【好题精选】书面表达-2023年中考英语专题练（第一期）（浙江湖州）（含解析）

【好题精选】书面表达 -2023年中考英语专题练（第一期）（浙江湖州）
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、话题作文
1．在学校英语课上，老师要求大家就“在日常生活中遇到困难，是自行克服还是寻求他人帮助”的话题展开陈述，两种方式各有优势，请你根据下面表格内容，选择其中一种方式，并阐述理由。
Solve the Problems
by asking for help by myself
take less effort be more independent
improve communication skills improve thinking skills
get more ideas be more confident
… …
注意：
（1）短文必须包括你所选择的一方面内容的所有要点，并适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
（3）词数：80-100；
（4）短文的开头已给出，仅供参考，不计入总词数。In our daily life, we are often in trouble. When it happens, I like to solve the problem by（myself/asking for help）______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．英语课上，老师组织大家就以下两幅图进行“To change or not”的话题讨论。请用英语阐述你对此话题的看法。
注意：（1）短文中可结合图片信息或自身经历， 作适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
（3）词数：80-100，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：提醒 remind…of connect...to the Internet provide services
短文首句：Last week, we had a discussion about the topic “To change or not”.
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二、材料作文
3．浙江上线全国首个生态环境智能治理系统。为响应号召，金华市民以绿色出行的方式参与“生态环境智能治理金华”活动。请以“共建绿色城市”为主题，根据以下文字提示，并适当发表自己的观点，写一篇英语短文。
主题 Let’s build a green city together
具体做法 方式 益处
1.骑车、徒步出行 避免交通拥堵，减少空气污染
2.不乱扔垃圾，不随地吐痰 让城市变得干净舒适
3.垃圾分类，回收再利用 节约能源，提升环境保护意识
你的建议 联系自己的生活实际提出几条具体的合理的建议（至少2条）
要求： 1. 文中必须包含表格中的所有内容，可适当发挥；参考词汇仅供选择使用；
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称及其它相关信息；
3. 词数： 80-100词；
4. 文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：吐痰spit 垃圾箱dustbin 市民，公民citizen
垃圾分类divide the waste into groups 提升…的意识promote the awareness of…Let’s build a green city together
As citizens of Jinhua, it is our duty to help build a green city. We can_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4．假设你是李平，对学校网站公告栏上的“志愿服务我先行”活动很感兴趣。请阅读以下公告，帮助他写一封回复邮件。
注意：1.词数80-100；
2.内容包括要点，可适当增加细节；
3.文中不得出现真实的地名和校名等相关信息。
We are going to volunteer in the Old People’s Home and the Welfare Center for Children (儿童福利院) this Sunday. Would you like to join us Which one would you like to go to Why do you choose that Please tell us the reason and the things you can do there. How can you call on more people to join you What else can you do Welcome to join us!
To: School Subject: Volunteering Dear teachers, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5．生活中许多感动来自陌生人，即便是一件小事，也能让人触动和印象深刻。学校英语报正在征集以 “Express thanks to strangers who helped us out” 为主题的文章。请根据英语报启事，完成征文。
Express thanks to strangers who helped us out! ●Do you still remember what he/she looked like ●What was your trouble and how did he/she help out ●How did you feel and what would you like to say to him/her Share your stories!
要求：1. 必须包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 词数：80~100词；
3. 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
4. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
Thank you! I remember I was once helped by a stranger. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6．假定你是李雷。某英语杂志正在举办征文活动，请根据广告中的信息写一篇短文，用于投稿。文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；词数：80—100。
ARTICLES WANTED!Being Healthy Which do you think is more important, doing exercise or eating healthy food What do you do to stay healthy Tell us what you think! Write an article answering these questions and we will publish the best ones in our magazine.
