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Unit 5 Education
Writing Workshop A Picture Description
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contents
Get ready for writing
I
Read for writing
II
III
Structure and language
Compose your writing
IV
Get ready for writing
I
Thinking: How to describe a picture
Get ready for writing
Pair Work You are going to write an essay to describe a picture.
Look at picture A. Discuss with your partner. (Ex1)
What do you see in the picture
How would you describe the boy on the left and the boy on the right
What lesson do you think the picture is trying to teach us
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Read for writing
Read for writing:
Look at picture B below and read the essay. From the writer’s point of view, what is the man’s personality What lesson is the picture trying to teach (Ex2)
It’s Time to Water the Flower
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Structure and language
Structure and language
Complete the structure of the text by putting the different parts in the correct order. (Ex3)
a Analysis of the picture / person(s)
b Description of the picture
c Lessons from the picture
d General introduction
d
b
a
c
Structure and language
Sentence Builder
Reason Linkers
because
A man ... is carrying an umbrella because it is raining heavily.
for
We can see he is in his garden, for he is watering the flowers with a watering can.
as
... it is important to have routines and timetables, as they can help us stay organised.
Structure and language
Underline all the linkers in the text that are used to explain reasons. Write 2-3 sentences about picture A on page 40. Use the Sentence Builder to help you. (Ex4)
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Compose your writing
Compose your writing
Writing Help
Writing about a Picture
It’s important to:
describe what is shown in the picture firstly;
analyse its meaning and give your comments;
use the present tense when describing and commenting on the picture;
not only describe what it shows, but also tell what lessons are taught.
Compose your writing
1. Outlining Complete the outline of your essay based on Activity 3.
2. Drafting Use your outline and the Writing Help to write your first draft.
3. Editing Edit your essay in pairs. Then share what you have written in class.