07：【好题精选】书面表达-2023年中考英语专题练（浙江台州市）（含答案）

07：【好题精选】书面表达 -2023年中考英语专题练（含答案解析）（浙江台州市）
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、话题作文
1．青春，是心里有火，眼里有光，我们这一代人的想象力，不足以想象你们的未来！青春路上，你对未来职业的憧憬是什么？请你以“I want to be a/an...”为题写一篇短文。须涵盖以下几个内容：
1. What is your dream job
2. Where are you going to work
3. Which motto(座右铭) encourages you most
4. Why do you like this job
5. How will you get your future dream job
6.....
要点提示：
1. 80-100词。
2. 请你根据以上要求，结合自己的实际情况写出你的观点，并适当发挥。
3. 文章中不得出现真实人名和校名。
4. 字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。
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二、材料作文
2．某英语教育网站正在开展主题为“How can a teenager have a successful life ”的讨论，为此你采访了一些同学（结果见下表）。请根据以上信息用英语写一篇短文参与讨论，并阐述你的观点。
同学主要观点 你的观点
努力学习 尊重父母 服务社会 计划未来 ……（至少两条）
注意：（1）短文必须包括表中所有内容，可适当增加细节；（2）你的观点至少两条；
（3）词数：80—100；
（4）短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。
短文首句：I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.
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3．现在越来越多的家长意识到学习英语的重要性。为了提高孩子的英语成绩，有些家长周末把孩子送到培训班学习英语，有些家长尝试利用网络给孩子进行在线英语学习。请阐明表格内容并声明你的观点和理由。
Opinions Reasons
Some parents 课后培训班学习英语 1.面对面教学 2.活动丰富 3.学生积极参与
Other parents 在线学习英语 1.时间自由 2.价格便宜 3.可以随时复习
Your opinion
参考词汇：after-school classes; face to faceNowadays, most parents have realized the importance of learning English, so they try different ways to improve their children’s English. Some parents send their children to ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4．目前很多学生整体部忙于学习，成却不理想。请根据表格内容，结合白身实际，写一篇关干“怎样提高学习效率”的短文。
学习方法 1.listen to the teacher 2.takes notes 3.review in time 4.correct mistakes ...
体育锻炼 1.exercise ...
其他方面 1.make good use of time 2.ask sb. for help ...
要求：
(1)短文应条理清楚，行文连，段落分明，100词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数：
(2)短文中不能出现真实的姓名、学校、地名等信息。
(3)短文应括全部信息，可围绕主题适当发挥。How to Improve Our Study Efficiency
A great number of students can’t finish their tasks, which leads to bad results and makes them less interested in their studies. How can we solve the problem Here are some suggestions.
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If you follow the advice that I have mentioned above, you will be successful.
三、电子邮件
5．假如你是李华，以下是你的英国笔友Mike发给你的一封电子邮件，请根据该邮件内容给他回封邮件。
Dear Li Hua,
How’s it going I hear “Double Reduction” policy is being carried out in your country. Can you tell me something about the changes of your school and weekend life And what do you think of it
Looking forward to your reply.
Love,
Mike
注意：
1. 邮件必须包含Mike邮件中的要点问题，可适当发挥；
2. 邮件中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
3. 词数 80-100；
4. 邮件开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：“Double Reduction” policy “双减”政策
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to hear from you. I’d like to tell you _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
6．假如你是Li Ming，以下是你的南非笔友Seb发给你的一封电子邮件，请根据该邮件内容给Seb回一封邮件。
FROM: Seb TO: Li Ming
SUBJECT: Moving to Beijing
Hi, Li Ming, Good news! My father’s company has sent him to work in Beijing, so we’ll move to the city in August. I’m excited but also a bit worried. I’ve learnt Chinese at a Confucius(孔子) school in South Africa, but I’m not good at it. How can I improve it quickly What should I do to understand your culture better I need your help. Wish you all the best. Yours, Seb
要求：
1）考生需按电子邮件格式完成整封邮件；
2）邮件中不能出现真实姓名，校名等相关信息；
3）词数80—100词。
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7．假如你是李华，最近收到外国好友 Henry的电子邮件，请你根据该邮件内容给Henry回复。
Hi, Li Hua, How are you I hope you’re fine and not too busy! I’m so interested in Chinese culture these days. Could you tell me something about one of the Chinese traditional festivals And how do you celebrate it You may tell me about the time, food, activities….Hope to get your reply soon! Love Henry
注意：
1. 请回复邮件中所提及的问题，可适当发挥；
2. 邮件中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息；
3. 词数：80～100 词，开头和结尾给出部分不计入总词数。
Hi, Henry, How’s it going _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Li Hua
四、书信作文
8．假如你是某英语报的编辑Linda，收到一位中国母亲的来信，信中她向你反映了“双减”政策 (double reduction policy) 实行后她所遇到的困惑。请根据信的内容，给她写一封回信，帮她解决困惑。词数：80~100（书信的开头已给出，不计入总词数）
Dear editor,As you know, the double-reduction policy has had a great influence on children’s study and life. My son used to take lots of after-school classes, but now he has less homework and seems to have nothing much to do on weekends. I’m worried about him. Here are my problems. Could you help me 1) Should I give him other homework to do on weekends Why 2) Should I encourage him to take up a hobby on weekends Why I’m looking forward to getting your advice. Yours, A worried mother
Dear madam,I can understand how you feel now._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Hope my advice will help you a lot.
