人教版（2019）高中英语选择性必修第三册 Unit5 Poems 解透单元写作（有答案）

Unit5 解透单元写作
主题写作——诗
1. 写作任务
假定你是李华，想参加你校下个月举办的英语诗歌朗诵比赛，已写好初稿。请你给外教Mr Hopkins写封邮件， 请他帮你修改所附稿件的内容。主要内容包括：
（1）修改文稿；
（2）朗诵建议；
（3）表达感谢。
注意：（1）词数80左右；
（2）开头与结尾已给出，不计人总词数。
Dear Mr Hopkins,
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Yours,
Li Hua
2. 写作思路
（1）一审：体裁、结构与主题
体裁：应用文——求助信
第一段：自我介绍+写信目的
结构：三段 第二段：具体请求
第三段：表达感谢
主题：请求修改文稿
（2）二定：时态与人称
时态：现在时态
人称：以第一人称为主
（3）三明确：写作要点
第一段：自我介绍、写信目的
第二段：文稿情况、修改请求、朗诵建议（用关联词 however、in addition等连接）
第二段：表达感谢
3. 素材整理
（1）关键词语
do sb. a favour帮某人个忙
an amateur poetry writer业余诗歌创作者
participate in 参加，参与
an English poetry recitation contest 英文诗歌朗诵比赛
as delicate as possible 尽可能精致
correct formats of rhymes and rhythms 正确的韵律和节拍
polish one’s verses润色某人的诗
（2）完成句子
①我写信是想请你帮我一个忙。
I’m writing to ask you ________ ________ ________ ________ ________.
②作为一个业余诗歌创作者，我计划参加下个月举行的英语诗歌朗诵比赛。
As an ________ ________ ________, I’m planning to ________ ________ the English poetry recitation contest next month.
③我已经努力写了一首十四行诗，我想使这首诗歌尽可能精致一些。
I’ve managed to write a ________ and I want to make it ________ ________ ________ ________.
④我不确信是否这首诗歌遵循了正确的韵律和节拍格式。
I am not quite sure ________ it ________ ________ ________ of rhymes and rhythms.
⑤我不知道你是否可以抽出时间做一些必要的修改并润色我的诗歌。
I ________ ________ you could spare your time to ________ ________ ________ ________ and ________ ________ ________.
⑥如果你能给我一些如何朗诵的建议，我将不胜感激。
________ ________ ________ ________ ________ you could give me some advice on how to recite it.
答案：① to do me a favour ② amateur poetry writer, participate in ③ sonnet，as delicate as possible ④ whether, follows correct formats ⑤ wonder if, make some necessary changes, polish my verses ⑥ I would be grateful if
4. 高分作文
Dear Mr Hopkins,
I’m a student from your English literary class. I’m writing to ask you to do me a favour.
As an amateur poetry writer, I’m planning to participate in the English poetry recitation contest next month. I’ve managed to write a sonnet and it has been my third version as I want to make it as delicate as possible. However, I am not quite sure whether it follows correct formats of rhymes and rhythms. So, I wonder if you could spare your time to make some necessary changes and polish my verses. In addition, I would be grateful jf you could give me some advice on how to recite it.
Thank you very much for your time and effort.
Yours,
Li Hua
5. 佳作背诵
（1）佳作一
（2017·全国I卷）假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。
内容包括：
①时间和地点；
②内容：学习唐诗；
③课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。
注意：①词数100左右；
②可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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One possible version：
Dear Leslie，
I’m writing to tell you the lesson plan next time.
The lesson is planned to start at 10 am in Classroom 8 next Friday. We’ll learn Tang Poetry, which has beautiful and delicate patterns and rhythms. It’s a great way to learn Chinese and Chinese culture. In order to gain a better comprehension, you should learn about the history of the Tang Dynasty in advance, which will make the class go smoothly.
I’ll await you in the classroom. See you then.
Yours,
Li Hua
（2）佳作二
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom在邮件中提到对中国古诗歌很感兴趣，请用英语写一封电子邮件介绍中国古诗歌。主要内容包括：
①古诗歌代表人物；
②古诗歌介绍。
注意：①词数80左右；
②可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
One possible version：
Dear Tom,
Learning you’re interested in classical Chinese poetry, I’d like to introduce some relevant information.
The earliest classical Chinese poetry began from The Book of Songs, which has delicate words and perfect rhythms. Since then, it has developed quickly and reached its heyday in the Tang Dynasty. Meanwhile, famous poets like Li Bai, Bai Juyi came on stage respectively. Now, they’re still considered the greatest poets in history.
So much for this time. I’ll tell you more next time.
Yours,
Li Hua
【附】话题写作常用表达和句型
1. As a poetry lover, I am planning to participate in an English poetry contest due to be held next month.作为一名诗歌爱好者，我计划参加下个月举办的一个英语诗歌比赛。
2. Could you please spare me some time to make some necessary changes and polish my article 你可以花费一些时间做些必要修改和润色我的文章吗？
3. In order to help the exchange foreign students learn more about Chinese culture, our school is scheduled to hold a cultural festival next week.为了帮助外国交换生多了解中国文化，我们学校计划在下周举办一个文化节。
4.1 would appreciate it very much if you could instruct me to compose poems.如果你能教我创作诗，我将不胜感激。
5. As you know，Tang Poetry has the most beautiful and delicate patterns and rhythms.正如你知道的，唐诗有最美丽和最精美的格式与韵律。
6. The Book of Songs，the earliest classical Chinese poetry collection，dates from over 2，000 years ago.《诗经》，最早的中国古诗集，可以追溯到2 000多年前。
7. Many famous poets from Qu Yuan to Li Bai and Bai Juyi came on stage respectively in history, which brought prosperity to classical Chinese poetry.从屈原到李白和白居易这样的许多著名诗人相继走上历史舞台，给中国古诗歌带来了繁荣。
8. It was through such activities that I gained a better and deeper understanding of traditional Chinese culture.正是通过这样的活动，我对中国传统文化有了更好、更深人的理解。
9. Compared to Chinese Song Poems，I prefer Tang Poetry. 与宋词相比，我更喜欢唐诗。
10. Not only do I like classical Chinese poems but I am fond of Western poems.我不仅喜欢中国古诗，也喜欢西方诗歌。
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