上海中考英语材料作文专项训练（含答案）

材料作文
1．你喜欢Monkey King卡通片吗？请根据下述所给的内容写一篇短文，介绍一下你对Monkey King情感，可适当发挥。内容包括：
(1) magic, brave, successful, skillful, kill monsters,
(2) like it, young age, protect Monk Tang,
(3) become Monkey King to beat bad men on the earth。
作文要求：
(1)不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名。
(2)语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Monkey King
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2．保持健康对于我们来说是非常重要的，我们如何保持健康呢？请以“How do we keep healthy ”为题写一篇文章，例如，具备平衡的饮食，多吃蔬菜，少吃肉，多锻炼身体，保持快乐的心态。
可能用到的词汇：a balanced diet, fish, necessary, exercise, running, walking, jogging, be happy every day, talk with parents or friends.
要求：
1.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整。
2.词数不少于80。(开头已给出，不计入总词数)
How do we keep healthy
It’s important for us to keep healthy. But what can we do to make us healthy
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3．你的学校正在开展主题为“The most beautiful volunteer”的征文活动，请写一篇文章介绍一位志愿者，以及她/他的事迹。
文章内容可以包含以下几个问题：
1. Who is he/she
2. What did he/she do (What does he/she do )
3. What can you learn from him/her
注意：1. 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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4．中国的茶是世界上最受欢迎的饮品之一，假如你叫李华，你的学校正在举行用英语讲好中国故事的比赛，请围绕茶的历史、种类、加工、饮茶、益处等方面，根据下面的思维导图，以“Chinese Tea Culture”为题，写一篇英语短文。
要求：
1. 语言表达准确，短文连贯、通顺；
2. 短文应包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥，不要逐字翻译；
3. 词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Chinese Tea Culture
Good morning! Ladies and gentleman. My name is Li Hua. I am happy to share my topic with you here. Chinese tea is one of the most popular drinks in the world. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Come to enjoy Chinese tea culture. Maybe, you will like it.
5．Write at least 60 words on the topic “My views on online study” (以“在线学习之我见”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)
随着在线学习模式的开启，你对在线学习的态度是什么？你在线上学习的过程中有什么经验可以向大家分享？请结合自己或他人在线学习的经历，谈谈你对这个话题的看法。
（ 注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
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6．Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic“Love is always around”. (以“爱一直在我身边”为题写一篇不少于60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
提示：Kevin的故事告诉我们无论遇到什么问题，身边总是会有支持或帮助你的人让你感受到爱。请结合自己的经历，具体谈谈他或她做了什么让你感受到爱一直在你身边。
(注意：1. 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分；2. 照抄阅读理解语篇的不给分。)
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7．Write at least 60 words about the topic “My Way(s) of Improving Social Skills”（ 以“我提高社交技能的方法”为题写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容供参考)
1. Are social skills important
2. Describe your own experience and share your way of improving social skills.
3. What do you want to say to those who are shy
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8．Write at least 60 words on the topic “Use electricity safely”. （你发现你身边的亲朋好友经常有不安全用电的行为，有很大的危险隐患。请以“安全用电”为题写一篇 60—120 词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
Use the following points as a guide: （写作必须包含以下内容）
1. How do some people use electricity
2. Why should we use electricity safely
3. What’s your suggestion on using electricity safely
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9．Write at least 60 words on the given topic (根据以下话题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
There are a lot of useful resources in our life. Please choose one and write at least 60 words about the topic “The importance of ____________”
(我们的生活中有许多有用的资源，请选取一种以“____________ 的重要性”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文。标点符号不占格。)
Suggested questions:
Why is the thing important
What can we do with it
What can we do to protect it
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10．Write at least 60 words on the topic “________ is important ”.(以“________是重要的”为题，写一篇不少于60个单词的短文。）
Suggested questions:
1. What do you think is important
2. Why do you think so ( list at least two reasons)
注意：
文中不得出现人名、班级等个人信息，否则不予评分。
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1．例文
Monkey King
Do you like cartoons Tell you the truth, I like cartoons very much, because they are very interesting. And I don’t feel bored. When I was young, my mother always told me something about Monkey King, I like Monkey King very much because Monkey King is very brave and he can beat so many monsters. He protects Monk Tang to travel to the west. So I want to be Monkey King in the future.
I really want to beat bad men on the earth. There will be no war and no fight. There will be peace everywhere. Do you think so
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文。
时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”。
提示：写作提示以及题目已给出，要围绕写作提示进行写作，并可以适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，通过问题引出Monkey King这个主题；
第二步，介绍美猴王的具体事迹以及喜爱他的原因；
第三步，表达自己的感想。
[亮点词汇]
①protect sb. to do sth保护某人做某事
②in the future在未来
[高分句型]
There will be no war and no fight. There will be peace everywhere. (there be句型)
2．例文
How do we keep healthy
It’s important for us to keep healthy. But what can we do to make us healthy
First, we should have a balanced diet. It’s necessary for us to eat different kinds of foods. We can eat vegetables and fresh fruit every day. Fish is also good food for our health, but we’d better eat less meat or junk food.
