看图作文
1.根据中英文和图片提示,写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的短文。至少谈及其中三幅图片的内容。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
古语有云,“凡事预则立,不预则废”。事先做好计划,我们才能更加合理地安排时间,获得更好的收益。
如何平衡学习与生活,对于我们中学生来说,也是一项挑战。对于即将到来的周末,你有什么样的计划呢?校刊的“英语世界”专栏正在征稿,主题是“My Weekend Plan”。请你踊跃投稿,用英语谈谈你对这个周末的安排,以及你做这些安排的原因。
提示问题:
What are you going to do
Why are you going to do so
do homework fly kites visit grandparents
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2.根据下面的图片写至少4句话介绍图片中的物品位置,注意书写规范。
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3.根据中文和英文提示,完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
假如你是张明,本周日是你班国际生Peter的生日。你打算邀请他来你家度过一个有意义的中式生日。请你根据下面的地图,用英语给他写一封邮件,描述一下从学校到你家的具体路线,并告诉他生日会的具体活动。
提示词语: turn right, go across, opposite, eat noodles, play games
提示问题: How can you get home
What are you going to do at the party
Dear Peter,
Would you please come to my home to celebrate your birthday this Sunday _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Zhang Ming
4.题目①
假如你是李华,寒假想到国外进行为期一周的语言学习,看到了右边的海报。你想询问这个冬令营的具体情况,比如有哪些课程,吃住在哪儿,以及有哪些课余活动等等。请用英文给负责人写一封邮件,礼貌地提问、咨询,并表达对冬令营学习的期望。
提示词语: classes, accommodation(住宿), homestay, sports,improve
提示问题:
What do you want to know about the winter camp
What do you expect in the winter camp
Dear sir or Madam,
I'm so interested in your winter camp.
I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
5.文段表达
同学们, 学校第8期英文板报开始征文啦!本期征文的题目是“My colorful Life afterSchool"。请你写一篇不少于40词的征文, 介绍你多彩的课余生活, 内容包括:课余时间你通常做什么, 以及为什么你认为自己的课余生活是丰富多彩的。所给图片及提示词语仅供选用。
提示问题:,
What do you usually do after school
Why do you think your after-school life is colorful
A Colorful Life after School
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6.
如今, 国内外很多孩子在父母的安排下没有了自己的周末, 如下图中的Jack。请分析图中的这种现象并谈谈你的看法。以“Weekend or Not ”为题写一篇约110个词的英语短文向Parents杂志投稿, 让父母们通过阅读你的文章能有所启发。
Weekend or Not
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7.春节是中国重要的传统节日、某英文报纸正以“Our traditional Festival the Spring Festival”为题征文:请你投稿、介绍中国人如何庆祝春节、以及你最喜欢的庆祝活动。(不少于40词、所给图片和提示词语仅供选用)
● What do people do to celebrate the Spring Festival in China
● What is your favourite activity during the festival
clean the house buy a lot of food make big red lanterns
make dumpling have a traditional family dinner watch a dragon dance
Our traditional Festival the Spring Festival
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8.文段表达。
根据中文和英文提示,写一段意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的回信。信的开头和结尾已给出,其词数不计入所要完成的回信内。所给的英文提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
假如你叫李华,最近你的美国笔友Tony要来北京体验中国传统文化,请根据他的问题回复邮件,为他设计北京一日游活动,帮助他体验中国传统文化。请描述你们打算去的地方、具体的活动安排、以及这样安排的理由。
提示词语:traditional Chinese culture, tea house,Peking Opera, paper cutting
ToTony From Li Hua Subject A trip of traditional Chinese culture Hi!Tony, I’m glad that you will come to Beijing soon.___________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua
9.书面表达
假如你是李华,正在和你的美国笔友Paul通过邮件交流各自的情况。请你根据以下问题,参考图片(可以适当发挥你的想象力),回复邮件,以My Room为题,给Paul介绍你房间的布置、物品摆放和你对自己房间的评价。
提示词语:floor lamp(落地灯), chair, a small round table(小圆桌), under, like… 提示问题:1. What is in your room
2. Where are these things
3. How do you like your room
Dear Paul,
How's everything
Here is my room.
