上海中考英语材料作文专项训练（含答案）

材料作文
1．你的学校正在开展主题为“The most beautiful volunteer”的征文活动，请写一篇文章介绍一位志愿者，以及她/他的事迹。
文章内容可以包含以下几个问题：
1. Who is he/she
2. What did he/she do (What does he/she do )
3. What can you learn from him/her
注意：1. 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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2．中国的茶是世界上最受欢迎的饮品之一，假如你叫李华，你的学校正在举行用英语讲好中国故事的比赛，请围绕茶的历史、种类、加工、饮茶、益处等方面，根据下面的思维导图，以“Chinese Tea Culture”为题，写一篇英语短文。
要求：
1. 语言表达准确，短文连贯、通顺；
2. 短文应包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥，不要逐字翻译；
3. 词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Chinese Tea Culture
Good morning! Ladies and gentleman. My name is Li Hua. I am happy to share my topic with you here. Chinese tea is one of the most popular drinks in the world. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Come to enjoy Chinese tea culture. Maybe, you will like it.
3．Write at least 60 words on the topic “My views on online study” (以“在线学习之我见”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)
随着在线学习模式的开启，你对在线学习的态度是什么？你在线上学习的过程中有什么经验可以向大家分享？请结合自己或他人在线学习的经历，谈谈你对这个话题的看法。
（ 注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
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4．Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic“Love is always around”. (以“爱一直在我身边”为题写一篇不少于60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
提示：Kevin的故事告诉我们无论遇到什么问题，身边总是会有支持或帮助你的人让你感受到爱。请结合自己的经历，具体谈谈他或她做了什么让你感受到爱一直在你身边。
(注意：1. 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分；2. 照抄阅读理解语篇的不给分。)
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5．Write at least 60 words about the topic “My Way(s) of Improving Social Skills”（ 以“我提高社交技能的方法”为题写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容供参考)
1. Are social skills important
2. Describe your own experience and share your way of improving social skills.
3. What do you want to say to those who are shy
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6．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation.（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
你和你的家人刚搬到了上海郊区的一个城镇，你打算给你的朋友 Jane 寄一张小镇风景的明信片。
About Greenland Town
Location About 15 km south of the Shanghai City
Transport Metro（Underground. Line 9） Bus 87, 91, 92
Area 2 square kilometers
In your postcard to your friend, you should
● introduce the town briefly
● explain why you have moved
● say what you like and dislike about living there.
注意：1.短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分 2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分
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7．Write at least 60 words to talk about the story that you read in Reading D．Think about what his mom gave Kemmons and how he bine yourself to write down your successful experiences or feelings.
想一想文中的主人公Kemmons是如何成功地成为了一名成功人士，他的妈妈给予了他什么？请结合你自己成功的一次经历谈谈对 D 篇故事中的最后一句话含义的理解或感悟，字数不少于 60 个词。
注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。标点符号不占格。
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8．Write at least 60 words on the topic “Some advice for the younger students at my junior middle school”. (以“给我初中母校的学弟学妹们的一些忠告”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)（20 words)
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分）
Suggested points: (下列问题供参考）
1. Now that you’re going to graduate, what do you think of your junior middle school life
2. What advice do you have for the younger students (Give at least 2 pieces)
Add supportive details to each piece of the advice.
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9．Write at least 60 words on the topic “My dream”（以“我的梦想”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
每个人都有自己的梦想，然而实现梦想的道路并非都是一帆风顺的……它需要来自内心的坚持、不懈的努力以及他人的理解与支持。请结合实际谈谈你的梦想是什么，为何会有这样的梦想，以及你将如何实现自己的梦想。
（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、学校及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
The following is for reference only
be interested in...
encourage...to...
make...come true
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10．当前，为实现“减负不减质、提质更增效”的目标，各地正在积极落实“双减”政策（Double-reduction Policy），作为中学生的你可以做些什么呢？（比如：锻炼身体、欣赏音乐、了解美育、参加劳动、志愿服务等）请依据以下思维导图内容，以“What I Can Do under the Double-reduction Policy”为题，写一篇不少于100词的英语短文。
要求如下：
1. 文中应包含思维导图所有信息；
2. 重点谈论“双减”后你怎样安排课余时间及你的感受；
3. 文中不得出现考生真实的个人信息。
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参考答案：
1．例文：
The Most Beautiful Volunteer
Li Hong is a polite girl. She is both kind and patient. She is a helpful volunteer. At school, she is always ready to help teachers and classmates. At weekends, she takes part in a lot of activities. She often does some cleaning in the street. Besides, she goes to the library to help carry books. Also, she looks after old people in the nursing home. We all think Li Hong is such an excellent girl that we should learn from her. We’d like to recommend her for The Most Beautiful Volunteer.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中对这位志愿者的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“写一篇文章介绍一位志愿者，以及她/他的事迹”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“品质、所做的事、对她的评价等”几个方面重点介绍这位志愿者的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语，表达“我们想推荐她成为最美志愿者”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①be ready to do sth.乐意做某事；
②take part in参加；
③look after照顾；
④nursing home养老院。
[高分句型]
①We all think Li Lei is such an excellent boy that we should learn from him.（such...that引导的结果状语从句）
②Many volunteers come to the libraries to do the service after work.(动词不定式作目的状语)
2．例文
Chinese Tea Culture
Good morning! Ladies and gentleman. My name is Li Hua. I am happy to share my topic with you here. Chinese tea is one of the most popular drinks in the world.
