上海中考英语书信作文专项训练（含答案）

书信作文
1．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇不少于 60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)
假如你是李华，收到同班同学王涛的e-mail 来信，在信中他提到自从他家小区进入封控以来，“线上学习”和“足不出户”让他感到焦虑万分。没有老师面对面督促、鞭策、叮咛，他无法独立高效地进行线上自主学习；同时“足不出户”让他无法通过户外运动保持良好的精神状态。即将面临中考，他现在待在家里既担心学习又担心身体健康。请你回信给他，给他一些学习和生活上的建议。
（注意：1.信中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。）
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2．Write a letter of at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一封不少于60个词的信，标点符号不占格。信的开头和署名已给，不计入总字数。)
“汉语桥“中文能力大赛的成功举办说明越来越多的外国学生对中华优秀文化很感兴趣。假设你是李华，你的外国网友Peter对中华文化很感兴趣，想了解并学习。请从以下中华文化的六种表现中，选择你最喜欢的一种推荐给他，并说明理由。
中华武术 (Chinese martial arts）京剧 (Peking Opera）中华书法 (Chinese calligraphy)
中文歌曲 (Chinese songs）中华美食 (Chinese food）中华剪纸 (Chinese paper-cutting)
(注意：1. 信中不得出现考生姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。)
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3．一年一度的校园开放日即将来临。下周五，我们美丽的校园将迎来敬爱的家长们。学生会(student union)特此收集同学们的活动设计。假设你是Peter，请给学生会负责人Karen写封信，提出2～3个开放日活动设计，并说明理由。
注意：1. 信中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分；
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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4．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. （根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点不占格）
假设你是Alice，你想领养上文的Sunday Special，请给收容所写一份信，说明你为什么想收养它，收养之后你会如何照顾它。
Reference phrases
feed him 3—4 times every day give him a bowl of water to drink
give him a blanket play with him
Dear officers,I read Sunday Special’s letter and my heart was touched. I would like to adopt the puppy. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours truly,
Alice
5．Suppose your friend Ben is going to travel in Shanghai next week. Please design a travel plan and write a letter to tell him about it.Write at least 50 words.(假设你的朋友Ben要来你上海旅游，请你为他设计一份旅行计划书并写信告知他。不少于50个单词）
Suggested expressions:
interesting places; It takes ... to do; I hope ...
Dear Ben,
I’m glad to know that you are going to visit Shanghai,
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6．世界动物保护协会(World Animal Protection)最近要招募志愿者。假如你是Tom，你想要加入志愿者团队，请写一封不少于60字的申请信，陈述你申请成为志愿者的原因。
（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
Dear Chairperson,
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Yours,
Tom
7．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation.（根据以下情景写一篇不少于60个字的短文，标点符号不占格。）
一年一度的校园开放日即将来临，下周五，我们美丽的校园将迎来敬爱的家长们。学生会(student union)特此收集同学们的活动设计。假设你是Peter，请给学生会负责人Karen写封信，提出2-3个开放日活动设计，并说明理由。
注意：
1．信中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2．照抄试卷中其他阅读语篇不得分。
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8．Suppose you are Kitty. Your best friend Lucy is going to Shanghai to spend the Spring Festival with you. Please make a 3-day holiday plan for her and write to Lucy to tell her about your plan. Complete the letter in at least 50 words. (假设你是Kitty，你最好的朋友Lucy准备来上海和你共度春节。请制定一个三天的节日计划并写信告诉她你的计划。用至少50个单词完成此信。标点符号不占空格，开头已给。)
You can begin like this:
Dear Lucy,
I’m so happy to know you’re going to spend the Spring Festival with me in Shanghai. I have made a 3-day holiday plan for us.
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9．学校学生会（the Students’ Union）要推选一名主席（chairperson），假设你是Mary，你准备推荐你们班的班长Tom，请根据提示对Tom做简要介绍，写一封100词左右的推荐信给李老师，并作适当补充和发挥。信的开头已经给出。
要点提示：
1. 属兔，又高又帅，爱好广泛，精通电脑，擅长演讲。
2. 最喜欢绿色和红色，绿色是大自然的颜色，给他活力；红色使他更容易采取行动。
3. 推荐理由：许多方面优秀，但很谦虚，从不炫耀；乐于助人、友好，愿意与他人人分享，同学们都乐意和他结交朋友；自信、勇敢、做事有条理……
10th October
Dear Mr Li,
I am writing to recommend Tom as the new chairperson of the Students’ Union. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely
Mary
10．第19届亚运会将在杭州举行，需要招募一批擅长英语的志愿者。假如你是李华，你想成为一名志愿者，请结合以下信息，用英语给组委会写一封自荐信。词数80左右。
注意事项：
1. 必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计人总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
Dear Sir,
I’m Li Hua from Zhangzhou. May I have the honor to work as a volunteer for Asian Games in Hangzhou ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your early reply.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
1．例文：
Dear Wang Tao,
I’m sorry to hear some of your problems. During the COVID-19 pandemic, we often encounter problems, but we need to face them with confidence.
