(共33张PPT)
Unit 9 I like music that I can dance to.
Writing
To talk about your favorite music and musicians
and the reasons.
主语 prefer music that…
love musicians who…
How to write an article well.
Let’s enjoy a piece of music.
How do you feel
happy
excited
Writing: My Favorite Music
大家都为了中考而整天努力学习着。但是学习的同时要学会给自己减压,听音乐可是一种不错的方法。请大家写一篇题为“My Favorite Music” 的短文 ,80字左右。适当用定语从句。要点包括:
知道哪些种类的音乐?你最喜欢哪种音乐?
2. 谁是你我最喜欢的音乐家?为什么喜欢他/她?
3. 为什么喜欢听音乐?
4. ...
5. 愿景:在未来,我希望我可以成为一名歌手。能够像“中国好声音”(The Voice of China)里的歌手一样唱得好。
pop music
(流行乐)
classical music
(古典音乐)
opera(歌剧)
rock & roll
(摇滚乐)
swing/dance music
(舞曲)
Jazz
(爵士乐)
country music
(乡村音乐)
techno(电子音乐)
I love music that I can sing along with.
Do you like the music
Why
Pop music
I like music
Do you like the music
Why
that I can dance to.
dance music
亲爱的你慢慢飞 小心前面带刺的玫瑰 亲爱的你张张嘴 风中话香会让你沉醉 亲爱的你跟我飞 穿过丛林去看小溪水 亲爱的来跳个舞 爱的春天不会有天黑 我和你缠缠绵绵翩翩飞 飞跃这红尘永相随 追逐你一生 爱你无情悔 不辜负我的柔情你的美 我和你缠缠绵绵翩翩飞 飞跃这红尘永相随 等到秋风尽秋叶落成堆
能陪你一起枯萎也无悔
I prefer music
lyrics(歌词)
prefer :(like better)
更喜欢
that has great lyrics.
I like the music better, because its lyrics are great.
Possible answers for reference:
—I like/love/prefer music
that is really loud.
that I can dance to.
that I can sing along with.
that has great lyrics.
that isn’t too loud.
that is quiet and gentle.
that is exciting.
—What kind of music do you like
that/which
Pairwork
reason
Learn new knowledge
Learn new words
……
Relax ourselves
Cheer us up
Bring us different feelings
plays different kinds of music.
who
I like musicians
plays quiet songs.
I like musicians
who
writes their own music.
I enjoy musicians
who
sings the words clearly.
I prefer musicians
who
I like musicians
_____________.
who
书面表达六步法
抄
改
连
扩
抓
审
书面
表达
Writing skills
审题
人称
时态
注意
第一人称
一般现在时
1.词数
2.适当运用定语从句
pop music, rock music, classical music
folk music,jazz,dance music, rap, hit-hop,
quiet and gentle, loud,sing along with,
dance to ,has great lyrics,
relax ourselves,learn some knowledge
bring different feelings,cheer me up,...
plays different kinds of music,
writes their own music,sing the words clearly,...
kinds:
why:
musicians:
hope:
become a singer ,The Voice of China
1.词与词搭配 ,句与句相连。
4.增加细节 , 呼应首尾(reference)。
2.段落划分,层次分明。
3.简单句、复合句使用,连贯(coherence),
过渡句(transitional sentences),
first,…second,…/so/because/although/but/
what’s more(而且)/in a word(总之)/however/not only···but also …
常用关联词:
Tips:
巧用关联词,能使文章
过渡自然、连贯、流畅!
文章结构
1.Heading
点题,概括性
2. Body
中心记述部分, 层次分明
3. Ending
小结,呼应主题
Structure
1.Heading:Do you like music What's your favorite music
There are… such as, like, for example
I like …best./ My favorite music is…
第一点: 你知道哪些种类的音乐?你最喜欢哪种音乐?
第二点:谁是你最喜欢的音乐家?你为什么喜欢他/她?
My favorite musician is…because…
I like musicians who...
第三点:你为什么喜欢听音乐?
表示顺序的单词:first , second, third, next, then, finally
3.Hope
2.Body
My Favorite Music
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Writing: My Favorite Music
Write an article,check it with your partners in your group.
Peer Checklist 同伴评价表
分数:
Content(10分)
Language(5分)
Organization(3分)
Grammar (3分)
Handwriting(2分)
others(2分)
Total(25分)
Chinglish
中式英语
连贯
标点
书写规范 卷面整洁
六、誉写(Handwriting)
卷面潦草一定要扣分!
Choose the best article in your group to share with us.
My Favorite Music
Do you like music What's your favorite music? I love music and I often listen to music in my spare time.
There are different kinds of music in the world, such as folk music, pop music and so on. I prefer music that is quiet and gentle. My favorite musician is Jay Chou.He is the musician who writes his own songs and sings well.
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Why do I like to listen to music Now let me tell you the reasons. First, when I am tired, the music will make me relaxed. Second, when I am down, the music will cheer me up and make me happy. Third, listening to music is a good way to learn some new words and some new knowledge.
Music is my friend.In the future, I hope I can become a singer. I can sing like the singer in“ The Voice of China”.
Topic:My Favorite Music
(1) kinds of music
(2) my favorite music and musician
(3) the reasons
2. How to write an article
3. How to check an article.
审题 抓点 造句 成文 改错 誉写
4. Which group is the best today
Assignment
1.Make a summary about how to write an article well.
2.Write the article “My favorite movie/book”,send it to me.
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