中考英语书信写作专项训练（含解析）

书信作文
1．假如你是Mike，你的朋友Alan给你写信说他最近很不开心。请你根据表格中的提示，给Alan回一封80字左右的信。
注意：1. 文中必须包括提示中的要点。可适当补充。
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
3. 80词左右（文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数）
Problem too much pressure
Advice 1. make a study plan . . . 2. relax yourself; hang out with friends. . . 3. be a volunteer to help others. . . 4. communicate with parents. . . 5. . . . . . .
Dear Alan,I am sorry to hear that you are unhappy these days.
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I hope things will be better for you soon.
Mike
2．假如你是来自美国的Nancy，你和你的父母正在中国旅游。请根据内容要点提示，给你的朋友Anna写一封信。要点提示：
1. 写信时你们正在九寨沟国家公园(Jiuzhaigou National Park)；
2. 你与父母于7月26日从纽约飞往北京；
3. 在北京你们参观了颐和园(the Summer Palace)、天安门广场(Tian’an men Square)和紫禁城(the Forbidden City)，还去爬了长城；
4. 你们拍了许多照片；
5. 你已为她买了一些纪念品(souvenir)，希望她能够喜欢。
Dear Anna,
I’m writing to you from Jiuzhaigou National Park in Sichuan, China. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
Nancy
3．假如你是张莉莉，想邀请好友Jane来你的新家。请根据表格里的要点，用英文给Jane写一封邀请信。
新家地址 在无锡北面
新家路线 乘地铁到达堰桥 (Yanqiao)；沿着金惠路 (Jinhui) 走到第二个十字路口右拐；你家就在街道的拐角处。
人文环境 邻居们友好善良，互相帮助解决各种问题，……
我的心情 很期待见到你，……
要求：1. 内容完整，适当发挥；
2. 表达清楚，意思连贯，符合逻辑；
3. 注意格式，80个词左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
Dear Jane,How are you Now I live in my new home and I’d like to invite you to my home.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Zhang Lili
4．假如你是Cindy，你收到了朋友Mike的来信。针对信中谈到的问题，请给他写一封回信，提出一些建议，帮助他积极乐观地面对学习和生活。
要点：
1. 如何缓解学习压力；
2. 如何改善与父母的关系（如做家务，多沟通等）；
3. 给他一些美好的祝愿。
要求：
1. 包含以上要点；
2. 语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰，字迹工整；
3. 词数：80~100。
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5．假如你是王帅，外国笔友Tom 想了解你的日常饮食和家庭规则。请根据以下信息给他写一封信，并谈谈健康饮食的好处。
写作要点：
1. 收到信时的 情（激动）；
2. 介绍你的日常饮食和家庭规则；
1) 饮食：喜欢鸡蛋，牛奶，面包等健康 物，午餐在学校吃
2) 家规：需要早睡早起，到家之后先写作业
3. 谈谈健康饮 的好处(至少两点)。
写作要求：
1）不得使用真实的姓名和学校名；
2）可适当加 细节，使内容充实，行文连贯；
3）字迹工整、语 精练、表达准确、条件清晰；
4）至少80词。
Dear Tom,
How are you doing ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Wang Shuai
6．假如你是李明，你的好朋友刘林来信告诉你他要来哈尔滨看老虎，并向你询问关于老虎的情况，请根据以下提示，给刘林写一封回信，并希望能尽快见到他，写作要点：
1. 欢迎他来哈尔滨看老虎。
2. 老虎处境危险，数量在不断减少，主要原因：
（1）许多树木被砍伐。老虎的生存环境越来越糟糕；
（2）人们为了老虎的皮毛（fur）而杀害它们。
3. 提出至少两点保护野生动物的建议。
写作要求：
1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2. 可以适当增加情节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3. 字迹工整，语言精炼，表达准确，条理清晰。
4. 至少80字。
Dear Liu Lin,
How are you doing _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ming
7．假如你是李华，即将年满12岁，你美国的好友Mike来信祝贺你的生日。请根据以下信息，给他回一封信，并谈谈你的近况。
写作要点：
1. 对他的来信感到开心。
2. 介绍自己的近况：
（1）身高：1.6米；
（2）爱好：喜欢说英语、踢足球和滑冰；
（3）最喜欢的季节：冬天。
3. 至少说出你喜欢冬天的两个原因。
写作要求：
1. 不得使用真实的姓名和班级名。
2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实完整，行文连贯。
3. 字迹工整，语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4. 至少50词。