First of all, you should make a study schedule and study according to the plan. In this way, you can learn effectively and independently. Second, you should do some proper exercises at home, such as push-ups, cordless jumping rope and so on. Finally, you should learn to relax yourself and keep a good mood.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第二人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达自己对于对方问题的同情；
第二步，具体给出对方一些学习和生活上的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①need to do sth需要做某事
②first of all首先
③in this way以这种方式
[高分句型]
During the COVID-19 pandemic, we often encounter problems, but we need to face them with confidence.（but连接的并列句）
2．例文
Dear Peter,
I know you are interested in Chinese culture. Now let me introduce one of the most important culture—Chinese paper-cutting.
It has a history of more than 5,000 years. It is easily made. You only need some paper and a pair of scissors. You can change the paper into some different shapes, such as animals, flowers and so on. When Spring Festival comes, you can see people stick them on the windows and walls. It is a symbol of good luck. You can learn how to make Chinese paper-cutting by watching videos.
We also have other traditional culture. If you want to learn more, please tell me. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Peter
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍剪纸是中国传统文化之一；
第二步，介绍剪纸的相关情况，包括它的历史，制作以及代表的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①more than多于
②change into把……变成……
③a symbol of……的象征
[高分句型]
①Now let me introduce one of the most important culture—Chinese paper-cutting（“one of the+形容词最高级”的结构）
②When Spring Festival comes, you can see people stick them on the windows and walls.（when引导的时间状语从句）
3．例文：
Dear Karen,
I’m Peter. Here are some of my thoughts. First, our parents visit our teaching building. Next, they visit our art room. Then they sit in an art class. Through the visit, parents can better understand the school running conditions and environment of our school. After that, they go to the conference room for a meeting. It can let parents better understand some information about the school and students.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文，是以书信的方式；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：材料只给出了写作的方向，要设计“2~3个开放日活动”，需要学生把内容补充完整，并要注意活动设计的逻辑性，同时也要注意书信的格式。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。可直接说明来信意图来引出下文的活动设计；
第二步，具体阐述活动设计的内容。要注意活动设计的逻辑性和合理性，可从参观地方的先后顺序来介绍；
第三步，简单总结，提及如此设计的理由。
[亮点词汇]
① first…, next…, then…, after that… 首先……，然后……，接下来……，之后……
② running conditions and environment 运行状况和环境
③ better understand 更好地理解
[高分句型]
① Through the visit, parents can better understand the school running conditions and environment of our school.（through…“通过……”，介词短语作条件状语）
② After that, they go to the conference room for a meeting. （for…“为了……”，介词短语作目的状语）
4．例文
Dear officers,
I read Sunday Special’s letter and my heart was touched. I would like to adopt the puppy.
When I was a little child, we kept a lovely pet dog in our family. I know how to look after a puppy and I really want to give the poor animal a warm home.
After I take him home, first of all, I will give him a blanket and make a comfortable bed for him to sleep on. Secondly, I will feed him 3 to 4 times a day. Of course, I will never forget to give him a bowl of water to drink. Thirdly, I will also prepare some toys for him to play with. When I get home from school, I will play with him.
I’m sure I can take good care of him and he will be very happy to be one of our family members.
Yours truly,
Alice
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封申请信，属于书信作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，不要遗漏提示中的“你为什么想收养它”这一要点，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接书信开头，引出话题；
第二步，先说明想收养小狗的原因，再按照要点提示说明你收养它后会如何照顾它，可列举具体的事例；
第三步，表示能照顾好小狗并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①first of all首先
②prepare sth for sb为某人准备某物
③take good care of照顾好……
[高分句型]
①When I was a little child, we kept a lovely pet dog in our family.（when引导时间状语从句）
②After I take him home, first of all, I will give him a blanket and make a comfortable bed for him to sleep on.（after引导时间状语从句）
③I’m sure I can take good care of him and he will be very happy to be one of our family members.（省略引导词that的宾语从句）
5．例文：
Dear Ben,
I’m glad to know that you are going to visit Shanghai, I will meet you at the airport. Then I will show you around the Bund of Shanghai. You will see many famous buildings here. Of course, I will also take you to taste our local food. I will also show you around the museum. You can visit many historical relics here. I will also show you around Central Street. You can shop here. I’m sure you will have a great time. I look forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：要求为你即将来上海旅游的朋友设计一份旅行计划书，计划应详细具体，注意不少于50词。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用简单问候，引出下文的旅行安排；
第二步，表达自己的期望。
[亮点词汇]
①show sb around带某人四处看看
②have a great time玩得高兴
③look forward to期望
[高分句型]
I’m sure you will have a great time.（宾语从句）
6．例文
Dear Chairperson,
I want to be a volunteer. There are some reasons. Firstly, I am kind to animals. I love animals very much. Secondly, I want to help some homeless animals. I want to give them not only water but also food. Thirdly, if I become a volunteer, I will call on more people to join us. I promise to take care of animals well. I am looking forward to becoming a volunteer of the World Animal Protection.
