人教版（2019）高中英语选择性必修第四册 Unit4Sharing 解透单元写作(有答案）
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Unit4解透单元写作
主题写作—有关分享的应用文
1.写作任务
帮助他人，奉献社会，是一种伟大的社会精神。假设你是李华，你们组织了一个义工志愿者组织，现面向全校中外学生招聘志愿者，请你写一份招聘启事，主要内容包括：
（1）工作介绍；
（2）招聘条件；
（3）应聘方式。
注意：词数80左右。
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2.写作思路
（1）一审：体裁、结构和主题体裁：应用文—招聘启事
结构：两段
第一段：义工组织介绍+工作内容介绍（2至3条）
第二段：招聘条件+应聘方式主题：招聘启事
（2）二定：时态与人称
时态：一般现在时
人称：第三人称
（3）三明确：写作要点
写作要点：组织介绍+工作内容；招聘条件+应聘方式
3.素材整理
（1）关键词语
people with disabilities残疾人
deserve to do sth.值得做某事
keep pany陪伴某人
have a heart of gold心肠很好
a flexible timetable灵活的时间安排
grant the membership授予成员身份
（2）完成句子
①我们致力于帮助附近社区的老年人和残疾人，他们应该被社会所关爱。
We aim to help ________ ________ or people with ________ in nearby communities，who by society ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ by society.
②我们不仅帮助他们打扫洗手间，还帮他们除尘甚至拔出院子里的杂草。
We ________ ________help them clean their washrooms but also ________ ________or even ________ ________ ________in their yard.
③有时我们甚至做一些表演，其中，像合唱、下棋等这样的节目是非常受欢迎的。
Sometimes we even ________ ________, ________ ________programs like chorusing and chess games are very popular.
④只要你心肠好并有社会责任感，而且在周末有灵活的时间安排，你就可以成为我们的成员之一。
________ ________ ________ you have a heart ________and ________ ________, and have a ________ ________on weekends, you can become a member of us.
⑤申请者应该在下周末前把申请邮寄给我们。
Applicants ________ ________ ________ ________their applications to us before the next weekend.
Keys: ①the elders, disabilities, deserve to be cared for ② not only, remove dust, take out weeds ③ give performances among which ④ As long as, of gold, social responsibility flexible timetable ⑤are supposed to mail
4.满分作文（注：黑体部分为本单元的重点词汇）
Volunteers Wanted
The Red Star Volunteer Organization of our school aims to help the elders or people with disabilities in nearby communities, who deserve to be cared for by society. We not only help them clean their washrooms, but also remove dust or even take out weeds in their yards. Besides cleaning, keeping the elders company is also very important. Sometimes we even give performances, among which programs like chorusing and chess games are very popular.
As long as you have a heart of gold and social responsibility and have a flexible timetable on weekends, you can become a member of us. Of course a contract will be needed to grant your membership. Applicants are supposed to mail their applications to us before the next weekend.
第一段：组织介绍和工作内容介绍
第二段：介绍了招聘条件和应聘方式
句型：第一句使用了who引导的定语从句，修饰前面的 the elders or people第三句使用了非谓语动词短语 keeping the elders company作主语；第四句使用了“介词+关糸代词”引导的定语从句形式，修饰先行词 performances句型：第一句使用了 as long as引导的状语从句形式。
5.佳作背诵
（1）佳作一
假设你是李华，你校英文报纸征集感动中国的人物事迹，请你向校报投稿，介绍白方礼老人助人为乐的感人事迹，主要内容包括：
①白方礼：生于1913年，故于2005年；
②1987年起，将蹬三轮的收入全部捐赠，帮助贫困孩子实现上学梦，一直坚持到去世。
注意：词数80左右。
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
One possible version:
Born in 1913, Bai Fangli was an ordinary person, but deserved to be respected by all the Chinese. Although living in poor housing himself, he donated all the money earned by pedaling a tricycle to helping the poor children. It was because of his uniform kindness for almost twenty years that lots of children realized their dream of going to school. Never did he stop his donation until he died in 2005.
His kind deeds received a chorus of praise. The year 2008 saw his being entitled as one of the people “who moved China” on the Internet. In 2012, he received a special award for moving China. His deeds will inspire us to pass down kindness in relays forever.
（2）佳作二
一个小小的善意，可能会改变人的一生。假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Jim发来邮件，希望与你分享彼此的志愿经历。请你给他回复一封邮件，介绍自己的一次志愿经历主要内容包括：
①志愿活动的时间、地点、目的等；
②活动的具体内容
③活动对你的影响
注意：词数80左右。
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
One possible version:
Dear Jim,
Glad to receive your mail. I’d like to share with you one of my volunteer experiences lately.
The voluntary activity took place last month, when we went to a mountain village to see the poor children in a secondary school. They have no school uniforms and the housing conditions of their school are much too terrible. They even don’t have fireplaces in the classrooms in winter. In order to help them, we brought them tubes, tablets and school supplies like rubbers, school uniforms.
The experience set me thinking. Never should we take for granted what we have already possessed. We should live with grateful hearts and if possible, try to help those in need.
