北京中考英语材料作文专项训练（含范文）

材料作文
1．根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
每个家庭都有独特的价值观念（value）。有的家庭崇尚勤奋（diligence），有的家庭强调诚信（honesty），有的家庭倡导民主（democracy），有的家庭重视独立（independence）……请你写一篇短文，介绍一下你家的价值观是什么，你是如何形成这个价值观的（或者说如何拥有这个品质的），以及你从中收获了什么。
提示词语：kindness, influence, teach, grow, follow
提示问题：
1. What is your family value
2. How did you develop it
3. What have you benefited from it
Our family value
Every family has their own values. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．成长与变化，是生命的馈赠。
某英文网站正在开展以“改变”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英文写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你进入初中以来最大的改变，它是如何发生的，以及你的收获。
提示词语：used to, shy, face challenges, brave
提示问题：
●What is your biggest change
●How did it happen
●What have you learned from the experience
I have changed a lot in the last few years.
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3．某英文网站正在开展以“提升口语表达技能”为主题的征文活动，假定你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你平时是如何提升英语口语表达技能的，取得了哪些成效。
提示词语：practice, conversation, join, communicate, fluently(流畅地)
提示问题：
How do you usually improve your spoken English
What have you achieved
It’s important to improve our skills of speaking English. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4．“世界是一本书，而不旅行的人只读了其中的一页。”—— 奥古斯狄尼斯。
某英文网站正在开展以“我的旅行”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英文写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你的一次旅行，去了哪里，你看到了什么，做了什么，以及你的收获。
提示词语：stay, famous, unforgettable
提示问题：
●Where did you go
●What did you see and what did you do
●How did you feel
My Journey
The world is so beautiful and I want to see it with my own eyes.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5．进入初三，相信你已经开始体验新的生活节奏了。而在过去一年，你也一定有很多值得铭记的时刻和瞬间，以及关于成长的宝贵经验。现在学校英语社团公众号计划做一期主题为“学长学姐有话说”的推送。请你用英语给八年级的学弟学妹写寄语，简要谈谈你对初二生活的看法，并给他们提一些建议，帮助他们拥有更加有意义更加充实的初二成长体验。
提示词语：busy, exercise, support, make progress
提示问题：1）What do you think of your life in Grade 8 Why
2） What tips do you have for the 8th-graders
Dear 8th graders,
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6．节日，是指生活中值得纪念的重要日子。一年中有很多不同的节日，传统节日如春节、中秋节；还有母亲节、儿童节、国庆和新年等。每个节日都有不同的庆祝方式和意义。
假如你是李华，你校英语社团正在开展线上国际交流分享活动，征集大家对于节日的感想。请你用英语给公众号写一篇文稿，介绍一个节日，包括时间、庆祝方式，以及这个节日对你的意义。提示词语∶ get together, enjoy, flowers, wish
提示问题∶1) When is the festival
2) How do people usually celebrate it
3) What does it mean to you
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7．某英文网站正在开展以“自主学习（autonomous learning）”为主题的征文活动，假定你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你在自主学习方面有哪些具体做法，取得了什么效果。
提示词语：plan, prepare, review, read, progress
提示问题：
●How do you learn by autonomous learning
●What have you achieved
It’s very important for us to learn by autonomous learning in our life. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8．根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作，所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
5月18日是国际博物馆日，今年的主题是“博物馆的力量”（The power of Museums）。假如你是李华，你校英语社团要开展线上国际交流活动，其公众号正在进行关于中国博物馆的系列推送。请你用英语给公众号留言，推荐一个你喜欢的中国博物馆，对其作简要的介绍并说明推荐理由。
提示词语：exhibition, exciting, history, provide, make, learn
提示问题：
What is your favorite museum in China
What is the museum like
Why do you like it
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9．假如你是李华，你校英语社团要开展线上国际交流活动，其公众号正在进行关于中国博物馆的系列推送。请你用英语给公众号留言，推荐一个你喜欢的中国博物馆，说明推荐理由并谈谈参观博物馆的益处。
提示词语：exhibition, exciting, history, provide, make, learn
提示问题：1. What is your favorite museum in China
2. Why do you like it
3. What are the benefits of visiting museums
Message Board: My favorite Museum in China ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua
10．读一书，增一智。读书，不仅能开拓视野，陶冶情操，更能增长智慧。
某英文网站正在开展以“读书伴我成长”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你通常都读哪类书籍，以及阅读给你带来的益处。
提示词语：storybooks, improve, deal with problems, meaningful
提示问题：●What kind of books do you usually read
●What benefits can reading bring you
根据所给提示，完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
Reading plays an important role in our life. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考答案：
1．例文：
Our family value
Every family has their own values. In my family, honesty plays the most important role. When I was a child, my parents always told me that I should hold an honest attitude not only to the people but also to the work I do. Therefore, I keep it in my mind all the time. For example, I never cheat in exams. And I always tell the truth.
