全的重要性。 reading a book. In this way, you hardly miss your appointments. ”可知,写
Tuesday 下开始阅读一本书的确切时间和地点。
1. problem solver 根据第一段“Without good leaders, problems can t be 3. have trouble in / have difficulty in 根据第四段“One of the main reasons
solved. ”可知,一个好的领导者是一个解决问题的人。 people start reading books and never finish is that the task seems too big. It
2. choices 根据第二段“Read biographies of great leaders experience a lot feels like we can t do it. ”可知,人们在开始看书和读完一本书的时候都
and have their secrets of success. ”可知,伟大领袖的传记对于培养领导 有困难。
能力来说是个不错的选择。 4. easy / much easier 根据第四段“When you break down a book to its chap-
3. an active 根据第三段“Actively participate in the activities organized by ters and even smaller parts, then your brain will no longer see it as a big
the excellent leaders”可知,此处是指积极参与优秀学生干部组织的活动。 challenge that you have to overcome. ”可知,把一本书划分为几个章节或
4. organize; regularly 根据第四段“Activities should be organized regularly 更小的部分,这样更容易完成。
in the club. ”可知,此处是指定期在俱乐部组织活动。 5. Connect; with / Attach; to 根据第五段“basically taking a task that you
5. trust / believe 根据第四段“As time passes by, you will get more trust like don t enjoy that much and attaching it to something that you really enjoy”可
those popular leaders. ”可知,此处是指其他人会更容易相信你。 知,把你不太喜欢的任务跟真正喜欢的任务捆绑在一起。
Wednesday 长难句分析(五)
1. last for 根据第二段“Lunches can also start in the mid to late afternoon. ” 1. If you eat your food quickly, people will think that you are rude.
可知,午餐可能持续数小时。 同义转换“ start in the mid to late after- (条件状语从句) (主句)
noon”可知答案为 last for。 ①复合句
2. disagreements 根据第三段“Rank is important a higher rank. ”可推 ②主句:people will think that you are rude
测,地位等级较低的人在会议中不要对地位高的人持有异议。 (主语) (谓语) (宾语从句)
3. in French 根据第四段“The French are proud of their language, so don t 从句:If you eat your food quickly
expect to get by with English in France. ”可知,法国人以自己的语言,即法 (从属连词) (主语) (谓语) (宾语) (状语)
语为荣,所以最好用法语和他们交谈。 2. This can be a problem for concentration because humans mentally
4. be avoided 根据第四段“Besides, you are not supposed to matters o- 主句 原因状语从句
penly. ”可知,法国人不喜欢公开谈论钱财方面的话题,因此应当尽量 associate the bed with resting.
避免这种行为。 ①复合句
5. made by 根据第五段“ In companies, higher-ups make the final deci- ②主句:This can be a problem for concentration
sions, even if others might disagree. ”可知,在公司里,即使其他人可能有 主语 系动词 表语 状语
异议,也要由高层做出最后的决定,即由高层做的决定需被接受。 从句:because humans mentally associate the bed with resting
Thursday 从属连词 主语 谓语 宾语 状语
1. connect themselves 根据第一段“Making people laugh connects us to one 3. However, most people think that the story of Chang e is the most touching.
another. ”可知,笑会让人们把自己与其他人联系在一起。 主句 宾语从句
2. changeable 根据第一段“Life will always change, and therefore laughing ①复合句
matters vary accordingly. ”可知,因为生活是多变的,所以值得笑的事情 ②主句:However, most people think
也因人而异。 转折连词 主语 谓语
3. understandings 通读第三段可知,每个人对生活的看法不一,对于类似的 从句:that the story of Chang e is the most touching
事情,传递的信息也因人而异,因而让人们对生活有了不一样的理解。 从属连词 主语 系动词 表语
4. is different from 根据第四段“what the previous generation found funny Week 10
becomes foreign to the new generation”可知,喜剧代代都在变化。 Monday
5. according to 通读第四段可知,幽默作家们要根据生活变化不断挑战 One possible version:
极限。 第一步:提炼要点
Friday 1. enough sleep; after school activities; less homework; do sports
1. Challenges / Problems 通读全文可知,本文主要介绍了学生在线学习 2. influence; changes 3. feelings
面临的挑战或问题。 第二步:遣词造句
2. Ways / Suggestions / Advice 通读全文并结合表格右栏内容可知,这是 1. I can go to school at 7:30 now, but in the past, I had to arrive at school at
针对学生在线学习面临的挑战或问题提出的一些建议或方法。 7:00.
