外研版（2019） 必修 第一册 Unit 4 Friends forever- After twenty years 续写课件（16张PPT）
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| 名称 | 外研版（2019） 必修 第一册 Unit 4 Friends forever- After twenty years 续写课件（16张PPT） |  | |
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| 科目 | 英语 | ||
| 更新时间 | 2023-03-11 23:13:40 | ||
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(共16张PPT)
Continuation Writing
After Twenty Years
by O.Henry
二、细读首句，构思框架
遵循“两段首句定一框，二框二首正能量”原则
三、增加细节，开始写作
在已定框架范围内，依据情节发展和生活常识，推断故事中人物所见，所闻，所思，所做等
雷区：太过离奇，对话，长句过多
注意：双线并行-同时注重情节线和情感线
情感线：
How to express happiness？
wild with joy
Wild with joy，sb...
Wild with joy, Tom went to hug him finally.
tears rolling down one’s cheeks
Tom was wild with joy, tears rolling down his cheeks.
情感线万能结尾：
I was sure that there was something glorious shining in his eyes and I got to know it was the grace of love.
(courage, friendship, forgiveness, gratitude, kindness)
“All these years，I always wake up with the guilty of putting you into the prison.” _________________________
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The man standing here had wrinkles(皱纹) on his face，and grey beard around his face. It was cloudy. With wind blowing their grey hair, they kept still for a while. All the things came back to Jimmy’s mind. He had mixed feelings, tears rolling down his cheeks.“I am really really sorry for that,” begged Jimmy.
“All these years, I always wake up with the guilty of putting you into the prison. ”Jimmy added. Eventually, Bob took a step forward and gave him a loving hug. The old man patted him on the shoulder and comforted him, “ It's not your fault. I deserve the punishment.” Jimmy was sure that there was something glorious shining in Bob’s eyes and he got to know it was the grace of forgiveness.
Homework
1.Polish your writing
2.Read another novel
written by O·Henry
Continuation Writing
After Twenty Years
by O.Henry
二、细读首句，构思框架
遵循“两段首句定一框，二框二首正能量”原则
三、增加细节，开始写作
在已定框架范围内，依据情节发展和生活常识，推断故事中人物所见，所闻，所思，所做等
雷区：太过离奇，对话，长句过多
注意：双线并行-同时注重情节线和情感线
情感线：
How to express happiness？
wild with joy
Wild with joy，sb...
Wild with joy, Tom went to hug him finally.
tears rolling down one’s cheeks
Tom was wild with joy, tears rolling down his cheeks.
情感线万能结尾：
I was sure that there was something glorious shining in his eyes and I got to know it was the grace of love.
(courage, friendship, forgiveness, gratitude, kindness)
“All these years，I always wake up with the guilty of putting you into the prison.” _________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The man standing here had wrinkles(皱纹) on his face，and grey beard around his face. It was cloudy. With wind blowing their grey hair, they kept still for a while. All the things came back to Jimmy’s mind. He had mixed feelings, tears rolling down his cheeks.“I am really really sorry for that,” begged Jimmy.
“All these years, I always wake up with the guilty of putting you into the prison. ”Jimmy added. Eventually, Bob took a step forward and gave him a loving hug. The old man patted him on the shoulder and comforted him, “ It's not your fault. I deserve the punishment.” Jimmy was sure that there was something glorious shining in Bob’s eyes and he got to know it was the grace of forgiveness.
Homework
1.Polish your writing
2.Read another novel
written by O·Henry