Being an honest person makes me popular with my friends, because everyone likes making friends with honest people. And I will stick to the idea that anything bad, although it is small, should never be done and I always try to remain honest.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏“要点”中从你的家庭价值观中获得的好处，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，由于短文开头已给出，故接下来介绍自己家的价值观——诚信；
第二步，描述自己是如何形成这个价值观的；
第三步，介绍自己从家庭价值观中收获了什么，并表明要“坚持诚信做人”。
[亮点词汇]
①hold a/an...attitude to对……持有……的态度
②not only...but also...不仅……而且……
③keep sth. in mind牢记……
④all the time一直
⑤tell the truth说实话
⑥(be) popular with在……中受欢迎
⑦stick to坚持
[高分句型]
①When I was a child, my parents always told me that I should hold an honest attitude not only to the people but also to the work I do.（when引导的时间状语从句；that引导的宾语从句）
②Being an honest person makes me popular with my friends, because everyone likes making friends with honest people.（动名词短语作主语；because引导的原因状语从句）
2．例文：
My Biggest Change
I have changed a lot in the last few years. The biggest change is that my English has improved a lot. I used to be shy and faced lots of challenges in learning English. One day, my English teacher asked me to go to her office after school. She helped me with my problems. We made a plan for my English learning. She also encouraged me to answer questions. With her help, my English has improved a lot and I become more confident and braver.
I am proud of my change and I feel that I am so lucky to have an English teacher. I like her very much. I really want to say thanks to her.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己在过去几年中的改变以及它是如何发生的；
第二步，介绍自己的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①used to do过去常常
②help sb with sth帮助某人做某事
③be proud of以……为傲
[高分句型]
①I am proud of my change and I feel that I am so lucky to have an English teacher.（and连接并列句；that引导宾语从句）
②I really want to say thanks to her.（动词不定式作宾语）
3．例文：
It’s important to improve our skills of speaking English. I used to have poor spoken English, but I improved it through hard work. Here are some ways to improve my spoken English. First of all, I practice my spoken English by reading English every day. Second, I improve my spoken English by making English friends and have conversations with them. Third, I improve my spoken English by joining an English club. Finally, l improve my spoken English by visiting an English restaurant. Now my spoken English is very good. I can communicate with foreigners fluently.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：要求根据提示词和提示问题，谈谈如何提升英语口语表达技能，以及取得了哪些成效。学生不要遗漏提示中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先讲“提高口语的重要性”引出话题；
第二步，具体阐述提升英语口语的方法；
第三步，介绍取得的成效。
[亮点词汇]
①First of all首先
②have conversations with sb.与某人谈话
③communicate with与某人谈话
[高分句型]
①It’s important to improve our skills of speaking English.（It固定句型）
②First of all, I practice my spoken English by reading English every day. （by +doing sth.通过做某事）
4．例文
My Journey
The world is so beautiful and I want to see it with my own eyes. I went to the famous Beihai Park with my classmates this May and we had a great time.