3. fun 根据第二段“During this time they might open new tabs to watch vid- 2. Now I have enough sleep. I don t have to sleep late at night. I can go to bed
eos or check social media. ”可知,学生在线学习期间可能会把电子设备 early.
用于娱乐方面。 3. I have less homework, so I have free time to relax myself and do what I like
4. clearer 根据第三段“In fact, sitting in a silent environment often emphasizes to do.
background noises even more. ”可知,安静的环境使得噪音更加明显。 4. I have a lot of time to do sports and do some extra-curricular activities every
5. is used for 根据第四段“This can be a problem for concentration because day.
humans mentally associate the bed with resting. ”可知,人们认为床是用来 5. It not only makes me strong and healthy, but also makes my life colorful.
休息的。 第三步:逻辑成文
Saturday Changes in My School Life
1. improve 根据第二段“ Joan Meyers-Levy make more abstract connec- Every school has taken action to give more time to students so that they
tions. ”可知,房间天花板的高度会影响人们的想法,更高的天花板会激 can have more free time to relax and exercise, so do I. Let me tell you some
发人们更自由地思考,即提高创造力。 changes in my school life.
2. better results 根据第四段“Tanner and his team do better in tests It is very important and necessary for students to have enough time to relax
than students ”可知,在视野开阔的房间里学习的学生比主要欣赏街 and do sports, because it is beneficial to students health. Great changes have
景的学生学习效果更好。 taken place in my school since the beginning of last term. On the one hand, I
3. relaxation 根据第五段“ they find that dim light makes people feel more can go to school at 7:30 now, but in the past, I had to arrive at school at 7:
relaxed”可知,昏暗的光线可以让人更加放松。 00. On the other hand, now I have enough sleep. I don t have to sleep late at
4. calmness and comfort 根据第五段“They also discover and comforta- night. I can go to bed early. What s more, I have less homework, but in the
ble. ”可知,圆形边缘的家具给人带来平静和舒适。 注意此处应用名词 past I had much homework, so I have free time to relax myself and do what I
形式。 like to do. Finally, I have a lot of time to do sports and do some extra-curricu-
5. Not enough 根据最后一段第二句中的“a very limited number”可知,这方 lar activities every day. It not only makes me strong and healthy, but also
面的研究不足,无法充分利用。 研究人员应该在这方面做更多的研究。 makes my life colorful.
Sunday All in all, these are my changes in my school life. What great changes!
1. helpful / useful 根据第二段“You can basically promise that you ll read a Tuesday
book in a week by taking advantage of three mental tricks. ”可知是提供了 One possible version:
三个有帮助的心理技巧。 第一步:提炼要点
2. exact 根据第三段“Write down the time and place of when you ll start 1. don t be afraid of making mistakes 2. do group activities
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3. use a dictionary correctly 4. have fun with the language Friday
5. take notes One possible version:
6. think in the language; outside the classroom 第一步:提炼要点
第二步:遣词造句 1. hero: Li Lianjie
1. Don t be afraid of making mistakes. 2. the reason: brave and careful; make the action perfect; make every foreigner
2. Do group activities. know Chinese kung fu culture; help the children in poor villages
3. Be sure to use a dictionary correctly. 3. a person who can be a role model for us
4. Have fun with the language. 第二步:遣词造句
5. Taking notes is also very important. 1. Li Lianjie is one of the most famous film stars in China. And he is also a he-
6. Think in the language you re learning outside the classroom. ro in my heart.
第三步:逻辑成文 2. He is so brave and careful that he always tries his best to make the action
How Can We Become Good Language Learners perfect.
What makes a good language learner There are some things that good lan- 3. As a Chinese, he promises to make every foreigner know Chinese kung fu
guage learners do and some things they don t do. culture well.
First, don t be afraid of making mistakes. Good language learners notice 4. He gave away much money to help the children in poor villages.
their mistakes and learn from them. Then, do group activities. People use lan- 5. From Li Lianjie I can learn a lot.
guage to communicate with other people. Also, be sure to use a dictionary cor- 6. I think a person who can be a role model for us is our hero.
rectly. Good language learners often use dictionaries to check the meaning of 第三步:逻辑成文
words they don t know. What s more, good language learners have fun with the The Hero in My Heart
language. Of course, taking notes is also very important. At last, think in the As we know, most people have heroes in their hearts. For me, Li Lianjie
language you re learning outside the classroom. is one of the most famous film stars in China. And he is also a hero in my
Don t forget that it s never too late to become a good language learner. heart.
