人教版（2019）高中英语选择性必修第二册 Unit4 Journey Across a Vast Land解透单元写作（有答案）

Unit4 解透单元写作
主题写作—旅行
1.写作任务
假定你是Jim，你的中国笔友李华想去欧洲旅游，请你推荐一个欧洲的城市。请给李华回一封电子邮件，提出你的建议。主要内容包括:
（1）推荐城市；
（2）理由和景点。
参考词汇：埃菲尔铁塔 the Eiffel Tower巴黎圣母院Notre-Dame de Paris塞纳河 the River seine
注意：（1）词数80左右；
（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Li Hua,
Glad to know you plan to visit Europe.__________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,
Jim
2.写作思路
（1）一审：体裁、结构和主题
体裁：应用文——书信建议类
导入—写邮件的目的
结构：三段 介绍理由（总括点题+分点介绍）
总结与祝愿
主题：旅游城市推荐
（2）二定：人称与时态
人称：以第一、二人称为主
时态：一般现在时
（3）三明确
明确写作要点：推荐城市（巴黎）+推荐理由（浪漫之都：著名景点+黄昏马车巡游+塞纳河乘船）
3.素材整理
（1）短语与表达
be recognized as被公认为
the romantic capital of the world世界浪漫之都
attract one’s attention吸引某人的注意力
ride on a coach乘坐马车
the highlight of the trip旅行最精彩的部分
take one’s breath away令某人惊叹
be bound to do sth. 一定做某事，必须做某事
（2）完成句子
①巴黎被公认为世界浪漫之都，在巴黎你可以欣赏到壮丽的景色。
Paris _________ _________ _________ _________ the romantic capital of the world, _________ you can enjoy spectacular scenery.
②为了欣赏巴黎的浪漫，你可以乘坐马车或租一辆老爷车，漫游在黄昏的大街上。
_________ _________ the romance of Paris, you can _________ _________ _________ , or rent an old car, _________on the streets at dusk.
③然而，我认为旅行最精彩的部分当属乘船沿塞纳河游览巴黎。
However, I think the _________ _________ _________ _________ is to appreciate Paris _________ _________ _________ _________ along the River Seine.
④巴黎美丽的景色无疑会令你惊叹。
The _________ _________ of Paris will surely_________ _________ _________ _________.
⑤简言之，我认为你在那里一定会玩得很开心。
_________ _________ , I think you _________ _________ _________ enjoy yourself there.
答案：has been recognized as，whereTo enjoy，ride on a coach，wandering highlight of the trip，on a sailing boat beautiful scenery，take your breath away In brief；are bound to
4. 满分作文（注：黑体部分为本单元的重点词汇）
Dear Li Hua,
Glad to know you plan to visit Europe. I’d like to recommend.
Paris to you Paris has been recognized as the romantic capital of the world, where you can enjoy spectacular scenery and famous scenic spots such as the Eiffel Tower and Notre-Dame de Paris. To enjoy the romance of Paris, you can ride on a coach, or rent an old car, wandering on the streets at dusk. However, I think the highlight of the trip is to appreciate Paris on a sailing boat along the River Seine. The beautiful scenery of Paris will surely take your breath away.
In brief, I think you are bound to enjoy yourself there.
Yours,
Jim
第一段：顺承所给首句，点、明推荐城市。
第二段：介绍理由与要参观的景点、，第一句总括点题；用 to enjoy…作目的状语引出第二个要点；用 however引出第三个要点。句型：第一句使用了where引导的定语从句；第二句用 to enjoy…动词不定式短语作目的状语，wandering…非谓语动词短语作伴随状语。
第三段：对前文进行总结及表达美好祝愿。
5. 佳作背诵
（1）佳作一
假定你是红星中学的学生李华，你的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来中国旅游，主要想游览北京、天津和上海，发来邮件询问相关信息。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括:
①交通出行；
②必备衣物。
注意：①词数80左右；
②开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I am looking forward to your arrival.
Yours,
Li Hua
One possible version:
Dear Jim,
Glad to know you’ll tour in China and I’d like to tell you something about it.
In a way, the highlight of your travel may be the public transport. You can shift between cities on high-speed trains and the experience of which will really take your breath away. I suggest you begin from Tianjin, then Beijing, where I can accompany you to admire the awesome sights. Then you can proceed with your travel in Shanghai.
As summer in these cities is hot and rainy, you’d better take your summer wear as well as an umbrella.
I am looking forward to your arrival.
Yours,
Li Hua
（2）佳作二
假定你是红星中学的学生李华，你的英国笔友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他想了解北京近几年发生了怎样的变化。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：
①变化；
②原因；
③感受。
注意：①词数80左右；
②开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数
Dear Jim,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
One possible version:
Dear Jim,
Glad to know you are interested in the changes in Beijing Let me tell you something about it.
The awesome change is the rapid development of trans portation. In the past, people travelled mainly by bus while on the contrary, with more and more subway lines arising people can go anywhere. Additionally, I want to highlight the spectacular changes of the communities, whose beauty will take your breath away.
I feel proud of my city and owe all of these to the efforts of our government. I believe Beijing will become more livable in the future.
Yours,
Li Hua
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