Yours,
Li Hua
10.根据中文提示和英文书信内容,写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的回信,信的开头和结尾已给出,其字数不计入所完成的回信内。 请不要写出你的姓名和学校。
假设你叫杨洋。是加拿大中学生Paula的笔友,下面是你收到的她的电子邮件。请你根据她来信的内容写一封回信。针对她的问题,谈谈你的看法,同时提出一些帮助她解决问题的建议。
I can understand your feeling. But I don’t think it is right for you to do things like that. Don’t worry. Here are some suggestions for you.
As a student, it’s important for you to study hard to get more knowledge. So I think doing homework is necessary and useful. You should do your homework first. If it is not too late, you can play computer games for a while. Remember to go to bed as early as possible, then you won’t feel tired the next day.
In class, you need to listen to the teachers carefully and take notes. What’s more, it’s important to take part in class activities, try to answer at least two questions each class. When you have any problems, ask your teachers or classmates for help. I ’m sure you’ll make great progress and pass the final exam. Good luck!
Dear Paula:
I’m sorry to hear you are in trouble now.___________________________________________
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yours Paula
Dear Paula,
Yours,
Yang yang
参考答案
1.例文
My Weekend Plan
I have some plans for this weekend. On Saturday, I will have a picnic with my friends in the park. Because we all want to relax and enjoy life. On Sunday morning, I will help my parents with the housework. Because my parents are very busy on weekdays, I want to make them have a rest on weekends. On Sunday afternoon, I will do some reading. It can help me open my eyes, and learn a lot. I hope I will have a good time.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为看图作文;
②时态:时态为“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己的周末计划;
第二步,希望自己能过一个愉快的周末。
[亮点词汇]
①have a picnic野餐
②help sb with sth帮助某人做某事
③have a rest休息
[高分句型]
①Because we all want to relax and enjoy life.(because引导原因状语从句)
②I hope I will have a good time.(省略that的宾语从句)
2.例文
My Room
This is a picture of my room. There is a desk, a bookcase and a bed in the room. My black computer is on the desk. My books and my Teddy bear are in the bookcase. Where is my schoolbag It is in the bookcase, too. A photo of my family is on the wall. My father, my mother and I are in the picture. My room is small but tidy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已按图片给出,考生应注意不要遗漏题干及图片中的内容要点;可适当添加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,介绍关于一张我的房间的图片;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容,详细列举房间内物品及所处位置;
第三步,书写结语,总结“我的房间虽然小但是整洁”。
[亮点词汇]
①a picture of my room 一张我房间的图片
②a photo of my family 一张我家庭的照片
③small but tidy 小但整洁
[高分句型]
①This is a picture of my room.(This is这……, 用于介绍某人或某物)
②There is a desk and a bed in the room.(there be句型表示某地有某物)
3.参考范文:
Dear Peter,
Would you please come to my home to celebrate your birthday this Sunday Now let me tell you how to get to my house.
Go along Chaoyang Road, cross a crossing and turn left at Jingtai Road. Then keep walking along Jingtai Road. My house is 100 metres ahead. It’s on your right, opposite the bank. We will have many interesting activities, such as singing, dancing and so on. We will also eat birthday cakes and long noodles. Eating noodles is a symbol of long life.
I’m looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Zhang Ming
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于看图作文写作,要求按照所给的要点提示写一封邮件给Peter,邀请他来你家度过一个有意义的中式生日。注意写作时要点要齐全,同时也可进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。
2.写作指导:本文应该用第一、三人称来叙述;时态采用一般现在时;文章开头已给出,写作时,注意承接上文,根据要点提示具体描述一下从学校到你家的具体路线,并告诉他生日会的具体活动;文中一定要包含题干中列出的所有要点;可以运用一些短语和常用句型为文章增添色彩;注意单词书写的准确度,语法运用的准确度,上下文注意连接的流畅度,以及逻辑合理。
4.例文:
Dear Sir or madam
I'm so interested in your winter camp that I can’t wait to write to you to learn more about it.