Wednesday He played a role in a film when he was a child. Through his hard work he
One possible version: has made a lot of films. He is so brave and careful that he always tries his best
第一步:提炼要点 to make the action perfect. As a Chinese kung fu star, he promises to make ev-
1. smart phone; convenience and pleasure ery foreigner know Chinese kung fu culture well. He gave away much money to
2. robot; help us with housework help the children in poor villages. From Li Lianjie I can learn a lot, such as
3. high-speed train; travels at high speed the resolution to succeed and the thoughts of helping others. I think a person
4. electric car; save energy who can be a role model for us is our hero.
第二步:遣词造句 Saturday
1. The smart phone brings both convenience and pleasure to our life. One possible version:
2. As for the robot, it can help us with housework, help our children with their 第一步:提炼要点
homework and so on. 1. like English best; fun
3. The high-speed train travels at high speed. 2. read some English stories; half an hour
4. The electric car can not only save energy but also protect the environment to 3. read more, speak more; learn English songs; talk with my classmates in
a great extent. English
第三步:逻辑成文 第二步:遣词造句
Hello, everyone! 1. I like English best, because learning English is fun.
I am Wang Hua in Class One, Grade 9. It s a great honor for me to speak 2. I read some English stories after class every day for about half an hour.
here. 3. I try to read more, speak more.
The rapid development of science and technology has brought great chan- 4. I try to learn English songs.
ges to our life. Smart phones, robots, high-speed trains and electric cars are 5. I try to talk with my classmates in English.
four great inventions. The smart phone brings both convenience and pleasure to 第三步:逻辑成文
our life. We can shop online, watch movies, and have video chats through it. Dear Sally,
As for the robot, it can help us with housework, help our children with their It is a nice surprise to get your e-mail. You said that you would like to
homework and so on. It saves us a lot of time and energy. The high-speed train know something about my study.
has greatly improved our travel speed. It travels at high speed. It s very fast I have a lot of subjects. They are Chinese, English, math, art and P.E.
and comfortable. The electric car has also changed our life. It can not only I like English best, because learning English is fun. Our English teacher al-
save energy but also protect the environment to a great extent. It is convenient ways makes us study very hard. Her class is very interesting. She always tells
and green. us that the best way to learn English is to use it, so I read some English stories
China is taking the lead in some ways. I m really proud of my country. after class every day for about half an hour. I try to read more, speak more. I
That s all for my speech. Thank you! try to learn English songs. I try to talk with my classmates in English. I hope
Thursday to improve my English.
One possible version: How about you What s your favorite subject
第一步:提炼要点 Yours,
1. be different from 2. serve Zhang Mei
3. course 4. golden rule Sunday
第二步:遣词造句 One possible version:
1. Meals in China are different in some ways from meals in the West. 第一步:提炼要点
2. In China, lunch is usually served around 12 o clock. 1. spend more time with family
3. There will be lots of different dishes, not just three courses. 2. share happiness and worries
4. The golden rule is: When you re in China, watch the Chinese and do as they 3. remember family s birthdays
do! 4. in my opinion; showing love for family
第三步:逻辑成文 第二步:遣词造句
When in China,Do as the Chinese Do 1. Some say it s a good idea to spend more time with family.
Meals in China are different in some ways from meals in the West. In 2. They believe family members should share happiness and worries.
China, lunch is usually served around 12 o clock. As for dinner, Chinese 3. Others think it s necessary to remember family s birthdays and prepare small
people eat it much earlier than people in the West. It s about 6 o clock in the presents.
afternoon. Chopsticks are used to eat most food. Generally, for dinner, there 4. In my opinion, showing love for family is really important.
will be lots of different dishes, not just three courses. Besides, Chinese people 第三步:逻辑成文
like to talk about food, so it s a good topic during a meal. The golden rule is: Recently, we ve had a discussion about what we can do to make home a
When you re in China, watch the Chinese and do as they do! happier place in our English class. We ve shared different ideas.