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7．假设你是李明，你校开设了丰富多彩的拓展课，深受同学们的喜爱。请根据以下内容提示，向学校英文投注投稿，介绍一下这些课程及其带来的积极影响；提出你建议增设的课程并说明理由。
注意：1.词数：80-100 （短文首句已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
参考词汇：拓展课 “out-reach type” courses，dubbing 配音
To help us achieve different developments, our school has run colorful “out-reach type” courses, such as ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8．假如你是李雷，上周参观了以“Working the Waste into Magic”为主题的环保作品展。请你根据以下信息，写一篇短文，在英语课上介绍相关展品并分享自己的想法与感受。
What were on show What they are made of/from What you think
clothes chairs model planes … waste paper plastic bottles used wood and glass … creative save … …
注意：
（1）短文须介绍至少两项展品，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
（3）词数：80—100。短文首句仅供参考，不计入总词数。Hello, everyone! I’d like to tell you something about the show “Working the Waste into Magic” . _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
三、书信作文
9．Dear Li Hua,
How are you recently I know you are good at learning Chinese. I also like Chinese but I am having problems learning it. Can you help me Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Paul
假如你是李华，你收到你的笔友Paul的来信。你的汉语很好，Paul也很喜欢汉语，但是学起来有困难。Paul希望你介绍一下学习汉语的好方法。请你根据来信内容回一封信。
要求：1.结合所给信息，可适当发挥。
2.100词左右。信的格式已给出，不计入总字数。
Dear Paul,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
四、讲稿
10．当前，许多中小学积极组织学生参加研学活动。校英语社团组织学生就 “Should students have study trips on schooldays ”这一话题开展讨论。请你结合亲身经历写一篇发言稿，谈谈你的观点，并陈述理由。
参考词汇：study trip, experience, opinion, think
注意：
1.短文必须包含提示要点，可适当发挥；
2.词数80-100；首句已给出，不计入总词数；
3.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
Nowadays, taking study trips is quite popular among schools. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考答案：
1．例文：
In our daily life, we are often in trouble. When it happens, I like to solve the problems by myself. Independence is very important for us. If we always ask other people to help us solve the problems, we will achieve nothing, and we will be looked down upon by other people. As a matter of fact, solving a problem gives us an opportunity to test our abilities, it also helps us to improve our abilities. Facing the problem, we have to think of some ways to solve it, so it can also improve our thinking skills. When I solve a problem by myself, I will feel very satisfied and of course, become more confident. If we meet some difficult problems and solve them by ourselves, other people will think that we are very powerful and will admire us.
【详解】1. 题干解读：文章属于话题作文，主要是从“Solve the Problems”出发，谈谈自己的看法和意见，需要表达的观点题目表格中已经给出一些提示，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：文章主要用一般现在时，人称用第一人称展开阐述。阐述自己解决的一些优势，并从多个方面进行阐述。写作时语言要简单易懂，文章要结构完整，表达的意思要通俗易懂。
2．例文：
Last week, we had a discussion about the topic “To change or not”. I think different people have different choices to deal with problems. For example, when meeting with the weight problem, some people decide to take exercises to lose weight while others think they can’t do anything about.
When I was in Grade 7, I had difficulty with my spoken English. Instead of giving up, I chose to change. I tried my best to listen to tapes and practice speaking every day. Now my pronunciation has been improved a lot.
In a word, facing problems, we should take actions to change. Surely it will make a great difference.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文，要求围绕“To change or not”展开讨论。本题讨论“改变还是不改变”的问题，就此问题，可结合图片中的信息或者自身经历论述。
2.写作指导：文章以第一人称为主，一般现在时、一般过去时相结合；写作时按照要点分段叙述，首段点明主题及个人观点、第二段叙述个人经历、第三段进行总结概括。
3．例文：
Let’s build a green city together
As citizens of Jinhua, it is our duty to help build a green city. We can avoid the traffic jams and reduce the air pollution by riding bikes or walking. We mustn’t throw rubbish or spit everywhere. In this way, we can keep our city clean and tidy so that we can live a comfortable life. And we’d better divide the waste into groups and recycle it. This will save energy and promote the awareness of environmental protection.
In my daily life, I can plant more trees to protect the environment and make the city beautiful. I can also save the energy by turning off the lights when leaving the room.