First, could you please tell me when the one-week program will start and what interesting classes you will provide Also, I’m wondering where I can have meals and whether I will live in the dorm or with a homestay family
In the winter camp, I expect to do some sports every day to keep fit and hope to improve my English through communication.Thank you for reading my e-mail. I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于应用文写作,写作时要按邮件格式写。在写作时开头介绍写信的目的;第二段询问冬令营的一些情况;第三段期望收到对方的回复。
2.例文点评:例文采用三段式;用第一人称来叙述内容;时态采用一般现在时和一般将来时,询问冬令营的课程,吃饭,住宿和运动等叙述完整且条理清晰。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。
3.高分亮点:
短语:can’t wait to do sth;live in;expect to do sth;keep fit;look forward to。
句型:宾语从句when the one-week program will start and what interesting classes you will provide;祈使句Thank you for reading my e-mail。
5.After-school life is very important to us middle school students. A colorful after-school life means a lot to me. I usually read books and listen to music after school on weekdays. And I sometimes play basketball with my classmates. I like the feeling of working as a team. On weekends, I either go to the theater with my friends or take a walk in the park with my parents. I think my after-school life is colorful because 1 not only can do the things I like most, but also stay close with my friends and family. I will try harder to make my after-school life more colorful and meaningful.
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于话题作文。在写作时应回答出提示的两个问题:一是“你放学后通常做什么?”二是“为什么你认为你的课余生活是丰富多彩的?”
2.例文点评:例文采用第一人称来叙述自己的课外活动——读书;听音乐;打篮球;看电影;去公园散步等;例文还阐述了是因为自己不仅可以做最喜欢的事情,还可以和朋友和家人呆在一起,所以才觉着课外活动是丰富多彩的。时态采用一般现在时。思路明了,条理清晰。
3.高分亮点:
短语:be important to sb.;read books and listen to music;on weekdays;either…or…;go to the theater;take a walk;try to do sth.;more colorful and meaningful。
句型:A colorful after-school life means a lot to me.;I like the feeling of working as a team.;On weekends, I either go to the theater with my friends or take a walk in the park with my parents.;I will try harder to make my after-school life more colorful and meaningful.
6.例文
Weekend or Not
Jack has to attend lots of classes at weekend. He has little time for his favorite sport—soccer. Still, his parents are pushing him to do more math exercises, which worries him a lot.
Nowadays, many students are under much pressure like Jack. Their parents believe it is necessary for them to make full use of the weekends and learn as much as possible. As a result, some students are stressed out and therefore lose interest in learning anything. What is worse, they may not be able to learn to manage their own life.
I do hope all the children can have the freedom to choose what they like to do and enjoy their weekends.
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于记叙文写作,写作时要记叙文格式写。在写作时开头介绍杰克在周末要上很多课;第二段介绍学生有很多压力,而且对学习失去兴趣;第三段表达希望所有的孩子有自由选择他们想要做的事。
2.例文点评:例文采用三段式;用第三人称来叙述内容;时态采用一般现在时,介绍学生周末的活动,感受到的压力,叙述完整且条理清晰。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。
3.高分亮点:
短语:push sb to do sth;make full use of;as…… as possible;as a result;learn to do sth;like to do sth。
句型:定语从句which worries him a lot;句型 it is necessary for them to make full use of the weekends and learn as much as possible;宾语从句what they like to do and enjoy their weekends。
7.The Spring Festival is very important in China. We do a lot to celebrate the festival. We clean the house and buy a lot of food to get ready for the family party. Red is the colour of the Spring Festival and brings good luck. We can see big red lanterns everywhere and get red envelopes with lucky money. We have a traditional family dinner before Chinese New Year arrives. All the family members make dumplings together before 12 o’clock on Spring Festival Eve. That is my favourite family activity because I can listen to my grandparents’ old stories while making them. Chinese Spring Festival is full of happiness, hope and peace.