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Some say it s a good idea to spend more time with family. They believe 5. Sometimes they even know about some false information as well.
family members should share happiness and worries. When they meet prob- 6. I think short videos can make our life colorful.
lems, we can do something to cheer them up. Home is always the first place for 第三步:逻辑成文
us to get help and support. Others think it s necessary to remember family s Dear Frank,
birthdays and prepare small presents. The feeling of being loved can bring us I m so glad to hear from you. You said that you re interested in the short
more pleasure. videos in China. I d like to introduce something about short videos to you.
In my opinion, showing love for family is really important. Sometimes, e- Short videos are very popular in China now. But what is special about
ven the smallest thing like walking with family makes them happier. them Most of them are less than five minutes. Some shorter ones, only last for
Week 11 a few seconds. They are easy and fun to make. They are like a stage where
Monday everyone can have a voice. However, every coin has two sides. People might
One possible version: become addicted to watching short videos and waste time. Sometimes they even
第一步:提炼要点 know about some false information as well. I think short videos can make our
1. study hard 2. exercise hard life colorful. We can share our happiness with the world. We should develop
3. spend time reading every day 4. do volunteer activities the ability to tell truth from lies and never follow the trends blindly.
第二步:遣词造句 Best wishes!
1. First of all, I must study hard. Yours,
2. At the same time, I also want to exercise hard. Wang Lei
3. As long as I have time, I will spend time reading every day to enrich my Thursday
knowledge. One possible version:
4. I will also use the weekend to do volunteer activities outside to help those in 第一步:提炼要点
need. 1. the power that keeps me moving forward
第三步:逻辑成文 2. how 3. feelings
My Life in Senior High School 第二步:遣词造句
My name is Li Qiang. In three months, I ll finish my junior school years 1. In my life, my father s encouragement is a power that keeps me moving for-
and go to senior school for another new start in life. ward.
First of all, I must study hard, because only by going to a good university 2. My father took me to climb a mountain. Half an hour later, I felt so tired
can I have better job opportunities in the future. At the same time, I also want that I wanted to stop climbing. My father encouraged me. With his encour-
to exercise hard. I like playing basketball very much. As long as I have time, agement, I climbed to the top of the mountain successfully.
I will spend time reading every day to enrich my knowledge. I will also use the 3. There is no doubt that my father s love pushes me to move forward.
weekend to do volunteer activities outside to help those in need. 第三步:逻辑成文
As far as I am concerned, my life in senior high school will be much more The Power That Keeps Me Moving Forward
colorful than before. In my life, my father s encouragement is a power that keeps me moving
Tuesday forward.
One possible version: Last summer, my father took me to climb a mountain. At first, I was so
第一步:提炼要点 excited that I ran all the way. Half an hour later, I felt so tired that I wanted to
1. pick tea; make things by hand; experience life stop climbing. My father told me to have a rest and encouraged me to continue
2. watch real plants and animals; get close to nature climbing. He said that the higher you climbed, the farther you would see.
3. visit some museums; places of interest; Chinese history and culture With his encouragement, I climbed to the top of the mountain successfully.
4. meaningful movies; feel the great changes of our country Standing on the top of the mountain, the most beautiful views appeared in front
5. study trip is very good of my eyes.
第二步:遣词造句 There is no doubt that my father s love pushes me to move forward. It s my
1. We went to pick tea in person and made things by hand to experience life. father s love that makes me become a better person.
2. We got close to nature and learnt more knowledge by watching real plants Friday
and animals. One possible version:
3. After we visited some museums as well as places of interest, we understood 第一步:提炼要点
Chinese history and culture more deeply. 1. favorite sport; table tennis
4. We saw some meaningful movies and felt the great changes of our country. 2. play table tennis with my friends
5. In my opinion, the study trip is very good for us. 3. every day
第三步:逻辑成文 4. exciting; healthier; make more friends
The study trip is a kind of school education which is held outside and pop- 第二步:遣词造句
ular with students. Our school has also held many study trips. Here are my ex- 1. My favorite sport is table tennis.
periences. 2. I often play table tennis with my friends every afternoon.