Second, taking exercise helps us keep healthy and strong. There are many ways to do exercise. For example, we can have a walk after dinner. We can play basketball and ping-pong at weekends. Swimming, jogging and running are also helpful.
Third, being happy is another way to keep healthy. We should smile a lot and don’t worry too much. When we feel lonely or sad, we can talk with our friends, parents or watch some interesting TV shows. They may help us to be in a good feeling.
In short, I hope everyone can enjoy a healthy and happy life.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据所给的建议提示以及参考词汇具体阐述如何保持健康；
第二步，简单总结。
[亮点词汇]
①different kinds of不同种类的
②for example比如
③in short简言之
[高分句型]
①taking exercise helps us keep healthy and strong.（动名词作主语）
②When we feel lonely or sad, we can talk with our friends, parents or watch some interesting TV shows.（when引导的时间状语从句）
3．例文：
The Most Beautiful Volunteer
Li Hong is a polite girl. She is both kind and patient. She is a helpful volunteer. At school, she is always ready to help teachers and classmates. At weekends, she takes part in a lot of activities. She often does some cleaning in the street. Besides, she goes to the library to help carry books. Also, she looks after old people in the nursing home. We all think Li Hong is such an excellent girl that we should learn from her. We’d like to recommend her for The Most Beautiful Volunteer.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中对这位志愿者的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“写一篇文章介绍一位志愿者，以及她/他的事迹”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“品质、所做的事、对她的评价等”几个方面重点介绍这位志愿者的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语，表达“我们想推荐她成为最美志愿者”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①be ready to do sth.乐意做某事；
②take part in参加；
③look after照顾；
④nursing home养老院。
[高分句型]
①We all think Li Lei is such an excellent boy that we should learn from him.（such...that引导的结果状语从句）
②Many volunteers come to the libraries to do the service after work.(动词不定式作目的状语)
4．例文
Chinese Tea Culture
Good morning! Ladies and gentleman. My name is Li Hua. I am happy to share my topic with you here. Chinese tea is one of the most popular drinks in the world.
Chinese people have liked drinking tea since ancient times. Tea has a history of over 4000 years since the Chinese began to grow and drink tea. There are many kinds of tea in China, such as green tea, black tea, oolong tea and so on. Longjing Tea is famous all over the world. People use tea pots or tea cups to drink tea. They are made of ceramics.
Drinking tea is good for health. It’s said that green tea can prevent cancer. When you are tired, a cup of tea can help you relax.
Come to enjoy Chinese tea culture. Maybe, you will like it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文；
②时态：本文采用“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求包含所有提示内容，并适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，具体阐述茶的历史、种类、加工等；
第二步，阐述喝茶的好处；
第三步，表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①many kinds of tea很多种茶
②and so on等等
③all over the world全世界
[高分句型]
①Drinking tea is good for health.（动名词作主语）
②It’s said that green tea can prevent cancer.（主语从句）
③When you are tired, a cup of tea can help you relax.（when引导时间状语从句）
5．例文：
My views on online study
This spring our new term doesn’t come on time because the epidemic broke out. We have to learn online at home. We have lessons from Monday to Friday. Classes begin at 7:30 and end at 4:00 every day. We study Math, English, Chinese, Physics and PE. During online learning, there are many problems. Some students think that this kind of learning method is very fresh and can stimulate their interest in learning. If they meet problems in learning, they can ask the teacher for help in time. But some other students think it’s not good because they can’t concentrate on learning and they can not study as carefully as in class. When their parents go to work, they feel lonely at home alone.
As for me, I like learning at home because I needn’t get up early. I have more sleep time. I won’t hurry to school. But I miss my school, my teachers and my classmate. I look forward to meeting them soon.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作中需要回答额问题已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“内容提示”中的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍在家在线学习的经历；
第二步，分享同学在线学习的经验和看法；
第三步，表达自己对在线学习的看法。
[亮点词汇]
① stimulate激发
② concentrate on专心于……
[高分句型]
①Some students think that this kind of learning method is very fresh and can stimulate their interest in learning.（that引导的宾语从句）
②When their parents go to work, they feel lonely at home alone.（when引导的时间状语从句）
6．例文：
Love is always around
When I was in Grade 7, my English grade was poor. I was upset because of it. I even wanted to give up. My English knew it, and she communicated with me. She encouraged me not to give up. She also gave me some advice on how to learn English well. With the help of her, I made great progress in English. Thanks to her, I got better grades in final exam.