Yours,
Linda
参考答案：
1．参考例文
I want to be a teacher.
I have a dream. I want to be a teacher at the middle school where I studied.
The motto encourages me most is “Teachers’ biggest happiness is to see the children grow up!” I think teachers are very important people in our life. They teach us knowledge. The help us with our study. They give us confidence. If I’m a teacher, I’ll be very kind and patient with my students and try my best to make my lessons interesting.
To be a teacher, I’ll work hard from now on and get good grades in my study. I won’t give up my dream. I think it will come true soon.
【详解】1.本文是一篇话题作文。要求根据题目“I want to be a/an...”和提示内容写一篇作文。
2.本文时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主；人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。写作时注意语句通顺，语意连贯，紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连贯和过渡，涵盖所给提示。
2．参考例文：
I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.
Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. After all, study plays a key role in their life. They also agree they should respect their parents, who look after them every day. Besides, they’re ready to serve the society and in their opinion it’s really meaningful. What’s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for future.
From my point of view, we need to make some good friends so that we can learn from each other. Also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful life.
【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文。要求根据以“How can a teenager have a successful life ”为主题的调查结果，阐述同学们的观点以及你个人的观点。注意要点齐全。
2.写作指导：本文应该以第一人称和第三人称来行文，时态以一般现在时为主。短文开头已给出，第二段主要阐述同学们的观点；第三段以自己的观点收尾。写作时，注意保持主谓的一致性；力求保证内容全面，语句通顺、条理清晰。做到文中无单词和语法上错误。
3．例文：
Nowadays, most parents have realized the importance of learning English, so they try different ways to improve their children’s English. Some parents send their children to after-school classes to learn English on weekends. They think that children and teachers are face to face in the after-school classes, and children can interact better. Children can not only actively participate in the classroom, but also enjoy a variety of classroom activities.
However, some parents believe that it is better to use the Internet for their children to learn English online. Because online learning is cheaper, and the learning time is free. Children can watch the replay at any time for review.
In my opinion, as long as we listen carefully in class, finish our homework carefully after class, practice listening and speaking more, and read more English books, we will improve our English.
【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，写出不同的家长对于英语补习的不同意见以及自己的观点，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，本文应该用第一人称、第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
4．例文：
A great number of students can’t finish their tasks, which leads to bad results and makes them less interested in their studies. How can we solve the problem Here are some suggestions.
First, we are supposed to have good study methods, such as previewing new lessons before class, listening to the teacher carefully in class, taking notes in time and so on. We should review in time and do homework on time. Don’t forget to correct mistakes at any time. Then, it’s helpful for study to have good health. So we should spend at least an hour exercising our body every day. Besides, we’d better make good use of time. Don’t put off what we can do today till tomorrow. We should ask the teacher or classmates for help if we have some questions.
If you follow the advice that I have mentioned above, you will be successful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生要注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。点明“怎样提高学习效率”的主题。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从学习方法、体育锻炼以及其他方面提出建议。
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①a great number of 大量的
②in time及时
③such as例如
④at least至少
⑤put off推迟
[高分句型]
①Then, it’s helpful for study to have good health. （it作形式主语）
②Don’t put off what we can do today till tomorrow.（祈使句）
5．One possible version:
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to hear from you. I’d like to tell you the changes this term. We used to have too much homework on weekdays. And it made us do our homework till late at night. On weekends, there were also many classes for us. So we had no time to have a rest and take up our hobbies. How tired we felt!
