2023届陕西省部分市高三一模英语试卷分类汇编：应用文写作专题（含答案）
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2023届陕西省部分市高三一模英语解析版试卷分类汇编
应用文写作专题
2023届陕西省咸阳市高三一模英语试题
72．你校上周末举行了一次以“健康第一”为主题的登山比赛，校英文报现正以此为主题举行征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 活动当天的天气情况；
2. 比赛的过程与结果；
3. 你的感受。
注意：1. 短文长度100词左右；
2. 标题和开头句已为你写好，不计入总词数。
A Hill-climbing Competition
In order to enhance the students’ awareness of body building, a hill-climbing competition, with the theme of “Health Is First”, was held last Sunday by our school.
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2023届陕西省榆林市高三一模英语试题
52．假定你是李华, 你的英国交换生同学William今年要在他的寄宿家庭过春节。请你给他发一封电子邮件。
内容包括：1. 给他送上新年祝福；2. 邀请他到你家做客。
注意：
1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已为你写好。
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2023届陕西省宝鸡市高三一模英语试题
52．请你以“Science And Technology Influence Our Life”为题，给校刊“英语角”栏目写一篇英文稿件，内容包括： 1. 举例说明科学技术给学校教育和我们生活带来的新变化；2. 你的感受。
注意： 1. 短文词数不少于100词。
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 文中不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
Science And Technology Influence Our Life
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2023届陕西省汉中市高三教学质量第一次检测考试（一模）英语试题
52．In your spoken English class, your teacher slows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.
注意：词数100左右
基本分析：
1.三分之一描写要点：阳光，楼(很靠近)，弯曲的树。(the sun，two apartments flats closely-locate d.the winding/twisted tree)
2.三分之二议论着眼立意：
—人生角度：在成长的道路上(树的成长)，有曲折，有困难，(建筑的阻挡，弯曲)但是只要向着光明和希望(太阳)去努力拼搏，坚持不懈，还是能够冲破桎梏取得成功(树在楼的夹缝中长高了，超出建筑)。
3.立意与现实生活关系：引导青年学生要具有积极的生活态度，生活就是不断克服各种艰难险阻而取得“大直若曲”的成功与胜利。
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2023年陕西省渭南市高考英语一模试卷
19．（25分）假定你是李华，校学生会主席。现在全国中小学生近视问题日益严峻，这一现象已经 引起了国家的高度重视。为此，请你在全校升旗仪式上做演讲，呼吁爱眼护眼。
内容包括：学生近视的现状、改进和预防措施等。
要求：（1）词数100词左右；（2）开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：近视nearsightedness
Dear teachers and follow students：
It's my great honour to stand here and present a speech about the worrying situation of nearsightedness among Chinese students.
___________
That's all!Thanks for all your attention!
参考答案
2023届陕西省咸阳市高三一模英语试题
72．A Hill-climbing Competition
In order to enhance the students’ awareness of body building, a hill-climbing competition, with the theme of “Health Is First”, was held last Sunday by our school.
It was a sunny day. All students with joy gathered on the school gate first. Then, after the headmaster delivered a speech about safety and rules, we set off excitedly at 7: 30. All the way, we enjoyed the beautiful scenery of nature and shared interesting stories besides trying our best to move up-ward. It was at about 10: 00 that we all reached the top of the hill. The top three students come from class one, four, and nine.
Although not receiving an award, I wasn’t disappointed at all, for I had received better health and friendship.
【导语】这篇书面表达是一篇新闻报道。要求考生以李华的身份，为学校举办的以“健康第一”为主题的登山比赛写一篇短文，向学校的英文报投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
开心：joy→happiness
出发：set off→depart
失望的：disappointed→regretful
获得：receive→obtain
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：All students with joy gathered on the school gate first.
拓展句：All students who were joyful gathered on the school gate first.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Then, after the headmaster delivered a speech about safety and rules, we set off excitedly at 7: 30. (运用了after引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] Although not receiving an award, I wasn’t disappointed at all, for I had received better health and friendship. (运用了although引导的让步状语从句和for引导的原因状语从句)
2023届陕西省榆林市高三一模英语试题
52．Dear William,
On knowing that you have decided to spend the Spring Festival at your host family in China, I can’t wait to show my delight for it.
As far as I know, it is the first time you have decided to celebrate the Chinese New Year, which wil1 impress you greatly. As a custom of the Spring Festival, I will send you my best blessings to you. I wish you a happy New Year, all the best, happiness and health. Besides, I sincerely invite you to my home and share the happiness of Chinese New Year with my family.
