北京中考英语写作电子邮件专项训练（含答案）

电子邮件
1．假设你是Li Ming，你的英国笔友Tom想来中国旅游，他向你咨询了一些问题。请给他回一封电子邮件包括来中国旅游的最佳时间及原由、来这能做什么和你的一些建议等。回信开头已给出，字数在50词左右。提示词供选用。
提示词：spring, summer, autumn, winter, sunny, warm, cool, visit, take phones
提示问题：1. When is the best time to visit Beijing And why
2. What can I do there
3. Can you give me some advice
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to hear from you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Ming
2．假设你叫李华，刚刚收到外国交换生John的一封电子邮件。他已经来北京两个月了，但是还未参观过北京的景点。请给他回复一封电子邮件，简要介绍一下你参观过的某一个北京著名景点，你做了什么，并给他一些在京游玩的建议。
提示词语：wonderful, photos, traditional food, shoes, masks（口罩）
Dear Li Hua,I have been in Beijing for two months. In fact, I don’t know much about this city. Can you tell me one place that you have been to What did you do during the trip Can you give me some advice if I go there Yours, John
Dear John,I’m glad that you have been in Beijing for two months. Beijing is a big city and there are many interesting places_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
If you have any questions, you can send an email to me.
Yours,
Li Hua
3．假如你叫李华，你的网友在邮件里提到最近她和好友之间产生的矛盾，她不知道自己是否做错了什么，接下来该怎么做。请你写一封英文邮件，给她一些建议并谈谈你对“友谊”的看法。
Dear Li Hua,How’s everything going I’m so worried and I want to get your help. Last Friday my best friend Judy asked me to see a movie with her after school. I told her I wasn’t interested in the movie and refused her. Actually, I wanted to prepare for a speech competition（演讲比赛）on the weekend. As a result, she was angry with me and didn’t talk to me anymore. What should I do I’m looking forward to your ideas. Thanks a lot. Yours, Lily
提示词语：prepare for，talk to，say sorry
提示问题：Do you think if Lily did anything wrong？
What’s your advice for her
What is your understanding about friendship
Dear Lily.I’m sorry to hear about your trouble.
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Yours.
Li Hua
4．假如你叫李华，作为班长你将带领本班同学进行一次“服务进社区”活动。请用英语写一封邮件给你班交换生Peter，告知活动的时间、地点，活动安排以及需要做什么准备。
提示词语：clean up, collect rubbish, visit old people, poster
提示问题：When and where will you have the activity
What will you do to help in the community
What do you advise Peter to prepare for it
Dear Peter,
All the classmates are going to have an activity called “Helping in the Community”.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
If there’s anything more you want to know, please tell me.
Yours,
Li Hua
5．假如你叫李华，是班长。你班将要在本周六组织一次去长城的郊游（a school trip）。请你根据下面的提示问题给外教Johnson写一封邮件，邀请他参加你们的活动并告诉他你们的安排：什么时间在哪里集合？你们计划怎么去？在那里你们打算做什么？并请谈谈你们的心情。
提示词语：far away from, take a walk, photos, postcards
提示问题：
● When and where are you going to meet
● How are you going to get there (By train By bus ... )
● What are you going to do
Dear Mr. Johnson,
Our class will have a school trip to the Great Wall this Saturday. Would you like to come with us The followings are our plans.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
We will be very happy if you can join us. Look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
6．假如你是李华，你们班的外籍学生Peter想和你一起参加周末的志愿活动。请你给他回复邮件，告诉他周末志愿活动的具体时间和地点，你们打算做哪些事情以及你对他的建议。
提示词语：old people’s home, clean, sing, prepare
提示问题：
● When and where are you going to volunteer
● What will you do there
● What advice do you want to give him
Dear Peter,How is it going Knowing that you are interested in taking part in the voluntary activity this weekend, I would like to tell you something about it. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua
7．假如你是李华，Peter是来自友好学校的交换生。请用英语给Peter写一封邮件，邀请他加入你们学校的某个社团。请结合以下问题和提示词语展开邮件的内容。
提示词语：sports, activity, healthy, confident, friends
提示问题：
1.What club do you invite Peter to join
2.Why do you want him to join this club
3.What activities will you have in this club this term
Dear Peter,
How is it going I’m writing to invite you to join____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
8．假如你是李华，你的笔友Peter希望了解你想参加的学校社团。请你回复一封邮件，说明你想参加什么社团以及参加该社团的原因。
提示词语：swimming, chess, interested, sing
提示问题： 1. What club do you want to join
2. Why do you want to join it
Dear Peter.