Thanks to “Double Reduction” policy, now we have less homework than before. Especially on weekends, we don’t need to take after-school classes anymore. We can do what we like and relax ourselves.
I think “Double Reduction” policy is really helpful to our growth. We love it!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇电子邮件。要求根据Mike的问题，介绍学校和周末生活的变化。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。作文要针对“双减政策”，分别介绍学校的变化以及自己周末生活的变化。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
6．例文：
Hi Seb,
I’m so glad that you’ll come to live in my city.
To improve your Chinese quickly, you can go and take a course in a Chinese language school. It can always help you to speak better and learn more, try to experience life here in Beijing. Of course. It’s very helpful.
Hope to see you soon!
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】1.题干解读：本题为电子邮件写作，要求根据题目所给电子邮件提示，以Li Ming的名义写一份电子邮件回答Seb关于如何学好中文的方法。
2.写作指导：写作时人称应用第一人称，时态应用现在时态。写作时应注意标准电子邮件格式，要做到思路清晰，层次分明，要点齐全，不要出现单词拼写和语法时态使用错误。
7．例文
Hi, Henry,
How’s it going I’m glad to know that you are very interested in Chinese culture. I’m very glad to tell you something about traditional Chinese festivals. I’d like to introduce a Chinese festival, the Mid Auturmn Festival. The Mid Auturmn Festival is on August 15 of the lunar calendar when the moon is believed to be the biggest and fullest. To the Chinese, a full moon is a symbol of prosperity and family reunion. The main traditions and celebrations include eating mooncakes, having dinner with family, gazing at and worshipping the moon, and lighting lanterns. By the Ming and Qing Dynasties, it had become one of the traditional Chinese festivals, with the same name as the Spring Festival. I sincerely hope that it can be passed to the next generation forever.
I hope you like the Mid Auturmn Festival. I hope you can come to China during the Mid Auturmn Festival.
Looking forward to your reply.
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意结合Henry的电子邮件进行写作，根据该邮件内容给Henry回复。可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。首先介绍自己愿意为他介绍中国传统节日，从而引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。具体介绍中国传统节日中秋节；
第三步，书写结语。表达“我希望你能在中秋节期间来中国。”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②a symbol of……的象征
[高分句型]
①By the Ming and Qing Dynasties, it had become one of the traditional Chinese festivals, with the same name as the Spring Festival.（one of……之一）
②I’d like to introduce a Chinese festival, the Mid Auturmn Festival.（I’d like to do想要做某事）
8．例文
Dear Madam,
I understand how you feel now. In my view, you needn’t worry about it. The main purpose of the “double reduction” policy is to lower the students’ pressure, so your son shouldn’t be given other homework. As we know, more homework doesn’t mean getting good grades, because the best way to improve grades is keeping their brains active in class.
As for taking up a hobby, I think you should encourage and support him. The earlier kids learn a skill, the better it’s for their future. But remember not to push him to do what he dislikes. After all, it’s more important to have a happy child.
Hope my advice will help your a lot!
Yours,
Linda
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文属于书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：考生应注意书信中的问题就是写作的基本方向，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，用自己的观点说明周末该不该给孩子做其他作业及原因；
第二步，用自己的观点说明该不该鼓励孩子在周末养成爱好及原因；
第三步，提出希望，希望自己的建议能帮助对方。（文中已给出）
[亮点词汇]
①worry about担心
②in my view在我看来
③the best way to do sth.做某事的最好方法
④remember not to do sth.记住不要去做某事
⑤after all毕竟
[高分句型]
①As we know, more homework doesn’t mean getting good grades, because the best way to improve grades is keeping their brains active in class.正如我们所知，更多的家庭作业并不意味着取得好成绩，因为提高成绩的最好方法是在课堂上保持大脑活跃。（使用because引导原因状语从句。）
②After all, it’s more important to have a happy child. 毕竟，有一个快乐的孩子更重要。（使用句型it’s+形容词+to do，表示“做某事是怎样的”。）