Love lets me grow up. We should enjoy love and send it to others.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时和一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的经历；
第二步，介绍自己的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①give up放弃
②communicate with与……沟通
③give up放弃
④with the help of在……的帮助下
⑤thanks to多亏了
[高分句型]
①When I was in Grade 7, my English grade was poor.（when引导时间状语从句）
②She also gave me some advice on how to learn English well（疑问词+动词不定式结构）
7．例文：
My Way(s) of Improving Social Skills
Having good social skills is very important. It can help you deal with relationships better.
I usually read more books to give myself more knowledge. When I meet others at the same time, I will take the initiative to say hello. If I attend the party, I will respect everyone. If you are shy, I suggest you join more clubs and take the initiative to make friends with them. You will become a popular person.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据题干中的问题提示介绍你提高社交技能的方法，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明社交技能的重要性；
第二步，通过自己的经历，分享你提高社交技能的方法；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①deal with处理
②at the same time同时
③make friends with sb和某人交朋友
[高分句型]
①When I meet others at the same time, I will take the initiative to say hello. (when引导的时间状语从句)
② If you are shy, I suggest you join more clubs and take the initiative to make friends with them.(if引导的条件状语从句)
8．例文
Use electricity safely
Using electricity safely is a very important topic in our daily lives.
First, ensure any electrical items are approved standard when purchasing and keep them correctly maintained. Second, unplug electrical items that are not in regular use and
ensure that you unplug and switch off electrical items when you are away from the house for any length of time . Third, don’t use any electrical items in the bathroom unless specifically
designed for use there, such as shavers and electric toothbrushes. But when you use them, make sure not to get them wet and avoid plugging and unplugging with wet hands. The last, always turn
the electrics off at the mains if carrying out any electrical repairs and only attempt repairs if you know what you are doing.
We should use electricity carefully because items left plugged in can be a fire risk and waste energy if left on standby.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示信息”中“应该如何用电；安全用电的原因以及安全用电的建议”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“安全用电是我们日常生活中非常重要的话题。”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“如何安全用电以及安全用电的建议”重点介绍安全用电的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。表达“我们应该谨慎用电，因为插上电源的物品如果处于待机状态，则可能会引发火灾，并浪费能源。”
[亮点词汇]
① switch off关上
② make sure not to do sth确保不做某事
[高分句型]
① Third, don’t use any electrical items in the bathroom unless specifically designed for use there, such as shavers and electric toothbrushes.（don’t...祈使句的否定形式，表劝告）
② We should use electricity carefully because items left plugged in can be a fire risk and waste energy if left on standby.（because引导的原因状语从句，if引导的条件状语从句）
9．例文
The importance of saving water
It is widely accepted that the role of water cannot be replaced by any other thing in our daily life, but few people are aware that the fresh water is reducing sharply. So, what should we do
As far as I am concerned, we should use water twice or more. For example, we can use water after cleaning the rice to water the plants. Furthermore, turn off the tap whenever we stop using it. Last but not least, polluted water should be dealt with in time to keep the river clean because we cannot live without water.
From what has been discussed above, we should pay close attention to daily water. Let’s act now to save water.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作时需要围绕题干提出的问题展开，并可适当发挥，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，并引出要保护的资源；
第二步，详细介绍采取的措施；
第三步，最后进行总结。
[亮点词汇]
① as far as I am concerned就我而言
② turn off关闭
③ last but not least最后
[高分句型]
① It is widely accepted that the role of water cannot be replaced by any other thing in our daily life, but few people are aware that the fresh water is reducing sharply.（it作形式主语）
②Furthermore, turn off the tap whenever we stop using it. （whenever引导的时间状语从句）
10．例文
Exercise is important
Everyone in the world wants to live happily. Exercise is indispensable to a happy life. There is a famous saying: “life lies in exercise.” So I think exercise is important.
Exercise helps to improve our mood. When you do exercise, you move a lot and you have to be more positive, which helps you become optimistic. Exercise will make your life full of all kinds of contents and make your life more colourful. Moreover, exercise will help you get rid of your inertia. If you insist on exercise, you will never be a lazy person.
Therefore, exercise is important. Let’s get up and exercise.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：要求根据提示问题，列出至少两点原因说明你的观点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍锻炼是重要的；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，介绍锻炼的好处和重要性；
第三步，总结并呼吁大家一起来做锻炼。
[亮点词汇]
① indispensable 不可或缺的
② Positive 积极乐观的
③ get rid of 摆脱
[高分句型]
If you insist on exercise, you will never be a lazy person.（条件状语从句）