We arrived there early in the morning. The air was cool and fresh. As we walked along the lake, we saw many people doing exercises and dancing. We also took lots of pictures of the beautiful flowers in the gardens. Then we crossed the bridge and climbed up the hill. It was great to enjoy the views from the top. In the afternoon, we took a boat tour on the lake and we sang happily together.
It was a wonderful and unforgettable trip. We all felt relaxed and happy. I’m looking forward to visiting more beautiful places in our country.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为记叙文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据所给要点介绍你的一次旅行，注意不要遗漏“旅行的感受”的写作，适当增添细节，使得行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，介绍去旅行的地方及时间；
第二步，具体介绍在旅行中看到了什么以及做了什么；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①take lots of pictures拍很多照片
②look forward to期待
③climb up the hill爬上小山
④do exercises做锻炼
[高分句型]
①It was great to enjoy the views from the top.（it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正主语）
②As we walked along the lake, we saw many people doing exercises and dancing.（as引导时间状语从句）
5．范文：
Dear 8th-graders,
How time flies! Now I’m graduating from our school. In Grade 8, I have learned a lot. Although it was a little hard, I made great progress in my grades. I thank my eighth grade life, which helps me grow up. At the moment, I would like to share my experience of school life with you. It is not enough to just study hard. There are many good ways to improve our study. Different subjects need different ways. But one thing in common is taking notes carefully in class, and review them after class. Another thing is asking questions during or after class. Besides, don’t be afraid of making mistakes, try to learn from mistakes. You should also exercise more and keep healthy because it is the most important thing for you.
Wish you all the best.
【详解】[整体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：主要采用“一般现在时”
③提示：文章应包含所有提示内容，需要包含自己的看法、建议。
[写作步骤]
第一步：阐述自己对于八年级生活的看法，并分享自己在学习上的一些建议；
第二步：表达祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①make progress in取得进步
②in common共同点
③be afraid of 害怕
④make mistakes犯错误
[高分句型]
①Although it was very hard, I made great progress in my grades.（让步状语从句）
②It is not enough to just study hard.（it作形式主语）
③You should also exercise more and keep healthy because it is the most important thing for you.（原因状语从句）
6．范文：
There are some traditional festivals in China. My favourite Chinese festival is the Spring Festival because I have lots of fun during the Spring Festival. The Spring Festival is a popular holiday in our country. It is in January or February. Our family get together. We have a big dinner in my grandparents’ home. I always eat a lot of delicious food. My cousin and I both get red packets from our grandparents. My parents usually go shopping with me. We buy some nice clothes for ourselves.
We often watch TV at home and sometimes read books. Sometimes, we greet other people on the phone. The Spring Festival is the most important for us Chinese because it’s the beginning of a new year. I’m always happy during the Spring Festival.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文；
②时态：采用“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求从时间、庆祝方式、意义来介绍节日。
[写作步骤]
第一步：引出传统节日，并介绍其时间，庆祝的形式；
第二步：阐述庆祝的意义以及自身的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①have lots of fun玩得开心
②have a big dinner大吃一顿
③get red packets得到红包
④on the phone在电话里
[高分句型]
①There are some traditional festivals in China.（there be句型）
②The Spring Festival is the most important for us Chinese because it’s the beginning of a new year.（原因状语从句）
7．例文
It’s very important for us to learn by autonomous learning in our life. Autonomous learning is a kind of learning mode, a kind of ability for learners to manage themselves. It is also a way for teenagers to face the world and future.
When I studied by myself, I planned my study by making a to-do list. I managed time so that I can make full use of it. I also made good preparation before every class. After school, I reviewed what I had learned before doing homework. I downloaded some useful apps in order to get more learning resources. The learning tools can help me improve my study. In my spare time, I like reading in the city library.