【详解】这是一篇图表,要求介绍中国重要的传统节日春节。动笔前先要认真阅读要点,围绕要点组织材料,然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来,在此基础上亦可适当发挥,注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用一般现在时态,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
8.Hi, Tony!
I’m glad that you will come to Beijing soon. There are lots of places of interest in Beijing. In order to experience traditional Chinese culture better, I do recommend Beijing Hutong tour.
First, we’re going to go sightseeing along the lanes in Hutong. The houses in Hutong are traditional, such as Siheyuan. From them, you can imagine how people used to live. Of course you can stop anywhere you like and it is interesting to take pictures or have a close look. Second, we are going to pay visits to a Hutong family. We can have lunch there and have a short talk with the local residents, which can help you learn about many stories of the past. We can not only appreciate the dramatic changes that Hutong has undergone, but also see evidence of the history of Beijing, experience the old way of life and exper ience traditional Beijing culture.
In a word, Hutongs are the homes of common people in the past. It is easy to know how people lived and had fun in the old days. So it is a good choice to learn about traditionalChinese culture.
I’m looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】试题分析:本次作文为提纲类作文,要求根据Tony的问题回复邮件,为他设计北京一日游活动,帮助他体验中国传统文化。请描述你们打算去的地方、具体的活动安排、以及这样安排的理由。写作提纲已经列出,要求明确,故要完成写作任务,务必把各提纲所要求的内容表达清楚。
写作亮点:本篇范文成功地完成了写作任务,要点全面,结构连贯。本文应用了很多短语使得文章很生动,例如There are lots of places of interest in Beijing. In a word, Hutongs are the homes of common people in the past.宾语从句和定语从句From them, you can imagine how people used to live. Of course you can stop anywhere you like and it is interesting to take pictures or have a close look.的应用使得短文表达更丰富;表示顺序的副词First, Second, Finally,的应用更使得短文表述层次更清晰。总之,该文是一篇不错的短文。
考点:提纲类作文
9.Dear Paul,
How is everything Here is my room. It’s not very big. There is a bed in the middle of the room. Look! My cap is on my bed. On the left side of the bed, there is a floor lamp. And on the right side of the bed, there is a small round table. There is also a table under the window. There are some books on the table. And there is a chair under the table. What’s that on under the chair It’s a ball. What is it on the floor Oh, it is my schoolbag. My bedroom is not very beautiful, but I think it is very tidy, and I like it very much. How about your room Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】本篇文章要求以信件的形式介绍自己的房间,所以首先在格式上要符合信件的要求。其次在描述房间时,要用到there be 句型,但是又要避免句式的单一性;时态用到一般现在时。本文首先Here is my room. It’s not very big.做到开篇点题引出自己的房间,并对房间做一大体描述。接下来,根据图片要求对房间的东西进行逐一描述,There is a…., There is also a…,also的使用使句子显得很有连贯性。On the left side…and on the right side…使本来零散的句子成为了一个整体。文章并没有全部使用there be句型,还用到What’s that on under the chair It’s a ball.使文章句式显得多样丰富,用My bedroom is not very beautiful, but I think it is very tidy, and I like it very much.写出我对我的房间的看法。最后以How about your room Please write to me soon.作为文章的结尾,恰到好处。
10.One possible version:
I’m sorry to hear you are in trouble now. I can understand your feeling. But I don’t think it is right for you to do things like that. Don’t worry. Here are some suggestions for you:
As a student, it’s important for you to study hard to get more knowledge. So I think doing homework is necessary and useful. You should do your homework first. If it is not too late, you can play computer games for a while. Remember to go to bed as early as possible, then you won’t feel tired the next day.
In class, you need to listen to the teachers carefully and take notes. What’s more, it’s important to take part in class activities, try to answer at least two questions each class. If you have any problems, ask your teachers or classmates for help. I ’m sure you’ll make great progress and pass the final exam. Good luck!
【详解】本题是写一篇给定要求的电子邮件。写作的内容包括笔友的问题,你对笔友问题的看法,提出个人解决问题的建议,在写作时应注意电子邮件的格式,同时应注意符合题意,注意语言的准确性和连贯性。