Yours,
Tom
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：本文要求写一封申请信，申请加入加入志愿者团队，并陈述你申请成为志愿者的原因。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己想成为志愿者；
第二步，具体阐述自己申请成为志愿者的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①want to be想成为
②be kind to对……友好
③promise to do承诺做某事
④look forward to doing期望做
[高分句型]
①Thirdly, if I become a volunteer, I will call on more people to join us.（if引导的条件状语从句）
7．例文：
Dear Karen,
I’m writing to tell you about the plan of our School Open Day. Next Friday will be our Open Day. We are going to hold some interesting activities and invite our parents to visit our school.
First, our parents will arrive at our school at 2:00 p.m, and they will visit our classroom on the second floor at 2:15 p.m. Next, they will look at our projects in Arts and Crafts room on the third floor at 2:30 p.m. Then, they will listen to the school choir in the hall on the third floor at 3:10. After that, they will look at the English Club noticeboard in the library on the second floor at 4:00 p.m. Finally, they will have tea and cakes in the Music room on the third floor with the teachers at 4:25 p.m. I hope our parents will have a great time!
At last, I am also looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Peter
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍写信的目的；
第二步，介绍开放日的活动。
[亮点词汇]
①arrive at 到达
②have a great time 玩得开心
③at last 最后
[高分句型]
①I hope our parents will have a great time.（宾语从句）
②At last, I am also looking forward to your coming.（动名词作宾语）
8．例文
Dear Lucy,
I’m so happy to know you’re going to spend the Spring Festival with me in Shanghai. I have made a 3-day holiday plan for us.
I will take you to the Bund on the first day. There are many beautiful landscapes there, and you will love them. In the afternoon, we will go to taste local delicacies and snacks. The next day, I will show you the famous scenic spots and learn about the history of Shanghai. On the third day, I will take you to go boating. We can also fish on the boat.
Hope you’ll have a good time in Shanghai.
Yours,
Kitty
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：写作要求已给出，学生不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先引出话题，讲述制定三天的节日计划；
第二步，具体讲述三天的计划内容；
第三步，书写结语，表达“希望对方在上海玩得开心”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①show sb. sth.给某人看某物
②take sb. to do sth.带某人去做某事
③have a good time玩得开心
[高分句型]
①There are many beautiful landscapes there, and you will love them. （There be句型）
9．例文：
10th October
Dear Mr. Li,
I am writing to recommend Tom as the new chairperson of the Students’ Union. His year is the year of the rabbit. He is tall and handsome. He has a wild interest in many fields and is good at computer and speech. He likes green and red best. Green is the color of nature, giving him vitality. Red makes it easier for him to take action.
Tom is excellent in many aspects, but he is very modest, and she never shows off. He is always ready to help others. When we have trouble, he often offers us some help. He is very easy-going, and everyone wants to make friends with him. He is friendly, and he is willing to share with others. He is confident, brave and organized. We all like him and we hope that he can be the new chairperson of the Students’ Union.
Yours sincerely,
Mary
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，也是一篇书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写在要点已给出，学生要要注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中Tom的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并要提出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，推荐Tom做主席。介绍Tom的属相、爱好；
第二部，具体阐述Tom的优点，作为推荐Tom的理由；
第三部，书写结束语，最后表达希望Tom能成为学校学生会主席的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
① have a wild interest in many fields爱好广泛
② be good at擅长
③ like…best最喜欢……
④ be excellent in many aspects在许多方面优秀
[高分句型]
① Red makes it easier for him to take action.（it做形式宾语，代替不定式）
② When we have trouble, he often offers us some help.（when引导时间状语从句）
10．例文：
Dear Sir,
I’m Li Hua from Zhangzhou. May I have the honor to work as a volunteer for Asian Games in Hangzhou I’m friendly and smart. I love to meet different people and make friends with them. I’m also helpful and I’m ready to help people in need.
I can speak Chinese and English well. Chinese history and geography are my favorite, because they are interesting. It’s easy for me to tell Chinese stories to players and visitors in both languages. Besides, I’m a sports lover. I enjoy doing sports such as playing basketball and football.
I think I can be a good volunteer. Looking forward to your early reply.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求以李华的身份向第19届亚运会组委会写一封应聘志愿者的自荐信，文中必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：本文是书信作文，用第一人称、一般现在时写作。书写时要紧扣主题，围绕提示内容展开叙述，做到中心突出，内容完整连贯，文句表达力求语法准确、逻辑清楚。