I get many benefits from autonomous learning. I have improved my learning ability a lot. I have become more confident. Besides, I have become more interested in learning.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，属于材料作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”、“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”；
③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接短文开头，引出话题，说明自主学习的重要性；
第二步，结合具体事例说明你在自主学习方面有哪些具体的做法，可适当增加细节；
第三步，说明自主学习带来的收获并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①a way to do sth做某事的一种方法
②make full use of充分利用
③in order to do sth为了做某事
④get benefits from从……中获益
[高分句型]
①When I studied by myself, I planned my study by showing the learning goals.（when引导时间状语从句）
②I managed time so that I can make full use of it.（so that引导目的状语从句）
8．例文：
The Science and Technology Museum is my favorite museum. It is a four-story building in the shape of a Lu Ban lock, which shows that science is able to unlock and discover many secrets. There are five different areas in the museum. Each of them is about a certain area of science. The most exciting area for me is on the 4th floor. There, I can make a model rocket myself—I believe that is the special charm of the Science and Technology Museum. It provides visitors with interesting exhibitions and gives them hands-on experiences. I’m sure it’s the best science museum in China.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作时要紧扣主题，本文使用第一人称、第三人称来介绍内容；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰；写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
[写作步骤]
第一步：提出话题，指出自己最喜欢的博物馆；
第二步：详细介绍博物馆的情况，包括博物馆的名称、外型以及为什么喜欢等信息；
第三步：首尾呼应，再次点题，表明自己对博物馆的喜爱。
[亮点词汇]
①in the shape of ...以……形状
②be sure确信
③be able to do sth.能够做某事
[高分句型]
①It is a four-story building in the shape of a Lu Ban lock, which shows that science is able to unlock and discover many secrets.（“which”引导的定语从句）
②There are five different areas in the museum.（There be句型）
9．例文：
My favorite Museum in China
The Science and Technology Museum is my favorite museum. It is a four-story building in the shape of a Lu Ban lock, which shows that science is able to unlock and discover many secrets.
There are five different areas in the museum. Each of them is about a certain area of science. The most exciting area for me is on the 4th floor. There, I can make a model rocket myself. I believe that is the special charm of the Science and Technology Museum. Visiting museums can not only provides visitors with interesting exhibitions but also give them useful experience. I like the Science and Technology Museum and I’m sure it’s the best science museum in China.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给的提示问题，推荐一个你喜欢的中国博物馆，并说明推荐的理由和参观博物馆的好处，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直入主题引出自己最喜欢的博物馆；
第二步，介绍喜欢它的理由及参观博物馆的好处；
[亮点词汇]
①in the shape of呈……的形状
②provide...with...为某人提供某物
[高分句型]
①It is a four-story building in the shape of a Lu Ban lock, which shows that science is able to unlock and discover many secrets.（which引导的定语从句）
②I’m sure it’s the best science museum in China.（省略that的宾语从句）
10．例文
Reading plays an important role in our life. Reading has lots of advantages. I benefit a lot from it. Not only does it broaden my knowledge and horizon but also gives me a sense of belonging and satisfaction. Compared with other books, the storybook interests me most. Whenever I immerse myself in the storybook, I can experience the characters’ life and then have a better understanding of my own real life. So, I keep reading it before bedtime every day and I will keep on it in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求以“读书伴我成长”为主题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“阅读在我们的生活中扮演着重要的角色”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“通常读什么类型的书和阅读能给你带来什么好处”两个方面重点介绍；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①benefit a lot from从……获益良多
②a sense of belonging and satisfaction归属感和满足感
③have a better understanding有更好的理解
④keep on继续
[高分句型]
①Not only does it broaden my knowledge and horizon but also gives me a sense of belonging and satisfaction.（Not only...but also...连接并列句）
②Whenever I immerse myself in the storybook, I can experience the characters’ life and then have a better understanding of my own real life.（Whenever引导的时间状语从句）