I’m glad to hear from you. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
9．假如你是李华，你收到你的朋友Tom发来的邮件，询问你最喜欢的中国传统节日。请用英语写一封电子邮件，告诉他最喜欢的中国传统节日，节日里你通常都做些什么，以及你喜欢这个节日的原因。
提示词语：get together, enjoy, share, relax
提示问题：
What’s your favorite Chinese traditional festival
What do you usually do during the festival
Why do you like it
Dear Tom, I’m writing to tell you something about my favorite Chinese traditional festival. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ What is your favorite festival Best wishes to you. Yours, Li Hua
10．假如你是李华，你的笔友Peter想了解中国的传统手工艺术。请用英语给他写一封邮件，向他介绍一种你最喜欢的中国传统手工艺术形式，对其做简要描述，并谈谈你最喜欢它的原因。
提示词语：paper cutting, sky lantern, history, luck, wishes
提示问题：
●What is your favorite traditional Chinese art form Please describe it.
●Why is it your favorite
Dear Peter,
How is it going __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
1．例文：
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to hear from you. I’m very happy to know that you are coming to Beijing. In spring, it’s warm and windy. In summer, it’s hot. Winter is cold and dry, but the city is very beautiful after snow. The best time to visit Beijing is in autumn. Because the weather is usually cool and sunny.
There are many places of interest in Beijing, such as Tian’anmen Square, the Summer Palace, the Palace Museum and so on. If you come to Beijing, I suggest you must climb the Great Wall, because there is an old saying that “He who doesn’t reach the Great Wall is not a true man”. It’s a good idea to bring a camera because you’ll probably want to take a lot of pictures. Also, remember to buy a map, because you might get lost in the city. Of course, I can be your guide if you like. I hope this information is useful.
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：根据题干中给出的问题提示，向Tom介绍来北京旅游的相关情况，并给出一些建议，可适当发挥，注意突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简单问候，并介绍北京的气候以及最佳旅游的时间和原因；
第二步，介绍在北京可以做什么，并给出建议；
第三步，书写结语。表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①be happy to do很高兴做某事
②places of interest名胜古迹
③take a lot of pictures拍很多照
④get lost迷路
[高分句型]
①I’m very happy to know that you are coming to Beijing.(that引导的宾语从句)
②If you come to Beijing, I suggest you must climb the Great Wall, because there is an old saying that “He who doesn’t reach the Great Wall is not a true man.”. (if引导的条件状语从句，because引导的原因状语从句)
2．例文
Dear John,
I’m glad that you have been in Beijing for two months. Beijing is a big city and there are many interesting places, such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace, the Palace Museum and the Forbidden City. The Great Wall is one of the seven wonders of the world. You can only appreciate the Great Wall when you climb it yourself. I’ve been to the Great Wall before. Also, I took a lot of pictures. If you want to go to the Great Wall, I can give you some advice.
First, you should get a pair of comfortable shoes. Because you’ll be walking for a long time. Having a comfortable pair of shoes will make your journey more enjoyable. Secondly, you should wear a mask. Finally, you should check the weather forecast in advance and choose a sunny day.
If you have any questions, you can send an email to me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给邮件内容完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可自由发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你去过的一个地方；
第二步，介绍你在旅行中做了什么；
第三步，最后给出对方游玩的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①one of...……之一
②make sb/sth adj.使某人/某事……
③in advance提前
[高分句型]
①You can only appreciate the Great Wall when you climb it yourself.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②If you want to go to the Great Wall, I can give you some advice.（if引导的条件状语从句）
3．例文
Dear Lily.