Firstly, we went to pick tea in person and made things by hand to experi- 3. Every day when I finish my homework I play table tennis with my friends at
ence life. Secondly, we got close to nature and learnt more knowledge by watc- school.
hing real plants and animals. Then, after we visited some museums as well as 4. Playing table tennis with my friends is very exciting. Also, playing table
places of interest, we understood Chinese history and culture more deeply. Fi- tennis makes us much healthier. And doing sports can help us make more
nally, we saw some meaningful movies and felt the great changes of our coun- friends.
try. 第三步:逻辑成文
In my opinion, the study trip is very good for us and we will be able to It s good for us to do sports. I like playing basketball and football. But my
have more chances to take part in these kinds of activities. favorite sport is table tennis. It is one of the most popular sports in China. I
Wednesday often play table tennis with my friends every afternoon. Every day when I
One possible version: finish my homework I play table tennis with my friends at school. Playing table
第一步:提炼要点 tennis with my friends is very exciting. Also, playing table tennis makes us
1. short; fun; popular much healthier. And it can help us make more friends.
2. become addicted to watching short videos; waste time; false information Table tennis is really a good and funny sport. Why don t you start playing
3. make our life colorful it with me now
第二步:遣词造句 Saturday
1. Short videos are very popular in China now. One possible version:
2. Most of them are less than five minutes. Some shorter ones, only last for a 第一步:提炼要点
few seconds. 1. the Spring Festival; the Mid-Autumn Festival
3. They are easy and fun to make. 2. dumpling; mooncake; zongzi
4. People might become addicted to watching short videos and waste time. 3. Tian anmen Square; the Great Wall
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书面表达
题型解读———书面表达
“书面表达”是一种开放性很高的题型,主要考查学生遣词造句、合理组句、布局谋篇、逻辑成文
等笔头表达的能力水平,能客观反映考生综合运用英语语言知识的能力。 依据课标对“写”的语言
技能五级能力的具体要求,结合成都市英语中考说明,本着“关注生活、思考生活、关注初中英语教
学实际、关注学生现有认知水平”的理念、视野和角度进行命题,充分关注成人教育观、价值观对学
生情感和态度的影响,体现了英语教学的工具性和人文性。
解答本大题的关键是,要善于通过“提炼要点,遣词造句,逻辑成文”这三大核心步骤来训练围绕
话题连续、完整、恰当地运用语句进行书面表达的能力。 为此,必须牢牢掌握简单句的五种基本句型,
强化复合句的结构分析,掌握基本的连词,树立句子主体框架的构建意识,理解语义及结构之间的基本
关系,同时要培养语篇连接与逻辑连贯意识、交际思维意识等。 只有具备良好的思维品质,才能写出通
畅、精美的文章。 训练过程中,要注意避免要点遗漏、词不达意、逻辑思路混乱等问题。
【2022·成都中考】
先花 8 分钟的时间静心理解,并按照“提炼要点,遣词造句,逻辑成文”三大核心步骤围绕话题
连续、完整、恰当地运用语句进行书面表达,然后对比解析说明,学习解题技能,提升思维品质。
书面表达。 (计 15 分)
越来越多的人将阅读作为一种生活习惯。 假如你是李欣,你校校园电视台英语栏目正在征集
以阅读为主题的视频,请根据以下图示撰写视频文稿。
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注意:1. 请先在答题卡上填写图示中空格(一空一词)。 2. 须全面反映图文信息。 3. 文中不能出现
真实姓名及学校名称。 4. 词数 80—100;开头已给出,且不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone. I m Li Xin.
第一步:“提炼要点”
这是一篇看图作文。 围绕“阅读”写一篇短文。 本文采用第一人称和第三人称,时态采用一般
现在时。 分为三段式:第一段讲述阅读的重要性;第二段介绍自己的阅读习惯;最后一段呼吁人们
现在就开始阅读。 写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。
第二步:“遣词造句”
1. 阅读的重要性:
I like reading very much, because I think it can open up a new world for me. I can also learn more from it.
2. 自己的阅读习惯:
I like reading books in the school library.
When travelling, I enjoy reading on the plane to kill time.
I prefer to read paper books, because spending too much time on screen is bad for my eyes.
I like history books best, because I can learn more about Chinese culture.
I always read books at least half an hour before bedtime.
3. 呼吁人们现在就开始阅读:
If you like reading, take action from now on.
第三步:“逻辑成文”
在句子层面“核心要点的表达”的基础上,完成“布局谋篇”、“语篇连接与连贯”,从而形成语
篇,完成书面表达。
1. ways 2. family
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Xin. More and more people have a reading habit. So do I. I like reading
very much, because I think it can open up a new world for me. I can also learn more from it.
I like reading books in the school library. There are different kinds of books in it. When travelling,
I enjoy reading on the plane to kill time. Now we not only read paper books, but also read e-books. I pre-
fer to read paper books, because spending too much time on screen is bad for my eyes. Our family all like
reading books, especially my grandfather. He likes reading books about travelling. Among the books, I
like history books best, because I can learn more about Chinese culture. I always read books at least half
an hour before bedtime.