Chinese people have liked drinking tea since ancient times. Tea has a history of over 4000 years since the Chinese began to grow and drink tea. There are many kinds of tea in China, such as green tea, black tea, oolong tea and so on. Longjing Tea is famous all over the world. People use tea pots or tea cups to drink tea. They are made of ceramics.
Drinking tea is good for health. It’s said that green tea can prevent cancer. When you are tired, a cup of tea can help you relax.
Come to enjoy Chinese tea culture. Maybe, you will like it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文；
②时态：本文采用“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求包含所有提示内容，并适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，具体阐述茶的历史、种类、加工等；
第二步，阐述喝茶的好处；
第三步，表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①many kinds of tea很多种茶
②and so on等等
③all over the world全世界
[高分句型]
①Drinking tea is good for health.（动名词作主语）
②It’s said that green tea can prevent cancer.（主语从句）
③When you are tired, a cup of tea can help you relax.（when引导时间状语从句）
3．例文：
My views on online study
This spring our new term doesn’t come on time because the epidemic broke out. We have to learn online at home. We have lessons from Monday to Friday. Classes begin at 7:30 and end at 4:00 every day. We study Math, English, Chinese, Physics and PE. During online learning, there are many problems. Some students think that this kind of learning method is very fresh and can stimulate their interest in learning. If they meet problems in learning, they can ask the teacher for help in time. But some other students think it’s not good because they can’t concentrate on learning and they can not study as carefully as in class. When their parents go to work, they feel lonely at home alone.
As for me, I like learning at home because I needn’t get up early. I have more sleep time. I won’t hurry to school. But I miss my school, my teachers and my classmate. I look forward to meeting them soon.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作中需要回答额问题已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“内容提示”中的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍在家在线学习的经历；
第二步，分享同学在线学习的经验和看法；
第三步，表达自己对在线学习的看法。
[亮点词汇]
① stimulate激发
② concentrate on专心于……
[高分句型]
①Some students think that this kind of learning method is very fresh and can stimulate their interest in learning.（that引导的宾语从句）
②When their parents go to work, they feel lonely at home alone.（when引导的时间状语从句）
4．例文：
Love is always around
When I was in Grade 7, my English grade was poor. I was upset because of it. I even wanted to give up. My English knew it, and she communicated with me. She encouraged me not to give up. She also gave me some advice on how to learn English well. With the help of her, I made great progress in English. Thanks to her, I got better grades in final exam.
Love lets me grow up. We should enjoy love and send it to others.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时和一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的经历；
第二步，介绍自己的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①give up放弃
②communicate with与……沟通
③give up放弃
④with the help of在……的帮助下
⑤thanks to多亏了
[高分句型]
①When I was in Grade 7, my English grade was poor.（when引导时间状语从句）
②She also gave me some advice on how to learn English well（疑问词+动词不定式结构）
5．例文：
My Way(s) of Improving Social Skills
Having good social skills is very important. It can help you deal with relationships better.
I usually read more books to give myself more knowledge. When I meet others at the same time, I will take the initiative to say hello. If I attend the party, I will respect everyone. If you are shy, I suggest you join more clubs and take the initiative to make friends with them. You will become a popular person.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据题干中的问题提示介绍你提高社交技能的方法，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明社交技能的重要性；
第二步，通过自己的经历，分享你提高社交技能的方法；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①deal with处理
②at the same time同时
③make friends with sb和某人交朋友
[高分句型]
①When I meet others at the same time, I will take the initiative to say hello. (when引导的时间状语从句)
② If you are shy, I suggest you join more clubs and take the initiative to make friends with them.(if引导的条件状语从句)
6．例文
Dear Jane,
How’s everything going I’m in a new town called Greenland Town now. It’s about 15 km south of the Shanghai City. It covers an area of 2 square kilometers. The traffic is convenient here. I can take Metro Line9 or take the No.87, 91, 92 bus.
I had an offer from a big company and it was a good opportunity for me, so I decided to move here. It’s near the company where I am working.
It’s a good place because the people here are friendly and helpful. And there are lots of historical places which are interesting. However, I don’t like the weather here. It often rains and it is wet everywhere.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏“要点”中解释为什么要搬到这里，注意要点要齐全。
[写作步骤]
第一步，问候并简单介绍这个小镇；
第二步，解释搬到这个城镇的原因；
第三步，阐述对于该城镇喜欢和不喜欢的地方。
[亮点词汇]
①take Metro Line...坐地铁……号线
②decide to do决定做某事
③lots of许多，大量
[高分句型]
①It’s near the company where I am working.（where引导的定语从句）
②It’s a good place because the people here are friendly and helpful.（because引导的原因状语从句）
③And there are lots of historical places which are interesting.（There be句型；which引导的定语从句）
7．例文：
Kemmons’ story tells us that encouragement and hope can make people strong, which will help us overcome difficulties and achieve success.
