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北师大新版 选择性必修二
Unit 4 HUMOUR
Writing Workshop
----- write a story
Get ready for writing
1. Read for writing
Read the funny story “Lost Identity”. Answer the questions.
(1)When and where did the story take place
The story took place at Heathrow Airport on one afternoon.
(2)What happened to the main characters in the story
Their flight was cancelled, because of a heavy snow.
(3)Why is the story funny
Because of the punchline “DO YOU KNOW WHO I AM ”
punchline
A punchline is the part that makes people laugh. It is often unexpected, silly, or a play on words.
Get ready for writing
2. Focus on structure and language
(1) You are going to write a funny story. What is the funniest thing that has happened to you Use the structure below to help you tell your story.
Who was involved
When it took place
Where it took place
What happened
Why it is funny
(2) Sentence Builder
Write an opening sentence to capture your readers' attention.
Use clear sentencces to create the setting
Use descriptive words and direct speech to make the story vivid.
Sentence Builder
writing
Complete the funny story using the given information.
one day
at the party
Do you know what the farthest distance is in the world
_______(时间), a young man asked a beautiful girl _________ (场景), “___________________________________________.”
The girl said,“____________________________________.”
That is I'm in front of you, but you don't know I love you.
Task 1:
writing
Task 2:
Write a funny story with the following information.
上个星期,一位病人来医院看病。病人说他失去了记忆力。医生问:“这是什么时候发生的?”病人回答……
Last week
When
in the hospital
Where
lose his memory
What happened
a doctor and a patient
who
Last week, a patient came to the hospital. He told the doctor that he lost his memory. The doctor asked, “when did it happen ” “When did what happen ” replied the patient.
Homework
Let's try!
写作内容:
很久以前,有一个人出远门。他身上佩戴着剑。有一天,他要坐船过河。他过河时,把剑掉进了河里。他匆忙拿出一把小刀在船边做了一个记号。他说:“船到岸后,我将从这里下去找我的剑。”
写作要求:
1. 请使用5个句子来表达上面所给的全部内容。
2. 观点要明确,行文连贯,句子通顺。
Summary
一审(人称,时态,内容)
二抓(确定要点且内容句子化)
三简(句子简单化)
四连(连词成句)
五扩(扩句成文)
Once upon a time, there was a man who went out with a sword. One day, he wanted to cross a river in a boat. His sword fell into the water when he crossed the river. He hurriedly took out a small knife and made a mark on the side of the boat. “After the boat gets to the bank,” he said, “I’ll get down from here to look for my sword. ”
Reference
A drunk guy approaches a cute girl in a singles bar. "Hi Babe, how about a date " He says.
"Don't waste your time. I never go out with a perfect stranger."
"It seems we are both in luck. I'm far from perfect."
Funny time
“perfect” 在这个笑话里,
美女口中指“complete(完全的)”,
醉汉的理解则是“excellent,without faults or weaknesses(完美的)”。
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