人教版九年级下册Unit14 中考话题作文复习课writing 课件(共23张PPT)

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中考话题作文复习课---writing
Traffic safety
学 习 目 标
能运用常用词汇、基本句式和语法结构谈论traffic safety，按要求写出规范的句子，表达自己的思想。
能学会用思维导图（mind map）帮助完成写作。
They are traffic lights.
What are these？
Pay attention to traffic safety ：
slow down , look around and then go ahead.
一慢二看三通过
Traffic signs
Zebra-crossing
sidewalk
According to the reports, the number of the traffic accidents is increasing every year.
Why will these terrible things happen
Do you know the traffic rules well
Task 1
Reviewing
根据汉语提示，快速读出相应单词或词组!抢答成功并回答正确的同学可加相应分数。
过马路
+2
排队等候
+2
在街上玩+1
酒驾
+2
对...有害
+1
拥挤的交通 +1
推
+1
左右看
+1
交通规则+1
cross the road/ go across the road
Wait in line
play in the street
be harmful to/
be bad for
坏天气+1
bad weather
heavy traffic
drive after drinking
push
look left and right
traffic rules
驾驶执照+2
driver’s license
坏天气… ___________________
左右看 ___________________
过马路 ___________________
拥挤的交通 ___________________
排队等候 ___________________
酒驾 __________________
推 ___________________
交通规则 ___________________
对…有害 ___________________
在街上玩 ___________________
驾驶执照 ___________________
bad weather
cross the road/ go across the road
heavy traffic
be harmful to
/ be bad for
wait in line
drive after drinking
play in the street
push
traffic rules
look left and right
driver’s license
Task 2
Speaking
根据图片谈论交通事故产生的原因（用正确完整的句子表达）。抢答，每答对一条，该组得1分。
Bad weather， ，causes the traffic accidents.
People don’t obey the traffic rules.
.
such as heavy rain, storms, heavy snow
Some drivers even drive after drinking.
Some drivers drive at a high speed.
Some drivers who don’t have a driver’s license drive on the road.
It is dangerous for some children to play in the street.
You should the zebra-crossing and walk
on the sidewalk.
If you are a walker,
If you are a passenger,
You should .
Don’t others.
wait in line
go across
push
What should we do to keep ourselves safe
1、Don’t after drinking.
2、Don’t the phone when you are driving.
Please wear a seat belt.
If you are a driver ,
drive
answer
Reasons
Must do/
mustn’t do
Discuss in groups and write down your own sentences.
1.
2.
3.
……
1.
2.
3.
……
1.
2.
3.
……
People don’t obey the traffic rules.
Don’t push others.
look left and right when you cross the road
Task 3
Writing
Mr Li想知道青少年对交通安全知识了解的情况，假设你是Lily,请你以“交通安全”为题，写一封邮件给他,帮助他收集有关的信息。
内容包括：1 谈谈导致道路安全事故的原因(至少3点）
2 我们中学生要具备哪些交通知识（至少3点）。
3 要求大家要遵守交通规则。(不少于80词）
Dear Mr Li,
Every year more and more people get hurt or lose their lives in traffic accidents. There are some reasons which cause these accidents.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
beginning
body
ending
1.谈谈导致道路安全事故的原因(至少3点）。
2.我们中学生要具备哪些交通知识（至少3点）。
3.要求大家要遵守交通规则。
Writing (15分）
Beginning
The causes of the traffic accidents
Body
The traffic rules we should know
Ending
Ask people to obey the traffic rules
Look left and right
Never play in the street
Mustn’t drink before driving
Don’t obey the rules
Bad weather
Drive too fast
Mind map
In a word/ In short…
As we all know, ...
We know that.../ It’s known to us that...
It’s important for us to ...
Beginning
Useful expressions:
First, Second, Third, ..., Finally/ Last but not least,
On one hand, … On the other hand, …
Besides / What’s more / also/ especially/...as well/...
For example, / such as...
We should/ had better/ must (not)...
Body
Ending
In a word, ... / In short, ...
Let’s.../ If we…
While writing
查（check by yourself
then in pairs or groups）
1.要点齐了吗？
2.句子结构对了吗？
3.句子连贯吗？
4.单词都写对了吗？
5.有没错误的语法？
6.书写整洁吗？
第一档：12-15分 内容涵盖所有的要点，表达清楚，几乎没有语言错误。
第二档：11-12分 内容涵盖所有的要点，表达清楚，但有少量语言错误。
第三档：8-10分 内容涵盖大部分要点，表达尚清楚 ,但有一些语言错误。
（以上为及格线）
第四档：4-7分 内容涵盖部分要点，写出少量句子，但表达不连贯，语言错误较多。
第五档：0-3分 只写出个别单词，不成句子，表达不清楚。
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