That’s all. What about you Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
20 / 20
主题写作—有关分享的应用文
1.写作任务
帮助他人，奉献社会，是一种伟大的社会精神。假设你是李华，你们组织了一个义工志愿者组织，现面向全校中外学生招聘志愿者，请你写一份招聘启事，主要内容包括：
（1）工作介绍；
（2）招聘条件；
（3）应聘方式。
注意：词数80左右。
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2.写作思路
（1）一审：体裁、结构和主题体裁：应用文—招聘启事
结构：两段
第一段：义工组织介绍+工作内容介绍（2至3条）
第二段：招聘条件+应聘方式主题：招聘启事
（2）二定：时态与人称
时态：一般现在时
人称：第三人称
（3）三明确：写作要点
写作要点：组织介绍+工作内容；招聘条件+应聘方式
3.素材整理
（1）关键词语
people with disabilities残疾人
deserve to do sth.值得做某事
keep pany陪伴某人
have a heart of gold心肠很好
a flexible timetable灵活的时间安排
grant the membership授予成员身份
（2）完成句子
①我们致力于帮助附近社区的老年人和残疾人，他们应该被社会所关爱。
We aim to help ________ ________ or people with ________ in nearby communities，who by society ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ by society.
②我们不仅帮助他们打扫洗手间，还帮他们除尘甚至拔出院子里的杂草。
We ________ ________help them clean their washrooms but also ________ ________or even ________ ________ ________in their yard.
③有时我们甚至做一些表演，其中，像合唱、下棋等这样的节目是非常受欢迎的。
Sometimes we even ________ ________, ________ ________programs like chorusing and chess games are very popular.
④只要你心肠好并有社会责任感，而且在周末有灵活的时间安排，你就可以成为我们的成员之一。
________ ________ ________ you have a heart ________and ________ ________, and have a ________ ________on weekends, you can become a member of us.
⑤申请者应该在下周末前把申请邮寄给我们。
Applicants ________ ________ ________ ________their applications to us before the next weekend.
Keys: ①the elders, disabilities, deserve to be cared for ② not only, remove dust, take out weeds ③ give performances among which ④ As long as, of gold, social responsibility flexible timetable ⑤are supposed to mail
4.满分作文（注：黑体部分为本单元的重点词汇）
Volunteers Wanted
The Red Star Volunteer Organization of our school aims to help the elders or people with disabilities in nearby communities, who deserve to be cared for by society. We not only help them clean their washrooms, but also remove dust or even take out weeds in their yards. Besides cleaning, keeping the elders company is also very important. Sometimes we even give performances, among which programs like chorusing and chess games are very popular.
As long as you have a heart of gold and social responsibility and have a flexible timetable on weekends, you can become a member of us. Of course a contract will be needed to grant your membership. Applicants are supposed to mail their applications to us before the next weekend.
第一段：组织介绍和工作内容介绍
第二段：介绍了招聘条件和应聘方式
句型：第一句使用了who引导的定语从句，修饰前面的 the elders or people第三句使用了非谓语动词短语 keeping the elders company作主语；第四句使用了“介词+关糸代词”引导的定语从句形式，修饰先行词 performances句型：第一句使用了 as long as引导的状语从句形式。
5.佳作背诵
（1）佳作一
假设你是李华，你校英文报纸征集感动中国的人物事迹，请你向校报投稿，介绍白方礼老人助人为乐的感人事迹，主要内容包括：
①白方礼：生于1913年，故于2005年；
②1987年起，将蹬三轮的收入全部捐赠，帮助贫困孩子实现上学梦，一直坚持到去世。
注意：词数80左右。
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
One possible version:
Born in 1913, Bai Fangli was an ordinary person, but deserved to be respected by all the Chinese. Although living in poor housing himself, he donated all the money earned by pedaling a tricycle to helping the poor children. It was because of his uniform kindness for almost twenty years that lots of children realized their dream of going to school. Never did he stop his donation until he died in 2005.
His kind deeds received a chorus of praise. The year 2008 saw his being entitled as one of the people “who moved China” on the Internet. In 2012, he received a special award for moving China. His deeds will inspire us to pass down kindness in relays forever.
（2）佳作二
一个小小的善意，可能会改变人的一生。假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Jim发来邮件，希望与你分享彼此的志愿经历。请你给他回复一封邮件，介绍自己的一次志愿经历主要内容包括：
①志愿活动的时间、地点、目的等；
②活动的具体内容
③活动对你的影响
注意：词数80左右。
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
One possible version:
Dear Jim,
Glad to receive your mail. I’d like to share with you one of my volunteer experiences lately.
The voluntary activity took place last month, when we went to a mountain village to see the poor children in a secondary school. They have no school uniforms and the housing conditions of their school are much too terrible. They even don’t have fireplaces in the classrooms in winter. In order to help them, we brought them tubes, tablets and school supplies like rubbers, school uniforms.
The experience set me thinking. Never should we take for granted what we have already possessed. We should live with grateful hearts and if possible, try to help those in need.
That’s all. What about you Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
20 / 20