So if you like reading, take action from now on.
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题型专练———书面表达
随着“双减”政策的落地,学生的学习生活发生了很大的变化。 请以“Changes in My School
Life”为题,根据以下要点和要求,用英语写一篇短文,谈一下你在这些方面的变化。
要点:1. 包括睡眠、课外活动(after school activities)、作业、体育锻炼几个方面。 2. 它会给你带来怎
样的影响和变化。 3. 变化后有何感受。
要求:1. 文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名。 2. 词数:100 左右;开头和结尾已给出,且不计
入总词数。
Changes in My School Life
Every school has taken action to give more time to students so that they can have more free time to
relax and exercise, so do I.
All in all, these are my changes in my school life. What great changes!
【训练步骤】
建议学生在草稿纸上列提纲。
第一步:“提炼要点”
主要完成“要点提炼,避免要点遗漏”,然后通过“核心词、核心短语”表达要点。
第二步:“遣词造句”
在“核心词、核心短语表达要点”的基础上“遣词造句”,从句子层面来完成“核心要点”的表达。
第三步:“逻辑成文”
在句子层面“核心要点的表达”的基础上,完成“布局谋篇、语篇连接与连贯”,从而形成语篇,完
成书面表达。
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请根据以下图示,结合自己的语言学习经历和经验,以“How Can We Become Good Language
Learners ”为题,写一篇英语短文。
要求:1. 包含所有提示要点,并适当进行拓展。 2. 字迹工整,语言流畅,表达准确,逻辑清晰。 3. 词
数 80—100。
How Can We Become Good Language Learners
【训练步骤】
建议学生在草稿纸上列提纲。
第一步:“提炼要点”
主要完成“要点提炼,避免要点遗漏”,然后通过“核心词、核心短语”表达要点。
第二步:“遣词造句”
在“核心词、核心短语表达要点”的基础上“遣词造句”,从句子层面来完成“核心要点”的表达。
第三步:“逻辑成文”
在句子层面“核心要点的表达”的基础上,完成“布局谋篇、语篇连接与连贯”,从而形成语篇,完
成书面表达。
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2022 北京冬季奥运会是科技的盛会,各种高科技频繁亮相,无论是智慧餐厅还是“猎豹”摄像
机,让外国媒体大呼惊艳。 不仅如此,科技给我们的生活也带来了巨变。 假如你是九年级一班学生
王华,学校正在举办科技节,你应邀参加以“科技改变生活”为主题的演讲比赛。 请你根据以下思维
导图的提示,用英语写一篇短文,介绍身边的科技及其优点。
要求:1. 要点齐全,适当发挥。 2. 句子及篇章准确、连贯,书写规范。 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学
校名称。 4. 词数 80—100;开头已给出,且不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone!
I am Wang Hua in Class One, Grade 9. It s a great honor for me to speak here.
The rapid development of science and technology has brought great changes to our life. Smart
phones, robots, high-speed trains and electric cars are four great inventions.
China is taking the lead in some ways. I m really proud of my country.
That s all for my speech. Thank you!
【训练步骤】
建议学生在草稿纸上列提纲。
第一步:“提炼要点”
主要完成“要点提炼,避免要点遗漏”,然后通过“核心词、核心短语”表达要点。
第二步:“遣词造句”
在“核心词、核心短语表达要点”的基础上“遣词造句”,从句子层面来完成“核心要点”的表达。
第三步:“逻辑成文”
在句子层面“核心要点的表达”的基础上,完成“布局谋篇、语篇连接与连贯”,从而形成语篇,完
成书面表达。
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在我们的日常生活中,中西方饮食文化交流越来越密切。 假如现在某国外旅游杂志向你约稿,
请你以“When in China, Do as the Chinese Do”为题写一篇文章,向国外读者介绍中国的饮食文化。
请仔细阅读该杂志社发来的稿件要求,完成写作。
…
★Length(词数): About 100 words.
★Content(内容):
Please try to answer at least 4 of these questions from our readers.