I’d be more than a little glad if my invitation is accepted.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友William写信邀请他春节期间到家里做客。内容包括：给他送上新年祝福；邀请他到你家做客。
【详解】1.词汇积累
兴奋：delight→ excitement
我认为：as far as I am concerned → in my point of view
祝福：blessing→ wish
开心的：glad→ delighted
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：On knowing that you have decided to spend the Spring Festival at your host family in China, I can’t wait to show my delight for it.
拓展句：When I know that you have decided to spend the Spring Festival at your host family in China, I can’t wait to show my delight for it.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As far as I know, it is the first time you have decided to celebrate the Chinese New Year, which wil1 impress you greatly. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】I’d be more than a little glad if my invitation is accepted.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句和被动语态结构）
2023届陕西省宝鸡市高三一模英语试题
52．One Possible Version
Science And Technology Influence Our Life
Science and technology have been deeply influencing both our our life and study.
Take our school for example. Now there are several HD-cameras monitoring the whole campus in case of emergency or school bullying. At meal time, we can watch TV news in the dinning hall, learning the latest international and domestic events. Not only can our teachers use multimedia equipment to make their classes more lively, but also they can mark papers on the computer, which greatly improves the efficiency of paper-scoring.
Additionally, in our daily life we can do many things conveniently, such as paying by Alipay, getting food by card, going to school by shared bike and so on.
In a word, it is the development of science and technology that makes such a comfortable and convenient life available to us.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给校刊“英语角”栏目写一篇英文稿件，其内容包括举例说明科学技术给学校教育和我们生活带来的新变化以及你的感受。
【详解】1.词汇积累
以……举例：take...for example→take...for instance
极大地：greatly→enormously
此外：additionally→in addition
很多：many→ plenty of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：At meal time, we can watch TV news in the dinning hall, learning the latest international and domestic events.
拓展句：At meal time, we can watch TV news in the dinning hall, which enables us to learn the latest international and domestic events.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Not only can our teachers use multimedia equipment to make their classes more lively, but also they can mark papers on the computer, which greatly improves the efficiency of paper-scoring. (运用not only引导的部分倒装和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】In a word, it is the development of science and technology that makes such a comfortable and convenient life available to us. (运用了强调句型)
2023届陕西省汉中市高三教学质量第一次检测考试（一模）英语试题
52．In the picture, between two closely-located buildings grows a big tree. Unlike most trees, this one — bends in the middle, struggling all the way up to get more sunshine. The picture reminds me of those who succeed in unfavorable condition. Faced with difficulties, they never give up but try their best to find a way out. Life can be hard. But if we have the courage and determination, we will finally get the sunshine we want as the tree in the picture does.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于图画作文。要求考生描述这幅画并解释你是如何理解它的。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
不利的：unfavorable→detrimental
困难：difficulty→trouble
尽最大努力：try one’s best→do one’s best
获得：get→obtain
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Faced with difficulties, they never give up but try their best to find a way out.
拓展句：The people who are faced with difficulties never give up but try their best to find a way out.
【点睛】[高分句型1]The picture reminds me of those who succeed in unfavorable condition.(who引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2]But if we have the courage and determination, we will finally get the sunshine we want as the tree in the picture does.(if引导条件状语从句，省略关系代词的定语从句和as引导的方式状语从句)
2023年陕西省渭南市高考英语一模试卷
【分析】高分句型一：On one hand，for students，it is advisable to get regular breaks while studying.
译文：一方面，对于学生来说，在学习期间有规律地休息是明智的。
分析：这句话使用了while引导的省略的时间状语从句。
高分句型二：Going outdoors and enjoying the sunshine are highly recommended.
