人教版九年级下册 Unit14 书面表达复习课件(共21张PPT)

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中考专项复习—书面表达
人教版新目标九年级英语
How to Have Reading Activities
As we all know, it is important for us to read books. It not only makes us know about the world, but also helps us relax ourselves. I have some good advice about how to have reading activities.
First, we can read in our school library. There are all kinds of books there. It’s a good place to read. Second, we can set up a reading corner in our class in order to read at any time after class. Third, we can exchange books with one another. It helps develop our cooperation spirit. At last ,it’s necessary to plan reading time and the number of books to read.
All in all, we can benefit from colorful reading activities.
My Lovely Hometown
I went to climb Pingding Mountain last weekend. The trees were green and the flowers were beautiful. I could hear the birds singing in the trees. To my surprise, I saw some squirrels eating the food that the visitors fed them. They were playing happily with people. It was so nice.
Animals are our friends. We shouldn’t hurt them. We shouldn’t cut down trees. We should try our best to build a comfortable home for them. The environment is important to us. If it is polluted, we can’t live a happy life. So we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. Let’s protect the environment and care for animals. If all of us take action now, we’ll build a beautiful city!
为了进一步增强中学生的安全意识，提高自我保护能力，某校开展了以“How to keep safe” 为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下要点提示，用英语写一篇演讲稿。
要点：1. 慎重交友；2.遇险报警；
3. 安全饮食；4. 其它（1-2点）
注意：1.可适当增加情节，使行文连贯。
2. 字数 80-100，字迹工整。
认真审题，找出文章要表达的要点,确定文章的人称，时态。
写作第一步
审
为了进一步增强中学生的安全意识，提高自我保护能力，某校开展了以“How to keep safe” 为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下要点提示，用英语写一篇演讲稿。
要点：1. 慎重交友；2.遇险报警；
3. 安全饮食；4. 其它（1-2点）
注意：1.可适当增加情节，使行文连贯。
2. 词数：90-110，字迹工整。
结尾
用简单的句子或短语列出文章要点。
列
写作第二步
文章要点短语
交友：be careful to make friends
遇险：be in danger
call the police for help in time
饮食：eat healthy and safe food
be bad for our health
其它：keep away from water, fire
it’s dangerous to swim in the river
加
加首尾，使结构完整。
可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。
写作第三步
be careful to make friends
be in danger
call the police for help in time
eat healthily and safely
be bad for our healthy
keep away from water, fire
it’s dangerous to swim in the river
As teenagers, we …Here are some of my suggestions.
In a word, we should…
a nice head
a nice tail
a nice body
连
恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。
写作第四步
你如何写开头
1.开头常用词语：
as far as I/we know 据我/我们所知
as everybody knows =It is well known that…众所周知
at present 目前
first of all 首先
To tell the truth 老实说
添加过度词，使行文连贯
顺序：first( at first, first of all, to begin with), second( then, next), finally( at last, in the end)
what’s more(而且）, besides（另外）,
and, but, however, or, so, becuase
on the one hand, on the other hand
not only … but also …
1.结尾常用词语：
after all 毕竟 at last/finally 最后 in a word/
all in all 总而言之 we hope that··· 我们希望
in short 简而言之 in my opinion 依我看
I think… 我认为…
你如何写结尾
美
选好词句，美化文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。
写作第五步
长句短句交叉使用最好；使用固定句型最好。例如：It is adj. + for sb. to do sth. 感叹句等。
基础一般的同学要尽量使用简单句，文章算不上完美，但很实用。
把握要点，层次清晰。
注意句子与句子、段与段之间过渡自然，行文连贯，注意适当使用连词，
例如：and ,so ,or, but, become等等。
查
认真检查，改正错误。
1）格式是否有错。
2）拼写有无错误，大小写。
3）语言是否用错。
4）时态、语态错误。
5）标点错误。
6）人称是否用错。
写作第六步
How to keep safe
As teenagers, we should keep safety in mind. But how can
we keep safe Here are some of my suggestions.
First of all, we should be careful when we make friends,
especially on line. Second, if we are in danger, we must call
the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe.
Besides, we should eat healthy and safe food. Because eating
food that goes bad will be bad for our healthy. What’s more, it’s
dangerous to swim in the river. So we should keep away from
water. At last, we should be careful while riding bikes or
walking across the road.
In a word, we should take care of ourselves carefully.
“六步骤”
审 列 加 连 美 查
“十字诀”
结构 要点 逻辑 语法 亮点
学校为丰富学生的课余生活，计划成立一些社团（club），请以“ I Hope to Have a(n) _____ Club”为题写出你的建议。内容可从成立什么社团，为何成立社团以及如何安排活动时间、内容等方面展开说明。文章开头已给出，不计入总次数。
要求：1.补全标题。
2.语言准确，行文连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；
3.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名。 （2016 铁岭）
I Hope to Have a(n) _____ Club
I’m very happy to hear that our school will set up some clubs._________________________________________
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中考书面表达的评分标准
第一档（12-15分）
内容完整，语句流畅，无语法错误，书写规范。
第二档（9-11分）
内容较完整，语言较流畅，基本无语法错误，书写较规范。
第三档（5-8分）
内容不完整，语句欠流畅，语法错误较多，书写较规范。
第四档（0-3分）
只写出个别要点，语法错误较多，书写欠规范，只有个别句子可读或不知所云。