I’m sorry to hear about your trouble. I think friends should be honest with each other. So you didn’t tell your friends the truth. You were really wrong. So I suggest you talk to her. You should say sorry to her first. And tell her you didn’t accept the invitation because you wanted to prepare for the speech contest. I believe she will forgive you when she knows the truth. Because the movie can be seen at any time, but the speech contest has only one chance. Finally, I hope you will be honest with your friends in the future. I hope these suggestions can help you.
Yours.
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达友谊之间诚实是最重要的；
第二步，给出自己的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①each other彼此
②say sorry to对……说抱歉
③at any time在任何时候
[高分句型]
①I think friends should be honest with each other.（省略that的宾语从句）
②And tell her you didn’t accept the invitation because you wanted to prepare for the speech contest.（because引导原因状语从句）
4．例文
Dear Peter,
All the classmates are going to have an activity called “Helping in the Community”. I will lead the students to a “service into the community” activity in Sunshine Community this Saturday. I hope you can join us.
We will help them clean up and collect rubbish. At the same time, we will also visit the nursing home and paste posters to protect the environment. We will also perform some programs for the elderly and have lunch with them. If you can attend, I suggest you wear some old clothes and take some small gifts.
If there’s anything more you want to know, please tell me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示问题进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍活动并发出邀请；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，介绍活动的时间、地点、活动安排以及需要做什么准备；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①lead...to...带领
②clean up清理
③protect the environment保护环境
[高分句型]
①If you can attend, I suggest you wear some old clothes and take some small gifts.（if引导的条件状语从句和省略that的宾语从句）
②If there’s anything more you want to know, please tell me.（if引导的条件状语从句和省略that的定语从句）
5．例文
Dear Mr. Johnson,
Our class will have a school trip to the Great Wall this Saturday. Would you like to come with us The followings are our plans.
The Great Wall is one of the most popular attractions in Beijing. However, it is far away from our school, so we will go there by bus. We will relax ourselves there, such as taking a walk and taking some photos. At the same time, we will buy some postcards because they are meaningful. We will meet at the school gate at 8 a.m. this Saturday. And we can’t wait to visit the Great Wall.
We will be very happy if you can join us. Look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态以“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏“要点”中谈谈你们的心情，注意要点要齐全。
[写作步骤]
第一步，由于短文开头已给出，故接下来介绍如何去长城，即具体的交通方式；
第二步，介绍将在长城做的事情；
第三步，告知集合的时间和地点，并表达“迫不及待想去长城”的心情。
[亮点词汇]
①one of the...最……之一
②such as例如
③at the same time同时
④can’t wait to do sth.迫不及待做某事
[高分句型]
①However, it is far away from our school, so we will go there by bus.（so引导结果状语从句）
②At the same time, we will buy some postcards because they are meaningful.（because引导原因状语从句）
6．Dear Peter,
How is it going Knowing that you are interested in taking part in the voluntary activity this weekend, I would like to tell you something about it.
We are going to the Old People’s Home this Saturday. We’ll meet at the school gate at 1:30. It’ll take us about 15 minutes to get there. After we arrive, we’ll help the old people tidy their rooms, such as making the beds, sweeping the floors, cleaning the windows and so on. We’ll also chat with them and sing for them.
Here are some tips for you. On one hand, you can take your phone which can help you record the meaningful moment. On the other hand, you can prepare an English song for them if it is convenient for you.
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点中给Peter的建议；注意要点包含全面、逻辑清晰、行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，将介绍一些与志愿活动相关的事情；
第二步，介绍志愿活动的地方、时间以及活动等；
第三步，阐述给Peter的建议；
第四步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
① be interested in 对……感兴趣
② take part in 参加
③ make the bed 整理床铺
④ look forward to 期盼
[高分句型]
① It’ll take us about 15 minutes to get there.（it+takes+sb.+时间+to do sth. 某人花多少时间做某事）
② On one hand, you can take your phone which can help you record the meaningful moment. On the other hand, you can prepare an English song for them if it is convenient for you.（on one hand ... on the other hand 一方面……，另一方面……）
7．例文
Dear Peter,
How is it going I’m writing to invite you to join the sports club because I know you like sports very much. Some activities will be held on the playground after school every Friday afternoon. There will be some fun fitness activities. We can experience some events of the Winter Olympic Games, and we can also take part in some sports. You’d better wear comfortable shoes and bring some water with you. I’m sure you’ll love it.