Dear Mike,
How are you doing _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8．假如你叫李明，你所在的跑步俱乐部拟组织一次师生户外跑活动。请你写信给外教布朗先生，邀请他参加此次活动，内容包括：
（1）写信意图和邀请原因；
（2）活动路线和距离；
（3）活动注意事项（至少两点）。
作文要求：（1）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名、地点和考生的真实姓名。
（2）语句连贯，词数80词左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数，也不必抄写在答题卡上。
Dear Mr. Brown,
How are you doing Our running club will go for a run this Saturday morning. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best regards,
Li Ming
9．假如你是Linda，刚刚收到了美国朋友Tom的来信，得知他正忙于做志愿者。同时，他很想了解你的近况，请你给他写封回信，感谢他对你的关心，并表达你也想当一名志愿者的愿望。
写作要点：
1. 对于他的关心表示感谢。
2. 介绍你的近况。
（1）每天在网上上课
（2）周末有时帮助父母做家务，如洗碗，扫地
（3）每天运动至少一个小时
3. 谈谈你想当一名志愿者的理由。
写作要求：
1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4. 至少80词。
Dear Tom,
How are you doing I’m happy to hear from you
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Linda
10．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友John多年前来过你的家乡(hometown)，现在他写信询问你家乡的变化。请根据以下信息，给他写一封回信，并说说你自己的变化。
写作要点：
1.表达出对他的想念；
2.具体说说家乡的变化：
(1)以前：不能地铁出行；街道窄(narrow)；老旧房子很多
(2)现在：有地铁；有很多高楼、公园和超市；更干净美丽
3.说说你自己的变化(学习上和生活上)。
写作要求：
1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯
3. 字迹工整，语言精炼，表达准确，条理清晰。
4. 至少60词。
Dear John,
I’m very glad to receive your letter. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
参考答案：
1．例文
Dear Alan,
I am sorry to hear that you are unhappy these days. If you have too much pressure in your study, why don’t you try to make a study plan to help you So you can finish the tasks step by step. Then you can have more free time to relax yourself. Free time activities like listening to music and hanging out with friends are important, too. Also, you can be a volunteer to help others in your free time. It can make you happy. Besides, it’s also a good way to communicate with your parents so they can help you.
I hope things will be better for you soon.
Mike
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，具体阐述应该怎么做来缓解压力；
第三步，书写结语，表达希望对方很快就会好起来的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①make a study plan制定学习计划
②step by step一步一步地
③listen to music听音乐
[高分句型]
①If you have too much pressure in your study, why don’t you try to make a study plan to help you (if引导的条件状语从句)
②it’s also a good way to communicate with your parents so they can help you. (it作形式主语)
2．例文
Dear Anna,
I’m writing to you from Jiuzhaigou National Park in Sichuan, China. It is a world-famous National Park in China. My parents and I flew to Beijing from New York on 26th July. We visited the Summer Palace, Tian’an men Square and the Forbidden City. We also climbed the Great Wall. We took a lot of beautiful photos. What’s more, we ate delicious food such as Beijing Roast Duck.
I bought some small souvenirs for you and I’m sure you will like them.