In a word, everyone can play a part in building our city.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求以“共建绿色城市”为主题写一篇关于环境保护的文章，内容包括材料中给出的方式及其益处，并阐述自己的至少两条的建议。
2.写作指导：本文时态为一般现在时，以第一人称为主；写作时应注意分段叙述，第一段介绍材料中的方式及益处，第二段阐述自己的建议，最后一段总结全文；文章要保证要点齐全，语句通顺有条理。
4．例文
Dear teachers,
My name is Li Ping, a student in our school. I’d like to volunteer in the Welfare Center for Children this Sunday. Firstly, I am in favor of the idea that students play a very important role in the society. As for me, I am outgoing and can get along well with kids. Besides, I’m always helpful and warm-hearted. I have the ability to deal with problems. I’d like to play games with children there. Also, I will bring some interesting storybooks and read them to children.
I would be grateful if you give me the chance. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ping
【详解】题干解读：这篇作文要求学生们以李平的身份回复学校网站上的一篇公告，说明自己想去参加哪个志愿者活动并陈述理由。题目中并没有规定具体的写作内容，学生们应仔细阅读这篇公告，根据公告中提出的问题做出回答，并进行适当拓展。
写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应用一般现在时、第一人称叙述。写作时应先说明自己选择哪一个志愿者活动以及原因；接下来陈述自己能做的事情等。注意文章内容完整，不要遗漏信息；使用完整的句式结构，注意使用丰富的词汇、短语和句型，简单句结构和复合句结构穿插使用，提升文章档次。同时注意上下文的衔接，使文意连贯。
5．例文：
Thank you!
I remember I was once helped by a stranger. It was on a cold and rainy night. I forgot to take my umbrella with me. So I had to wait patiently at the bus stop. It was getting dark and I felt uneasy and was about to cry. Suddenly a lady with glasses came up to me. She wanted to drive me home. When I get home, I want to thank her by giving her a gift. But she refused. She told me that there was no need to thank her, just to spread love and kindness everywhere I went.
I think I will never forget her and try my best to help others.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，向帮助你的陌生人表达感谢，要求要点覆盖全面，可适当扩充；注意写作时要点齐全，同时也要紧扣主题。
2. 写作指导：本文用到的一般过去时态和一般现在时态，人称用第一人称和第三人称。文章开头已给出，写作时，注意承接上文，写作中注意表达观点时的常用句式，内容上应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。
6．例文1：
People are paying more and more attention to staying healthy. Ways such as doing exercise, eating healthy food etc. help a lot. But I think doing exercise is more important.
For me, I used to sit at the desk for too long and seldom go outside doing some sports. As a result, I put on 5 kilos just in a year and I felt tired easily. But when I tried to take up running after school, I began to feel energetic and healthier.
Since then, I have kept the habit of taking exercise. And I find it does good to both the mind and the body.
例如2：
People may have different ways to keep healthy, such as doing exercise, eating healthy food, etc. I think eating healthily is more important.
At school, we have sports time every day, so I think we’ve got enough exercise. However, we usually have lunch hurriedly at school. So eating healthily at home is important for us. Luckily, we can enjoy delicious and healthy food cooked by our parents which also makes us feel good. As for me, I often make some vegetable salad for breakfast or even cook something I like at weekends.
I think I will eat healthily to stay strong and happy.
【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据征文广告信息写短文，介绍做运动或吃健康的食物哪个更重要，告诉大家你的想法，及你如何保持健康。
2.写作指导：写作时要引出话题后先对做运动或吃健康食物中做出选择，给出自己的观点，可结合自身经历来写一些如何保持健康。人称以第一人称为主，时态根据具体的语境做出选择。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
7．
To help us achieve different developments our school has run colorful “out- reach type” courses, such as English dubbing, football, or Chinese painting. Here is more information.
If you want to improve your oral English, English dubbing may be the first choice. It is a good chance to practice not only oral English, but also performing skills. If you are interested in football, take the football course. It is good for your physical health. Besides, you can learn moreabout teamwork. What about Chinese painting You can learn not only painting, but also Chinese traditional culture.