译文：强烈建议户外活动和享受阳光。
分析：这句话使用了动名词Going outdoors and enjoying the sunshine作主语。
【解答】Dear teachers and follow students：
It's my great honour to stand here and present a speech about the worrying situation of nearsightedness among Chinese students.A recent survey has suggested that roughly 3 out of 4 high school students are short﹣sighted and have to wear glasses. （学生近视的现状）
On one hand，for students，it is advisable to get regular breaks while studying. 【高分句型一】Going outdoors and enjoying the sunshine are highly recommended.【高分句型二】On the other hand，for schools，facilities are expected to improve to provide students with an eye﹣friendly environment.Besides，schools are supposed to take the responsibility to educate students the importance of improving eye health.We hope that with all these effective measures，eyesight problems can be greatly reduced.（改进和预防措施）
That's all!Thanks for all your attention!（感谢）
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
应用文写作专题
2023届陕西省咸阳市高三一模英语试题
72．你校上周末举行了一次以“健康第一”为主题的登山比赛，校英文报现正以此为主题举行征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 活动当天的天气情况；
2. 比赛的过程与结果；
3. 你的感受。
注意：1. 短文长度100词左右；
2. 标题和开头句已为你写好，不计入总词数。
A Hill-climbing Competition
In order to enhance the students’ awareness of body building, a hill-climbing competition, with the theme of “Health Is First”, was held last Sunday by our school.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2023届陕西省榆林市高三一模英语试题
52．假定你是李华, 你的英国交换生同学William今年要在他的寄宿家庭过春节。请你给他发一封电子邮件。
内容包括：1. 给他送上新年祝福；2. 邀请他到你家做客。
注意：
1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已为你写好。
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2023届陕西省宝鸡市高三一模英语试题
52．请你以“Science And Technology Influence Our Life”为题，给校刊“英语角”栏目写一篇英文稿件，内容包括： 1. 举例说明科学技术给学校教育和我们生活带来的新变化；2. 你的感受。
注意： 1. 短文词数不少于100词。
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 文中不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
Science And Technology Influence Our Life
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2023届陕西省汉中市高三教学质量第一次检测考试（一模）英语试题
52．In your spoken English class, your teacher slows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.
注意：词数100左右
基本分析：
1.三分之一描写要点：阳光，楼(很靠近)，弯曲的树。(the sun，two apartments flats closely-locate d.the winding/twisted tree)
2.三分之二议论着眼立意：
—人生角度：在成长的道路上(树的成长)，有曲折，有困难，(建筑的阻挡，弯曲)但是只要向着光明和希望(太阳)去努力拼搏，坚持不懈，还是能够冲破桎梏取得成功(树在楼的夹缝中长高了，超出建筑)。
3.立意与现实生活关系：引导青年学生要具有积极的生活态度，生活就是不断克服各种艰难险阻而取得“大直若曲”的成功与胜利。
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2023年陕西省渭南市高考英语一模试卷
19．（25分）假定你是李华，校学生会主席。现在全国中小学生近视问题日益严峻，这一现象已经 引起了国家的高度重视。为此，请你在全校升旗仪式上做演讲，呼吁爱眼护眼。
内容包括：学生近视的现状、改进和预防措施等。
要求：（1）词数100词左右；（2）开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：近视nearsightedness
Dear teachers and follow students：
It's my great honour to stand here and present a speech about the worrying situation of nearsightedness among Chinese students.
___________
That's all!Thanks for all your attention!
参考答案
2023届陕西省咸阳市高三一模英语试题
72．A Hill-climbing Competition
In order to enhance the students’ awareness of body building, a hill-climbing competition, with the theme of “Health Is First”, was held last Sunday by our school.
It was a sunny day. All students with joy gathered on the school gate first. Then, after the headmaster delivered a speech about safety and rules, we set off excitedly at 7: 30. All the way, we enjoyed the beautiful scenery of nature and shared interesting stories besides trying our best to move up-ward. It was at about 10: 00 that we all reached the top of the hill. The top three students come from class one, four, and nine.
Although not receiving an award, I wasn’t disappointed at all, for I had received better health and friendship.
【导语】这篇书面表达是一篇新闻报道。要求考生以李华的身份，为学校举办的以“健康第一”为主题的登山比赛写一篇短文，向学校的英文报投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
开心：joy→happiness
出发：set off→depart
失望的：disappointed→regretful
获得：receive→obtain
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：All students with joy gathered on the school gate first.
拓展句：All students who were joyful gathered on the school gate first.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Then, after the headmaster delivered a speech about safety and rules, we set off excitedly at 7: 30. (运用了after引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] Although not receiving an award, I wasn’t disappointed at all, for I had received better health and friendship. (运用了although引导的让步状语从句和for引导的原因状语从句)
2023届陕西省榆林市高三一模英语试题
52．Dear William,
On knowing that you have decided to spend the Spring Festival at your host family in China, I can’t wait to show my delight for it.
As far as I know, it is the first time you have decided to celebrate the Chinese New Year, which wil1 impress you greatly. As a custom of the Spring Festival, I will send you my best blessings to you. I wish you a happy New Year, all the best, happiness and health. Besides, I sincerely invite you to my home and share the happiness of Chinese New Year with my family.
