Unit4 Writing 主题写作讲与练
写作题目
假定你是李华,你的加拿大好友Paul发来邮件,说他准备春节期间来你所在的城市旅游。请你 给他回复一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.介绍你所在城市的旅游景点;
2.自荐给他当导游。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
思路点拨
主题 旅游 体裁 用文
人称 以第二人称 和第一人称为主 时态 一般现在时和一般将来时
布局 第一部分:介绍旅游景点; 第二部分:自荐当导游。
遣词造句
I .用本单元所学单词或短语填空
1. _____________ n.港口
2. _____________ adj.办令人惊叹的;很好的
3. _____________ n.古董;古物adj.办古老的;古董的
4. _____________ n.手艺;工艺;技艺
5. _____________n.岸;滨
6. _____________n.风景;景色
7. _____________ n.最好最精彩的部分
8. _____________ adj.办令人愉快的;友好的
答案 l.harbo(u)r
2.awesome
3.antique
4.craft
5.shore
6.scenery
7.highlight
8.pleasant
II.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
(1)这个城市位于我们省的东部。
The city ________ ________ ________the east of our province.
(2)这是一个有大海港的海滨城市。
It is a seaside city________ ________ ________ ________.
(3)市中心有两个美术馆。
There are two art galleries ________ ________ ________ ________the city.
(4)在那里你可以看到许多当代艺术家的杰出作品。
You can see many________ ________of contemporary artists there.
(5)还有一座世界著名的博物馆。
There is also________ ________ ________.
(6)在博物馆里,你可以看到历史悠久的古董手工艺品。
In the museum, you can see antique arts and crafts that________ ________ ________ ________.
答案(1) is located in
(2) with a big harbo(u)r
(3) in the center of
(4) awesome works
(5) a world-famous museum
(6) have a long history
2.句式升级
(7)用过去分词短语作状语合并句子(1)(2)
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(8)用定语从句合并句子(3) (4)
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(9)用定语从句合并句子(5) (6)
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答案
(7)Located in the east of our province, it is a seaside city with a big harbo(u)r.
(8)There are two art galleries in the center of the city, where you can see many awesome works of contemporary artists.
(9)There is also a world-famous museum,where you can see antique arts and crafts that have a long history.
连句成篇
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参考范文
Dear Paul,
I’m glad to know that you are planning to visit my city during the Spring Festival. Now I’m writing to tell you something about my city.
Located in the east of our province, it is a seaside city with a big harbo(u) r. There are two art galleries in the center of the city, where you can see many awesome works of contemporary artists. There is also a world-famous museum, where you can see antique arts and crafts that have a long history. The park along the shore is also worth visiting because you can enjoy the beautiful scenery and get close to nature.
Now it’s just the time of the Spring Festival, so you will have a chance to experience the customs of this traditional festival. This will be the highlight of your trip. What’s more, I will be greatly honored to be your guide. I believe you will have a pleasant trip.
Looking forward to seeing you in China.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
写作积累
1.We can go up to the Longevity Hill and have a broad view of all the fascinating scenes there.
我们可以登上万寿山,在那儿所有的迷人景色都能一览无遗。
2.A peaceful and tranquil atmosphere permeates the place.
这地方充满着一种宁静的气氛。
3.But I’m afraid one day is not enough to see all the interesting places.
但是恐怕要看遍所有有趣的地 方一天时间是不够的。
4.Now, we come to another magnificent chamber in which you can see all kinds of ancient furniture.
现在,我们来到另一个宏伟大厅,在这里你可以看到各种古老的家具。
5.We are deeply attracted by its interesting history.
我们都被它有趣的历史深深地吸引住了。
实战演练
假设你是李华,你的加拿大朋友Paul打算去台 湾旅游,特发电子邮件向你了解台湾岛的有关情况。请根据下列提示,用英文写一封邮件,并祝他旅途愉快。
1.台湾岛是中国最大的岛屿,位于福建省的东南部,北临东海,东临太平洋,西南面被南海环抱;
2.台湾岛面积约三万六千平方千米,人口两千多万;
3.自然资源丰富,香蕉、稻米、茶叶等农产品驰名中外;
4.风景优美,气候宜人,世界各地的游客纷至沓来。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.信的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计人总词数;
3.可根据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Paul,
I’m glad to know that you’re going to Taiwan Island.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
参考答案:
实战演练
One possible version:
Dear Paul,
I’m glad to know that you’re going to Taiwan Island. I’d like to give you a brief introduction about it.
Taiwan Island is the largest island in our country and it faces the Pacific Ocean on the east. It lies on the south of the East Sea and the South Sea surrounds its southwest. It is located to the southeast of Fujian Province.
Taiwan Island has an area of about 36,000 square kilometres and it has a population of over twenty million. It,s rich in natural resources. Agricultural products are famous both at home and abroad, such as bananas, rice and tea. The scenery is so beautiful and the climate is so pleasant that travelers from all over the world want to go there for a visit.
I’m sure you’ll have a good time there. Have a nice trip.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua