07：【好题精选】书面表达-2023年中考英语专题疯狂练（第一期）（山东临沂市）（含答案）

07：【好题精选】书面表达-2023年中考英语专题疯狂练（第一期）（山东临沂市）
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、电子邮件(共0分)
1．假定你是李嘉，请阅读下面的邮件，用英语表示愿意帮忙并根据邮件内容回复。可以适当发挥。要求：
1. 词数80左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；
2. 语言通顺，条理清楚，书写规范；
3. 文中不要出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。
Dear Li Jia, How’s it going We’re doing a project at school about how teenagers around the world relax. I’d really like you to help me, if you can! So, can you tell me: -what is your favorite way to relax -how long you’ve done it -how often you do it -whether relaxing is important and why Thanks very much, and write soon! Bert
Dear Bert, Thanks for your e-mail. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Li Jia
二、书信作文(共0分)
2．如今，志愿服务已成为一种社会风尚，各行各业的人们都在参与其中。假如你是李华，你想要应征一名社区志愿者，为你的社区出一份力。请根据提示按要求写一封自荐信。
要求：
1.语言通顺，条理清楚，书写规范。
2.短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分；
3.词数：80词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示：
1. Why do you want to be a volunteers
2. What are you good at Do you have any special skills
3. What can you do for the community(社区)
Dear Sir,
I’m a junior student from Xinhua Middle School. I’d like to become one of your volunteers.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
三、材料作文(共0分)
3．童话是人类文化的瑰宝，一直深受孩子们的喜爱，你读过哪一些呢？最喜欢哪一个？请以 “My favorite story/storybook”为题，根据以下提示，把你印象最深的用英语写一篇不少于80词的短文。
提示:1. What’s the name of it
2. What’s the story about
3. Why do you like it
要求：1.语言通顺，条理清楚，书写规范；
2.文中不要出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。
My Favorite ________
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4．现实中，变化无处不在，大到自然环境和社会环境，小到个人的生活习惯、学习方法或者态度。面对变化，唯有积极适应，才能有所进步和收获。请以“A Change in My Life”为题，用英语谈谈你生活中的一个变化，你是如何应对这个变化的以及有什么收获。
提示：
1. What is the change that happened in your life
2. How did you deal with it
3. What have you learned from the experience
要求：
1.内容必须包含以上问题，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
2.字数不少于80词。
3.文中不得出现任何与考生本人有关的真实人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
A Change in My Life
There are many changes in everyone’s life. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5．2022年冬奥会期间涌现出了许许多多可歌可泣的动人故事，敢想敢拼的苏翊鸣、多才多艺的谷爱凌、永不放弃的武大靖……学校发出倡议向他们学习，组织举办一场以“每个人都了不起！”为题的英语征文比赛。请你根据这一话题发现身边“了不起”（excellent）的老师、同学或者自己，内容包括：
提示：
1. Who do you think is excellent
2. Why do you think he or she is excellent Give at least two reasons.
3. As a teenager, what can you do to improve yourself
要求：
1.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；
2.80词左右，字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确。
Everyone is excellent!
There are many excellent people in the world._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6．“青春需早为，岂能长少年。” 世间有很多美好的东西，如生命、健康、时间、亲情、友情……，需要我们珍惜。某英文网站正在开展以“珍惜”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请以“The most valuable thing in my life”为题，用英语写一篇80词左右短文，谈谈你最珍惜什么，为什么最珍惜它，以及你在日常生活中是怎么做的。
● What do you value most in your life Why
● How do you value it in your daily life
要求：1）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；
2）字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确.
The most valuable thing in my life
There are many valuable things in our lives, such as health, time, friendship and so on.
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7．某英文网站正在开展以“适应变化”为主题的征文活动，假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你生活中的一个变化，你是如何应对这个变化的，以及有什么收获。
要求：
1. 短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分；
2. 不少于60词。
提示：
1. What is the chance that happened in your life
2. How did you deal with it
3. What have you learned from the experience
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8．初中生活精彩纷呈。回首过去你是否感到充实和快乐？展望未来你是否对高中生活充满期待？请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你的感想。
提示：
1. What did you gain (收获) in junior high school
2. Is there anything that you feel sorry about in junior high school What are they
3. What are you going to do in senior high school (高中) in the future
要求：
1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
2. 短文应涉及所有提示要点，可适当拓展；
3. 词数不少于60词。开头已给出，不计入总词数；
4. 短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
The life of my junior high school is coming to an end. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9．失败乃成功之母，失败对于获取成功具有重要的价值。初中三年，你经历过失败吗？请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，谈谈你如何采取有效行动，变失败为成功以及成功后的感悟。
提示：1. Have you ever experienced a failure What was it
2. What will you do to turn it into a success
要求：1.语言通顺，条理清楚，书写规范。
2.短文中不要出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
Failure Is Mother of Success
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10．习近平总书记在中国国际友好大会暨中国人民对外友好协会成立60周年纪念活动中讲到，“有梦想，有追求，有奋斗，一切都有可能”。作为中学生，请以“My Dream”为题，根据以下提示与要求写一篇短文。
提示：
1. What is your dream
2. Why do you have such a dream
3. What should you do to achieve your dream
要求：
1. 紧扣主题，适当发挥，语言表达准确，语义通顺连贯；
2. 80 词左右；
3. 文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其相关信息，否则不予评分。
My Dream
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参考答案：
1．例文
Dear Bert
Thanks for your e-mail. It’s great. I’d like to tell you about how I relax.
Music, movies and sports can make me relaxed, but my favorite way to relax is hiking. At the age of 12, I went hiking with my parents for the first time. And I have been in love with it since then. I go hiking with my friends or parents on weekends. We can enjoy the fresh air and the peaceful country scene. Also, we can have a talk happily.
Relaxing is very important for me. If I keep studying for a long time without relaxing, I’ll feel very tired and even I’ll have a headache. This is bad for my health. However, if I relax myself by hiking, I’ll feel happy, energetic and creative. All in all, relaxing is good for my body and mind.
Best wishes!
Li Jia
【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文，要求根据来信内容提示进行邮件回复，学生需要围绕题目所给提示，结合自身经历来谈谈平时放松自己的方式。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称为主，时态主要采用一般现在时并根据内容结合其他的时态。正文可分为三段式：第一段承接开头；第二段介绍自己最喜欢的放松方式是什么和什么时候开始以及频率；第三段讲述放松对自己的重要性和原因。文章做到思路清晰，层次分明，要点齐全；行文要语句通顺，符合逻辑关系；无语法、单词拼写和标点错误。
2．例文
Dear Sir,
I’m a junior student from Xinhua Middle School. I’d like to become one of your volunteers. Because I want to play a role in working for the community.
First, I am good with children, and I am good at telling stories, so I can take care of children when their parents are busy. Second, I want to give away some food, money and clothes to people who are in need. Third, there are so many old people who live alone in my neighborhood and I can help the old people in trouble, such as cleaning their rooms and teaching them how to use the phones.
I will be proud of myself to serve for the community.
Thank you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。要求根据提示内容写一封自荐信，应征做社区志愿者，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文要分别介绍为什么想成为志愿者，自己擅长的和特殊技能，以及能为社区做什么。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
3．例文
My favorite story
I love reading and I have read many books. My favorite story is The Three Little Pigs.
There were three little pigs in the story. They built their own houses. The first built a straw house. The second built a wooden house. The third built a brick house. Then a wolf hit the straw house and the wooden house. But he couldn’t hit the brick house because it was very strong. At last, the three pigs killed the wolf.
This is my favorite story, because it is interesting and it teaches us to be hard-working. There are also many colorful pictures in the book.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第三人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍最喜欢的故事的名字；
第二步，具体阐述这个故事的内容；
第三步，最后是叙述喜欢的原因。
[亮点词汇]
① There be有
② At last最后
③ teach sb to do sth教某人做某事
[高分句型]
① But he couldn’t hit the brick house because it was very strong. （because引导原因状语从句）
② This is my favorite story, because it is interesting and it teaches us to be hard-working.（because引导原因状语从句，and连接两个并列句）
4．范文：
A Change in My Life
There are many changes in everyone’s life. Let me share my change with you.
When I was in Grade Seven, I felt lonely. I missed my old friends, but I knew I had to face it bravely. So I took action. I offered to help my class, joined in the after-school activities and invited my classmates to my birthday party. Gradually, I made some friends and enjoyed staying together with my new classmates.
From this experience, I get to know change brings not only challenges but also chances. When change comes, we should face it and take action.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇记叙文，属于材料作文写作；
时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
提示：文章标题和开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，不要遗漏提示中的“你生活中的变化是什么”这一要点，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接短文开头，引出话题；
第二步，先说明生活中遇到的变化是什么，可说明发生的时间以及心情变化，接着重点叙述如何去应对这种变化，要列举具体的事例；
第三步，抒发变化带来的感悟并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
share sth with sb和某人分享某物
take action采取行动
join in the after-school activities参加课后活动
not only…but also不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
I missed my old friends, but I knew I had to face it bravely.（but连接两个并列分句，第二个并列分句中含有省略引导词that引导的宾语从句）
From this experience, I get to know change brings not only challenges but also chances.（省略引导词that引导的宾语从句）
When change comes, we should face it and take action.（when引导的时间状语从句）
5．例文
Everyone is excellent!
There are many excellent people in the world, such as excellent scientists, excellent players and so on. But I think everyone including ordinary people can be excellent, too. My classmate Tom is very excellent.
Tom is my best friend. He is tall and fat. He likes to read books and play football. He is good at every subject and always ready to help others. One day, I failed my math exam, and I felt very sad. He noticed my feeling and tried his best to help me with my math. With his help, I made progress in math. Last Monday our classmate Mike was seriously ill and we decided to raise money for him. Although Tom himself doesn’t have much money, he still gave away all his pocket money to Mike.
I think he is very excellent. As middle school students, we should learn from those excellent people and make ourselves excellent.
【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：作文要点已给出，考生注意题干中要求写发现身边“了不起”的老师、同学或者自己，文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名，不要写错。
【写作步骤】第一步，总起文章，先说一下世界上优秀的人很多，例如……，然后转折写自己认为谁很优秀，以引出下文；
第二步，具体介绍为什么你认为这个人很优秀的，至少写2点理由。可简述这个人的爱好，他的优点。再具体展开，详细说明他对你的帮助等；
第三步，写结尾段并照应主题，说明我们应该向他学习并且让自己变优秀。
【亮点词汇】①be good at擅长
②be ready to乐意做……
③make progress取得进步
④give away赠送
【高分句型】①Although Tom himself doesn’t have much money, he still gave away all his pocket money to Mike.（Although引导的让步状语从句）
6．范文：
The most valuable thing in my life
There are many valuable things in our lives, such as health, time, friendship and so on. I think the most valuable thing is health.
In the past, I often went to bed late at night. So I felt very tired and sleepy the next day. I couldn’t learn well. Then, my mother ordered me to go to bed before 10 o’clock. Now I feel much better and I can learn well.
In order to have good health, we should eat healthy food and exercise in a proper way every day. What’s more, we should get enough sleep every day.
From my experience, I know health is so important and valuable. I hope everyone can have a healthy and happy life every day.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“The most valuable thing in my life”为题，结合提示问题进行写作，谈谈生活动你最珍惜的是什么，以及为什么珍惜，和怎样做的。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来介绍，时态综合使用一般现在时和一般过去时。作文要分别介绍生活中你最看重的是什么，为什么以及你在日常生活中如何看待它。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
7．例文
There are many changes in a person’s life. When I entered middle school, I felt lonely. I missed my old friends, but I knew I had to fit in. I offered help to my class, joined in the after-school activities and invited my classmates to my birthday party. Gradually, I made some friends and enjoyed the company of my new classmates.
From this experience, I get to know change brings challenges as well as opportunities. When change comes, we should face it and take action.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，谈谈自己生活中的一个变化，具体包括这个变化是什么，自己是如何应对的以及从中收获了什么。
2.写作指导：本文的时态采用一般过去时，人称用第一人称；行文时，可分成两段来写：一段阐述变化是什么以及自己是如何应对的；另一段谈谈自己的收获。注意语意连贯、语言表达规范、无拼写和语法使用错误。
8．例文：
The life of my junior high school is coming to an end. Since I came to the junior high school, I’ve gained confidence and happiness. With the help of our teachers, I’ve learned how to be a good person as well as plenty of knowledge. I’ve also made some good friends.
However, there is still something that I feel sorry about. Because I was busy with my schoolwork, I couldn’t keep on reading. Once in a while, I felt so upset and anxious that I quarreled with my parents.
In the future, I’ll try to make good use of time and spend more free time reading books in senior high school. Meanwhile, I’ll get on well with my parents. I believe I’ll have a happy and colorful life.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文。要求学生回首过去的初中生活，介绍初中生活的收获、遗憾和未实现的愿望；再介绍未来高中生活的打算。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述作文内容：时态包括一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时等；首先介绍初中阶段的收获；其次介绍初中阶段你有哪些遗憾或未实现的愿望；最后介绍你对未来的高中生活有哪些计划或打算。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
9．例文：
Failure Is Mother of Success
Like most people, I also have met failures in my life. Let me tell you a failure that I have ever experienced during my junior school life.
When I was in Grade 7, once I failed in the exam. I was very sad to know my English was only 58 points. I decided to try my best to learn English well. First, I asked my teacher for help. She told me to read more English books and do more exercises. I tried these things every day, and in the end I made big progress.
Failure is mother of success. When we meet failure, don’t give up. Try our best, and we will succeed at last.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，在写作时应根据汉语提示的内容，先介绍自己曾经经历过失败，接下来叙述怎样做取得了成功，结尾处写出自己的感想——失败是成功之母。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称为主来叙述内容，时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时为主。在叙述内容时，力求语句通顺，语法正确，故事发生的起因、过程和结果等叙述完整，条理清晰，行文连贯。
10．例文
My Dream
Dreams encourage teenagers to work hard and become successful. My dream is to be a teacher. Do you know why Because we can learn all kinds of knowledge with the help of the teachers. When we are in trouble, teachers always take good care of us. They do many things for us as our parents do. We all like them very much. How can I make my dream come true First, I must try my best to study hard at all subjects. Second, I will read more books, such as English, history, science and so on. In addition, I will get into a good university.
I believe my dream can come true if I put my heart into it.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文。
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”；
③ 提示：以“我的梦想”为题，写一篇短文。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的梦想是什么。
第二步，介绍有这个梦想的原因。
第三步，如何实现梦想。
[亮点词汇]
① with the help of 在……的帮助下
② take care of 照顾
③ come true 实现
[高分句型]
① When we are in trouble, teachers always take good care of us（when引导时间状语从句）
② First, I must try my best to study hard at all subjects（动词不定式作目的状语）