(共27张PPT)
Ruijin
Yeping park
clean
greenery(绿化)
fresh air
beautiful
Think about the environment in your town /
city and complete the chart below.
3a
Wuxian
Mountain
a lot of rubbish
dirty
Bayi Road
noisy
so many cars
crowded
air pollution
Mianjiang River
the water is dirty
much rubbish in the river
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Our hometown is polluted.
As a student, what should we do
Discuss (We should/must/had better (not)..)
We mustn’t spit in public.
We had better clean up the river.
We shouldn’t leave rubbish here and there.
We had better take a cloth bag when we go shopping.
We should recycle bottles and paper.
We had better ride a bike to school
instead of driving.
what should goverments do
The government should develop laws to protect the environment.
How to save our hometown
1,Don’t spit in public.
2,We should clean up the river and the mountain.
3,Don’t leave rubbish here and there.
4,We should recycle bottles and paper.
5,Walk or ride a bike instead of driving.
6,Take a cloth bag when we go shopping.
7,The government should develop laws to protect
the environment.
Is this a composition
head
body
end
How to save the earth
A :Everyone ought to protect our environment. Let's keep trying. Our world will become more beautiful.
B :There are many kinds of pollution around us ,such as water pollution ,noise pollution and so on . They have polluted our environment. It’s our duty to do useful something .In order to protect our environment .What should we do
C :Second ,we had better walk or ride a bike ,but we don’t drive a car.
D :First, we should turn off the electricity when we leave a room.
F :Third, we will take a cloth bag when we go shopping. We won’t use plastic bags.
E :Finally, We shouldn’t leave rubbish here and there. We shouldn’t waste water.
Which part is the head ,the body and the end
head
end
body
Put them into right order
C :Second ,we had better walk or ride a bike, but we don’t drive a car.
D :First, we ought to turn off the electricity when we leave a room.
E :Finally, We shouldn’t leave rubbish here and there. We shouldn’t waste water.
F :Third, we will take a cloth bag when we go shopping.
We won’t use plastic bags
DCFE
Better the logic
步骤:firstly, secondly, besides, what’s more,
finally, also, and;
转折: although, however, but , at the same time,
on the one hand, on the other hand;
因果:because, so, as a result;
结果:so … that … ;
举例: for example, such as, like…;
总结: in a word, in fact, as you can see;
其它:to my surprise, to be honest;
Linking words (连接词)
To make the composition have better logic, we can use linking words.
Fill in the blanks.
There is no doubt that speaking is very important in English learning. _____ you'd better speak as often as possible.__________, it's a good way to take notes in class,________it will improve your English grammar.
because, what's more, so
So
What's more
because
Better the sentence
A: Second ,we had better walk or ride
a bike, but we don’t drive a car.
B: Second , we had better walk or ride instead of driving a car.
Better the sentence
A: There are more cars on the street. The air will be worse.
B: The more cars are on the streets, the worse the air will be.
In your letter, describe the environmental problems in your town/city.
What are the problems
Where are they
What or who is causing these problems
Then, give suggestions or possible ways to solve the problems.
I think that ...
We should/could...
I suggest...
3b
Write a letter to the city mayor about the problems and your suggestions.
1.Head
problems
2.Body
suggestions
3.End
hope
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Dear Sir/ Madam,
structure
useful words
cut down, throw away, prevent…from… ,
take measures to do sth, do harm to…, make good use of,
get worse and worse, call on sb to do sth
useful sentences
It's our duty to…
As we know, water is very important to people.
Every small step we take really counts,
Together, our actions can make a really difference.
Something must be done to…
Each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem.
I believe we can make the world a better place to live.
We should/ must/ had better (not)/are supposed to do …
I think/ suggest that …
Some words to help.
Please pay attention to your writing!
Exchange your composition in your group and correct the mistakes with your red pen.
Choose the best one for further presentation.
Dear Sir/ Madam,
Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious in our hometown.
With the development of the society, there are too many cars on the streets in our city. Cars have made the air unhealthy for people to breathe. And Bayi Road is very crowded and noisy because of the heavy traffic. People also put waste into the river and Wuxian Mountain . So whenever we climb the moutain, we can find rubbish everywhere.
Now more and more people have realized these problems. First, I think that governments should develop laws to stop people from driving cars every day. Besides, I suggest everyone in this city should help to clean up the river and the moutain. Every one is supposed to throw rubbish in the dustbins.
I hope the problem will be solved in the near future and our home will become better and better.
保护环境从我做起!
If everyone makes a contribution to protecting the environment, our earth will become more and more beautiful.
Thank you!