motherland. I decided to spread the achievements of China to the outside world.
What a meaningful activity it was!
【详解】1.题干解读:本题是一篇材料作文,根据所给提示,介绍上周进行的一次社会实践活动,并谈谈自己的感想。
2.写作指导:时态用一般过去时,人称用第一人称。写作时首先承接开头,然后具体描述活动内容,最后谈谈自己的感想。注意要点涵盖全面,上下文衔接运用恰当的连词,无拼写和语法错误。
9.[例文]
My Teachers Are Volunteers
When school is over every day, our teachers will be traffic safety volunteers at the crossing near our school. With flags in their hands, they put on red vest to ensure students’ safety. Although summer is hot and winter is cold, our teachers are always on duty. Hard work pays off. Over the years, students have never had a traffic accident. I think traffic safety is a common topic everyone talks about everyday. But there is still some people who don’t have strong sense of traffic safety. Our teachers have made a contribution to our school and increased the students’ awareness of safety.
【详解】1.题干解读:本题为材料作文,要求根据所给要点提示写一篇短文,介绍你的老师们做交通志愿者的事情。
2.写作指导:写作时人称应用第一人称,时态应用现在时。写作时所有要点都应包含在内,并且在最后要就这件事谈谈自己的看法。文章应做到要点齐全,条理清晰,不要出现单词拼写及语法方面的错误。
10.例文:
The activities on Space Day of China
Last month, I took part in the space club activities held by the Science and Technology Museum on Space Day of China. In the Science and Technology Museum, first of all, I heard some stories about astronauts and learned the scientific spirit. Next, we did some physics experiments to increase our knowledge of science. Finally, it also made me more interested in space travel by participating in the exhibition.
I think we should take part in more of these activities. These activities can keep our thirst for space knowledge alive and enhance our enthusiasm for science as well.
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于材料作文。根据要点写一篇短文,描述你参加的这次航天俱乐部活动,并表达你的想法。
2.写作指导:本文应该用第一人称来叙述故事内容;时态采用一般过去时为主。本文可以采用两段式写作,第一段描述这次活动的内容,第二段则表达对此次活动的看法。