Unit4 解透单元写作
主题写作——逆境和勇气
1. 写作任务
假设你是李华,受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知,请大家观看一部英文电影,主要内容包括:
(1)放映时间、地点;
(2)影片内容;
(3)欢迎对影片进行评论。
注意:(1)词数80左右;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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2. 写作思路
(1)一审:体裁、结构与主题
体裁:应用文——通知
第一段:基本信息及影片内容介绍
结构:两段
第二段:电影评价及欢迎对影片进行评论
主题:观影通知
(2) 二定:时态与人称
时态:以一般现在时为主
人称:第三人称
(3) 三明确:写作要点
基本信息:时间、地点、影片内容
电影介绍:故事梗概
电影评议:电影评价、欢迎发表评论
3. 素材整理
(1)关键词语
be due to do sth.预计做某事
the expedition to 去……的探险
after ten months’ voyage在十个月的航行后
be crushed into pieces 被压成碎片
get out of danger 摆脱危险
in the face of adversity 面对逆境
be believed to 被认为
voice one’s opinion发表某人的看法
(2)完成句子
①这部英语电影,预计将在周五下午2点在学校大厅放映。
The English film ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ at 2 pm on Friday at the school hall.
②它讲述了由著名的欧内斯特沙克尔顿爵士带领远征南极的故事。
It depicts the the ________ ________ South Pole ________ ________ the famous Sir Ernest Shackleton.
③不幸的是,经过十个月的航行后,他们的船被冰挤压成了碎片,他们不得不放弃船只。
________, after ten months’ ________, their ship ________ ________ into pieces by ice and they had to ________ it.
④正是船员们在面对逆境时的坚持、忍耐力和决心拯救了他们。
It was the crew members’ ________, ________ and ________ in the face of ________ ________ saved them.
⑤人们认为这部电影很有教育意义并且非常精彩。
The film ________ ________ ________ be ________ and wonderful.
⑥看完电影后,欢迎所有学生发表对这部电影的看法。
All the students are welcome to ________ ________ ________ about the film
________ seeing the film.
答案:① is due to be shown ② expedition to, led by
③ Unfortunately, voyage, was crushed, abandon
④ perseverance, endurance, resolution, adversity that
⑤ is believed to, instructive ⑥ voice their opinions, after
4. 高分作文
NOTICE
An English film, The Endurance:Shackleton’s Legendary Antarctic Expedition, is due to be shown at 2 pm on Friday at the school hall. It depicts the expedition to the South Pole led by the famous Sir Ernest Shackleton. In 1914, Shackleton sailed towards the South Pole but unfortunately, after ten months’ voyage, their ship was crushed into pieces by ice and they had to abandon it. They finally succeeded in getting out of danger in 1916.
It was the crew members’ perseverance, endurance and resolution in the face of adversity that saved them. The film is believed to be instructive and wonderful. All the students are welcome to voice their opinions about the film after seeing the film.
The Students’ Union
5. 佳作背诵
(1)佳作一
假设你是校学生会主席李华,你校将举办一次主题为“逆境和勇气”的英语演讲比赛,请你给外籍教师史密斯太太写封信,邀请她担任演讲比赛的评委。主要内容包括:
①写信目的;
②演讲比赛举办的时间、地点和主题;
③注意问题。
注意:①词数80左右;
②可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mrs. Smith,
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Yours,
Li Hua
One possible version:
Dear Mrs. Smith,
An English speech contest, themed “Adversity and Perseverance”, will take place in our school. I sincerely invite you to serve as a judge.
The contest will be held in the school hall from 2 to 5 pm on June 15. Ten qualified candidates will take part. You are required to provide a thorough and detailed assessment of their speech. Besides, specific guidance is also what we are really expected.
I would appreciate it if you could be present. I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
(2)佳作二
假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Peter非常喜爱看小说, 请你给他写一封电子邮件,向他介绍一本你最喜欢的小说。 主要内容包括:
①小说名称;
②小说内容;
③对你的影响。
注意:①词数80左右;
②开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
One possible version:
Dear Peter,
How is everything going I’d like to share with you my favorite novel.
The novel is The Old Man and the Sea, telling about an old fisherman who never abandons his hope and fights with great endurance and perseverance. Although finally he fails, his optimistic attitude and spirit of never giving up really count.
The novel teaches me a lot. I should be confident whatever adversity may lie ahead. As long as I persevere, nothing can prevent me going ahead. What about you
Yours,
Li Hua
【附】话题写作常用表达和句型
1. It was their perseverance and endurance in the face of adversity that helped them succeed in the end.正是他们在面对逆境时的坚持和忍耐力帮助他们最终获得成功。
2. No difficulty cannot be overcome as long as we have faith in ourselves.只要我们自己有信念,没有什么困难克服不了。
3. We are convinced that, where there is a will, there is a way. 我们相信,有志者事竟成。
4. Once we have made the decision,we are supposed to spare no efforts to achieve it. 一旦我们做出决定,我们应该不遗余力地去实现它。
5. The secret of success is to stick to your goals and beliefs. 成功的秘诀在于坚持自己的目标和信念。
6. Whatever adversity may lie ahead,as long as I persevere, nothing can stop me from going ahead.无论前方有多困难,只要我坚持下去,没有什么可以阻止我前行。
7. The story depicts an old man who never abandons his hope and fights against adversity with great endurance and perseverance.这个故事讲述了一位老人,他从不放弃希望,用极大的忍耐力和毅力与困难作斗争。
8. When faced with difficulty, I managed to find a way out instead of giving up.当面对困难的时候,我设法去找到解决办法而不是放弃。
9. Failure is the mother of success.失败是成功之母。
10. Each person has the potential to overcome adversity.
每个人都有克服逆境的潜力。
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