Are meals in China the same as meals in the West
What time are lunch and dinner served in China
How to eat food
How to behave politely while eating with the old
How do we know that a meal is over in China
Is it a good idea to talk about food during a meal
Will there be just three courses or more in China
注意:1. 要点齐全,可适当发挥。 2. 文中不得出现真实人名和校名。 3. 词数:100 左右。
When in China, Do as the Chinese Do
【训练步骤】
建议学生在草稿纸上列提纲。
第一步:“提炼要点”
主要完成“要点提炼,避免要点遗漏”,然后通过“核心词、核心短语”表达要点。
第二步:“遣词造句”
在“核心词、核心短语表达要点”的基础上“遣词造句”,从句子层面来完成“核心要点”的表达。
第三步:“逻辑成文”
在句子层面“核心要点的表达”的基础上,完成“布局谋篇、语篇连接与连贯”,从而形成语篇,完
成书面表达。
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灿烂星空,谁是真正的英雄 在你心中,英雄是戍边战士吗 是载人航天寻中国梦的宇航员
吗 是为国争光的运动之星吗 还是在平凡岗位上默默奉献的人呢 请你根据下面的提示,以
“The Hero in My Heart”为题,写一篇你心中的英雄的作文。
要点提示:1. 简单介绍你心目中的一个英雄。 2. 阐述他能成为你心目中英雄的原因。 3. 你对英雄
的定义是什么
要求:1. 要点齐全,可适当发挥。 2. 文中不得出现真实人名和校名。 3. 词数 80—100 左右;开头已给
出,且不计入总词数。
The Hero in My Heart
As we know, most people have heroes in their hearts. For me,
【训练步骤】
建议学生在草稿纸上列提纲。
第一步:“提炼要点”
主要完成“要点提炼,避免要点遗漏”,然后通过“核心词、核心短语”表达要点。
第二步:“遣词造句”
在“核心词、核心短语表达要点”的基础上“遣词造句”,从句子层面来完成“核心要点”的表达。
第三步:“逻辑成文”
在句子层面“核心要点的表达”的基础上,完成“布局谋篇、语篇连接与连贯”,从而形成语篇,完
成书面表达。
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假设你是学生 Zhang Mei,最近收到英语笔友 Sally 的邮件,以下是邮件的部分内容,请你阅读后
根据要求回复。
I am so glad to hear that you do a great job at school. Would you please tell me more about your study
Which is your favorite subject Why do you love it How much time do you usually spend learning it Also
I d like to know how you study the subject so well.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Sally
要求:1. 邮件中内容提示必须全部回复,并适当拓展 1—2 个要点。 2. 邮件中不得出现个人真实学
校、姓名等信息。 3. 词数:100 词左右;邮件开头已给出,且不计入总词数。
Dear Sally,
It is a nice surprise to get your e-mail. You said that you would like to know something about my
study.
Yours,
Zhang Mei
【训练步骤】
建议学生在草稿纸上列提纲。
第一步:“提炼要点”
主要完成“要点提炼,避免要点遗漏”,然后通过“核心词、核心短语”表达要点。
第二步:“遣词造句”
在“核心词、核心短语表达要点”的基础上“遣词造句”,从句子层面来完成“核心要点”的表达。
第三步:“逻辑成文”
在句子层面“核心要点的表达”的基础上,完成“布局谋篇、语篇连接与连贯”,从而形成语篇,完
成书面表达。
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俗话说“家和万事兴”。 和睦的家庭能给每一位家庭成员带来温暖、快乐、健康、智慧和前进的
力量。 英语课上,你们开展了一次以“What can we do to make home a happier place ”为主题的讨论,
同学们都把自己的想法写在了卡片上。 请结合卡片信息,用英语写一篇短文,向校刊 English
Learning 投稿,介绍你和同学们的看法。
注意:1. 短文必须包括卡片所给的全部信息,可适当发挥,并谈谈自己的想法。 2. 文中不得出现所
在学校的校名及师生名。 3. 词数:100 左右;开头已给出,且不计入总词数。
Recently, we ve had a discussion about what we can do to make home a happier place in our English
class.
【训练步骤】
建议学生在草稿纸上列提纲。
第一步:“提炼要点”
主要完成“要点提炼,避免要点遗漏”,然后通过“核心词、核心短语”表达要点。
第二步:“遣词造句”
在“核心词、核心短语表达要点”的基础上“遣词造句”,从句子层面来完成“核心要点”的表达。
第三步:“逻辑成文”
在句子层面“核心要点的表达”的基础上,完成“布局谋篇、语篇连接与连贯”,从而形成语篇,完
成书面表达。
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