In my opinion, a computer course can be added, because students like computers so much. I hope these courses would be helpful and each student would enjoy a bright andcolorful school life here!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据图表提示内容，介绍一下拓展课及其所带来的积极影响，可适当发挥，使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：介绍有哪些拓展课程；
第二步：具体介绍这些课程的内容及其带来的积极影响；
第三步，介绍你的建议以及理由。
[亮点词汇]
①such as比如
②not only...but also...不但……而且……
③be interested in对……感兴趣
④In my opinion在我看来
[高分句型]
①If you want to improve your oral English, English dubbing may be the first choice.（if引导的条件状语从句）
② I hope these courses would be helpful and each student would enjoy a bright andcolorful school life here!（省略that的宾语从句以及and连接的并列句）
8．Possible version:
Hello, everyone! I’d like to tell you something about the show “Working the Waste into Magic”.
A number of creative works were on show, including clothes made from waste paper and model planes made of used wood and glass. Another fascinating work is a chair that is made of plastic bottles. They are glued together and painted in different colors.
I was most interested in a backpack for computers. It is made out of a pair of old jeans! With the zipper of jeans on the top, two pockets on two sides, the backpack looks both useful and fashionable. It even has a logo!
I felt amazed at how waste could be put to such good use. It really helps to save energy and build a greener future.
【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，介绍“变废为宝”的环保作品展的情况，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，本文应该用第一人称、第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般过去时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
9．例文
Dear Paul,
As we all know, Chinese is important and useful to us. How can we learn it well Here are my suggestions.
Firstly, we should often listen to Chinese songs, the tapes and Chinese programs. It’s also helpful for us to watch Chinese movies. Secondly, we should speak Chinese as much as possible. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. The more you speak, the fewer mistakes you’ll make. We’d better join the Chinese club and practice with others. Thirdly, we can read more Chinese magazines and newspapers. It’s good for us. Finally, we should keep diaries and recite some good passages.
All in all, if we do more listening, speaking, reading and writing, we will learn Chinese well.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：注意不要遗漏材料中给出的信息，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。内容是根据Paul的来信，给Paul回一封信，介绍一下你学习汉语的好方法。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。首先要点题；其次具体介绍学习汉语的方法。
第三步：书写结语。表示“总之，如果我们多听、多说、多读、多写，我们就会学好汉语。”
[亮点词汇]
①listen to听
②as much as possible尽可能多
③be afraid of害怕
④had better最好
⑤be good for有益于
[高分句型]
①Secondly, we should speak Chinese as much as possible.（情态动词should加动词原形）
②The more you speak, the fewer mistakes you’ll make.（the+比较级，the+比较级，意为“越……，就越……”，固定用法。）
③All in all, if we do more listening, speaking, reading and writing, we will learn Chinese well.（if引导的条件状语从句）
10．例文
Nowadays, taking study trips is quite popular among schools. Last year, we went a school trip to Beijing. We had a good time there. We made friends with the students in Beijing. We studied Chinese history. I think study trip is a good way for students to study. And it’s also a special experience. When we have a study trip, we can visit many places of natural beauty. During the study trip, we can learn many things that we can’t learn from school, we can be served with different new food and know more things about different customs.
In my opinion, we should hold more activities like this. If we travel to other places of interest, we will learn more every day, because studying trips can help us understand people from different places around the county. I hope study trips are becoming more and more popular.
【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇发言稿形式的应用文写作。写作时，语言要准确简洁，通俗易懂，层次清楚，条理分明。在写作时应承接短文开头，提出本人要谈的问题及对问题的看法。最后，作简明扼要的总结或谈谈自己的希望或看法。
2.写作指导：发言稿应以第一人称来陈述自己观点或看法；时态一般以现在时态为主。发言稿可以以简单句为主，但不要把文章写成单句的罗列，适当的使用关联词承前启后，可以使文章前后连贯，浑然一体。