I had trouble learning English before. I got bad grades, so I lost heart. My teacher had a long talk with me, and she told me that I should keep hope in my heart. I found confidence again. So I kept on practicing English every day and working hard on it. Each time I had problems in English, I went to my teacher and asked for the solutions. About half a year later, I caught up with others, and I got an A in the final exam. I felt so happy.
I think if you have hope in your heart, you will have confidence and be able to face the difficulties bravely and succeed one day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作重点已给出，结合阅读材料和自身经历，表达感悟。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据阅读材料的内容阐述自己的理解；
第二步，具体介绍一次相关的成功经历；
第三步，表达这次经历对自己的启发。
[亮点词汇]
①overcome difficulties克服困难
②have trouble doing sth做某事有困难
③keep on doing sth坚持做某事
④catch up with sb赶上某人
[高分句型]
①Kemmons’ story tells us that encouragement and hope can make people strong, which will help us overcome difficulties and achieve success.（定语从句）
②Each time I had problems in English, I went to my teacher and asked for the solutions.（each time引导的时间状语从句）
8．例文：
Some advice for the younger students at my junior middle school
How time flies! Now you are students of Grade 9. I think my junior high school life is very colorful. Here I’d like to tell you something to make your school life more meaningful.
First of all, it is important for you to keep healthy, so don’t forget to exercise every day and have a balanced diet. You should always look on the bright side when you’re in trouble.
Second, you’ll be able to make great progress if you develop your study skills. For example, you can have a good study plan and preview the new lessons as well. Besides, you should finish the exercises on your own and solve problems with the help of your classmates or teachers.
Third, you should be thankful for your parents because they are the people who are always behind you. You can communicate more and share the happiness and sadness with them. You can also help them with some housework. In addition, you should take good care of them when they feel sick.
I hope you will enjoy your school life and achieve your dreams.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：考生应注意提示的问题就是写作的基本方向，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，针对第一个问题，概括自己的初中生活，提出告诉低年级学生一些事情，开篇点题；
第二步，针对第二问题，向低年级学生提出三条建议；
第三步，提出希望。
[亮点词汇]
①first of all首先
② keep healthy保持健康
③tell sb. sth.告诉某人某事
④for example例如
⑤help sb. with sth. 帮助某人做某事
⑥take good care of好好照顾
[高分句型]
①You should always look on the bright side when you’re in trouble.当你遇到麻烦时，你应该总是看到光明的一面。(when引导的时间状语从句。)
②Third, you should be thankful for your parents because they are the people who are always behind you.第三，你应该感谢你的父母，因为他们是一直在你身后的人。(because引导的原因状语从句。)
9．例文
My dream
Different people have different dreams. My dream is to be a teacher.
Teachers can not teach us many things at school, but they do their best to teach us how to learn. They always encourage us not to give up. Thanks to them, we learn knowledge. And at the same time, we learn how to live a happy life. They spend most time on students. They are great in my eyes. I am also interested in English with the help of my English teacher. I hope to be a teacher because I love teaching.
I know it is not easy to make my dream come true. But I decide to study harder from now on. I’m sure my dream will come true.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为一般现在时；
③提示：根据材料提示和词汇提示来写作，注意不要遗漏材料中的提示要求，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，分析题目，明确题目要求；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，介绍自己的梦想, 以及如何去实现它；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的决心。
[亮点词汇]
①do one’s best to do sth尽力做某事
②give up放弃
③thanks to由于、多亏
④at the same time同时
⑤from now on从现在起
[高分句型]
①Teachers can not teach us many things at school, but they do their best to teach us how to learn.（do one's best to do sth表示尽力做某事）
②But I decide to study harder from now on. （decide to do sth表示决定做某事）
10．例文
What I Can Do under the Double-reduction Policy
Since the double-reduction policy was carried out, my life has greatly changed. I used to have much homework and many after-school classes. But now I have more time than before. So what can I do under the double-reduction policy
In the evening, I can listen to some soft music because it makes me feel relaxed. On weekends, I can play sports with my friends to keep healthy. I also plan to learn to play the guitar. During holidays, I want to do some volunteering. I’d like to help others and do something meaningful.
All in all, I think the double-reduction policy is good for my body and mind. It makes my life colorful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要使用“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求以“What I Can Do under the Double-reduction Policy”为题，结合思维导图进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“双减政策下我能做什么”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点谈论“双减”后你怎样安排课余时间；
第三步，书写结语。表达对“双减”政策的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①carry out执行，实行
②keep healthy保持健康
③plan to do sth.计划做某事
④all in all总而言之
[高分句型]
①In the evening, I can listen to some soft music because it makes me feel relaxed.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②All in all, I think the double-reduction policy is good for my body and mind.（省略that的宾语从句）