Unit4 Writing主题写作练
写作题目
假定你是李华,你的美国朋友 Frank给你发邮件表示他很钦佩中国的诺贝尔奖获得者屠呦呦,想更多地了解她的生平事迹,请你根据以下内容给他回一封电子邮件。
主要内容
1.出生时间和出生地(1930年,浙江省宁波市);
2学业(1951年进入北京大学,生物医药学专业);
3.主要事迹和贡献。
注意:
1.词数100左右
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:生物医药学 biomedicine青蒿素artemisinin疟疾 malaria
Dear frank,
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Yours,
Li Hua
思路点拨
主题 人物事迹描述 体裁 应用文
人称 以第三人称为主 时态 以一般过去时和现在完成时为主
布局 第一段:回应询问,引出话题布局 第二段:介绍人物生平事迹 第三段:人物评价,结束话题
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空
1. ________ n.精力;力量;活力
2. ________ n.耐久力;忍耐力
3. ________ v.坚持;孜孜以求
4. ________ n.毅力;韧性;不屈不挠的精神
5. ________ n.承诺;保证;奉献
6. ________ 对……充满热情
答案1. vigour 2. endurance 3.persevere
4. perseverance 5. commitment 6. be enthusiastic about
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
(1)在北京大学的时候,她对自己的专业课程生物医学极富热情。
While in Beijing University, she ________ ________ ________ ________ biomedicine, her major course.
(2)青蒿素是一种治疗疟疾的至关重要的新药。
Artemisinin is a crucial new medicine ________ ________.
(3)据估计,仅在非洲青蒿素每年挽救10万人的生命。
It is estimated that artemisinin ________ 100,000 lives a year in Africa alone.
(4)屠呦呦85岁时成为诺贝尔奖获得者
Tu Youyou ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ at the age of 85.
(5)屠呦呦过去以及现在仍然因她非凡的活力和出色的忍耐力而出名。
Tu Youyou has been and still is distinguished for her tremendous ________ and outstanding ________.
(6)她现在仍然以百分之百的奉献坚持医学研究。
She still ________ ________ medical research with one hundred percent ________ now.
答案(1)was hugely enthusiastic about(2)for malaria(3)saves(4)became a Nobel Prize winner(5)vigour; endurance(6)perseveres in; commitment
2.句式升级
(7)用虚拟语气改写句(3)
________ ________, 100, 000 Africans ________ ________ ________ malaria a year.
(8)用 such…that合并句(2)和改写后的句(3)
Artemisinin is ________ a crucial new medicine for malaria ________ ________ ________, 100, 000 Africans would die of malaria a year.
(9)用现在完成进行时改写句(6)
She ________ ________ ________ in medical research with one hundred percent commitment for more than half a century.
答案
(7)Without artemisinin would die of
(8)such;that without it
(9)has been persevering
连句成篇
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参考范文
Dear Frank,
Glad to know that you are keen to know more about Chinese scientist Tu Youyou, now I’d like to share what I know about her.
Tu Youyou was born in 1930 in Zhejiang Province. She was admitted to Beijing University in 1951, where she was hugely enthusiastic about biomedicine,her major course. In 2015 Tu Youyou became a Nobel Prize winner at the age of 85 for her discovery of artemisinin. It is such a crucial new medicine for malaria that without it, 100, 000 Africans would die of malaria a year.
Tu Youyou has been and still is distinguished for her tremendous vigour and outstanding endurance. She has been persevering in medical research with one hundred percent commitment for more than half a century and has become the idol of us Chinese students. Attached is a photograph of Tu Youyou. Hopefully you’ll like it.
Yours
Li Hua
写作积累
【描写励志人物的书面表达词汇升级】
1.在他上大学的时候
while he was in college → while in college
2.积极参加
take an active part in → be actively involved in
3.对……感兴趣
be interested in → be keen on
4.喜欢…
be fond of → be enthusiastic about
5.致力于
be devoted to → be committed to
6.不放弃
do not give up → refuse to acknowledge defeat(坚决不服输)
7.坚持
insist on → persevere in
8.能胜任某事
be able to do sth. → be equal to(doing)sth.
9.全心全意地
heart and soul → with one hundred percent commitment
10.以……而著名
be famous for → be distinguished for
实战演练
(2019北京东城高二上期末考试改编)
假定你是红星中学高二学生李华。你校英语校刊《人物》专栏以“A Great Figure”为题征集英语短文。请你根据以下要求投稿。词数不少于100。
内容包括:
1.人物的基本信息;
2人物的基本事迹;
3.人物对你的影响。
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参考答案:
One possible version:
A Great Figure
Born in 1936, Zhong Nanshan graduated from Beijing Medical College in 1960. He is honored as one of the leading medicine expert in China.
Back in 2002 and 2003, Dr. Zhong made great contributions to the fight against SARS. Seventeen years later, when COVID-19 broke out in early 2020, he was appointed to lead the fight Despite his advanced age, he sometimes worked non-stop for days during that tough time. Thanks to his superb commitment as well as the selfless efforts of heroic Chinese medical workers we made great progress in the battle against the disastrous disease.
What he has done inspires me to work even harder. And I am determined to seek a career in medicine when I grow up so that I can work for the human health.
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