I’d be more than a little glad if my invitation is accepted.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友William写信邀请他春节期间到家里做客。内容包括：给他送上新年祝福；邀请他到你家做客。
【详解】1.词汇积累
兴奋：delight→ excitement
我认为：as far as I am concerned → in my point of view
祝福：blessing→ wish
开心的：glad→ delighted
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：On knowing that you have decided to spend the Spring Festival at your host family in China, I can’t wait to show my delight for it.
拓展句：When I know that you have decided to spend the Spring Festival at your host family in China, I can’t wait to show my delight for it.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As far as I know, it is the first time you have decided to celebrate the Chinese New Year, which wil1 impress you greatly. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】I’d be more than a little glad if my invitation is accepted.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句和被动语态结构）
2023届陕西省宝鸡市高三一模英语试题
52．One Possible Version
Science And Technology Influence Our Life
Science and technology have been deeply influencing both our our life and study.
Take our school for example. Now there are several HD-cameras monitoring the whole campus in case of emergency or school bullying. At meal time, we can watch TV news in the dinning hall, learning the latest international and domestic events. Not only can our teachers use multimedia equipment to make their classes more lively, but also they can mark papers on the computer, which greatly improves the efficiency of paper-scoring.
Additionally, in our daily life we can do many things conveniently, such as paying by Alipay, getting food by card, going to school by shared bike and so on.
In a word, it is the development of science and technology that makes such a comfortable and convenient life available to us.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给校刊“英语角”栏目写一篇英文稿件，其内容包括举例说明科学技术给学校教育和我们生活带来的新变化以及你的感受。
【详解】1.词汇积累
以……举例：take...for example→take...for instance
极大地：greatly→enormously
此外：additionally→in addition
很多：many→ plenty of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：At meal time, we can watch TV news in the dinning hall, learning the latest international and domestic events.
拓展句：At meal time, we can watch TV news in the dinning hall, which enables us to learn the latest international and domestic events.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Not only can our teachers use multimedia equipment to make their classes more lively, but also they can mark papers on the computer, which greatly improves the efficiency of paper-scoring. (运用not only引导的部分倒装和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】In a word, it is the development of science and technology that makes such a comfortable and convenient life available to us. (运用了强调句型)
2023届陕西省汉中市高三教学质量第一次检测考试（一模）英语试题
52．In the picture, between two closely-located buildings grows a big tree. Unlike most trees, this one — bends in the middle, struggling all the way up to get more sunshine. The picture reminds me of those who succeed in unfavorable condition. Faced with difficulties, they never give up but try their best to find a way out. Life can be hard. But if we have the courage and determination, we will finally get the sunshine we want as the tree in the picture does.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于图画作文。要求考生描述这幅画并解释你是如何理解它的。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
不利的：unfavorable→detrimental
困难：difficulty→trouble
尽最大努力：try one’s best→do one’s best
获得：get→obtain
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Faced with difficulties, they never give up but try their best to find a way out.
拓展句：The people who are faced with difficulties never give up but try their best to find a way out.
【点睛】[高分句型1]The picture reminds me of those who succeed in unfavorable condition.(who引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2]But if we have the courage and determination, we will finally get the sunshine we want as the tree in the picture does.(if引导条件状语从句，省略关系代词的定语从句和as引导的方式状语从句)
2023年陕西省渭南市高考英语一模试卷
【分析】高分句型一：On one hand，for students，it is advisable to get regular breaks while studying.
译文：一方面，对于学生来说，在学习期间有规律地休息是明智的。
分析：这句话使用了while引导的省略的时间状语从句。
高分句型二：Going outdoors and enjoying the sunshine are highly recommended.
译文：强烈建议户外活动和享受阳光。
分析：这句话使用了动名词Going outdoors and enjoying the sunshine作主语。
【解答】Dear teachers and follow students：
It's my great honour to stand here and present a speech about the worrying situation of nearsightedness among Chinese students.A recent survey has suggested that roughly 3 out of 4 high school students are short﹣sighted and have to wear glasses. （学生近视的现状）
On one hand，for students，it is advisable to get regular breaks while studying. 【高分句型一】Going outdoors and enjoying the sunshine are highly recommended.【高分句型二】On the other hand，for schools，facilities are expected to improve to provide students with an eye﹣friendly environment.Besides，schools are supposed to take the responsibility to educate students the importance of improving eye health.We hope that with all these effective measures，eyesight problems can be greatly reduced.（改进和预防措施）
That's all!Thanks for all your attention!（感谢）
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