(共22张PPT)
写作任务:简要描述一种濒危动物
并呼吁人们保护动物。
Module 6 模块主题写作(复习课)
主 题: An animal in danger
Writing
An animal in danger
Articles Wanted
Are you interested in animals
Do you care about how animals live on Earth
Write to us about animals in danger.
Your articles will help more people know the situation.
It feeds on ______.
the blue whale
It lives ______________.
It’s the ________ animal in the world.
It feeds on ________, one of the smallest animals.
It feeds on ___________________________, krill.
in the oceans
krill
Facts
largest
krill
one of the smallest animals
It is the largest animal in the world,
_____ it feeds on one of the smallest animals.
but
And the situation is getting very _________________.
in the past
now
~ 300,000
~ 3,000
However , the blue whale is in danger.
serious / difficult
Why are blue whales in danger
First, __________ is one of the main reasons.
whaling
Whaling is _________ and __________.
Whaling is not only _________ but also ________.
hunt and kill
CRUEL
ILLEGAL
Reasons
Firstly
First of all
cruel
illegal
cruel
illegal
People hunt and kill blue whales
because they want to get their_____ and eat their_______.
People hunt and kill blue whales
to get their_________ and to eat their_________.
People _________________________
for their________ and for _________.
oil
meat
food
oil
meat
hunt and kill blue whales
oil
__________, _________________ is a great danger.
water pollution
① throw / litter / oceans
plastic
litter
② water / dirty / whales / sick
Second
Secondly
Also
Besides
In addition
Moreover
so … that …
People throw litter into the oceans.
People throw too much litter into the oceans.
People throw too much litter, _________ plastic into the oceans.
① throw / litter / oceans
② water / very dirty / blue whales / get sick
The water becomes very dirty and blue whales get sick.
The water becomes so dirty that blue whales get sick easily or even die.
The water becomes _____ dirty _____ blue whales get sick.
People throw too much litter, especially plastic into the oceans.
The water becomes so dirty that blue whales get sick.
________, it is ________________________.
the changes of the weather
When the weather is getting warmer, there is less and less krill.
① the weather / get warmer / less krill
The weather is getting warmer, so there is less krill.
____________ blue whales don’t have enough food to eat.
That’s why
Third
Thirdly
Lastly
Finally
the government
scientists
do a lot of important research to…
develop plans to…
stop killing… and help… live in peace
In order to ______________________, the government is trying hard to ______________________________________________________________.
To make it easier for _______________ to live in the oceans, scientists are ______________________________________________________________.
Actions
save blue whales
stop people killing them and help them live in peace
blue whales
doing a lot of important research
Ways to save blue whales
Actions
Ways to save blue whales
collect litter on the beach
raise money at school
put up notices
set up an animal club
say no to blue whale meat
Actions
raise money
set up a club
use less plastic
say no to blue whale meat
help keep oceans clean
never buy blue whale products
We can ___________________.
We need to ________________.
We should (not)____________.
to get more ideas
to help save blue whales
to tell people about blue whales in danger
We need to __________________to___________________________________.
put up notices
to tell people about blue whales in danger
raise money
set up a club
use less plastic
say no to blue whale meat
help keep oceans clean
never buy blue whale products
put up notices
We need to ______________ so that ____________________________.
We need to put up notices to tell people about blue whales in danger.
put up notices
people will know about …
Reasons
Actions
Structure
Facts
first
second
third
government
scientists
students
Reasons
Actions
hope
Checklist
Do I write facts, reasons and actions
Do I use linking words (first, second, third, finally…) to show the order
Do I use infinitive structure ( to do ) correctly to show what people do and why
Do I use linking words (and, but, however, because, so…) to improve my sentences
Do I use capital letters, end marks and correct spelling
The Chinese paddlefish was declared extinct (灭绝的) in July, 2022.
Chinese paddlefish
We can now destroy or we can cherish.
The choice is ours.
Homework
Polish your writing.
Search the Internet and find out more about the blue whales and other endangered animals.