Yours
Nancy
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时和现在进行时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍去北京的旅行情况；
第二步，买了一些纪念品给对方，确定对方会喜欢的。
[亮点词汇]
①take photos拍照
②a lot of许多
③what’s more并且
[高分句型]
①I’m sure you will like them.（省略that的宾语从句）
3．例文
Dear Jane,
How are you Now I live in my new home and I’d like to invite you to my home.
It’s in the north of Wuxi. To get to my home. You can take the underground to Yanqiao. Walk along Jinhui Road and take the second turning on the right. My home is there at the corner of the street. Our neighbors are kind and friendly. They often help people with all kinds of problems and we are like a big family.
I’m so happy to live in such a community and I’m looking forward to seeing you.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Zhang Lili
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为邀请信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：注意不要遗漏表格里给出的要点，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：根据表格里的要点，用英文给Jane写一封邀请信，邀请好友Jane来你的新家。
第二步：首先承接短文开头；接着介绍新家地址和新家路线；其次介绍人文环境。
第三步：表达自己的心情。
[亮点词汇]
①live in住在
②would like to do sth.想做某事。
③get to到达
④at the corner of在……的拐角处
⑤all kinds of各种各样的
[高分句型]
①Now I live in my new home and I’d like to invite you to my home.（and连接的并列句）
②Walk along Jinhui Road and take the second turning on the right. （指路的句型）
③I’m looking forward to seeing you.（look forward to doing sth.）
4．例文
Dear Mike,
Are you OK From your letter, I know you have some troubles, the following are some suggestions I gave you.
First, you should learn how to communicate with others and make as many friends as possible. Then when you are in trouble, you can ask your classmates or friends for help because they’re the same age as you and you can understand each other easily. As for your parents, I suggest you try your best to understand them. Although they may give you too much pressure, but it is because they really love you and want you to have a bright future. In order to keep a good relationship with your parents, it’s better for you to have a long talk with them and express your opinion. Furthermore, you can communicate with them from time to time and help them do more housework.
I hope my advice can help you and I hope you will get on well with your parents. I really hope that you can be happier in the following days and wish you a bright future!
Your friend,
Jeanne
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏所给要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，说明从Mike来信中知道的问题，引出信件内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“缓解压力、改善与父母关系”等几个方面介绍给出的建议；
第三步，书写结语，表达对Mike“美好的祝愿”。
[亮点词汇]
① communicate with 和……沟通
② as for 至于
③ furthermore 进一步
④ in trouble 处于麻烦中
[高分句型]
It’s better for you to have a long talk with them and express your opinion. （it固定句型）
5．例文
Dear Tom,
How are you doing I am very excited to receive your letter. I’d like to tell you something about my daily diet.
I usually like healthy food like eggs, milk and bread for breakfast. For lunch, I eat at school. There are some rules in my home. For example, I must go to bed early and get up early every day. Besides, I must do my homework first when I get home.