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你邀请Peter加入什么俱乐部；
第二步，简单介绍你为什么邀请他加入这个俱乐部；
第三步，最后介绍这个俱乐部有什么活动。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②had better do最好做
③look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①There will be some fun fitness activities.（there be的一般将来时）
②I’m sure you’ll love it.（省略that的宾语从句）
8．例文：
Dear Peter.
I’m glad to hear from you. I’d like to join the Music Club in our school very much. There are a few reasons why I would like to be a keen participant in the club.
First, I have outstanding piano skills, and have the experience of playing on the stage. Therefore, I will be able to play for the school concerts. What’s more, I am also interested in singing and playing the guitar. I will put a lot of efforts in the training. Last, I’m friendly to everyone, so I can certainly get on well with other club members.
All in all, both my interest and musical ability make me a good member of the Music Club, and I am going to apply for it soon. How about you
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示问题中的关键信息，回复邮件说明你想参加什么社团及参加该社团的原因。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，告知对方自己想要加入哪个社团；
第二步，介绍为何要加入这个社团；
第三步，总结。
[亮点词汇]
①be able to 能够
②be interested in 对……感兴趣
③put efforts in 投入努力
④get on well with 与……和睦相处
[高分句型]
①There are a few reasons why I would like to be a keen participant in the club.（there be句型；why引导定语从句）
②All in all, both my interest and musical ability make me a good member of the Music Club, and I am going to apply for it soon.（and连接并列句）
9．Dear Tom,
I’m writing to tell you something about my favorite Chinese traditional festival.
My favorite festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival, which usually comes in September or October. On that day, our family members usually get together and have a nice meal, After that, I always admire the moon and share mooncakes with my family. I love this festival because I like eating mooncakes. They are in the shape of a full moon and carry people’s wishes to the family they love. In short, the Mid-Autumn Festival is a special day full of pleasure and happiness. I hope that my letter will help you know more about Chinese festivals. What is your favorite festival
Best wishes to you.

Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中你最喜欢的中国传统节日，节日里你通常都做些什么，以及你喜欢这个节日的原因。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山直接介绍自己最喜欢的中国传统节日。
第二步，具体阐述节日里自己通常都做些什么，以及自己喜欢这个节日的原因。
第三步，书写结束语。表达“最美好的祝愿”的想法。
[亮点词汇]
① get together相聚
② admire the moon赏月
③ in the shape of a full moon满月的形状
④ in short总而言之
[高分句型]
① My favorite festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival, which usually comes in September or October.（which引导非限制性定语从句）
② I love this festival because I like eating mooncakes.（because引导原因状语从句）
③ I hope that my letter will help you know more about Chinese festivals.（用宾语从句表达自己的希望）
10．例文
Dear Peter,
How is it going Today I’d like to tell you something about Chinese paper cutting.
My favorite traditional Chinese art form is paper cutting. Paper cutting has been around for over 1,500 years. It sounds very easy but it can be difficult to do. The paper, usually red is folded before it is cut with scissors. The most common pictures are flowers, animals, and things about Chinese history. During the Spring Festival, they are put on windows, doors and walls as symbols of wishes and good luck and a happy new year. I like paper cutting because it shows the things that are important in life, such as love, beauty and family.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏“要点”中你喜欢的原因，注意要点要齐全。
[写作步骤]
第一步，由于短文开头已给出，故接下来介绍写邮件的目的；
第二步，具体介绍自己最爱的中国传统艺术形式——剪纸；
第三步，介绍喜欢剪纸的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①would like想要
②as symbols of作为……的象征
[高分句型]
①The paper, usually red is folded before it is cut with scissors.（before引导时间状语从句）
②I like paper cutting because it shows the things that are important in life, such as love, beauty and family.（because引导原因状语从句；that引导定语从句）