Unit1 Using Language2 名师教学设计
Teaching analysis
该板块的活动主题为“写一写伟大科学家的必备素养”(Write about what makes a great scientist)。该板块有两个阅读语篇,分别题为“The Father of China’s Aerospace”“A World of Pure Thought”。它们从不同角度简要叙述了科学家钱学森和史蒂芬霍金的经历、重要贡献、性格特点以及他们所具备的科学素养。在写作策略和技巧上,两个语篇都有效使用了一些衔接词语,如:however、nevertheless、because、in general、besides、furthermore、above all等。关注语篇的衔接和连贯是对学生写作能力的较高要求。阅读文本中的范例有助于学生领会、体验衔接词语的意义和作用,为他们接下来完成写作任务提供指导。考虑到文本的长度以及阅读难度,笔者设计了两个课时。
Teaching objectives
By the end of the class, students will:
learn about the life story of Qian Xuesen and Stephen Hawking;
be able to express opinions on outstanding personalities of scientists;
write about what makes a great scientist;
learn to use the linking words and phrases to make the writing in a logical order.
Teaching procedures
Step one: Lead-in
Activity one: Act out the dialogue
Invite two students to act out the dialogue.
—— “Can we Chinese possibly make missiles ”
—— “Why not We Chinese are able to make the same things that other people make.”
Q; Who is he What’s his another name
[设计意图] 引入话题人物钱学森,同时活跃课堂气氛,引起学生好奇心。
Step two: Pre-writing
Activity two: Read for the main idea and structure
Read the texts quickly and match the main idea of each paragraph.
The Father of China's Aerospace
Para. 1 His personality
Para. 2-5 General description of Qian Xuesen
Para. 6 His death and people’s appreciation of him
Para. 7 His personal history and accomplishments
A World of Pure Thought
Para. 1 His claim to fame
Para. 2 Characteristics that made him great
Para. 3 Physical description of Stephen Hawking
Q: What type of writing are these two texts
What does biography usually consist of
[设计意图] 厘清文本内容与结构,在结构上概括两则传记相同点。
Activity three: Read for details
Complete the table and underline the linking words and phrases.
scientist personalities and qualities examples
Q:What are similarities of these two scientists
What are functions of the linking words and phrases
[设计意图] 在内容上,比较两位科学家的品质,为讨论最重要的科学精神做铺垫。在语言上,积累文本中表示时间与地点,因果,转折等的连接词,为写作做铺垫。
Activity four: Work in groups
Q: What do you think a great scientist need most Why
professional knowledge logical reasoning (逻辑推理)
research methods the questioning mind
leadership patriotism (爱国主义)
devotion determination
imagination creativity
inspiration(灵感) talent ...
[设计意图] 讨论最重要的科学精神,为写作做铺垫,同时发展学生批判性思维。
Step three: While-writing
Activity five: Micro-writing
Choose one personal quality a scientist must have to be successful and write a short paragraph. Refer to your character cards and add some stories to illustrate the scientific spirit.
Useful sentence structures:
What impresses me most is...
What matters to a scientist is (not...but...)
My reasons are as follows...
The definition of scientific spirit is...
Take ... for example.
...play(s) a crucial/ significant role in...
[设计意图] 基于讨论的内容,结合实例,进行微写作。
Activity six:Write an essay about the scientific spirit.
discuss about the framework of the essay
organize the body in time order and use linking words and phrases
work by yourself to write an essay about the scientific spirit
Step four: Post-writing
Exchange your draft with a partner. Use this checklist to help you revise the draft. Then take your draft back and revise it using your partner’s comments.
Does the writer explain clearly the personal qualities that make up the scientific spirit
Does the writer give examples from the lives of the scientist(s) to illustrate the points
Does the writer describe the personality of a great scientist
Does the writer use appropriate linking words and phrases to tie the ideas together
Does the writer use separate paragraphs, each with its own function
Teaching reflection
文本较长,学生阅读难度大,老师应适当给与帮助。
考虑适当增加前期语言的输入,为写作做铺垫。
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