In my opinion, healthy diet is very important. It can help us study better. Besides, it can also help us have a better sleep.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Wang Shuai
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍收到信时的 情；
第二步，具体介绍你的日常饮食和家庭规则；
第三步，最后介绍健康饮食的好处。
[亮点词汇]
①for example例如
②besides此外
③in my opinion在我看来
[高分句型]
I must do my homework first when I get home.（when引导的时间状语从句）
6．例文：
Dear Liu Lin,
How are you doing
Welcome to see the tigers in Harbin. The tiger is one of the most popular animals that people like to see in the zoos. But now there are only about 3200 tigers in the world, and the number of them is reducing. Why Because many trees are cut down and the tigers have no place to live in. And some people even kill tigers in order to get their fur. We must protect them now. First, we can build many natural reserves. Second, we must stop people from hunting them. No trading, no killing. We all hope that in the future there will be a lot more tigers.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封信；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏补充至少两点的保护野生动物的建议，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，表示欢迎对方来哈尔滨看老虎。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，主要围绕“老虎濒危的两点原因”以及建议“建立自然保护区”和“阻止人们杀戮”进行展开描写。
第三步，书写结语，希望未来老虎会变多。
[亮点词汇]
① one of the most popular animals最受欢迎的动物之一
② have no place to live in没有地方住
③ in order to get their fur为了得到它们的皮毛
④ stop people from hunting them阻止人们捕猎它们
[高分句型]
① The tiger is one of the most popular animals that people like to see in the zoos.（that引导定语从句修饰先行词animals）
② We all hope that in the future there will be a lot more tigers.（that引导宾语从句）
7．例文
Dear Mike,
How are you doing I am very happy to receive your e-mail. Many thanks for remembering my birthday. I will be twelve years old. I am 1.6 meters tall now. I also have many hobbies, such as speaking English, playing football and skating. My favorite season is winter. Because Spring Festival is in winter, and I like playing in the snow. It’s very interesting.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Yours,
Li hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：要求根据写作要点提示给好友Mike回信。学生不要遗漏题目中的要点，可适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先表达对Mike的来信感到开心；
第二步，介绍自己的近况；
第三步，谈谈自己喜欢的季节及原因。
[亮点词汇]
①be happy to do sth开心做某事
②such as例如
③play in the snow在雪地里玩
[高分句型]
Because Spring Festival is in winter, and I like playing in the snow.（Because引导原因状语从句）
8．参考范文
Dear Mr. Brown,
How are you doing Our running club will go for a run this Saturday morning. I would like to invite you to attend. Because I know you like running very much and you run very well. We will start from Zhongshan Park and then go around Green Street for 10 kilometers. There are two places to drink water on the way. If you want to participate, please reply to me before this Friday. Meanwhile, please prepare some comfortable sportswear and shoes. If you have any questions, you can call me. My number is 12345678. I look forward to your participation.
Best regards,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为邀请信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写信意图和邀请的原因；
第二步，介绍活动路线和距离，以及活动注意事项；
第三步，预留联系方式等回复，并表达期望。
[亮点词汇]
① would like to想要
②start from从……开始
③reply to sb回复某人
④look forward to期望
[高分句型]
①Because I know you like running very much and you run very well. (know后是省略that的宾语从句)
②If you want to participate, please reply to me before this Friday.(if引导的条件状语从句)
9．例文
Dear Tom,
How are you doing I’m happy to hear from you. I am thankful for your concern.
I have classes online every day. There are three classes in the morning and two classes in the afternoon. I sometimes help my parents do housework on weekends, such as washing the dishes, sweeping the floor. I do sports at least one hour every day. I think exercising can make me happy and healthy. I like swimming best. I think it is easy and interesting. I want to be a volunteer. Because helping others in need is also helping ourselves. Doing small things may be make a difference.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Linda
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达感谢；
第二步，介绍自己的近况；
第三步，谈谈想当志愿者的理由。
[亮点词汇]
①hear from收到……来信
②such as例如
③in need在穷困中的
[高分句型]
①There are three classes in the morning and two classes in the afternoon（there be句型）
②I think exercising can make me happy and healthy（动名词作主语）
10．例文
Dear John,
I’m very glad to receive your letter. Long time no see. I miss you very much. Next let me talk about the changes in my hometown and myself.
In the past, we couldn’t travel by subway and the streets were very narrow. At the same time, there were many old houses. However, now there are some subways, many tall buildings, parks and supermarkets. My hometown is cleaner and more beautiful than before.
I didn’t get good grades in the past, and my living habits weren’t good either. But now, I have changed many of my habits, and gradually my grades have improved greatly.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达出对John的想念；
第二步，具体阐述家乡的变化：
第三步，最后介绍自己的变化。
[亮点词汇]
①talk about谈论
②at the same time同时
③living habits生活习惯
[高分句型]
①My hometown is cleaner and more beautiful than before.（比较级的运用）
②I have changed many of my habits, and gradually my grades have improved greatly.（and连接两个并列结构）