Unit1解透单元写作
主题写作——有关科幻小说的应用文
1.写作任务
假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Tom听说《流浪地球》很受欢迎,请你向Tom介绍这部科幻小说,主要内容如下
(1)小说的作者、创作时间等;
(2)小说的主要内容;
(3)你的评价。
参考词汇:《流浪地球》The Wandering earth
注意:(1)词数80左右;
(2)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
How is everything going?___________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
2.写作思路
(1)一审:体裁、结构和主题
体裁:应用文
结构:四段 第一段:导入+写作目的
第二段:小说基本介绍(作者、创作时间)+主要内容(故事梗概)
第三段:评价
第四段:结束语
主题:小说介绍
(2)二定:人称与时态
人称:第三人称
时态:一般现在时
(3)三明确
明确写作要点:作者与创作时间、小说梗概、评价
3.素材整理
(1)关键词语
be set on a future basis以将来为背景
labour to do sth.努力去做某事
push sth. off sth. else把……推离
take over接管,接替
the urge to do sth.做某事的强烈欲望
(2)完成句子
①得知你对科幻小说《流浪地球》感兴趣,我想向你做详细介绍。
________ that the science fiction-The Wandering earth ________ you, I’d like to introduce it to you ________ ________.
②这部小说由刘慈欣在2000年创作,是以未来作为背景的。
________ ________ Liu cixin in 2000.the fiction is set ________ a future________.
③在制作出巨大的引擎和仔细计算后,科学家们把引擎装在了地球的一侧。
________ ________ large engines and ________ care scientists ________ them on one side of the earth.
④无为、混乱和冲突发生了,但是最终合作和挽救人类的欲望胜出了。
________, disorder and________ occur, but cooperation and the ________ to save the human race finally________ ________.
⑤不仅故事的情节极好、令人兴奋,而且它展现的精神也极其重要。
Not only ________ the plot________ ________ ________ but the spirit it displays is extremely significant.
Keys: Learning,interests,in details
② Written by, on, basis
③ After making, calculating, fix
④ Inaction, conflicts, urge, take over
⑤ is, stunning and thrilling
4. 满分作文(注:黑体部分为本单元的重点词汇)
Dear Tom,
How is everything going Learning the science fiction The Wandering Earth interests you, I’d like to introduce it to you in details.
Written by Liu Cixin in 2000, the fiction is set on a future basis, when the sun will explode soon. People are labouring to escape from the sun with the earth. After making large engines and calculating carefully, scientists fix them on one side of the earth
to push it off the sun. Inaction, disorder and conflicts occur, but cooperation and the urge to save the human race finally take over.
It’s the best science fiction I’ve ever read. not only is the plot stunning and thrilling but the spirit it displays is extremely significant--it’s only cooperation that can save us.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
第一段导入诂题,并表明写作目的一介绍《流浪地球》
第二段介绍作者和创作时间,以及故事梗概。
第三段:介绍作者对于《流浪地球》这部小说的看法
第四段:结柬语
句型:使用了非谓语动词作状语和同位语结构。
句型:第一句使用了非谓语动词作状语、定语从句;第三句使用了非谓语动词作时间状语;第四句使用了but引导的并列句,并以事物作主语以加强语气句型:第一句使用了定语从句;第二句使用了not only.but also…引导的倒装句,后半句则使用了强调句来加强语气。
5.佳作背诵
(1)佳作一
假设你是李华,你班将举办以科幻为主题的活动,请你写信邀请你们的外教老师Jack参加,并向你们介绍科幻电影,主要内容包括:
①活动的时间、地点;
②科幻电影介绍
③表达感谢。
注意:①词数80左右;
②开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I am looking forward to your reply
Yours,
Li Hua
One possible version:
Dear Jack,
Our weekly activity this Friday is about science fictions and movies. I wonder if you could give us an introduction to science fiction movies.
With The Wandering earth becoming popular, we all feel a strong urge to see more science fiction films, especially films about aliens, robots, etc. As a ladder to expand our imagination, they can also stimulate our love of science However, everything has its own pros and cons, so would you please give us a speech about science fictions and movies
The activity is due to be held at 4 p.m. this Friday and venue is our classroom. We genuinely expect your coming.
I am looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
(2)佳作二
假设你是Jim,你的中国笔友李华对有关机器人的小说非常感兴趣,请你给李华回复邮件,介绍著名的机器人科幻小说作家阿西莫夫,并简要介绍其作品
①阿西莫夫,生于1920年,死于1992年,美国三大著名科幻作家之
②作品:《机器人》系列,创立机器人三原则;
③你的看法。
注意:①词数80左右;
②开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Li Hua,
How is everything going __________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Jim
One possible version:
Dear Li Hua,
How is everything going Learning that you are interested in science fictions about robots I’d like to introduce Isaac Asimov in details.
Isaac Asimov, one of the most famous “Big Three science fiction writers was born in 1920 and died in 1992. In his Robot Series, he puts his works on a basis of the three laws of robotics, essential principles to deal with conflicts between humans and robots.
As far as I am concerned, I presume that his works are so stunning that they are all well worth reading. If you need any further information, just tell me.
I am looking forward to your reply
Yours,
Jim
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